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DarkX the Dragon Knight chapter 15 . Jul 31

SWEET MOTHER OF CHEESE.

OH GOD. (Falls over.)

Guys! Why did you have so such trouble taking this guy out!? You outnumber him/it, like, 10 to 1! AND YOU HAVE FLIPPIN' ARCEUS ON YOUR TEAM! ONE DOES NOT SIMPLY TWO-HIT KO FLIPPIN' ARCEUS!

Uh-Um… I can explain?

ALSO, HOW DOES GENESECT KNOW MORE THAN FOUR MOVES!?

Every Pokemon can learn more than four moves in this story…

Okay, that's just a random nitpick, but nonetheless, WHEN DID THIS GUY GET SO OP!?

I CAN EXPLAIN. ;A;

It would make more sense if it were all six of the Genesect attacked them, then maybe all the one-hit KO-ing would make more sense. But no, this Genesect is level 100 apparently! ARCEUS! GUYS! YOU'RE SO MUCH BETTER THAN THIS!

Arceus: STAHP YELLING.

...Other than that, good job! Can't wait to see what happens next! :3

… Thanks?

MewLover27 chapter 15 . 14h ago

They are screwed if they aren't careful.

Hoopa: Help.

Hoopa and Diancie peeked out from the tree they were hiding in. "… No sign of them." Hoopa said. Diancie sighed in relief. "Who knew they were six more of the guy who took out Arceus, Giratina, Terrakion, Groudon, and all our Fire Legendaries?"

"Things don't look good…" Diancie said. "I just hope the others are okay."

Mewtwo assessed the foe standing before him. It had identified itself as Genesect 03, and it was charging a Dark Pulse. "I suppose you're going to defeat me with that?"

"Yes." It replied curtly.

"Very well. Come on, I don't have all day."

Genesect fired the Dark Pulse at Mewtwo, who didn't even try to dodge or block it, as it simply disintegrated upon contact with him. "… Impossible."

"Oh is it? I was designed to be the Ultimate Pokemon…" Mewtwo began to float in the air as a blue glow surrounded 03 and started crushing him.

"Error… Error-"

"Did you really think a toy like you stood a chance?" Mewtwo raised his hand, and closed his hand.

CRUNCH!

Mewtwo wiped some oily viscera off him. "And to think I went to the trouble of removing my limiters for you. Although I do think your remains will be an entertaining research project!"

Meloetta cracked her knuckles, activating her Pirouette Form by humming Relic Song. "Looks like it's just you and me buddy." She had actually managed to catch one of the Genesects, 04.

04 coldly glared at Meloetta. "And what's to stop me from calling backup?" Apparently, this one had a bit more personality then some of his brothers.

"You're not going to live long enough to finish the phone call." Meloetta's fists glowed with the energy of Brick Break.

04 made Metal Claws. "Let's go Ms. Ballerina."

The two ran at each other, Meloetta ducking under his first swipe and striking him in the chest, to which 04 yelled before clawing Meloetta away. Meloetta hit the ground before getting up. "Alrighty, new plan." She held out her fists, which burned thanks to Fire Punch.

04 visibly froze. "Uhoh. AERIAL ACE!" 04 practically blurred into nothing as he rushed at Meloetta, who stood waiting. He reached up to slash her, when she practically punched a flaming hole in him with one fast hit. 04 crashed into a tree, and fell to the ground. He barely lifted his head and looked at Meloetta walking up to him. "What are you-"

"Relic Song… Death Metal Version."

The part of the island the two were on was practically annihilated.

05 glanced around. His target was moving incredibly fast, so perhaps Paralysis would be best. He prepared to fire Zap Cannon –

BAM! Deoxys in his Speed Form slammed into him, before jumping back. "Not happening buddy!"

05 readjusted his neck joint. "You don't have a choice. You will be eliminated."

"Why?"

"It is our function and purpose."

"So basically, you were created…"

"To destroy you. We were outfitted with the tools necessary to exterminate you."

"So who was the first guy you sent?"

"06 was specifically designed to take out the strongest Legendaries. Unfortunately, he was stopped before he could finish his mission."

By Darkrai. "And what are the rest of you for then?"

"We were to take care of the…. leftovers." He said the last word with noticeable disdain.

"Well thanks for telling me your plan!" Deoxys then shifted into Attack Form and obliterated 05 with a Hyper Beam. Deoxys sat on the ground. "I need to tell the others-"

A whimper interrupted him.

Deoxys looked up. "Hello?"

… "EEP!" A Genesect fell out of the tree next to him. This one, however, was a lighter shade of purple, kinda pinkish, and spoke with a female voice unlike the rest of the Genesects. Deoxys immediately jumped up and moved to attack, when the Genesect started crying.

"Don't hurt me!" She blubbered.

"…" Deoxys stopped and crouched down, patting her. "I won't hurt you. What's your name little girl?"

"My… My name? T-They all called me 07…"

"Well 07, if you stay with me, you'll be okay." Deoxys whispered.

"… T-Thank you."

02 chuckled. He had found all the little pipsqueak Legendaries, who had tried to hide in a cave. This was gonna be easy. He rounded a turn in the cave. "Come out little ones…~"

"Who you calling little?" Groudon greeted him, standing smack dab in the middle of the cave.

"YOU?! But… But 06 took you out!"

Groudon smiled, revealing his fangs. "You never beat the land buddy." He then incinerated 02 with a Lava Plume.

Jirachi poked his head out. "Is it gone?"

Groudon nodded, before glowing, revealing he was, in fact, Mew all along.

The other Smaller Legendaries came out of their hiding spots.

Celebi breathed a sigh of relief. "Thank goodness that's over…"

Uxie shook her head. "It's not over yet Celebi. Not by a long shot."

Hoopa and Diancie were heading back to the clearing.

"Think they're gone?" Hoopa asked her sister.

"We can only hope- Oh no."

"What-" Hoopa froze. In the middle of the clearing was a red and blue Genesect (Shiny Genesect to yours and mine) standing over a defeated pile of Cresselia, Zapdos, Articuno, and Regigigas, while holding up Darkrai by his neck.

"Yield." It said in a completely monotone voice.

"Screw… You…" Darkrai muttered. Genesect (01 in case you haven't figured that out yet) went to stab him.

"HEY!" Hoopa shouted. 01 turned his head and dropped Darkrai ("Ow.") Hoopa and Diancie were glaring at him.

"What do you two plan on doing?" He asked.

"This!" Hoopa shouted. "HYPERSPACEEEEEE…"

01 crossed it's arms in a X shape. "Protect." The forcefield appeared.

"HOLE!" Hoopa warped right to behind 01.

"What-" He was punched into the air. "Impudent little-" He was surrounded by portals, one of which a Diamond Storm poured out of, and went into another portal, before coming out another one, and this continued until he was basically a pile of scrap.

"… YEAAAAAAHHHHH!" Hoopa cheered, before high-fiving her sister. "WHOO! WE BEAT THE EVIL MONSTER ROBOT THINGAMAJIG."

"Yay!"

"Oh good. We were worried." Mew and the rest of the small Legendaries floated out of the trees.

"Hey." Mewtwo warped in.

Meloetta flew in. "Hey…" Her voice was noticeably hoarse.

The rest of the Legendaries came in from their hiding spots.

Hoopa looked around. "Hey… Where's Deoxys?"

"Over here!" The DNA Pokemon walked up to them, 07 in tow.

"AH ANOTHER ONE." Hoopa leapt at her, only to get whipped in the face by Speed Form Deoxys.

"SHE'S NOT GOING TO HURT US, SHE'S NICE!" Deoxys shouted. "See?" He pointed to 07, who was chasing a Butterfree.

Hoopa rubbed her stinging face. "Yeah I guess so… But are you sure?"

"Positive."

"Well… Let's get the injured healed up."

The man from the rooftop sat at a desk. "… Impossible. This sets back my plans by months at least! Those horrid abomination- Calm down Siegfried. They are nothing to worry about." He pressed a button on his intercom. "Tell the lab to start working on Plan B."

Yes sir.

"Thank you." He rested his head on his hands. "You may win this round, but soon Legendaries, soon, Team Oblivion will be victorious, just. You. Wait."

So how did I do with the fight scenes? Good, bad, Meh?