Hoi! Oim temmie. Tis iz a storey aboot dawnPaw, whu well became tha graytest leadar of thanderclen evar! Lats get storttted!
Chaipter ona: Tha graytest apprantice
dawnpaww! Shoutad out brambleclew, who wes her fahter.
Yassss? Ansewred dawnkit.
Firestrr seys youre gaing ta be an apprantice!
OMIGODDSDD YASS screamad dawnleaf LATA GOO
Follew meh! Seys brembleclow
Dawnkit follews brembelclaw to the hIghrock.
Cats of tha clen! Gathar fir a clon meeeteng! Snarled firstar
Everypony gathred beneathe tha rocke.
We arw hare todey to meke a naw appeanrice! Dawnkit, come comehere.
Dawnkit steppad forwerd.
Yo mantor willl be dewnleaf, yar future salf! Dawnleaf, cum here.
Dewnleaf staps up
Ya well mantor dawnpaw, ok
Everypony cheared.
Revaiew plsssssss