PinkiePieParty122894: Thanks for the support and I hope that it continues to be entertaining. I appreciate the continued support and reviews.
Aclux: The time will come when the twins are defeated. Unfortunately it won't be until later in the story and their mentality gets even worse and more insane but they will get what's coming to them. Thanks for the review and hope you are liking the story.
Animaman: To be honest I haven't really given the toads much thought as of late but I like the suggestions and I'll have to think about it. The Kyubi will play a big part but probably not in the way a lot of people want. The idea of freeing the Kyubi or the biju in general interest me. I think that if he releases the Kyubi, he will end up releasing all of the biju out of respect to them and set them free. I will say that later on, the Kyubi will no longer be a part of the twins but will still be involved with the twins. Thanks for the review I appreciate the ideas you're giving me it has definitely helped me progress the story.
Natzo: I haven't decided if there will be a retrieval mission or not but when they leave they won't be back in Konoha for a while but if there is a retrieval mission and it goes wrong, it's not because the twins beat Naruto so we'll see. Sorry to disappoint about bringing them back but I hope that you will continue to read the story. I appreciate the review thanks for it.
UnsanMusho: I figured that not having his life cut short would have resulted in Minato perfecting jutsu and I thought that the rasenshuriken would be within his abilities. I appreciate the review.
Gammagyro: No need to apologize you've given me plenty of ideas and I appreciate them. You read my mind with the scythe idea and Sasuke using a sword. I really like the idea of having all three wield a weapon. As for life after ninjas you'll have to wait and see what happens. xSPOILER ALERTx Yakumo will gain two senseis later on that add a lot to her arsenal, cough Kushina cough. Her second sensei will be a surprise. Thanks for the review and ideas they've really helped me out.
raw666: Yeah, Jiraiya will take it pretty hard when he realizes the truth. Thanks for the review.
(T&I Building)
Minato, Itachi, Jiraiya, Kakashi, and five ANBU guards quickly walked through the T&I building. After five minutes of walking the group came to a stop in front of a jail cell. In the cell sat the S ranked missing nin and sannin, Orochimaru. The man had both arms chained to the ground as well as his legs and a metal face mask on him. Minato looked at the man who's betrayal had plagued his predecessor and his sensei since the day the sannin left. He also found it curious that Orochimaru had not said a word according to his ANBU. Regardless, there were questions that needed to be answered. "Open the cell and remove the face mask but keep the chains" ordered Minato that shocked everyone in the room. "Sir?" questioned an ANBU. "Just do it. Now" Minato ordered more firmly than before. Nodding, the ANBU opened the cell while the rest took battle stances in case the snake tried anything. After the face mask was removed, Minato walked forward into the cell and was finally able to see Orochimaru clearly. The man's veins were easily visible and his breathing was irregular.
Taking a step back, Minato closed his eyes in thought. Something wasn't right. What could cause a sannin to be in such a shape. The only things that came to mind were poison or- Minato's eyes widened. "Remove his shirt" Minato said quickly and the ANBU fulfilled his request just as fast. When the shirt was removed, the Hokage walked behind Orochimaru and his eyes grew even larger. There on one of Konoha's greatest traitors was an array of glowing seals on the sannin's back. "Sensei, come here!" he shouted and Jiraiya quickly made his way to his student. Upon reaching Minato and seeing what was on Orochimaru's back, his jaw dropped slightly. "What is it Minato?" he asked and the entire group listened close not knowing what was happening. Minato shook his head. "On Orochimaru's back are three seals. A loyalty seal, a control seal, and a decay seal. It seems that someone was controlling Orochimaru and what we're seeing now is the activation of the decay seal" he revealed blowing everyone's minds. A common question struck through the minds of everyone in the room, "Who could possibly seal someone as strong as Orochimaru?".
Jiraiya, the first to exit his trance, cleared his throat and asked "How long have these seals been on him?". Minato looked closely at the seals before gasping. "Sensei, they're at least 15 years old" he said making everyone gasp in shock. "But that means that Orochimaru never- Kami, my friend needed me and I wrote him off as another traitor to Konoha" he said, his eyes starting to water. "How long will it take to remove the seals?" he asked Minato with a hopeful tone. Minato took one last look before focusing a large amount of chakra into his hand and pressing it down on Orochimaru's back. The reaction was instantaneous. Orochimaru began to scream at a volume that left everyone's ears ringing. The man then began to cry begging for it to end, and then he went limp. Stepping back, Minato stumbled but was caught by his teacher who he smiled at gratefully. Orochimaru who was on the ground started to rise until his chains pulled him back down. Standing on his own two feet, Minato walked over to face Orochimaru who looked confused.
"Minato?" the snake sannin asked which gained a quick nod. "Where am I?" he asked which caused Minato to frown. "You're in T&I. Orochimaru, I need you to tell me the last thing that you remember" he asked. Orochimaru concentrated in thought before opening his eyes. "I was on my way to Ame to investigate a new group rising up as a last request from Sarutobi sensei as hokage. Where is Sarutobi sensei anyway?" he asked which gained a guilty look from Minato and a pained one from Jiraiya. "Jiraiya I have to get back to work so you fill Orochimaru in on everything, ANBU stay with Jiraiya, and Itachi you may return to your team" he said which gained a nod and bow from the Uchiha before vanishing in a flock of black feathers. "Kakashi, go ahead and head over to train your team" he said which gained a nod from the masked jounin before vanishing in a poof of smoke. Minato took one last glance behind him at the returning sannin. It was going to take a lot to get the man back in the village, but one of his duties as hokage involved doing everything he could for the innocent people of Konoha and if the seals on his body were any indication, the snake sannin had been innocent of every accusation that made him into one of Konoha's most notorious criminals.
(Chunin Exams Infirmary)
Yakumo sat by her boyfriend's hospital bed watching as he slept. It had been three days since they had arrived which meant that all teams had to arrive at the tower by tomorrow. All three days, Naruto had been unconscious. When she and Sasuke were told of the injuries he was suffering from, they were understandably shocked. Two broken ribs, a broken arm, a fractured leg, two sprained ankles, a concussion, and chakra exhaustion. With all of these injuries, he was able to take on a sannin and save them. She smiled but quickly teared up again. This was the second time that he had to suffer serious injury just to protect her. She knew that she was a more than capable kunoitchi, probably the most skilled genin kunoitchi in Konoha, but seeing the boy she had began to love lying here made her feel so useless. So pathetic. It was a feeling that she hadn't felt since before joining Team 11. She was always told that there was no way that she could become a ninja because of her frail body and Ido. Even after the Fourth Hokage sealed Ido, no one believed in her, not even her parents. She never had anyone to believe in her until she met Naruto. The speech that he gave her so long ago at Yakiniku Q rang in her head as it always did in moments of doubt. Because of him, she no longer felt like a weak little girl but a strong and capable kunoitchi. But now, looking at Naruto her heart hurt so bad. What she wouldn't do to have the situation opposite so that it was her in the bed instead of him, but she quickly brushed those thoughts away. Naruto wouldn't want her thinking like that.
While Yakumo continued to watch over Naruto, Sasuke examined the scene with a smile. It was actually quite touching that Yakumo cared so much that she refused to leave his side. Her eye was still bruised from their fight with Orochimaru while he was letting his jaw heal. Luckily, they had been able to just pop his elbow back into place and heal most of the damage done to his jaw with medical jutsu. The same had been done to speed up the healing process of Yakumo's eye. Naruto however was a different story. Tsunade herself was brought in to mend his injured bones and even then they still needed a lot of rest. Thinking back to when Naruto appeared in the forest to face Orochimaru, neither he nor Yakumo really gave his apparent injuries much attention until after the battle. It just seemed normal now. Shaking his head, Sasuke gave his teammates and closest friends one last glance before leaving the area for the cafeteria. Unfortunately the Uchiha had left just before the teammate that had clouded his thoughts awoke.
(Naruto and Yakumo)
Naruto's eyes slowly opened as he moved his head as much as he could. When he finally started to regain consciousness, he noticed a figure laying face down and weeping into his shoulder. Looking at the figure he smiled recognizing that beautiful brown hair anywhere. Raising his left arm with a bit of pain and a lot of soreness, he placed a hand on her head which caused her to jump up in reaction. At first Yakumo was too shocked to say anything, but that quickly turned to joy as she smiled widely with tears still flowing freely. Naruto smiled. "I take it you missed me?" he said with a smirk which gained a small laugh from Yakumo. "Idiot" she muttered with a smile that quickly turned into a frown. "How are you feeling?" she asked in a serious tone. Naruto rolled his neck giving it a few pops. "Alright I guess. My arm is a little sore but I won't really know how much I've recovered until I get up and test it" he said preparing to get out of bed but was quickly stopped by a hand on his shoulder. Looking up, he saw the face of death materialized in his girlfriend. "Naruto, you are not leaving this bed until tomorrow at the earliest. Do you understand?" she asked but Naruto knew it wasn't really a question. Nodding quickly, Naruto watched as Yakumo's death face went back to an energetic smile. "Good. Now do you need me to get you anything?" she asked cheerfully. Naruto looked down and nodded embarrassingly. "Could you get me a new blanket and a new pair of underwear?" he asked which caused Yakumo to look down and see a large wet spot in the middle of the bed. Nodding she rushed out of the room to get a nurse.
When she rushed out, Naruto chuckled. Yakumo's personality never got old. Nice and polite, always willing to help those in need, until you ensue her wrath. As the boy's smile faded, he looked to the left noticing the window. It was dark out and the moon was partially shining so getting out of his bed, Naruto opened the window to allow the light to shine in the room. Since it wasn't a full moon, his injuries wouldn't heal as fast but they would heal faster nonetheless. Even with the help he received, he would still end up fighting tomorrow injured. The thought didn't bother him that much seeing as he was probably the strongest genin in the entire exams without his sword so he slowly got back into bed and waited for Yakumo to return.
(Preliminary Arena)
Naruto, Yakumo, and Sasuke stood with their sensei on the top level of the preliminary arena. The Hokage and a jounin named Hayate Gekko had just finished explaining the rules and reasoning for the preliminary round of the chunin exams. Now, everyone just watched the electronic board anxiously waiting for their names to appear. Only a select few didn't show emotions of nervousness or excitement. The genin who remained calm were Naruto, the blonde kunoitchi from Kumo, the black haired kunoitchi from Iwa who just continued to stare at Naruto, and the red haired genin from Suna.
When the scoreboard finally stopped on two names, a cold feeling came over the entire arena. On the scoreboard, the names Hinata Hyuga and Yakumo Kurama shined. Upon seeing the match up, Yakumo smiled a dark smile that created some worry among her team while Kurenai Yuhi, the jounin sensei of Hinata gained a sad look on her face. It was a well known fact among the jounin and up about the situation between Kurenai and Yakumo. It started when Kurenai became the girl's personal teacher. Yakumo was a prodigy in every definition of the word when it came to genjutsu but unfortunately a problem arose with Yakumo. A malicious personality developed in the form of a demon possessing the girl. While the Hokage was able to seal away the demon, Kurenai still refused to teach Yakumo any longer. It broke Yakumo's heart and caused a strong hatred for the woman to develop in the prodigy. Now Kurenai had a new star pupil in the form of Hinata Hyuga and it infuriated Yakumo to no end. Now was the girl's chance for retribution by showing just how pathetic the Hyuga was compared to her.
Before Yakumo could jump down into the arena, Naruto grabbed her arm. "Don't lose yourself to hatred and don't blame the innocent for your pain. Your anger is towards Kurenai, not Hinata" Naruto said with a sympathetic look on his face. At first, Yakumo was angered at Naruto's words. He was her boyfriend, he was supposed to always be on her side! But immediately after, she realized that he was on her side. He didn't want her to lose herself. Nodding at his words, Yakumo made a silent promise to herself. She would end it quickly. There was no need to completely destroy her fellow genin.
After some words with Kurenai, Hinata made her way down to the arena with a nervous but determined look. After the two genin had taken their spots, Hayate announced for the fight to begin. Hinata immediately activated her byakugan and stepped into her gentle fist pose. Yakumo looked at the Hyuga girl with a understanding look. This was emotional for her. At first she wanted to smash the Hyuga bitch's skull in front of Hinata's sensei and her former sensei but now she just looked at the girl in a battle stance ready to give it her all. It showed on the Hyuga's face that she would go above and beyond to make her sensei proud. Yakumo didn't feel the exact same way, but she would make her sensei proud and show her former teacher what she missed out on. So without making a single hand sign, the genjutsu prodigy activated a special genjutsu just for Hinata, ending the fight as quickly as it began. After the genjutsu was placed, Yakumo started to slowly walk towards Hinata.
Hinata was confused as to why Yakumo was walking towards her while she was still in her gentle fist stance. Kurenai had filled her in on her opponent about her talent in genjutsu but as long as Hinata had her byakugan activated, her opponent's specialty was nullified. Yakumo was also apparently very capable in taijutsu but Hinata had her gentle fist stance so this was a match that should end quickly in Hinata's favor. Still trying to figure out what Yakumo's game was, she noticed as the scenery began to change. She was no longer in the arena, now she was at home facing her father and the Hyuga elders. "Hinata, it has been decided that you will not become the head of the Hyuga clan. When the time comes, I will pass my title on to your sister Hanabi. This means that you will now have the caged bird seal placed upon you" her father said without emotion. Hinata began to cry. After everything that she had done to gain favor with her father, he still seemed to hold no love for her. She did not resist as two main branch members took her away to be branded as a slave.
When Hinata was finally able to wake up from the genjutsu, Yakumo was standing right in front of her. "Forfeit Hinata" she said with an almost pleading tone. Hinata shook her head no and prepared to attack her with her gentle fist and win the match. Just as the Hyuga was about to launch her hand at Yakumo's shoulder, a sharp and unbearable pain shot through her coming from her head. Just as it ended, another pulse of pain coursed through her body bringing her to her knees as she screamed and tears streamed down her face. As soon as the second one stopped, a third pulse began. "Please no, I beg of you please stop. Kami please stop it" she begged holding onto Yakumo's hand. Yakumo looked at the girl shaking in pain. "Forfeit Hinata. Forfeit and the pain ends" she said which gained a surprising shake of the head from Hinata. Slowly Hinata stood up, barely able to stay standing because of the pain. As the pulses continued, Hinata cried harder but held her ground and slowly prepared to fight back. It was hard to watch and had her sensei shouting at her to give up. Yakumo looked at the girl in front of her in a new light. At the beginning of the exams, she wrote Hinata off as just a weak pathetic excuse for a kunoitchi, but here she was standing up to fight despite the immense pain that she was in. "Hinata, you've proven yourself. You are a strong kunoitchi and a worthy opponent. Now, all you have to do is forfeit and I will end the jutsu" she said with a soft smile. Hinata took a short moment to consider it and reluctantly forfeited. As soon as she said the words, Hinata felt a soothing sensation run throughout her body completely eradicating the past pain. Looking at Yakumo who now had her hand out to shake, she slowly took it and both girls smiled at one another before separating and returning to their teams.
When Hinata returned to her team, Kurenai quickly embraced the girl. "Hinata are you okay?" she asked concerned. Hinata nodded with a smile. "Yeah everything's okay" she said looking at her former opponent who was now being congratulated on her win.
While Hinata found comfort and peace in her defeat, the other genin and their senseis became worried. From their point of view, Yakumo did practically nothing. The genjutsu prodigy didn't seem to even be trying yet she brought her opponent to her knees in pain in a matter of seconds. It was unsettling and made them nervous about how strong Yakumo's team actually was. Throughout the short match, Sasuke,Naruto, and Itachi seemed entirely sure of the outcome of the match even before it started. The thoughts of everyone in the arena were interrupted when the scoreboard landed on the next two names. As everyone looked up, the names were surprising but the match up was interesting.
Sasuke Uchiha vs. Neji Hyuuga
Back to back Team 11 battles and both would have Hyugas as their opponents. A very strange coincidence that seemed to even surprise the ever stoic Itachi Uchiha. Well by surprised, a raise of an eyebrow but it still counted. Both the Uchiha and Hyuga quickly made their way to their places eager to start their fight. While the two prepared on the battlefield, the jounin sensei for Team 9 Might Guy made his way over to Team 11. His students Lee and Tenten followed behind.
"Itachi, I see that you've trained your team well to make it this far. I'm sure that our students will have a very youthful battle!" Guy shouted with a bright smile and a thumbs up. Behind him Tenten face palmed while Lee stared in complete admiration. Itachi slowly turned to look at Guy face to face. "Well I doubt that you will consider it youthful when you have to scrape your student off the ground" Itachi said calmly which caused Guy to frown and his students to take offense. "I don't know what you're talking about but Neji's got this in the bag. He is a prodigy after all" said Tenten proudly which gained a loud laugh from Naruto and a smirk from his girlfriend and sensei. "Look, you can believe what you want but this match is already over wait and see" Naruto said with a smirk. Lee was starting to become angry. While he and Neji may not be friends, they were teammates and rivals. "No you will see. Neji will win this battle as his flames of youth burn strong" the spandex clad genin shouted with fire in his eyes which gained another face palm from Tenten and tears of pride from his sensei. "I guess we'll just have to see. Now how about we focus, the match is about to begin" spoke Itachi directing their attention back to the arena.
As Sasuke and Neji took their places, both kept their eyes locked on one another in concentration. The two were barely able to hear when Hayate said to begin but both still entered their stances at hearing the words. Neji entered his Gentle Fist stance while Sasuke entered the Uchiha Interceptor stance. This surprised many of the onlookers as it was well known to avoid fighting a Hyuga in a taijutsu match. Despite this common knowledge, Sasuke had made his choice. Yakumo had beaten her Hyuga by defeating the "All seeing eye" with a genjutsu so he would defeat the clan of taijutsu masters with his "inferior" style of taijutsu. Activating his sharingan, Sasuke moved. Rushing towards the Hyuga, he raised his fist for a direct strike which prompted Neji to raise his hands in preparation to strike at the Uchiha's chest. Right before he reached the Hyuga, he jumped and flipped in mid air while his opponent went for a strike. Coming down from his flip, Sasuke was able to land a foot on Neji's back and push off. First contact belonged to the Uchiha.
Neji turned and looked at his opponent standing across from him. The Uchiha had made him miss with his gentle fist and landed a kick to his back. Going into this, he didn't think that the Uchiha warranted the use of his byakugan but the kick proved otherwise. While it didn't really cause any pain or damage, it sent a message. "Give me your best or get beat". Activating his byakugan, Neji prepared his Gentle Fist stance again. "You managed to land a hit. Enjoy it Uchiha because it will be the last" he said which caused Sasuke to smile and look up at his brother/sensei. When the man nodded Sasuke closed his eyes and began to focus his chakra. Using his byakugan, it seemed that Sasuke was enlarging his chakra pathways and pushing it towards his arms and legs. This meant that a well placed strike to his chest would extremely wound maybe even kill the Uchiha. It also meant that Sasuke's kicks and punches were going to be stronger. Just as Neji was about to charge, something he didn't quite understand happened. All of the excess chakra that was forced into his arms and legs had now been concentrated completely into his hands.
Sasuke smiled at his opponent's confusion. While training with his brother, he had developed a new taijutsu that was a gamble to say the least. It involved forcing his body to produce much more chakra than normal and sending all of the chakra he didn't need to live into his arms and legs. When he did this, most of the chakra that resided in his chest went to his arms and legs which meant that hitting him in the chest would be the equivalent of an elite jounin hitting a civilian as hard as he or she could in the gut. When the chakra was focused in his arms and legs, he concentrated it into his hands and feet to make his punches far more dangerous. While training with Itachi, Sasuke found out that his elements were lightning and fire. It was important because when the chakra formed in his hands, it heated them up to around two hundred degrees Fahrenheit. He was still working on turning the chakra into lightning form but for now all he could do was use fire. This form of taijutsu also required a lot of chakra control in order to keep the flames from burning his body or burning through his clothes. In the end, all he did was heat up his hands with chakra so that each attack burnt the opponent.
As the two rushed at each other, the taijutsu match began. Sasuke started to attack but was hard pressed to land a hit on the Hyuga who kept dodging while Sasuke did the same against Neji's Gentle Fist strikes. Finally seeing Neji's palm coming towards him, Sasuke clenched his fist and met the prodigy's hand. The result was instantaneous. Sasuke was pushed back and felt a slight burn from the fire chakra due to Neji's chakra disruption while Neji was pushed back as well but gasped holding his hand in pain. Seeing the Hyuga prodigy looking at him in anger, Sasuke stood straight and smirked. "You know it's funny. Yakumo beat your cousin's all seeing Byakugan with a genjutsu and you are about to get your ass kicked in the Hyuga's specialty. I would ask you to quit and save yourself the pain of getting burnt even worse but something tells me that you're gonna be a tough nut to crack so let's continue shall we?" Sasuke asked with a smile which gained chuckles from his teammates. Neji grit his teeth in anger and rushed back at the Uchiha. All he needed was one strike to the chest, that's it. One strike and it's over. With a new sense of determination, the Hyuga launched his Gentle Fist again which caused Sasuke to start concentrating again. Continuing to dodge the strikes, Sasuke was launching his attacks as well. Landing one on Neji's right shoulder and another on his left arm, the Hyuga's movements were becoming more stiff and slower due to the pain but the Hyuga kept on. Eventually Neji was able to land an attack on Sasuke's right arm disrupting the chakra that was keeping him safe from burning. The result was that Sasuke's arm became very temporarily unavailable. With this new revelation, the Hyuga constructed a new plan. He didn't have to land a hit on the Uchiha's chest, all he had to do was land a hit period. One gentle fist hit would cause the fiery chakra to backfire on Sasuke and burn him instead. With his new strategy, the Hyuga charged forward.
Sasuke had put distance between him and Neji. His arm was in pain from the burn he received in return for not being able to control his chakra. The form he was using was an unfinished product and obviously not his actual form of taijutsu but he felt that this new style was his best chance to beat the Hyuga in taijutsu. His Interceptor style was solid, but the Hyuga were taijutsu specialist for a reason and Neji was their prodigy. He could always use ninjutsu and end the battle but this wasn't about just winning. The point of him not using ninjutsu and Yakumo using genjutsu on a Hyuga was to show that even in the worst situations and match ups they could prevail. Looking at Neji, he could tell that the prodigy had discovered the glaring weakness. As Neji prepared to attack, Sasuke looked up at his team. Seeing them look at him with such confidence gave him a new form of strength. So, focusing his chakra Sasuke clenched his fist and launched towards his opponent. As the Uchiha charged with a battle cry, the fiery chakra became visible in the form of blue flames surrounding his hands. When the two met in the center of the arena, Neji launched his gentle fist and Sasuke launched his fist charged with all of the concentrated chakra in his body. When the hand and fist met an explosion of chakra sent the two genin flying backwards. Both lying on the ground, Neji's right arm was covered in burns while Sasuke's right arm was a mangled and bloody mess. The injuries were a result of the extreme burst of chakra in Sasuke's final punch. While Neji suffered serious burns from the flames, his Gentle Fist landed causing the chakra to burst, the impact of which seemed to break Sasuke's arm badly. Just as Hayate was about to declare a double knockout, Sasuke rose off the ground followed slowly by Neji. As the two met in the middle both knew that the damage to their arms needed immediate attention.
Sasuke looked at Neji with a cold look that caused the genin to shudder. "Forfeit now. This entire match I have only used taijutsu. If you continue, I will end you. We both need medical attention and you can't do your Gentle Fist properly without an arm. I on the other hand am still good for at least two more jutsu. Forfeit Neji" Sasuke said seriously. Neji clenched his left fist. The Uchiha was right, he couldn't continue like this. Anger and humiliation filled the young Hyuga's mind but the pain in his arm overcame that. Turning to Hayate, Neji said "Proctor I forfeit" and it was over. When Hayate announced Sasuke as the winner, the medical team came in and took both Sasuke and Neji to the infirmary.
Team 11 was proud of their teammate for fighting how he wanted even though it wasn't the most logical way. Both Naruto and Yakumo simply nodded when Itachi told them that he was going to check on Sasuke and turned their attention to the scoreboard. Two for two going to the final round for Team 11. Only one member remained. While Naruto and Yakumo were focused on the scoreboard, everyone else was focused on them. Team 9 was shell shocked that their strongest member was toyed with just like his cousin. Tenten was confused as to why Neji didn't use his Rotation but figured that using it would make it easier for Sasuke to hit him while Lee was astounded at Sasuke's youthfulness. The other jounin and genin's feeling of uneasiness towards Team 11 grew as it was apparent that the team was dedicated to not showing anything close to their true skill but was still able to play with their opponents in such fashion. Only one member of Team 11 remained and everyone was anxious to see exactly what he could do.
Author's Note: I am so grateful for all of the support that this story has received and I want to thank all of you who have supported it. I hope that I've continued to keep it entertaining. I know that this may have been disappointing in terms of combat depth and all but I'm really excited about the finals but don't want to rush it. Anyway, Orochimaru is a good guy in this and I'll go into it more as chapters go on. Anyway make sure to review. I've gotten a lot of really good ideas from reviews that have helped me keep this story going so REVIEW! Anyway, hope you've enjoyed it. Still more to come!