HELLO EVERYONE! AND WELCOME TO THE KRYSTAL HAREM'S FOURTH...
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Grey: Ah, it is the simple things. Okay guys, Here we go! Before we start I have a few announcements.
First is that next week we shall be uploading a OneShot based on the Bad Krystal seen at the end of the Bad World bit of this arc, a 'What if Krystal agreed to stay' scenario, with James Harem 2 starting up again the week after that.
And the second is that... NEXT WEEK IS MY BIRTHDAY! May 19th is my Birthday, which is a Sunday by the way, and every day next week I shall be uploading a new chapter with a new story being uploaded on Sunday. To see which story is being uploaded when, just read on as those will be the trailers for this chapter.
So, with that out of the way, REVIEW CORNER TIME!
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Okay, now you've taken the joke too far. Okay, first teaser!
SHINOBI SPIDER
CHAPTER 10!
Outside the village, riding on a strong brown stallion, was Logan. His katana on his waist as he charged to his former home. Logan was on the Warpath, going to fight those who betrayed his family. He knew SOMETHING was wrong! He wasn't sure what it was, but he had to be there
Logan stood at the front gates of the Land of Mutants. Sword by his side and a determined look in his eyes. The look of a soldier. The look of a man driven by desire only to see a familiar red head standing there, her arms spread wide
"Jean." He whispered seeing her. And slowly walked to her. He came to a stop, slowly getting off his horse "Jean... Red..." he whispered, walking towards her slowly
"Logan Howlette, what are you doing here?!" she snapped gently, holding back tears
"I'm doing what I do best." He answered looking gently at her.
"Nearly getting yourself killed?!" she snapped, hugging him tightly
"I missed you, too." Logan whispered into Jean's ear tenderly, hugging and stroking her back "I missed you, Red. I missed you so much. And so do the kids."
"I'm sorry." Jean whispered as she shook in his arms.
"For what?" he asked softly
"Just. Just not being there." She whispered "For you or them."
"It's my fault we have to leave Red. Mine and no one else's." he whispered, kissing her forehead
"Besides whoever took control of your mind that day." she hissed
"I know, but-" He added
"No 'buts'. I-I want to come with you." Jean answered, looking with tears in her eyes "I always did. I wanted to spend every moment of my life with you."
"JEAN! GET AWAY FROM HIM!" A voice called out from the village...
TO READ MORE, MONDAY 13th OF MAY 2019
Grey: There, first teaser out of the way. Now on to the reviews! Here we go!
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Reviewer: Guest893
Review: Wes is dead and all is back to normal.
Nice to see that Krystal is going to marry TT.
Hope to see her big brother come to her wedding with his friends and family.
Nice to hear that James' Harem 2 is starting a new arc.
See you next time.
Answer: Yep.
Yep.
You think he'd skip that?
Of course he would.
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Reviewer: Tigerclaw97
Review: And the Prodigal Son finally falls, and Krystal is more powerful than ever for it.
Not really much to say at this point that I haven't already.
Now Krystal and TT finally get married (EEE WEDDING!) And everything winds back to normal before the next world ending crisis comes knocking. Because who ever heard of a Tennyson getting a moment of fucking peace!?
And as the order usually goes, soon we'll get to see what madness James has been having to deal with. And if Cass or Dick have finally snapped and gelded a speedster yet.
Answer: Yes he has.
Nah, she might get a few months calm
Well Bart DOES know how to run
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Reviewer: IMBADATNAMES & Guest chapter 63 . May 5
Review 1: *sees the ending* YYYYYYEEEEESSSSSSSS! YES YES YES! HOW MANY PEOPLE ARE GONNA BE AT THE WEDDING? ARE THE OTHER BENS AND SUCH GONNA SHOW UP? WHAT IS THEIR REACTION TO NEMETRIX FUSIONS GONNA BE? IS JAMES GONNA COME WITH THE TITANS? WHO'S GONNA BE THE NEXT BIG BAD?
*takes a deep breath*
Okay, so Alien X would not have a NATURAL predator, so I'm guessing somehow this Nemetrix CREATES predators. And while Psychobos is a genius, I'd doubt he'd
Review 2: *sees the ending* YYYYYYEEEEESSSSSSSS! YES YES YES! HOW MANY PEOPLE ARE GONNA BE AT THE WEDDING? ARE THE OTHER BENS AND SUCH GONNA SHOW UP? WHAT IS THEIR REACTION TO NEMETRIX FUSIONS GONNA BE? IS JAMES GONNA COME WITH THE TITANS? WHO'S GONNA BE THE NEXT BIG BAD? WHAT WILL GREER THink of Appoplexian Krystal?
*takes a deep breath*
Okay, so Alien X would not have a NATURAL predator(because omnipotence), so I'm guessing somehow this Nemetrix CREATES predators. And while Psychobos is a genius, I'd doubt he'd be able to come up with the tech to make a new species. Only the Omnitrix ever accomplished this feat(Nanomech). So, I have to wonder, did Albedo ever help them in this timeline? Since he'd have the knowledge of the Omnitrix, and from what I can tell, your Malware has no knowledge of Psychobos or Khyber.
Answer: A lot of people
Yep
Of course
Not telling
She will be really happy
Just because Alien X is Omnipotent, it does not mean he has no Predator.
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Reviewer: 61394
Review: It was a very sweet proposal but there are two things Krystal should do first
One take the Antitrix and smash it bury the pieces and then blow up the planet the pieces are on so no one ever has Wes's powers again
Two return No Watch and Julies (Since she was Ben's only Asian love interest) son's body home it will hurt them but at the very least they'll have closure and can say goodbye properly to their child
Answer: Yes she had, off screen
They did return the child to NoWatch and Julie. Well, Ken did. Off screen
Grey: Okay, first batch of reviews done. Now on to the second trailer! HIT IT WADE!
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Deadpool gets pus... WADE GET AWAY FROM MY KEYBORED
Chapter 6
Wade groaned as the daylight pierced through the curtains "Urgh...what hit me?"
"Daddy!" A boy's voice spoke landing on his father's chest.
"Ow! Ow! Jeez, watch it!" Wade groaned as he pushed the boy off.
"Come on dad, wake up lazy bones." The boy smiled "You've been asleep all day."
"What? DAD?! But Shiklah and Death were only knocked up a few days ago!" Wade shouted
"What're you talking about? It's been fifteen years." The boy answered
"Fifteen what?!" Wade shouted revealing a naked blonde haired sixteen year old girl sleeping next to Wade.
"Oh sis. You were sleeping with dad?" The boy asked
"Sis? I fucked my daughter?! The fuck is going on?!" Wade shouted
"Daddy...you were so good..." The girl smiled stroking his cock.
"Ah! No! No WAY I signed up for this! Where's Ghost and Grey?" He flew out of his bed revealing he had his Tarzan trunks on.
"You don't know? It's what you always do." The boy answered walking off opening the door. "How else do you explain your ninety seven other kids?"
"Ninety seven?!" Wade shouted
"Argh!" A woman's voice screamed followed by a baby screaming
"Baby one hundred!" Another woman's voice called out
"AAAAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHH!" Wade screamed waking up back in his bed "What. The fuck. Was THAT?!" Wade panted as he was back in his bed again.
"Wade." The girls stood at the front of his bed each not pregnant. "We've something to tell you." Death spoke
"W-W-What? Tell me what?" Wade asked in worry
"We're leaving you." Death answered
"What? But you only just arrived!" Wade defended
"It's you Wade. You're not stable enough for us. So we're going to live with someone who can treat us right." Hope answered
"Deadpool!" Scott Summer's cheered poking his head around the corner.
"AAAAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHH!" Wade screamed again waking back up in his bed "Is this going to be some sort of Inception shit? My heart can't take this!" Wade panted as he felt the presence of a woman sleeping next to him.
"Hi big bro. Sleep well?" A girl claiming to be his sister asked him with a smile
"Oh fuck no!" Wade pulled a gun out and shot himself in the head, making him wake up in his bed once again.
"Okay who's the fucker who put me through that shit?!" Wade called out "Hmm..." He heard moaning from several different women sleeping on his bed. "Okay role call: Shiklah, Domino, Madelyne, Jean, Hope, Snowball, Baby-Face, Donna-Matrix, Raven-Nous and Death...all here..." He listed off chronologically. "Oh god what was with that dream?" He groaned
"Hmm..." The girls moaned
TO READ MORE, TUESDAY 14th OF MAY 2019
Grey: Okay everyone, I need a quick break. Ghost, you're up!
Ghost: Hey Everyone, welcome back to the- *Ghost began to say before looking around* Review Corner.
Review Corner.
Corner...
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Damn it. Not again. Okay, let's see who's reviewed.
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Reviewer: GriffonicTobias
Review: So... where did the idea for Omegatrix/Nematrix combinations come from? Great story BTW, and thanks for the Popcorn, Ghost!
Ghost's Answer: They were inspired by the Reboot Ben 10 cartoon...As bad as it is, it DOES have some good ideas. And you're welcome.
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Reviewer: Shooting Star Dragon 3000
Review: YES, FATALITY! Suck it Wes. Also yay, wedding in the next arc! Now to switch gears for the adventures of James and the titans
Ghost's Answer: Honestly, the MK11 reference stuff was a HUGE coincidence. And Yes, the Titans are coming back.
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Reviewer: Kamen Rider Fan 12
Review: Unsurprisingly, this chapter was awesome, and it's cool seeing another fic, admittedly in this case a published one, somehow turning the Nematrix good. That said, I also find it kinda funny in hindsight that the thing I said when Wes first was hinted at was a Garlic JR. TFS quote, especially since both their fathers tried to take important titles but were defeated specifically by the one who would get the title, though I did also just realize one could arguably describe his world as a 'Dead Zone', also, sorry if this is a bit long, I did try to keep it short but that probably didn't happen.
Ghost's Answer: Hey, it's fine, you spoke your voice.
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Reviewer: Howlstone16
Review: This was a great story arc well done, sorry I haven't review in a while, I was unsure on what to write at the time but since review corner is next week now is a good time to do it again because I love review corner.
Q1: When will James and Krystal's harem end don't get me wrong I love reading their stories but I'm curious about the future stories you two will do for the younger siblings.
Q2: I really wonder what kind of stories you two will write in future and no doubt they'll be fantastic but I also wonder if you two will continue the stories you already have.
Q3: What was the song in chapter 63.
Q4: Will there be any more Spider-Man stories in the near future.
Q5: I really love how Krystal was finally able to tame the Nemitrix, and I hope we'll see more about it.
Q6: Will there be a Ben 10 story not in the harem universe.
Q7: I hope you two don't mine all the questions I was just making up for not reviewing in the last few weeks, have a great week.
Ghost's Answer: Q1: The next generation is in the concept stage, but we've got a good grasp on location and ideas. But James and Krystal aren't ending fully any time soon.
Q2: Well, there are some new stories on my profile you can go check 'Rosario & Newcubus' and 'Ash Ketchum Crossdress One-Shots' #shamelessplugisshameless
Q3: *Turns to Grey* What WAS that song?
Q4: Yes. More Spidey stories are on the way. And in the mean-time check out Spider Shinobi and other Spider-Man stories on Grey's Profile.
Q5: Oh don't worry, we'll see more of it.
Q6: *begins to speak, then stops. Thinks a moment and then answers* Yes. We've got a story concept written down.
Q7: Of course not, this is really good.
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Ghost: Whoo. Need a quick break, Grey, buddy?
Grey: Hey everyone! Here we go... ANOTHER TRAILER!
Power Rangers Unworthy
Chapter 5
It was a couple of days later, Jason was meeting up with Billy and Zack for a 'boys day out'. Zack had complained he spends all his time around the girls so they needed to hang out today "So, where are you and your friends going, Jason?" Jason's mother asked
"No idea." Jason shrugged
"Well, I'm pleased that you've got friends other than Billy." His mother added, kissing his cheek gently "You put the weight of the world on your shoulders sometimes."
"I. Well." Jason mumbled, knowing in some way; it WAS.
"Hopefully he'll get a girlfriend soon, that might break him from that.' his dad joked
"Dad." Jason groaned gently only to get a flash of two girls he had recently met 'What the heck was that?' Jason thought to himself 'Kim and Trini? As if.' He shook his head gently and left too meet up with his friend. He rode his bike, meeting up with the two at the park. Zack was already there, taking a small nap as he got there early. "Zack." Jason frowned, shaking him lightly
Zack snorted awake and blinked quickly as he was awoken "Oh, hey. When'd you get here?"
"Just now." Jason commented, blinking as he saw redness in Zack's eyes like he had been crying "Hey, you okay?"
"Huh? Y-Yeah. Yeah. No. No, I-I'm good." He rubbed his eyes and sniffed sadly and lied outright. He shook his head, grumbled as he opened his bag and sat up
"Really? You're going to-" Jason asked
"I'm hungry." Zack answered, getting a chocolate bar
"Good." Jason frowned, tension in the air
"Want one?" Zack asked, taking a bar out.
"They aren't dosed, are they?" Jason asked plane and simply
"I'm high, not crazy. See? Unopened." Zack answered although there was clear annoyance in his tone
"...I'll pass." Jason answered
"Fine." Zack huffed and took a bite out of his own bar. He grumbled, the two staring at each other in a semi-awkward silence
TO READ MORE, WEDNESDAY 15th OF MAY 2019
Grey: AAAAAAAAAAAnd we are back. Back again. Grey is back, to answer reviews. Next round! Full force!
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Reviewer: Zanotronxl
Review: O.M.G
This was awesome
That was one of the longest arcs I've seen in the tennyson saga
By the way when I said onematrix i meant like a fused name o-nema-trix
Also have James and Krystal storys technically been loli and shots storys
Cause they are still about 16 ish right
What are you planning for James harem cause I just love his character
Will Krystal have a guilty conscience for killing Wess he was just a misguided man
Anyways all in all good chapter keep up the good work
P.S I've been reading your fics since before Ben's harem I just never had a profile before a while back
Answer: This arc, Review Corner to Review Corner, is 26 chapters. This beats out the original AndThenThereWas arc of Ben's Harem, which was 21 chapters, kinda fitting.
It isn't a fusion of the two Matrix's. Ship is now linked to the two so she can give Krystal Predator armour
No. James is 18 at the start of the first James Harem, he is now 20. Krystal is now 18. Also Loli and Shouta means they LOOK underage, get terms right.
No
PS: Great to finally hear from you
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Reviewer: Yo-yo-yo
Review: A few questions for the review.
Are you gonna make more ben 10 stories that either involved or outside of ben harem universe?
Are ypu going back to your old ben 10 story, albedo's harem?
Have you ever thought about making some spinoffs involving the another world arcs of ben's harem and Krystal's harem?
Are there ever going to be stories for ben's other kids?
I hope I made the right questions to ask.
Answer: We have. Although those are mainly on Ghost's page
No. That story was never mean to continue... okay, small correction. We may, may, MAAAAAYY, continue it if we get good ideas for an overall plot. But it is HIGHLY unlikely. Like, 99 to 1 odds.
... next week.
There will be A story based around Scout, Luna, Atem and ML-E.
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Reviewer: jasongd
Review: Wooohooo great chapter and great ending of this arc congrats
Answer: Thanks man, real proud of this
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Reviewer: ANTI REAPER
Review: Oh my God they are finally getting married tears of joy tears of joy
Answer: We have been building for this.
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Reviewer: thewittywhy
Review: Holy cow! Through and through this was amazing. I truly feel more connected to your original characters than I ever thought I would. A Nemitrix armor fusion is an amazing concept, and how you handled it was entertaining. You amaze me with how this concept has grown into something larger than life.
Answer: *Bows* all we do is try.
Grey: Hey everyone, time for the next trailer. I will see you in a quick second
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Huniepop
The King's Maidens
Day 5
Sam and Momo were asleep in bed, the cute cat-girl was purring rhythmically as she lay next to Sam, who was cuddling her. Sam grumbled as she awoke slowly, seeing Kyu flouting there and taking pictures of the two 'Huh...?' Sam thought tiredly. 'Oh, no.' No, no, no...' She waved her arm slowly to shoo Kyu away
"So cute." Kyu teased
'I'll...swat. You.' Sam mumbled, still trying to get Kyu away before coming to the land of the awake. She sat up slowly, looking at the Huniebee "Hmm...Shoot." Sam frowned, seeing that Momo's hearts were two out of five...She had grown affection for Sam. Although that wasn't too bad. Sam smiled, seeing some pictures
The first was from Nikki, showing her lying on her bed only dressed in a purple button shirt and her black underwear.
"Wow, cute." Sam smiled lightly
Next were two pictures from Beli, the first one was of her doing 'downward dog' in a purple bra and see-through purple trousers showing off her legs.
"Nice posture." Sam smiled, swiping too the next picture and...she almost got an early morning nosebleed from it.
TO READ MORE, THURSDAY 16th OF MAY 2019
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Grey: And we are BACK! Ghost, take the plate once more for round two!
Ghost: Well, that's the first lot reviews, let's get onto the next part. *passes Grey a present* Happy Birthday, dude.
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Reviewer: thewittywhy
Review: Holy cow! Through and through this was amazing. I truly feel more connected to your original characters than I ever thought I would. A Nemitrix armor fusion is an amazing concept, and how you handled it was entertaining. You amaze me with how this concept has grown into something larger than life.
Ghost's Answer: Well, thank Grey for all this good stuff. I've got crazy BS for ideas.
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Reviewer: ANTI REAPER
Review: Oh my God they are finally getting married tears of joy tears of joy
Ghost's Answer: Yes they are. *Passes box of tissues*
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Reviewer: jasongd
Review: Wooohooo great chapter and great ending of this arc congrats
Ghost's Answer: Glad you enjoyed this.
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Reviewer: Yo-yo-yo
Review: A few questions for the review.
Are you gonna make more ben 10 stories that either involved or outside of ben harem universe?
Are ypu going back to your old ben 10 story, albedo's harem?
Have you ever thought about making some spinoffs involving the another world arcs of ben's harem and Krystal's harem?
Are there ever going to be stories for ben's other kids?
I hope I made the right questions to ask.
Ghost's Answer: Q1: As I said to Howlstone16, yes. We DO have an idea for a Ben 10 story and it's OUTSIDE of the Ben 10 Harem-Verse.
Q2: NEVER. That story was a SINGLE one-shot idea that Grey only did to show how bad a pure lemon story would be. PLUS, writing a story about such a repugnant character in such a light...Yeah, no. No chance of it continuing. So, put it simply: ALBEDO'S HAREM IS DISCONTINUED AND WILL *NEVER* BE UPDATED!
Q3: There's a small spin-off coming soon. But involving the alternate universe...Probably not.
Q4: Yes there will be a story involving them.
Yeah, those were some good questions.
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Reviewer: Zanotronxl
Review: O.M.G
This was awesome
That was one of the longest arcs I've seen in the tennyson saga
By the way when I said onematrix i meant like a fused name o-nema-trix
Also have James and Krystal storys technically been loli and shots storys
Cause they are still about 16 ish right
What are you planning for James harem cause I just love his character
Will Krystal have a guilty conscience for killing Wess he was just a misguided man
Anyways all in all good chapter keep up the good work
P.S I've been reading your fics since before Ben's harem I just never had a profile before a while back
Ghost's Answer: Well, glad you enjoyed all of Grey's stories thus far. TECHNICALLY they've been loli and shota stories, BUT they're mature for their age and we've written them AS teens to young adults; remember, they're of alien descent, they may mature faster. We've got something fun for James' next arc. Krystal...MAY get a bit haunted by killing Wes, BUT he knew there was no saving him.
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Reviewer: 61394
Review: It was a very sweet proposal but there are two things Krystal should do first
One take the Antitrix and smash it bury the pieces and then blow up the planet the pieces are on so no one ever has Wes's powers again
Two return No Watch and Julies (Since she was Ben's only Asian love interest) son's body home it will hurt them but at the very least they'll have closure and can say goodbye properly to their child
Ghost's Answer: Don't worry, that'll happen off screen. And No Watch's son WILL be returned, Professor Paradox and Krystal will bring him home.
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Ghost: So! Many! Reviews! UGH!
Grey: Okay, okay, rest man. *nods and turns to the audience* Okay, time for another trailer and then we will be back for more reviews. Trailer of 5 of 7.
Digimon 02; Davis' Lucky Life
Chapter 6
It was about a week later, the summer holidays were starting and everyone was ready for the beach or summer jobs. Davis was working hard in the summer heat, his noodle cart doing rather well "Phew. Okay, let's keep going." Davis wiped sweat from his brow and pulled his cart to a new location. He had a permit allowing him to park at several different locations for different time periods and he was heading for the last stop for the day "Okay. Where to go." He thought, having a quick look for the last stop. "Okay, two more streets and a right."
"Need shome help?" a familiar lispy voice asked next to him
"Wait...That voice." He blinked and halted "No way." Davis whispered and looked to the side and saw his partner. "VEEMON!" He laughed. Standing there was his partner... Surrounded by three women "I. I. Oh boy." Davis blinked in shock. Seeing Veemon have his three mates:
Sistermon Blanc
Sistermon Noir
And QueenChessmon
TO READ MORE, FRIDAY 17th OF MAY 2019
Grey:
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Reviewer: Howlstone16
Review: This was a great story arc well done, sorry I haven't review in a while, I was unsure on what to write at the time but since review corner is next week now is a good time to do it again because I love review corner.
Q1: When will James and Krystal's harem end don't get me wrong I love reading their stories but I'm curious about the future stories you two will do for the younger siblings.
Q2: I really wonder what kind of stories you two will write in future and no doubt they'll be fantastic but I also wonder if you two will continue the stories you already have.
Q3: What was the song in chapter 63.
Q4: Will there be any more Spider-Man stories in the near future.
Q5: I really love how Krystal was finally able to tame the Nemitrix, and I hope we'll see more about it.
Q6: Will there be a Ben 10 story not in the harem universe.
Q7: I hope you two don't mine all the questions I was just making up for not reviewing in the last few weeks, have a great week.
Answer: It is fine man. And I am glad you enjoy this.
Q1: James has 2 arcs left and Krystal has one arc left
Q2: We have ideas and... *sighs* that is mainly my fault. I get distracted easily
Q3: Messing With The Best by miracleofsound. It is a Bayonetta 2 tribute song, which I shifted SLIGHTLY to make it more generic... and I forgot to credit it last chapter. Fuck.
Q4: Monday and next Sunday
Q5: We most defiantly will
Q6: Yep, but those mainly go on Ghost's page.
Q7: It is fine, I love answering long reviews
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Reviewer: Kamen Rider Fan 12
Review: Unsurprisingly, this chapter was awesome, and it's cool seeing another fic, admittedly in this case a published one, somehow turning the Nematrix good. That said, I also find it kinda funny in hindsight that the thing I said when Wes first was hinted at was a Garlic JR. TFS quote, especially since both their fathers tried to take important titles but were defeated specifically by the one who would get the title, though I did also just realize one could arguably describe his world as a 'Dead Zone', also, sorry if this is a bit long, I did try to keep it short but that probably didn't happen.
Answer: Ironic, huh
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Reviewer: Shooting Star Dragon 3000
Review: YES, FATALITY! Suck it Wes. Also yay, wedding in the next arc! Now to switch gears for the adventures of James and the titans
Answer: Ironic since Ghost and I are planning a Mortal Kombat story
Yes, wedding. Should take five chapters
And back to Jump, yep!
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Reviewer: GriffonicTobias
Review: So... where did the idea for Omegatrix/Nematrix combinations come from? Great story BTW, and thanks for the Popcorn, Ghost!
Answer: It isn't combinations, Ship has synced with the Nemitrix like she has the Omegatrix. So Predator armour, not fusions.
And the idea just felt... obvious since Krystal had both. But we where building to this since Krystal's first arc.
Grey:
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Tennyson Harem Saga One-Shot
What If? Bad Krystal
Krystal awoke, in pain. Well not pain more like her limbs where made of lead, like she had tired herself out "Good. Your awake." Helen commented, sitting next to her "Ship is upstairs with the kids, saying she needed to think of something."
"And Wes?" she asked in concern, hoping the Mad gang hadn't killed him
"We killed him." Helen explained simply "We killed the bastard Kev, Ar, Pen and Ann are driving him as far away as possible before burying him in a shallow grave. But not before Ben crushed that Matrix of his."
"Y... You killed him?!" Krystal gasped
"We didn't have a choice Krystal. The guy was a murderer. He would have killed our kids. We had the opportunity, we took him down." Helen frowned
"I... No. No. You're right." Krystal admitted with a frown, holding her hands in front of heart "I just... I just wished I could have saved him."
"Because you are a good person, Krystal." Helen commented
"Am I?" Krystal whispered, remembering the dreams caused by the Nemitrix gave her... dreams from her instincts. Including dreams about doing some rather cruel stuff to Wes, such as killing him
"Well... maybe you've got SOME Bad in you." Helen winked as she got up, walking away
"... why did you all join Bad Ben's gang?" Krystal asked, almost muttering weakly
"Well Boss, Sunny and Gwen already ruled Bellwood. And other places weren't exactly nice for us lot being hybrids. So we traveled here, hoping they could help us. From their meeting with your dad they agreed, us lot building this place. Our base, our home. Here, we are free." Helen explained "At first I was a lesbian and when we all came together I was very interested in the girls. However the problem with us all being together? Lots of sexual tension and lust. Ben pointed out that if we all got jealous and tried to one up each other we'd fall apart, leading to this life style we have now. The girls pressured me into trying a night with Ben and... Fuck did it break my resistance. Don't get me wrong, still love fucking a girl. But I could suck a cock all day and not want it to stop."
"... I see." Krystal commented, partially from the direction the subject went
"Sorry, got carried away." Helen laughed
"It's fine." Krystal nodded, yawning "How is everyone else?"
"Bruised at best. And that's the five driving Kid Killer off. Gwen and Sunny healed everyone else. Gotta fucking love magic."
"Yeah." Krystal nodded, rubbing the Nemitrix as she drifted to sleep
TO READ MORE, SATURDAY 18th OF MAY 2019
Grey: And now I've finished all the reviews. Nice. Only one more trailer and for Ghost to finish the reviews. So, go ahead bro!
Ghost: Jeez; how many left? Well. *flexes fingers* Let's get cracking.
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Reviewer: IMBADATNAMES & Guest
Review 1: *sees the ending* YYYYYYEEEEESSSSSSSS! YES YES YES! HOW MANY PEOPLE ARE GONNA BE AT THE WEDDING? ARE THE OTHER BENS AND SUCH GONNA SHOW UP? WHAT IS THEIR REACTION TO NEMETRIX FUSIONS GONNA BE? IS JAMES GONNA COME WITH THE TITANS? WHO'S GONNA BE THE NEXT BIG BAD?
*takes a deep breath*
Okay, so Alien X would not have a NATURAL predator, so I'm guessing somehow this Nemetrix CREATES predators. And while Psychobos is a genius, I'd doubt he'd
Review 2: *sees the ending* YYYYYYEEEEESSSSSSSS! YES YES YES! HOW MANY PEOPLE ARE GONNA BE AT THE WEDDING? ARE THE OTHER BENS AND SUCH GONNA SHOW UP? WHAT IS THEIR REACTION TO NEMETRIX FUSIONS GONNA BE? IS JAMES GONNA COME WITH THE TITANS? WHO'S GONNA BE THE NEXT BIG BAD? WHAT WILL GREER THink of Appoplexian Krystal?
*takes a deep breath*
Okay, so Alien X would not have a NATURAL predator(because omnipotence), so I'm guessing somehow this Nemetrix CREATES predators. And while Psychobos is a genius, I'd doubt he'd be able to come up with the tech to make a new species. Only the Omnitrix ever accomplished this feat(Nanomech). So, I have to wonder, did Albedo ever help them in this timeline? Since he'd have the knowledge of the Omnitrix, and from what I can tell, your Malware has no knowledge of Psychobos or Khyber.
Ghost's Answer: I assume that these are both your reviews but accidentally must've clicked 'Send' early. Um...No. No predators for Celestial-Sapiens. And as for Albedo and Psychobos...it's debateable.
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Reviewer: Tigerclaw97
Review: And the Prodigal Son finally falls, and Krystal is more powerful than ever for it.
Not really much to say at this point that I haven't already.
Now Krystal and TT finally get married (EEE WEDDING!) And everything winds back to normal before the next world ending crisis comes knocking. Because who ever heard of a Tennyson getting a moment of fucking peace!?
And as the order usually goes, soon we'll get to see what madness James has been having to deal with. And if Cass or Dick have finally snapped and gelded a speedster yet.
Ghost's Answer: Yep, #Ding Dong the Wes is Dead! Which old Wes? The Wicked Wes!# ...I'm not sorry. Yep, wedding coming up! Trust me; who is going to mess with the wedding when: Ben 100, Gwen, Kevin, the Omni-Nemetrix wielding Daughter, the Perfect Matrix Son and the ENTIRE PLUMBER ORG are going to be in attendance? Basic suicide. And yeah, James' next adventure is next.
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Reviewer: Guest893
Review: Wes is dead and all is back to normal.
Nice to see that Krystal is going to marry TT.
Hope to see her big brother come to her wedding with his friends and family.
Nice to hear that James' Harem 2 is starting a new arc.
See you next time.
Ghost's Answer: Yep, Wes is gone. Yes, she is. Oh of COURSE he is, he wouldn't miss it...except if something bad happens that's out of his control. Yep, coming REALLY soon. Bye!
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Ghost: And we are all finished. I will see you all later! Close us out Grey!
Grey: Thanks Ghost. Time to reveal the new story for next Sunday! And it is something Ghost and I have been planning ALL YEAR!
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COMING SUNDAY 19th OF MAY 2019
THE SEQUEL YOU HAVE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR!
THE SEQUEL TO CRISIS OF INFINITE SPIDER'S
INTRODUCING...
WAR OF INFINITE SPIDER'S
PROLOGUE ONE-SHOT'S
A SERIES OF ONE-SHOTS SHOWING SNIPPETS OF DIFFERENT SPIDER'S LIVES, BOTH OLD AND NEW
PREPARE... FOR SPIDER CIVIL WAR
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Grey: And that is everything for this Review Corner
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Grey: *Ahem* Anyway, this is all done. I shall see you in two days for the start of the upload extravaganza. I hope you all enjoy.
