Everyone,
One of the main things i have realized as a fanfiction author is that I get the opportunity to correct any mistakes that I may make during writing, unlike an author who releases a finished product which cannot be corrected post-release of work.
I admit, that I did not think my concept of bringing in other generals from ancient china to act as a foil for my main character could be poorly received. My rationalization was that i needed them to ensure that this does not turn my character into a sort of overpowered gary-stu type character without any opposition.
One unintended consequence of bringing them in, which i did not realize was that it unbalanced the basic premise of my whole story. From beginning, this story was meant to explore how a general from ancient china would fare in westeros. To bring in more characters from that place into westeros would weaken the original premise was something that i forgot to take into account, being carried away by my thinking up of various plot lines.
I have removed the previous chapter, and will rework the last update to ensure that it properly sticks to the basic premise which i had originally envisioned. One of the benefits of writing in such a forum is that advice from other readers can bring a writer to focus properly, so that he can accept good advice when given.
This is the first serious work of fanfiction that i have attempted in a long time, and i do not wish to ruin it. So, I thank all my readers for their advice and contributions.
I will update it again once all revisions are done.
Thanks for your advice and support,
Regards,
A.S.