Reviews
SPARTAN-626: Oh the World of Kuroinu will be altered from the top to down alright! As for the Monsters, they better repent and turn back to their old ways, cause the Lord of the Deep is coming soon.
Guest 1: Yeah, your right to have a bad feeling for Maia. She's gonna be the first...
Guest 2: Sorry bout that, had a rough, busy week so small mistakes like this tend to slip out for me.
VGBlackwing: Uhhhh, MC does have a grudge, well sorta to Maia for taking his stuff and what's left of his family's stuff. That's a little grudge, the big one is for the Alliance and the Legion for causing the war and making people suffer because of it.
Chrone0305: Thanks, man! I appreciate the comments!
Danteinfernus: Now that's just gonna make him similar to Deadpool, thus he'll lose his serious characteristic, that this story has. xD
TheOnlyKing: True but he starts out short anyways but he gradually gets taller a bit. The magical energy from the Dungeon Heart is still altering him. Also why not? Don't like having a tall woman in your relationship? xD
Chapter 2 - Introductions
"Ah fuck...my head…!" Isaiah groaned in pain. He clutched his head "What happened?"
Yeah, really, what the hell just happened?
…. Who the hell was that!?
The boy's mind was racked with confusion and lost. Never! Just never! In his entire life, has he ever been confused!"
Was he going mad? Or maybe going crazy? Same meaning those words actually…
"Hello?"
The boy cries out. Utterly confused, this child is in, really I pity him-
"Hello!? I know you there! I can hear you"
And he continues to speak to nobody. Someone, please call a doctor, I believe he needs-
At this point, Isaiah had enough
"I said hello you son of a bitch! I can bloody hear you!"
"Yes, I know you can hear you!" The speaker responded.
"I'm up here...well you can't see me, but you can hear me loud and clear, also didn't your mother told you that it is rude to interrupt others?"
"Oh how nice; an unknown douche-entity with an aggravating, annoying voice"
"Hey, know just to let you I'm the Narrator, not some unknown douche-entity, secondly my narrating voice is not aggravating! Everyone loves it when they hear my speak"
"Well, they gotta be dead then if they seem to love your voice. Can't imagine any living person living for a second when they hear you sing"
"You take that back this instantly young man!"
"Oh boy, the voice is acting all childishly angry now. I wonder what else is he gonna do next?"
"What did you say-!"
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"Agh!" Isaiah gripped his head in pain.
"Ah, so sorry bout that old friend didn't know you were awake. Yes I know, a thousand years can do such things"
"What the hell was that?" Isaiah questioned
"That would be the Ultimate Evil, little one"
"I'm not little"
"And because of you, you woke him up! How shameful of you! Now do me a favour and grab a shovel"
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"Wait, he is? He looks scrawny and weak"
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"No seriously, he's too weak and scrawny for even anything"
…?
"Can you stop being vague all the time sir?"
"Seriously? Have you actually forgotten about me?" Isaiah spoke up angrily. "And I can hear everything you say, you know that?"
"Why yes, I purposely have forgotten about you. You didn't seem that important up until now, oh and you were meant to hear what we have to say anyways
But, anyway, enough pointless bickering. Back to square one we go. I am The Narrator. Simply reminding you, and the Ultimate Evil; the one who I was speaking to is the giant metal warrior laying motionless behind you"
"Isaiah, nice to meet you both, I guess" Isaiah grumbled. "So…"
"Let me guess. You want to know what's going on around here don't know?"
Isaiah nodded his head.
"*Sigh* Typical protagonist shenanigans...well, in this case, Antagonist...anyways, you might need to have a seat. This is gonna take a while to explain…"
A few hours of talking later…
"So let me get this straight. UE here once ruled the world with an Iron fist, but got destroyed by a bunch of heroes-"
"Goody-Goodies"
"..."Goody-Goodies", then ten-thousand years have passed and now UE has awakened, thanks to me"
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"Correct. All this was thanks to you"
"You're welcome...I guess" Isaiah shrugged. He turned to face the UE.
"So now what?" Isaiah questioned "You've awakened and so has your friend. That means you'll be asserting yourselves then as the big bad of these lands?"
….?
"Of course I didn't tell him! Isn't he mandatory?"
…...
"Repeat that again sir?"
Isaiah raised an eyebrow. "Stop leaving me out and tell me what is it your talking about"
The Narrator sighed "Fine since you asked. The UE has taken you for his uses" For a short-temporary time, The Narrator spoke that last part to himself.
"... And that means… ?"
"How do I put this in words..? Basically you've been given the job of being the "Right hand" to the UE"
"... Are you telling me that I'm hired somewhat?"
"Basically yes! *Sigh* What is it with clueless protagonists these days, it's getting cliche! You're the one who'll be the Lord of whatever regions of land you'll be conquering and taking!"
Isaiah reeled back in disbelief. "W-w-w-what!?" Isaiah stuttered shock. "Please tell me you're not fucking with me?"
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"What the UE said. No, we're not fucking with you, and that sounds wrong, like very wrong, please don't say that ever again"
"Be serious here and answer the question fully"
"I am being serious here. I know it sounds Shocking, to suddenly be called a Ruler, well not exactly a Ruler, more like a Baron to a King. if you know what I mean but I'm sure you'll understand your role on paper. As for your question; no, I'm not kidding with you on that"
"This is a bit of a…staggering proposition your offering to me here"
"Well you weren't our first choice of a candidate; I mean you're pretty short for your age and seem to be the type prone to mental disabilities" The Narrator received a glare from Isaiah. "However you show both promise and potential, hence that is why you have been chosen"
"And why should I help you reestablish yourselves, more importantly, the UE as the dominant power of this land and beyond?"
"Do you not desire power?"
"Of course I do" scoffed Isaiah. "How else would I even take my revenge if I lack the strength for it?"
"You desire revenge then?"
Perhaps we can put that revenge to good use? Thought The Narrator.
Isaiah nodded. "A selfish and an egocentric desire I know. This is solely a wish that I cannot ignore nor kill until it's fulfilled"
Isaiah took a deep breath to calm himself.
"I hate this world of iniquity, and I demand justice. Justice for the crimes that this world has committed, it must answer for what it has done There is no such thing as peace; the peace that the Church and the Alliance preach are but lies whilst the Legion's existence will never bring peace to any. I not but desire revenge, but for one other thing; Peace through Domination"
"I see" The Narrator replied. "Perhaps...yes, I think that'll do quite nicely, a bit of a rundown cliche honestly but I think this will work"
"That is?"
"None of your concern for my thoughts" This prompted another glare from Isaiah.
"Well then, now that we have that out of the way, I believe a tutorial is in order"
"Tutorial?"
"And here I thought you were a well-educated kid. It is essentially instructions on how to do something, and what I'm going to be teaching you is running the Dungeon"
"Huh, doesn't sound that bad at all"
"Yes, now then, I hope you got a pen and paper, I'm not gonna be repeating these important points twice, unless you have access to the almanac of course"
"Have access to what?"
"Nothing, anyways, first you'll need to clear out some rubble and dirt around here. This Dungeon is actually bigger than you think it is"
"And how do you want me to clear out the mess?" Isaiah questioned.
"Simple. Go pick up that shovel and start digging"
"...Do I look like a miner or a worker to you, Narrator?"
"Were you not a farm boy? I'm pretty sure this kind of job won't be such a bother to you, even though it's not the same field of work."
"Tch, lazy chronicler, could you not like, give a hand or something?"
Isaiah shouldn't have really said that, for as soon as he did, a metallic gauntlet came out of nowhere and flicked Isaiah on the forehead.
"Ow! What the-!"
"There's your hand, little child" The Narrator smugly replied. With the floating gauntlet, The Narrator picked up a shovel and deposited it at Isaiah's feet. "And here is your shovel, now than little Underlord, get this Dungeon fully operational!"
With a groan, Isaiah picked up the shovel and went off to a nearby entryway, he began to shovel away the dirt and rubble. Whilst he was digging, both the UE and The Narrator were having a conversation of their own.
…..
"No, we aren't gonna be sued for that Star Wars reference. Thank the maker for them paperwork"
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"Honestly it's you and Thayla's fault. Because of your constant references here and there in the last 2 games we were nearly taken out!"
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"Stop groaning you! You are not a child!"
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"By the way UE, how long are you going to be keeping that boy around? I really don't see him lasting that long"
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"Of course he's not gonna last long. But I'd say that's your plan? To use him as much as you can before he becomes disposable?"
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"Why must you be vague with your answer?"
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"Nevermind then. Now if you excuse me, I have a story to narrate"
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"Now then where were we? Ah yes, the script! Hold on a second I should have been saying all this 30 minutes ago! Guess I'm saying this in a nutshell"
And so the Ultimately-badass-recently- woken-up Evil has risen once more! Well metaphorically. Due to some unknown, mystical force, the UE is somehow stuck within the Dungeon, and so he is no longer playable, well until they decide to release a DLC or something.
Unusually, to a degree, the UE has appointed a somewhat-adequate-little Underlord with the position of conquering the world for him! What an unusual move I have to say...
And so, the newly appointed evil Underlord shall set out on his quest for domination! And he shall begin! By digging his way out of here!
"Why am I doing this kind of a shitty job" Isaiah murmured plunging the blade of the shovel into the dirt.
It seems that the little-evil Underlord is expressing complaints about his jobs. I'm terribly sorry but we don't accept complaints from our own employees
"That is but a crime upon itself!" Isaiah retorted.
However just as he was about to sink the shovel into the earth, something blunt and shiny emerged from the dirt.
"What the-!"
The wall of dirt suddenly collapsed in on itself, and dust was kicked up all over. The little Underlord covered his eyes from the dirt and once it faded away, he suddenly found himself eye-to-eye with a short green creature!
"What the fuck is that!?"
Took the words right out of my mouth actually.
M.C Profile #1
Name: Isaiah
Age: 18
Height: 5'6 (Formerly)
Eyes: Brown eyes (Formerly)
Hair: Black
Skin tone: White (Formerly)
Body: Lean, muscular (Not too fat nor too skinny, the right kind of muscular)
Nicknames:
Little Underlord (By Narrator)
Lord of the Deep (By his Enemies)
Sorry bout the long update guys. I had so much on my plate that I found it hard to do anything else on my Fanfics. Well, what can I do? Life gets right at ya.
But anyway, hope you enjoyed this somewhat small of a chapter.
Btw; I'm not gonna be explaining what's going on in the story. That's the Narrator's job. (If you know what I mean by that). So yeah, the format is gonna be different and I believe you all have seen a sample of that near the end of this Chapter. Let me know what you guys think about this format.
Also, I'll be releasing small snippets of Isaiah's Bio, as well as small bits of world building in each chapter, so be prepared for that as well.
Like I said; hope you guys enjoyed, and I'll see you all in the next one.
