HELLO EVERYONE! AND WELCOME TO THE KRYSTAL HAREM'S FIFTH AND SECOND TO LAST...
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Grey: Ah, that is really fun. Okay guys, let's go! I hope you all get satisfying answers to your questions!
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Reviewer: Guest chapter 88 August 27
Review:
Please update your Dragonball dc story. It is a really good story and I am dying to see what happens next. Please update soon.
Answer:
It will be uploaded when the next chapter is finished being written.
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Reviewer: Iron Mario
Review:
Hey there.
Phew, Krystal finally managed to beat the Rooters, for how paranoid he was I agree with Krystal about how stupid Servantis was to not put a lock on the Nemetrix, and then she and Ship just showed how much he had underestimated them with how they took him and everyone else down, though it's regrettable Swift finished Servantis off, out of everyone he was the one that deserved to rot away in a low security cell the most, he got a too quick exit, but oh well.
It's funny how we got an official statement from Ship about being jealous of James' matrix and it's sound effects, makes you wonder if all the matrix's AI get competitive with each other or if it's just Ship, and man, female Citrakayah are seriously overpowered in comparison to their male counterparts, I think the most extreme difference in power inside species we've seen so far.
And it seems that Ben has his own set of adventures Krystal knows nothing about if she never saw the "Mama Lucy" news coming (huh, pretty rare to see a speechless Krystal), can't wait to see what will happen next arc with Malware, maybe more time travel adventures or even something more.
Oh boy,review corner, what to ask, what to ask... ok, I think I'll go with:
Out of the story so far what has been you guys' favorite arc or moment to write? And why?
How about favorite character in the cast besides Krystal? Is there a clear winner or do you guys have more than one?
And favorite or coolest alien species in your opinion?
Oh, to finish, since learning to handle the Nemetrix have Krystal and James sparred with each other? At both their current levels would one be able to win even if slightly over the other? Or would the Krystal/Ship/Wild Krystal team and James' perfect aliens clash end in a draw?
Phew, I think that'd be it, hope that you enjoy your the break.
Excelent chapter and arc, keep up the good work and take care guys.
Answer:
Well it is simply because he is also an overconfidant asshole
She isn't jealous of the AI, she is jealous of the cool noises it makes
Honestly, FastTrack was utter SHIT as an alien. Worse than most of Ben's other aliens in so many ways. And so... with gender differences we went wild.
Hmm... I'd say Krystal calling out some of the douchebags on their bullshit. She's been great at that this time
I don't really have a fave for Krystal honestly. I like groups of characters
Don't really have a fave alien either honestly.
They would spar but never really go too hard.
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Reviewer: Damian-Tomas-Wayne
Review:
damn swift has some weird ass fantasies. amazing chapter dudes as always. and I did send my message through private message so I'm not too sure why ya didnt get it. but it's no worries. anyways hope you have a good relax on ya break you definitely deserve it. and cant wait to get back with james and the gang
Answer:
Hey, everyone has their kinks
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Reviewer: Lonestar88
Review:
I repeat Swift needs therapy and based on the end of the chapter Krystal mining some as well. And you don't waste any time finishing this Ark and setting up the next villain as well.
Answer:
Of course, gotta be ready!
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Reviewer: jasongd
Review:
And another great chapter congrats
I don't have any questions right now
But I want to thank you for this great story.
I wish you a good rest, you really deserve it
Answer:
Thank you
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Reviewer: PowerhousePhantom
Review:
Is Overflow from the reboot of Ben 10?
Answer:
The name, yes. It is a good name
Grey: Hey guys! Okay, so Ghost is about to answer some reviews. But first? Here is a teaser for an upcoming story! I hope you all enjoy!
KAMEN RIDER ZERO ONE: HIDEN BODYGUARDS
Izu was standing in the light-blue binary code filled white void of Zea, the satellite herself, speaking her mind as she felt the words of Aruto weigh on her. "Zea, what more can I do? How can I help President Aruto? I want to protect him." Her hands neatly folded over her stomach
Silence surrounded Izu as the faint coding noises floated about her. Zea was pondering. Thinking. Making scenarios on what to do and how to help.
Izu went to her pocket and pulled out a small pocket-watch. The last remaining part of her older brother, Wazu. A great detective with unconventional methods for finding clues. "Wazu. What should I do?" She whispered, thinking of the brother she didn't get to know all that well, before vanishing from the mindscape.
Zea quickly scanned the watch, hearing Izu's wish and want...and then it clicked. The sound of gears and technological supremacy whirred in the digital mind-scape as scenarios played out. One after another, after a hundred after a million. Scenarios played out...and Zea had her answer.
Outlines over Humagears appeared in hologram form. Slightly different in faces and structure, but all the same. One would not be enough. But four, maybe. And then its mind began to burn brighter and work faster. Ideas flashed faster than human thought could comprehend.
Meanwhile near the 3D computer which created the Progrise Key's, the systems started up. The TV screens turned on, showing the data for the Shinning Hopper Key. And on the table was the Progrise Key Connector, which was loaded up with the Biting Shark, Flaming Tiger, Freezing Bear and Breaking Mammoth Progrise Key's.
The four Key's began to glow, the screens alight with data flashing faster than humans could read, as the 3D printer started up and got to work
COMING... I DUNNO
I THINK WE PLANNED FOR DECEMBER TO BE THE PLANNED RELEASE DATE?
Grey: And there we go, a new story coming in the next few months. I hope you will all enjoy! And now... Yo! Ghost! You're up!
Ghost: Hey, everyone! It's Ghost here once again! looks at the reviews and chapters Well... Holy crap. This has been a hell of a wild time writing these. It's so good to see you showing your love and support for Grey's stories. These have been a journey to continue and work on, but I doubt we'll slow down... except for the much needed respite for Grey since life has been tough for him recently. But here we go, let's get down to the reviews!
Reviewer: thewittywhy
Review:
What a rush! Krystal really is one of my favorite characters. Seeing her go from the little girl to a true hero is heartwarming. Ship trying to out do James is quite hilarious! XD
So Lucy? Well that should be interesting. Lastly, your version of Ben wielding an BiUltimatrix is freaking hype! So overpowered and spectacular! :D
Ghost's Answer:
I'm glad you've enjoyed the progress of Ben's baby girl. And yeah, Ship trying to outdo James is funny. Yeah, we had Lucy on the docket for a while now. And yeah, in this continuity Ben isn't stupid.
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Reviewer: B.E.A.T.N
Review:
This chapter was incredible. A fitting way to close the Rooters arc. Krystal and Ship defeating this cult, freeing Swift so she can go through rehabilitation, and trading Malware for when we come back to this story. This was an amazing story arc. Krystal went through so much, and I'm excited for when we return to her, and when we come back to James in November. The only question I have is, how do you manage so many stories and ideas like this? I only just started my own Ben 10 story, and I hope it gets even a little bit of the attention and praise yours does. With all of that said, have a great day, great work, and stay safe!
Ghost's Answer:
Yeah, we have to go on a high note. As for 'How do we manage so many stories and ideas?'; very difficultly. Between life and new ideas for inspiration, we've got a backlog, of a backlog of concept ideas. Well, I hope your own Ben 10 story does well.
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Reviewer: Shooting Star Dragon 3000
Review:
Now that was quite the finale. And now finally swift can get the yandere therapy she needs. Wait, lucy is the new mama? When the hell did this happen?
Ghost's Answer:
Yeah. As I said 'High note'. As for Lucy? Points to Ben and his harem They have their own lives.
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Reviewer: fernandojespinoza100
Review:
Love you stories. Have you ever considered a Stargate or Halo or MASS EFFECT crossover with Spider-Man?
Ghost's Answer:
Thanks you for your praise. No, mostly because I couldn't do ME, Halo or Stargate justice since I don't follow those sorts of things. Closest thing I got to Halo was Red Vs Blue.
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Reviewer: thecrabmaster
Review:
Oh shoot the return of Malware next arc? That's nuts! Speaking of nuts this whole ride with the Roosters was a crazy ride. Keep up the great work guys. And why did you opt to add Lucy now?
Ghost's Answer:
Yeah, we're going BACK to the crazy megalomaniac again. As for Lucy? ... I can't remember.
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Reviewer: AlienTokusatsuDuelistMangaGeek
Review:
Awesome chapter! I like the Fourze reference in this chapter as well as the Zero-One references. Just out of curiosity, do you plan on adding The Music Meister from Batman: The Brave and The Bold to James Harem 2?
Ghost's Answer:
Yeah, we had to. Err... That's a thought. Turns to Grey Dude, write that down.
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Reviewer: 61394
Review:
Rath with diamond claws is something I didn't know I needed in my life but I'm not complaining
This arc was fun and look Malware I wonder what his history is in this world with Ben and Azmuth
Stay safe you guys and until next time
Ghost's Answer:
Yeah, it's pretty badass. Yeah, probably involving Azmuth again.
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Reviewer: darkboy18
Review:
wow never thought you kill sevantis nice one and can't wait for the next one and i understand you need time to recharge
all and all great chapter
but let me guess next main baddie is Malware right?
Ghost's Answer:
Well, we're more willing to step into that boundary. Yeah, Malware is the next baddy.
Ghost: Well, that's it from me for now. Thanks for all your support, look after yourselves everyone... I'm going for a coffee. Hey, Grey! passes 4 litre bottle of coke Oh and one other thing, look forward to the next phase in the Tennyson Harem Saga and our new stories that we're working on. Hope you'll enjoy the trailers and we'll see you next time. Bye!
Grey: And now it is time for another trailer! Why? Because one of Ghost's stories has it's finale coming up soon! I hope you all like it!
Tsukune's cell
Six days and seven hours remaining
Tsukune was sitting on his own, in the cell he was thrown into. No visitors, aside from the tray of food he had from his jailer. He didn't have anyone to talk to, nor did he feel happy. All he could do... was practice. He tried to make various illusions, on what he could think of.
Meanwhile the school was in a small panic
Hearing about an Incubus in the school, and how Tsukune was this 'problem'. It was insane. Tsukune's heritage was a wake-up call to the girls and also the boys, having realised why they fawned and hated over him.
Some guys felt guilty, the few decent to okay guys at school.
*Time skip*
It was five days to go, when the door to his cell opened and the familiar spider lady walked in carrying some food "Lunch time." Keito spoke as she walked in.
Tsukune looked up, looking a little disheveled and tired. But he smiled at her, his one connection to sanity while he was locked away
"How're you doing?" she asked quietly, being kind to her... The only one who was kind to him.
"He doesn't deserve you." Tsukune answered.
*time skip*
It was the day of the execution, Tsukune was getting prepped for his death. 'Give the students a show and warning' on Kuyo's part. Right now he was wrapped in so many chains and cuffs it looked almost comical.
"Think you've got enough on me?" Tsukune joked, though the weight was almost crushing his bones.
"Shut up, Incubus sludge." The Golem committee member glared
Tsukune closed his eyes as Kuyo's hypocritical speech was going on, tuning his voice out and imagined being back home... showing his lovers to his parents. How they've changed his life. He could just smile. If this was his end... He was gonna smile.
ROSARIO & NEWCUBUS FINALE
COMING SOON!
Grey: And there we go, all finished! sigh Rosario & Incubus, that was a fun story to write. Okay, Ghost, you're back!
Ghost: Ah~, that's better. Welcome back to my segment everyone. So, I better get into the thick of it. How many reviews do we have left? ... Looks below ... Ah, come on. Well, let's get on it. I wonder if anyone will react well to the trailers?
Reviewer: PowerhousePhantom
Review:
Is Overflow from the reboot of Ben 10?
Ghost's Answer:
The name is, yeah. But we applied it to an older alien.
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Reviewer: jasongd
Review:
And another great chapter congrats
I don't have any questions right now
But I want to thank you for this great story.
I wish you a good rest, you really deserve it
Ghost's Answer:
Thanks very much dude. Appreciate it.
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Reviewer: Lonestar88
Review:
I repeat Swift needs therapy and based on the end of the chapter Krystal mining some as well. And you don't waste any time finishing this Ark and setting up the next villain as well.
Ghost's Answer:
Yes, yes they do. We're not going to brush this under the rug.
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Reviewer: Damian-Tomas-Wayne
Review:
damn swift has some weird ass fantasies. amazing chapter dudes as always. and I did send my message through private message so I'm not too sure why ya didnt get it. but it's no worries. anyways hope you have a good relax on ya break you definitely deserve it. and cant wait to get back with james and the gang
Ghost's Answer:
Yeah, she does. She's been... "trained" and repressed, if that makes sense.
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Reviewer: Iron Mario
Review:
Hey there.
Phew, Krystal finally managed to beat the Rooters, for how paranoid he was I agree with Krystal about how stupid Servantis was to not put a lock on the Nemetrix, and then she and Ship just showed how much he had underestimated them with how they took him and everyone else down, though it's regrettable Swift finished Servantis off, out of everyone he was the one that deserved to rot away in a low security cell the most, he got a too quick exit, but oh well.
It's funny how we got an official statement from Ship about being jealous of James' matrix and it's sound effects, makes you wonder if all the matrix's AI get competitive with each other or if it's just Ship, and man, female Citrakayah are seriously overpowered in comparison to their male counterparts, I think the most extreme difference in power inside species we've seen so far.
And it seems that Ben has his own set of adventures Krystal knows nothing about if she never saw the "Mama Lucy" news coming (huh, pretty rare to see a speechless Krystal), can't wait to see what will happen next arc with Malware, maybe more time travel adventures or even something more.
Oh boy,review corner, what to ask, what to ask... ok, I think I'll go with:
Out of the story so far what has been you guys' favorite arc or moment to write? And why?
How about favorite character in the cast besides Krystal? Is there a clear winner or do you guys have more than one?
And favorite or coolest alien species in your opinion?
Oh, to finish, since learning to handle the Nemetrix have Krystal and James sparred with each other? At both their current levels would one be able to win even if slightly over the other? Or would the Krystal/Ship/Wild Krystal team and James' perfect aliens clash end in a draw?
Phew, I think that'd be it, hope that you enjoy your the break.
Excelent chapter and arc, keep up the good work and take care guys.
Ghost's Answer:
Here's the thing, Swift got some level of closure on the man that murdered her parents and effectively kidnapped and brainwashed her. She kind of needed it. Well, James has less bells and whistles in his AI, so it makes sense it'd add something goofy. As for the AI's? I don't know. And yeah, we never knew much about Fast-Track's species so we went a 'Wolverine Route'. As I said before; Ben's got his own life and time, makes sense stuff would happen.
Ghost: Well looks like it's my time to tag out again. I hope you all look after yourselves and stay safe. Please continue to support our stories and keep leaving reviews. They really motivate us to work hard... though we do need a break ourselves. But, we'll give it our best. thumbs up "See you guys next time on our next Review Corner and answering your reviews!
Grey: Thanks bro. So, let's get ready to wrap this up! But first... ANOTHER TEASER!
KAMEN RIDER ZERO ONE: HIDEN BODYGUARDS
The building was aflame as two dark forces traded blow with blow. It was a fight for the Sting Scorpion Key. A fight between Jin and his Burning Falcon form and Gai Amatsu with his power jacking Thouser form; while Aruto, Fuwa and Yua where the Rider forms where near equal in power, Jin clearly had much better combat knowledge but he was also holding back, almost mockingly
"Careful!" Yua called, the flames nearly lashing at the group
"President. We can't stop them." Fuwa grunted, struggling to get back to his feet only to fall back down
"You're right. We have to. We can't just-!" Aruto responded as he caught his friend, pulling out his ZeroOne Driver
"President Aruto. Please allow us to handle this." Izu spoke up as she walked between them, the group subconsiously parting, alongside the other four
"Izu! No, you can't!" Aruto panicked.
"It's fine, boss." Yukiko smiled lightly, her white hair blowing in the wind "It is our job, however."
"We need to keep you safe." Yumi whispered, her fingers tapping together while her blue streaked black hair hung loosely around her head
"What's going on here?" Thouser asked in disgust as he and Jin stopped their fight
"Them again...?" Jin blinked and frowned
"Hello." Hitomi nodded softly, her white, black and orange outfit matching the flames perfectly and almost blending in "We are here to defeat you, as you are putting our president in danger."
"Oh, more disgusting HumaGear to whip your backside Aruto Hiden?!" Thouser snapped darkly "And you made them look so similar to your stupid secretary to, pathetic!"
SMASH!
The grey and black boot slammed into the ground hard and cracked it lightly, the last sister glaring at their foe "Shut your mouth, Amatsu!" Zouy responded with a loud roar as each of the bodyguards pulled out a Driver. Each Driver was almost identical to the Hiden ZeroOne Driver, however the solid black base had been replaced with a sleek and shinning white. Meanwhile the neon yellow was swapped for a dark green, almost a metallic forest green, while the red arrows where swapped out for a soft blue
"This was not expected." Jin frowned
"You gave them Driver's?!" Gai hissed
"We won't give you the satisfaction." Yumi muttered as they attacked their belts
HIDEN GUARD DRIVER!
As one the four had their belts attached and pulled out keys, tapping the buttons atop them
TUNDRA BLIZZARD!
INFERNO FIRE!
SURGING BITE!
COLOSSAL PRESS!
COMING SOON
HOPEFULLY
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WE WILL TRY TO GET IT DONE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE
Grey: Oh... goodness. I hope you are all excited for this one, and I hope you all enjoy it when it comes out. For now... let's finish this guys!
Reviewer: darkboy18
Review:
wow never thought you kill sevantis nice one and can't wait for the next one and i understand you need time to recharge
all and all great chapter
but let me guess next main baddie is Malware right?
Answer:
Thank you
And yes, you are right.
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Reviewer: 61394
Review:
Rath with diamond claws is something I didn't know I needed in my life but I'm not complaining
This arc was fun and look Malware I wonder what his history is in this world with Ben and Azmuth
Stay safe you guys and until next time
Answer:
Well, we did hint at it in his first two appearances.
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Reviewer: AlienTokusatsuDuelistMangaGeek
Review:
Awesome chapter! I like the Fourze reference in this chapter as well as the Zero-One references. Just out of curiosity, do you plan on adding The Music Meister from Batman: The Brave and The Bold to James Harem 2?
Answer:
Unfortunately no.
I LOVE the Music Meister, but he is a VERY musically charged character. And the problem with music in written work is, if it isn't an original song... what's it sound like? There is a reason that when you use music in comic books it tends to suck.
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Reviewer: thecrabmaster
Review:
Oh shoot the return of Malware next arc? That's nuts! Speaking of nuts this whole ride with the Roosters was a crazy ride. Keep up the great work guys. And why did you opt to add Lucy now?
Answer:
Well 1, missed opportunity. 2, show that Ben's adventures where not done they just aren't the main focus anymote. And 3, because why not?
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Reviewer: fernandojespinoza100
Review:
Love you stories. Have you ever considered a Stargate or Halo or MASS EFFECT crossover with Spider-Man?
Answer:
Do not care about the first two
And we do not do requests
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Reviewer: Shooting Star Dragon 3000
Review:
Now that was quite the finale. And now finally swift can get the yandere therapy she needs. Wait, lucy is the new mama? When the hell did this happen?
Answer:
Swift is getting the help she needs. Yeah.
Off screen.
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Reviewer: B.E.A.T.N
Review:
This chapter was incredible. A fitting way to close the Rooters arc. Krystal and Ship defeating this cult, freeing Swift so she can go through rehabilitation, and trading Malware for when we come back to this story. This was an amazing story arc. Krystal went through so much, and I'm excited for when we return to her, and when we come back to James in November. The only question I have is, how do you manage so many stories and ideas like this? I only just started my own Ben 10 story, and I hope it gets even a little bit of the attention and praise yours does. With all of that said, have a great day, great work, and stay safe!
Answer:
How we manage all this? Simple... we don't, it is chaos! Anarchy! Destruction! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
...
Okay, seriously? It is because we are working together, we plan as thoroughly as we can while keeping notes (both physical and digitally) and since we are both in the UK and great friends we talk on the phone, as well as physically meeting up, to chat and plan.
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Reviewer: thewittywhy
Review:
What a rush! Krystal really is one of my favorite characters. Seeing her go from the little girl to a true hero is heartwarming. Ship trying to out do James is quite hilarious! XD
So Lucy? Well that should be interesting. Lastly, your version of Ben wielding an BiUltimatrix is freaking hype! So overpowered and spectacular! :D
Answer:
Thanks. It was so great to write Krystal's growth, even if some moments where just... terrible to write. But she has gone far, and the end of this journey will hopefully be VERY satisfying
Yeah, we realised it was a missed opportunity from the original Ben's Harem
Well yeah, Ben be broken.
Grey: And now there we are, all done!
Wow, that was a bit of a long write up
Well, I will see you over at James in two months. See everyone later!