HELLO EVERYONE! AND WELCOME TO THE KRYSTAL HAREM'S NEXT...
REVIEW CORNER!
Grey: bffgddd
Reviewer: Lonestar88
Review: I'm thinking James bought at least the ( Well as you Call them ) the and'r sisters with him.
Answer: I call them the And'r sisters because they are called Koriand'r and Komand'r, And'r seeming like a surname.
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Reviewer: BlackXANA
Review: As much as I've enjoyed this arc, it's time for me to get that 2.5 arc going. Krystal's Trial waits for no one... just... as soon as I rewrite the first chapter. :/
Shouldn't take me too long as it'll be up a few days later after this REVIEW CORNER!
Speaking of which - Now that Ben as found James, does this mean that Krystal will be meeting her Brother's Harem for the first time? And is it at the point where Raven is with them?
Or am I gonna have to wait somewhere during James's 3rd arc to find that out to prevent any spoilers?
(***Sounds of a saw-blade suddenly goes about as a big, large hole forms around my feet, causing the said section of the floor to drop down***)
Huh?
(***I feel with one foot for the floor... only to look down and notice that what I'm standing on is not there anymore***)
Oh Bugger... Someone's head is gonna roll for this... (***FALLS IN***) AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
(***CRASH!***)
Ow...
Answer: Yes Krystal will meet James' Harem. Minus Raven. The two-part crossover will be taking place during the time when the Titan's have separated. Yes Raven is in his harem but at that time she was off training her magic in Azerath.
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Reviewer: 61394
Review: All hail Queen Mach
Answer: HAIL!
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Reviewer: Mighty TAB X
Review: There was once a prophecy that only a warrior wielding the holy number of 10 that could MASTER sumo slammers ... and today it was fulfilled. I like she's gonna be a gamer.
Don't worry atem. No matter what school you go to you will be accepted. Ain't that right guys? (Pinkie "YEAH") "Why am I here?" Because, Wade, you owe greyking for that harem. You know what he can do to you right? ... "Atem, Atem, He's our man! If he can't do it no one can! GO ATEM!" ... Where did you-nope never mind.
And now the question for REVIEW CORNER, CORNER ...CORNER ... corner ... I think it is contagious. Send me a cure if on you. Why ben 10. Not that I'm complaining, but why out of all the series did you make a 70 chapter story and 2 sequels for one series. Because it was tarnished or was it just that good.
Answer: It is not contagious. My old writing studio just had an echo. It doesn't now. So no echo. You just need to see a doctor.
And the question... oh that question. It made me really happy.
Okay so the reason why I have written 120 chapters (ish) in this series is because of several reasons.
This story was originally written by YF and he only did about 3 chapters. I had like 2 fics at this time and found it, YF having abandoned it. So... I adopted it *shrugs* I had ideas where it could go and took it over. Later YF joined me as a co-writer and then later Ghost joined in when I asked for an artist, Ghost taking over for YF when we took a small break from co-writing.
I kept working on it... because I found it fun *shrugs* ... and in some places from my anger or disgust at Omniverse.
Most of the ideas for this story came from past events in said story, ideas building on top of each other. Others came from out of no where that worked thematically. And others come from when... well, wasted ideas that I did not feel Omniverse used properly. Like the And Then There Was arc, which was honestly my favorite arc to ever write.
And some ideas come from jokes or wasted potential in our own work, like all of James' Harem coming from a joke in Ben's Harem AND us feeling like we did not handle the Julie situation well.
But the reason I loved this question is because... you made me realize HOW MUCH this story series MEANS to me! If it was not for me adopting this fic, I would not have met YF and we would not have became friends. He would not have helped me improve. And I would then, later, not meet Ghost and become friends with him as well as a bit of a mentor.
Heck I bet most of my fans would not have even found me without my most POPULAR story, which was said adopted story.
This story series... it means so much to me. Which is why it WILL be finished!
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Reviewer: ANTI REAPER
Review: I'm freaking out I can't calm down I cannot wait for the next update I legitimately cannot wait
Answer: Here you go *troll grin*
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Reviewer: Mil the fic writer
Review: So this is the end of the first arc huh?
I am really impressed of this story.
Your going to do the second arc of James Herem right?
If so, I,ll be expecting it next week.
Good job.
Over & out.
Answer: Next Monday.
Grey: Now! Before we continue this, it is time for a quick break! ROLL THE TRAILER!
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We all know this story from before. A baby defeats the Greatest Dark Wizard of this age. The child is fostered by their Aunt and Uncle.
We see a small child in a corner, crying as they sat on a suitcase and rain fell into the alleyway
Black of hair and green of eyes, to go to the prestigious School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
The Hogwarts Professors could only stare in shock as they looked at the cheering crowed and the large stage
But this ISN'T the story you'd be expecting.
"I gotta believe!" The girl sang, the music picking up as everyone cheered. The girl held her hand in the air, the lights shining over her and illuminating her as she tapped her pink pumped shoe on the ground in tune with the beat
"I don't wanna know, the same truth again." She sang, holding her pink 'wand' as held her hand out to the side like she was dismissing something
"I don't wanna know, I'm better off not knowing." She was shaking her head from side to side now, her hair bobbing with her head movement
"Why? Why? Why? Why?
I realised I came too far!"
This is a turn of fate for the Boy Who Lived. A life, not anyone would have expected.
A 12 year old girl ran onto stage, a cheering crowed before her. She had mid-back long wavy hair with small stylish glasses. Wearing a pink tank top that shows off her stomach with large poofy sleeves, a pink and black frilled mid-thigh skirt, white thigh-high socks and pink heeled platform shoes. A cute small pink witch hat. And black upper -arm length gloves. A small ass length white cape and a pink wand microphone.
"Halli Potter Idol"
"Through the Fire and the Water and Grass and in the Forest,
My best efforts I'll exert." She sang quickly to a fast beat that only she was hearing at the moment
"Also deep inside the Ground and way up high above the clouds
And even under that girls skirt." Halli was now smiling as she forced back a laugh, having always enjoyed that line
"It's a very very very very very very very very
Hard task to take on.
But I know that I can do it.
I know know that... I can catch 'em
Yea-i-yea-i-yea-i-yea-i-yea-i-yea-i-yea-i-yeah!"
Written by GreyKing46 and GhostKaiser23, coming soon on Ghost's channel!
Grey: And there we go! Now, it is time for Ghost to answer some reviews! Welcome him, ladies and gentlemen! GHOOOOOOOOOST! KAIIIIIISER! *the crowed goes wild*
Ghost: Hi everyone, GhostKaiser23 here. Well, it looks like it's that time again. Another REVIEW CORNER...Corner...corner...One second.
*turns to Grey* We need to fix the echo again.
*back to the audience* Now, where was I? Oh yeah. Thank you all for your reviews and support for these stories, they really help us out in making new content for you to enjoy. Now, let's get answering your reviews
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Reviewer: StrongGuy159:
Review: Cool chapter continue please.
Ghost's Answer: We will. Krystal will be put on Hiatus until we finish James' Harem's next arc.
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Reviewer: Cooperjordan
Review: Oh boy time for James' harem to meet the in laws
Ghost's Answer: It does look like it, doesn't it?
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Reviewer: thecrabmaster
Review: That chapter was so sweet. I mean in a heart warming way. As for Krystals Eco Eco form how about going with the name DJ or Banshe?
Ghost's Answer: Glad you liked it. And I kind of like the names. MAYBE we'll call Krystal's Echo-Echo "Banshee".
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Reviewer: Hero of the Multiverse
Review: So, what'll the next arc be for James' Harem? Or for Krystal's Harem?
Ghost's Answer: You'll have to wait and see. It'll be something special.
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Reviewer: Shooting Star Dragon 3000
Review: Blast, no kuroto in this chapter. Oh well, at least everything else went well with the Tennyson siblings. Can't wait for more James (who hopefully has some more DC aliens in his matrix)
Ghost's Answer: I'm unsure what "Blast, no kuroto" is. But yeah, things are getting better in the household. What is it with people asking for James getting DC aliens? It's kind of popular.
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Reviewer: Guest893
Review: Winning the gaming contest 3 times? ML-E is amazing in her own way, just like her father.
Her mothers, brothers & sisters must be really proud of her.
And at last, Ben has found his son.
Looking forward to the next week chapter.
See you.
Over & out.
Ghost's Answer: ML-E IS amazing in her own way. They are, they're also a little miffed at her, but they're proud. And yes, Ben has found James.
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Reviewer: jasongd
Review: And another great chapter congrats
And now Qestion
1. I hope that you don't forgot about Cerise if not to will she would join Krystal harem
2. Will Cerise apper in next arc
3. Why Cerise was not in this arc
Ghost's Answer: We...May have forgotten Cerise in the story. She might appear in the next arc and join the harem. This arc was mostly focused on Krystal and her family, apologies for anyone wanting to see some KrystalXCerise action.
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Reviewer: Jss2141
Review: After all this time, the Tennyson Clan shall finally meet James' girls.
Ghost's Answer: Yep and they're going to have a shock when they do.
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Reviewer: Mil the fic writer
Review: Are ya gonna start James Harem again
Ghost's Answer: Yes we are.
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Reviewer: ANTI REAPER
Review: I'm freaking out I can't calm down I cannot wait for the next update I legitimately cannot wait
Ghost's Answer: Dude, calm down. You're gonna have a heart attack. Watch some YouTube or listen to some music.
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Reviewer: Mighty TAB X
Review: There was once a prophecy that only a warrior wielding the holy number of 10 that could MASTER sumo slammers ... and today it was fulfilled. I like she's gonna be a gamer.
Don't worry atem. No matter what school you go to you will be accepted. Ain't that right guys? (Pinkie "YEAH") "Why am I here?" Because, Wade, you owe greyking for that harem. You know what he can do to you right? ... "Atem, Atem, He's our man! If he can't do it no one can! GO ATEM!" ... Where did you-nope never mind.
And now the question for REVIEW CORNER, CORNER ...CORNER ... corner ... I think it is contagious. Send me a cure if on you. Why ben 10. Not that I'm complaining, but why out of all the series did you make a 70 chapter story and 2 sequels for one series. Because it was tarnished or was it just that good.
Ghost's Answer: I like that intro of yours for your question. And did you go to DeathBattle to get those two (Pinkie and Deadpool) with you? And yes, the echo IS contagious. There is no known cure. In all seriousness, this story was made because Grey loved Ben 10: the plots and stories, easily identifiable and relatable characters; it just made it great. Then Omniverse and the...reboot *shudder* came around and tarnished it. Omniverse's concept was alright (Multiple different dimensions and outcomes, like Rick and Morty) which gave us a good and better reason to fix them.
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Reviewer: 61394
Review: All hail Queen Mach
Ghost's Answer: BOW DOWN TO THE, BOW DOWN TO THE QUEEN! *insert Motorhead music*
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Reviewer: BlackXANA
Review: As much as I've enjoyed this arc, it's time for me to get that 2.5 arc going. Krystal's Trial waits for no one... just... as soon as I rewrite the first chapter. :/
Shouldn't take me too long as it'll be up a few days later after this REVIEW CORNER!
Speaking of which - Now that Ben as found James, does this mean that Krystal will be meeting her Brother's Harem for the first time? And is it at the point where Raven is with them?
Or am I gonna have to wait somewhere during James's 3rd arc to find that out to prevent any spoilers?
(***Sounds of a saw-blade suddenly goes about as a big, large hole forms around my feet, causing the said section of the floor to drop down***)
Huh?
(***I feel with one foot for the floor... only to look down and notice that what I'm standing on is not there anymore***)
Oh Bugger... Someone's head is gonna roll for this... (***FALLS IN***) AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
(***CRASH!***)
Ow...
Ghost's Answer: *looks down into the hole* Are you okay? But yes, the entire Tennyson Family (Aside from Ben) will meet James' Harem *rimshot*. But to know about why Raven isn't there? Wait and see.
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Reviewer: Korin Dragoon
Review: So a Krystal's/James' harem crossover huh?
Ghost's Answer: It does look like it, doesn't it? :)
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Ghost: Well, that's everything from me everyone. I hope you've enjoyed all these answers that Grey and I have given. Please enjoy the new content on both of our profiles and we hope to see you all there. Bye!
Grey: GHOST EVERYONE! *the crowed cheers* Okay, so before we go to the last lot of reviews how about we go to another advert?
Last time on: "Vegito's Harem"! *insert epic DBZ music*
Vegito had travelled into Universe 6 at the request of the Angel 'Vados' to defeat the Berserker Super Saiyan 'Kale' from destroying planet after planet, with the help of fellow Saiyans 'Caulifla' and 'Cabba'. Realising there was more than just his Universe, Vegito decided to train these new Saiyans to control their new power and become stronger.
However, an even greater power was present, not through Universes, but through TIME itself! Beings were causing disruptions through history, changing iconic moments in different timelines that needed to be corrected. Can Vegito manage this new responsibility? Can he help save time with the fellow Time Patrollers of the Supreme Kai of Time? All this and more in:
VEGITO'S HAREM!
OUT NOW, ON GHOSTKAISER23's PROFILE!
Grey: Well, there we go. Time for the last lot of reviews! Let's do this!
Reviewer: Jss2141
Review: After all this time, the Tennyson Clan shall finally meet James' girls.
Answer: Here we go!
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Reviewer: jasongd
Review: And another great chapter congrats
And now Qestion
1. I hope that you don't forgot about Cerise if not to will she would join Krystal harem
2. Will Cerise apper in next arc
3. Why Cerise was not in this arc
Answer: No, I have not forgotten. However she was not important last arc and we needed to introduce other characters, she is gonna get some focus in some filler chapters in Krystal's Harem's third arc so don't worry.
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Reviewer: mgasmsms
Review: ok, now I'm pumped for the crossover arc. in my mind, it's gonna be a nightmare to do it. Good luck
Answer: I did not say it was an arc. Who said it was an arc? Where did you get an arc from?
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Reviewer: Korin Dragoon
Review: So a Krystal's/James' harem crossover huh?
Answer: Yep
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Reviewer: Guest893
Review: Winning the gaming contest 3 times? ML-E is amazing in her own way, just like her father.
Her mothers, brothers & sisters must be really proud of her.
And at last, Ben has found his son.
Looking forward to the next week chapter.
See you.
Over & out.
Answer: True, ML-E is awesome.
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Reviewer: Shooting Star Dragon 3000
Review: Blast, no kuroto in this chapter. Oh well, at least everything else went well with the Tennyson siblings. Can't wait for more James (who hopefully has some more DC aliens in his matrix)
Answer: No, there is no Kuroto. But then again, no one in this universe could compete with GOD HIMSELF! DAN KUROTO SHIN, DA! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
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Reviewer: Hero of the Multiverse
Review: So, what'll the next arc be for James' Harem? Or for Krystal's Harem?
Answer: Next is James' Harem's third arc
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Reviewer: thecrabmaster
Review: That chapter was so sweet. I mean in a heart warming way. As for Krystals Eco Eco form how about going with the name DJ or Banshe?
Answer: Thank you. And good name ideas.
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Reviewer: Cooperjordan
Review: Oh boy time for James' harem to meet the in laws
Answer: Yep.
Grey: And THERE we go!
The second Review Corner for Krystal's Harem! Damn, this is fun! Well, here we go. On to James' Harem arc 3! Here we go!