A/N: So sorry I haven't been updating. I've been busy with volleyball and keeping my grades up so I can play besides the fact that I'm loosing inspiration because of the lack of reviews. Anyways. Thank you for all the favorites, follows, and reviews I have gotten from you guys! They mean a lot. Alright, to the people that reviewed and asked questions, sorry I just absentmindedly posted the last chapter and didn't answer any of the questions. So here are your answers!

hellodarkness88: I'm not sure what you mean when you asked if it was Tris.

werewolfgirl2002: the story starts off a few weeks before Tobias's choosing ceremony. Tris and Caleb are still the same ages, just in different families. I think this chapter will clear it up just a little bit.

Sorry for the long A/N. here's the chapter.

Tobias POV[during school( when he bumps Tris, yes it's him that bumps Tris)]

I am walking to my first class, deep in thought, when I bump into something. More like someone. I look down and see that I walked into another Abnegation girl. She may be 2 years younger than me. I can see she's in a lot of pain no matter how much she tries to hide it. I offer her my hand, but she doesn't take it. Instead she turns around and picks up her books before standing up. I look at her face and that's when I realize, she's Marcus Eaton's daughter. I look at her face for a minute and I wonder, are the accusations against Marcus true? Could he really be abusing this girl that's standing right in front of me?

"Sorry." I say to her. I wish I knew her name. Nothing, in anything, states her name.

"I'm fine." She tells me flatly. Not every Abnegations choice of words. I stand there for a moment, looking at her, seeing she isn't fine and seeing she is doing a great deal to hide that fact. The girl looks at me then proceeds down the hallway, to which I think she is going to her next class. I stand there for a moment longer than make way to my class as well.

I wait outside the school for my younger brother. We usually walk home from school together. I see him walking out of the building with an Abnegation girl, not the same one I bumped into this morning, a different girl. I believe her name is Susan. Her brother is trailing behind them not staying to close to hear their conversation, but standing close enough that he won't lose them in the crowd. Susan's older brothers name is Robert. He's two years younger than me as well as my brother, Caleb. Susan is three years younger than me and one year younger than Caleb. I waited for them to catch up and started walking next to Robert. Robert and I never really talked, we just walked next to each other while our siblings were walking ahead. We never really called ourselves friends, the four of us. It's considered selfish if you have friends in Abnegation. We get close to the Factionless sector and see no one so we just keep on walking. When we do see anyone, we always have apple slices or some sort of food to give them. Our parents make sure we do every morning. Out of the four of us I'm the only one that's 16. I'm the only one choosing this year. The test that determines where we belong is in a week. Then I can either decide to stay here where I'm suffocated or I could leave and go to another faction. I'm brought out of my thoughts when I see the all too familiar Abnegation looking houses nearing. We walk Susan and Robert to their respective homes since theirs is in the way to ours. We at good bye while bowing our heads and turn back to the road and start heading home.

"How was school today Caleb?" I ask my brother.

"It was fine thank you. How was school for you?" Ah. My true Abnegation brother. Well he'd fit well with Erudite considering how smart he is.

"It was fine also. Thank you." That is all the conversation we ever really have. While we're walking up to the house something catches my eye. Well more like someone. The girl I knocked down, Marcus's daughter, is hurrying into their house. Wonder why she's in such a hurry? I guess ok never know considering I'll be choosing soon.

A/N: Alright people/readers/however you want to be addressed, I REALLY NEED INSPIRATION. LIKE REALLY NEED IT. I don't know where else to go with this story. I know where I want it to go, but I'm not sure exactly how to get there. SO PLEASE REVIEW. IF YOU DON'T I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN. Thank you. Sorry for the short chapter.