Author's Notes: Heyyy there, Hypnotism, my favorite thing to read about in smut. There's just something about the actual process and total control someone has over another and can make them do anything that I find just damn hot. It's like mind breaking, but more immediate and arguably more fun to work with. I like it, but liking something doesn't make your good at it and that's where y'all come in. I'm trying my hand at it now and I'd really like to know if I did a good job with it and if y'all liked it. If I know I'm decent at it and that y'all like it, then those two things might lead to another story entirely.
ALSO, the next story planned to go out is "A Raven's Apology" it has been way too damn long since that got a chapter, oh yeah, I hope y'all don't think I'm giving you cancer by saying this, but I'm on tumbler now under the badass name of "atomicglitterkitten" do I regret that name? Typing it out now, yes, a little, but it allows me to not just post my stories but repost stories by other authors of the same "type" as myself along with matching fanart and as it turns out, there is A LOT of porn on Tumblr you just have to search the right tags and make sure that damn safe mode is off.
ANYWAY, I personally strongly encourage y'all to leave comments since I'm trying something new, but most importantly, enjoy.
Summer loves her family. They've had a rather nice life together here on Patch. A few close encounters with grimm, Summer had a REALLY close encounter when Ruby was very young, but she lived. I mean, what else would happen?
While Summer had a close call some time ago, the most troubling situation she had experienced was far more recent. She had been cleaning Ruby's room while her and Tai were out buying groceries and found her little seedling's diary and in a very mother like fashion, she more or less "accidentally" open it and found out that Ruby was intending on asking some of her friends to run away with her to Mistral…
that couldn't happen.
No, especially no since they still haven't found Yang who had disappeared during the battle of Beacon. What a horrible ordeal even if most of the grimm have fallen back at this point, the last thing Ruby said she remembered about it was getting to the top of Beacon tower only to see her friend Pyrrha Nikos and new enemy Cinder Fall both, get swallowed up by the grimm dragon just before it flew off back to the mountains.
While the day had indeed been traumatic for Ruby she ended up being more confused than anything when the woman who was seemingly working with the grimm was suddenly seeming eaten by one. She saw it happen with Roman Torchwick, but it was clear to even her that he was just a pawn of Cinder's and maybe she was a pawn of someone else's. That's why she felt she needed to get to Mistral, to get to the bottom of things, but leaving was something her mother couldn't have happening.
Just as she began to think of her options, a black and red portal opened in front of her and Raven Branwen stepped out, her husband's former wife, her old teammate, and one of her own former lovers.
"Raven? What are you doing here?"
"Well hello to you to Sum, you still like being called Sum right? Eh, doesn't matter, I'm here to make your life far more pleasurable. ~"
"R-Raven, no… w-we can't do that. I-I'm with Tai." Summer said with a heavy blush at how forward her old lover was seemingly being out of the blue.
"Oh no Sum, I don't mean like that, at least not yet. I'm here to show and give you something, follow me, I think Yang would love to see you again."
Yang? She was all right? This was something Summer probably should have thought more on before going through the portal, but her motherly senses pushed logic out in turn for the possibility of seeing Yang.
Once Summer stepped through the portal, she did indeed see Yang, but not quite how she expected to see her.
Yang, her proud fighter of a step-daughter, was on her knees with two vibrator controllers attached to her bare thighs that had wires leading into her dripping slit with her arms tied behind her back and her tongue hanging out.
There were two active vibrators in her pussy, but Yang just looked to her step mother with the same lustful smile she had been wearing since her mother first turned her into a good little girl.
As if that wasn't enough of a show for Summer, Raven walked up to Yang and grabbed the back of her head and brought Yang's mouth to her mother's delicious pussy.
"Raven, I… I don't know what to say"
Raven looked to Summer and smiled before pulling away from Yang to walk towards her. Raven looked down at Summer in silence for a few seconds before quickly bringing one hand under Summer's skirt to grab her soaked crotch.
"Oh, don't bother saying anything Sum, the wetness down there says enough."
Summer looked away from Raven blushing madly.
"Don't worry, I understand what you want, even Kali gets it."
"K-Kali!? You've spoken with her? Wait. What do you mean she gets it?!"
"She realized how beautiful her own kitten was and turned her life into one of pure pleasure, just like I did with my little dragon here, and just like you want to with Ruby. Am I right?"
"I... I…
.
.
.
...how did you two do it?"
"There's the Sum I remember from Beacon, always up for anything hot. Well Sum, Kali did it the way all her smutty books loved to, she just kept her little kitty cumming and cumming. She also had her kitty eat her out and swallow everything just as she would give her the best orgasms.
But I did it a little differently, I saw Yang as a disappointment that didn't just deserve to cum, instead, she needed to be punished into submission. By that I mean I kept edging her for days without release, until she was begging for it. Even then though, I made her earn it, but I'm guessing you couldn't see yourself doing either of these things to little Ruby am I right?"
"Well… they all seem a little too much for my little seedling."
"That's what I thought, I happen to have an opportunity for you. Have you ever heard of hypnotism? What am I saying, you were the kinkiest out of all of us back in the day, here, this amulet is a gift from someone very interested in unlocking the power of hypnotism. All she asks is that you record your encounter with this camera, all of it Sum and here's a short guide on how to use it from the witch herself."
"… Wow, thanks." Summer said almost dumbfounded at the opportunity she was being given.
Summer looked down at the amulet in her hands, a devious smile crept onto her face, already beginning to imagine just how good of a girl her little seedling was about to become.
"Hehe, I'll stop by in a couple days to pick up the camera, be sure to enjoy yourself, I know just how unsatisfying being Tai's little housewife can be, him and those damn puns, I was sure to work that out of you, right little dragon?"
"Yes mommy and I couldn't be happi-"
"Cum" Raven ordered plainly
Yang immediately squirted herself onto the floor just as her mother commanded
"Ooooohhhhmmmm, th-thank y-"
"Cum" Raven cut her off, forcing her daughter to cum immediately yet again.
Once Yang's face returned to its fucked stupid look, Raven forced her daughter's open mouth against her pussy again.
Yang didn't need to be ordered after that and immediately began eating her beloved mother out.
"I'd ask if you'd like to join Sum, but I can tell your eager to get back to your...he-he, 'little seedling' oh, and here take one of Yang's gauntlets if you need it to calm Tai down" Raven said as she tossed Summer one of Yang's gauntlets.
Raven opened a portal directly to Zwei, who was sleeping on the couch and didn't even awake at the sound of space being torn open above him. Summer nodded back to Raven, the smirk still on her face, and stepped through the portal. She quickly ran up to her and Tai's room and began to read the little guide book for the amulet, she was determined to keep her little seedling safe at home… with a hint of more obedience while she was at it.
The next day...
That's it, everything's ready, she had read the book carefully three times, the camera was set up, and it was just her and Ruby home and her little seedling had yet to get in touch with her friends, so no one was going to steal her away from her mother.
Summer had told Tai that Yang was safely with Raven, he was at first in disbelief that Raven would save her, but when Summer presented him with one of Yang's gauntlets, he felt greatly relieved. He realized that after their divorce, Raven might not want to come to him directly anymore and he trusted Summer more than enough to believe her now.
After Summer told him of Yang wanting to stay with Raven to, as she put it, 'make up for missed birthdays' he quickly brought up that he was going to handle a mission for a local town. He wasn't planning handling it before, because he was trying to find leads on where Yang was, but now that's resolved. He was sad to say that the mission was going to keep him away for a week, but Summer insisted that it was more than all right, this way they could spend some quality mother and daughter time together.
Now everything was ready, she was in her and Tai's bedroom and hadn't been this aroused since her Beacon days and she knew things were about to get a lot hotter.
"Ruby! Come here would you!" Summer called out
She heard the footsteps down the hall and not a moment later and red blur entered the room and Ruby appeared before her in her pajamas.
"What's up mom?" Ruby said in her usual cheery voice
"Oh well I thought you might be up for helping test out a new tool I've gotten"
"Oooooh, what's it do?"
"I've been told it has the power to hypnotize people." Summer said plainly
"Oh…
… HAHAHAHA! Oh-oh mom! I can't believe you fell for one of those online gag items! Hahah! You're so silly mom, those things never work." Ruby said wiping a tear of laughter from her eye
"Oh, well shoot, I didn't pay a lot for it, but maybe you could humor me though and help me test it out?" Summer asked seeming a little shy, though the dom in her made note of how disrespectful Ruby just was to her.
"Ha-ha, sure mom why not."
Summer held the amulet in the air right in front of Ruby and told her little seedling to keep her eyes on it. Summer then began to swing the amulet from side to side with the attached string.
Ruby followed it for a good ten seconds with nothing happening, but after those ten seconds, the amulet started to glow and suddenly Ruby couldn't look away from it… she didn't want to and then everything started to fade into a big grey puddle and she felt… not relaxed, that would be too much, just… empty, open and her simply plain facial expression seemed to go along with that.
"Ruby, you are going to focus on everything I say more than anything you've ever focused on before in your life, nod if you understand."
Ruby nodded.
"Your new goal in life is to follow every command I give you, nothing else comes close to my orders. When you are not clear on an order I give you, you are permitted to ask for clarification, but if you understand what I tell you then you will follow through without hesitation. Nod if you understand."
Ruby nodded, with a small bit of drool appearing at the corner of her mouth.
"Following my commands is like eating the best, sweetest cookie you've ever had. It's like tasting the freshest strawberries, like cleaning and sharpening Crescent Rose until the blade shines like a star. Following my commands is like all of those things, but better, it's not just something you want to do, it's something you crave to do, something you need to do. Nod if you understand."
Ruby nodded yet again, but now a simple smile has crept onto her face from just following her mother's orders to nod.
"This state you are in now, this wanting, craving, needing state. This state of complete subjugation to me, open to any and all commands I give you, this state will be called "Mommy's Space" outside of mommy's space you will be the same strong girl I've raised you to be with a mind of your own unless I have given you specific commands while in mommy's space.
The first of such commands will be that you will never attempt to leave home without asking for mommy's permission and if I say no, you will instantly realize how right I am for saying that and the matter will be settled. When I bring you out of Mommy's space you will ask me if you have such a request, but you will never consciously remember what happened in Mommy's space, the commands will always be with you and enforced subconsciously.
The trigger for entering and leaving Mommy's space can only work when said by me. I'm going to say the trigger, but this is the one time it will not work on you since I'm only saying it to let you know what it is, the trigger phrase is "Mommy's little seedling" nod if you understand."
Ruby nodded, now drooling, but still managing to look adorably delicious.
"Good girl, now let mommy get that for you."
Summer brought her face close to Ruby's. She then stuck her tongue out and licked up Ruby's chin, collecting the line of drool. When her tongue brushed against Ruby's lips, she was happy to see no reaction, not even Ruby opening her mouth to possibly reciprocate with a kiss, she had not been ordered to and so she didn't.
"Very good, aren't you just Mommy's little seedling."
Ruby eyes grew brighter and she quickly shook her head, clearly coming out of her trance.
"Huh? What?"
"Oh come on Ruby, I haven't even started yet, you don't need to be so mean."
"What are you talking about mom?" Ruby asked just before she saw the amulet in her mother's hand raised in front of her.
"Oh, right you got tricked into buying some hypno gimmick. Mom, I love you, but buying things online isn't and old...er persons thing, you know?" Ruby said with a slight amount of icy sass in her voice, though Summer had no idea who would have taught her daughter to be so cold.
"Oh, of course Ruby, how right you are." Summer said trying to conceal the slight anger in her voice at the mention of her age.
"Anyway, you said you wanted to ask me something before this?" Summer asked checking to see if her command had been put in place properly.
"Huh? Oh yeah, well… I wanted to know if it was okay for me to run away to the continent of Mistral with three of my emotionally scarred friends."
"…. Are they strong?"
"Two of them are... pretty okay."
"And the other?"
"... He's nice"
"..."
"No."
"Okay!" Ruby said in a happy voice that even surprised herself. She didn't know why, but she felt her mother was absolutely right and she should just stay home.
"Good, aren't you just Mommy's little seedling."
Just as she said the trigger, Ruby's face relaxed back to its simple smile with her eyes losing some color, but everything else remaining the same.
"Good, now that that's taken care of, let's get down to the fun bits. Ruby, as cute as you look in your pajamas, stand up and strip."
Just as she finished giving the order, Ruby stood in front of Summer and began to lift her shirt over her head, exposing her simple black bra.
Summer felt like she was getting a private show, something she loved when she was younger, having a beautiful girl stripping right in front of her, solely for her own pleasure.
If it's not clear yet, Summer was and is a sexual deviant, it's no wonder back at beacon she was able to satisfy her many girlfriends all at the same time, but that's a different story for another time.
Ruby had now tossed her red panties off to the side with that same adorable smile on her face, only now her naked body was on display for her mother and she had no problems with it.
She may not have been as "developed" as her older sister Yang, but Summer still saw a beautiful woman, who was completely obedient to her.
"Very nice Ruby, now…" Summer said spreading her legs on the edge of the bed to reveal that under her skirt, she was wearing no panties.
"Take care of mommy with your tongue. ~"
Ruby dropped to her knees before Summer and leaned her body forward to bring her head to her mother's slit.
Ruby dove into Summer's cunt tongue first, she had seen her fair share of porn and her mind tried to copy the techniques she'd seen to get her mother moaning just like the girls in the videos she watched.
"Oooohhhh! Ruby! Your little mouth sure feels like it knows what it's doing, but practice makes perfect so don't worry if you don't feel like you're doing it right, you'll have plenty of chances to do this again. ~" Summer said as she brought one to the top of Ruby's head, keeping her pressed against her slit, not that Ruby was planning on pulling away.
Summer also brought one hand under her shirt to grope her own breasts, she was planning on milking this moment for every ounce of pleasure she could.
Ruby's tongue moved like a snake inside Summer's slit, she was trying her best to please her mommy. Occasionally, she would bring her tongue out only to wrap it around Summer's clit like a soft, moist, and warm coil, which would always make summer throw her head back in pleasure.
Ruby was now also taking the time to lap her tongue at Summer's outer folds to ensure she pleasured every part of her mother's pussy as she could.
"Oh baby! R-Ruby, I want you to f-focus on what your tasting right now. This is your new favorite meal, cookies, strawberries, they all are below this. And as your loving mother, I want to make sure you know you can really dig in and not hold back when devouring your favorite food, hum if you understand."
"Hhhhmmmmm"
Ruby hummed and the vibrations from her humming sent Summer to an even higher level of pleasure and as per her mother's commands, Ruby wrapped her arms around her mother's thighs to get a better grip and to pull her mother's lower half against her face even more, allowing her tongue to penetrate even deeper.
"Oh dust Ruby! Look up at mommy while you eat her out!"
Ruby looked up to Summer with hearts in her eyes as she par-took her new favorite meal.
That was it, those eyes, that amazing tongue, the realization that all her lewdest ideas could finally be real, sent her over the edge and she squirted right into Ruby's hungry mouth.
"Oooohhohhhoohhh...mmmhhh, th-that was very n-nice Ruby" Summer said looking down and running her fingers through Ruby's hair.
Ruby however, was still eating her out, she had yet to be told to stop and so she continued lapping her tongue at her mother's slit, being sure to swallow every delicious drop of her mother's cum.
"That's a very good girl Ruby. New command time, every day it's just the two of us at home, you will wake me up in the morning by eating me out and after that you will cook breakfast and when I come sit down to eat it you will go under the table and eat me out again. Nod if… no, say yes mommy if you understand."
Ruby pulled her mouth away from her mother's to simply say, "Yes mommy" before quickly diving back in tongue first.
"Good gir- oooooohhhhhh! Mmmmmpppphh! Oh yeah, that's it." Summer said just as she was pushed to a second orgasm.
Summer had Ruby eat her out to a third orgasm before commanding her to pick up her cloths and take a shower. Summer had commanded that Ruby would awake back to her normal self mid shower and that she would remember helping her mother realize that the amulet was just a cheap gimmick and that she then decided to clean herself up.
A couple pleasurable days later and Raven stopped by to pick up the amulet and the camera.
"So, how did it go?" Raven asked with a smirk as she could already tell from Summer's equally satisfied grin
"Our new morning routines are far more pleasurable, I don't even have to cook for breakfast anymore, I just have to spread my legs and she dives right in to her favorite meal."
"Welcome to the club, I just need to get this back to the hot witch herself and we might even have her join us again."
"Oooh, can't wait. Oh, and don't be a stranger Raven, I'm sure Ruby would love to play with Yang."
"Of course, Summer, I'll be back before you know it." with that, Raven vanished into her portal and a second later the portal itself did the same.
*Professional scene transition sounds*
"Oh, hello Raven, I was beginning to worry you wouldn't come back."
"And miss out on all the fun you're going to get started, no way, Salem." Raven finished with a gentle smack to the dark queen's rear.
"Hehe, careful now Raven, you wouldn't want me to use this amulet on you now?" Salem said in her trademark demonic yet sultry voice.
"What do you need it for any way, don't you already have someone that calls you mommy?"
"Yes, but she has recently overstepped her boundaries, I'm sure you've heard of Beacon falling?"
"Yeah, but I was only there for Yang, didn't really care for Ozpin's life work."
"While that is one of the many reasons I find so incredibly alluring Raven, I want you to know that was not of my doing. It was all my sub's doing, Cinder. I had sent her out to find other beautiful girls to break since I had not known you all had gotten back into the swing of things and she saw it as an opportunity to impress me.
While I do admit it was sweet of her, it was not what I commanded of her. So, I had Kev- I mean my dragon grimm go and sweep her up and bring her back to me, he ended up bringing another back as well.
Pyrrha Nikos."
Author's Extra Notes: The next chapter for Mothers and Daughters will go over what happened when Kali and Blake visited Raven and Yang… also plz do that comment thing.