Ok so before I start I want to thank nasa0.0 for the feedback. Lots of people tell me that my writing is bad so I started writing on here to prove them wrong. And that line at the end of chapter 3 is one of my favorite lines in the book so I had to add it I was so sad when it wasn't in the movie. Again I am ranting on let's get on with the story
Tris POV
Caleb has just walked in on Tobias and I in Zeke's bedroom kissing. He is red hot with anger. He starts yelling at me telling me that this I was being selfish that I shouldn't be doing this, but I am Dauntless now not Abnegation. Tobias starts to see the anger build up in my face. Then Caleb asks the one question I was worried about, his age. Two years can seem like a long time to some people. Tobias had convinced me that two years wasn't that large of a difference, but I know Caleb will think otherwise. I must have been in my own thoughts for a little while, because when I come out Christina has come into the argument, not as another factor, but as a peacekeeper. She is pulling Caleb away who was glaring back at Tobias. Christina walks him out the door and right before she slams it in his face she says "Goodbye." The room went silent. After a minute or so the shock of what had just happened left Marlene's face she punched Uriah in the arm "Ow! What was that for?"
"How did you not expect that to happen!" She yells hitting his arm between each word. "How was I supposed to know he would act that wasy!" Uriah says
half-heartedly
"one he is her brother, two he was abnegation, three cut the act we all saw the way you looked when you discovered he was her brother!"
"Can we just get back to playing the game!"
"I don't know can we!" She said angrily
"Yes, yes we can" Tobias says trying to move on "Will, you haven't been getting much attention, Candor or Dauntless?"
"Dauntless"
"I dare you to go take a shower with all of your clothes on"
"Easy" Will says and walks over to the bathroom. "So what should we do as we wait?" Zeke says "I don't know what do you want to do" I hear Uriah say in a bored tone "who wants drinks?!" Zeke yells walking to the fridge. When he comes back he has two six packs and is passing out beers to everyone. When he passes one to me I hand it back. "No thanks, I am good" I say. He makes a weird face and walks over to Shauna to hand her a drink. Everyone starts talking then a dripping wet Will walks out of the bathroom. Christina walks over with a towel and puts it on his shoulder. "Thanks" he says and walks back to his chair. He eyes the drinks on the table "what I miss?"
"Nothing" I say
"Hmmm, ok, Shauna, Candor or Dauntless?"
"Dauntless"
"Call a random number and say 'I love you'"
"Ok" she pulls out her phone and types a random number.
"Hello?"
"Hi, I needed to tell you that I love you."
"Ok cool." And the person hung up
"I don't understand how someone could just say ok cool to someone who is saying I love you!"
"Relax, I bet they were on the end of a shift or something!" Zeke says
"Ok," she turns to Susan "Candor or dauntless?"
"Dauntless" she says. She is a lot more courageous than I remember.
"I dare you to allow someone to write on your face"
"Ok that isn't that hard"
"You didn't let me finish! The way we will decide is by spinning you around. Whoever you are facing when you stop is who will write on your face."
"Again still not that hard" she stands up and puts on the blindfold Shauna handed her. She spins around and takes off the blind fold. Oh God! She landed on Peter. He smirks and stands up with a marker. He writes on her forehead one word. Five little letters to make one of the words I despise the most. Stiff. Those words now branded her. "Okay!" She says not aware of what he had written. Eric snickers at the word Peter wrote on her forehead. She turns to Uriah "Candor or Dauntless?"
"Dauntless!!!"
"I dare you to go out to the pit and have a conversation wi-"
"Easy"
"May I please finish. With yourself for five minutes" we walk down to the pit with Uriah and Susan says "Timer starts now" looking at her watch
"Hey how are you." Uriah says "Good how are you. Good, did you hear about the cake shortage? No! I can't live without cake." He starts hyperventilating "chill I just wanted to see how you would react it isn't true. That isn't funny! Well it was to me! How can it be funny to you when we are the same person? How did you know that! It really is pretty self explanatory. We are the same person, it is as simple as that. Ok back to a more serious note, are you excited to start your job tomorrow? Yeah. I can't wait for initiation though. I want to scare the pants off of all the initiates like Four did! We can't possibly do that well as Four, and aren't you worried someone will get hurt? No, I can be responsible. I just never want to be. Really, that is hard to believe. Shut up!" He pushes himself "ow what was that for! I can be responsible! Ok fine whatever."
"Time!" Susan says. People are now staring at Uriah and we are all bursting out in laughter. "Let's get a few more rounds in before we have to go to bed. After all some of us are starting our new jobs." Zeke says eyeing Uriah, Marlene, Lyne, Peter, Will, Christina, and me.
"Wow I didn't know you had common sense" Tobias says. We all start laughing again just as hard. Zeke glares at Tobias. We walk back to Zeke's apartment and sit in our original spots. "Eric, Candor or Dauntless?"
"Dauntless"
"Whisper something dirty to the first girl on your left" he looks left and Susan was there he walks over and leans next to her ear. He starts to whisper something. I can't tell what, but it makes Susan'a face so red I doubt there is a brighter shade of red. Eric walks back to his chair with a smirk on his face. "Stiff!" He says in a harsh tone. Susan and I both turn our head in response. I feel a pit in my stomach. I hadn't realized that she would have responded to stiff just as much as I do, Especially actually being Abnegation now. "Candor or Dauntless?"
"Dauntless" I say
"I dare you to tell us Fours real name." I take of my shirt. "So you do know it!" Eric says the air feels cold on my skin. Christina looks hurt by the fact that I didn't tell her when I figured it out. "Yes, but that doesn't mean I am going to tell everyone" I snap
"Peter, Candor or Dauntless?"
"Dauntless"
"I dare you to let" who hates peter most besides me "Four put duct tape on your body and rip it off" Zeke gets the duct tape while Eric thinks.
"Ok" Zeke hands Tobias the duct tape. Tobias takes off a large piece, large enough to go all the way down Peter's arm. He places it right on Peter's arm making sure to keep it flat. He puts pressure on it to help the adhesive. He turns around and smirks then slowly pulls it off. I didn't think Tobias would have so much fun doing this to Peter, but I am having just as much fun watching the guy who tried to kill me try to hold back screams as the tape rips his hair off. When Tobias finishes he throws away the tape and sits in his chair. "God! I did not think it would hurt that much" he says putting a hand on the red spot on his arm. We all laugh and he says "Lyne, Candor or Dauntless?"
"You know what almost nobody has said Candor so I might as well. Candor"
"What is the most embarrassing thing someone has caught you doing?"
"Oh God!" Shauna says.
"I was sixteen. It was the day before the choosing ceremony."
Lyne's POV: Flash back.
I just got back from school. I was one of the last people to finish their Aptitude test. I am walking to my apartment when a boy named Esme walks over to me. I had liked Esme for almost a year now, but I doubt he liked me back. "Hi" he says "listen, I had to tell you how I feel before I choose tomorrow." My stomach drops. I had fantasized about it, but never in a million years did I think it was going to happen. Esme leans in and kisses me. His kiss felt like fire on my lips. His tounge brushed up against my bottom lip asking for an entrance and I immediately allow access. We walk in the door to the apartment. Hector wasn't home from school yet and my mother doesn't get home till 6. We walk to my bedroom only breaking apart so I can open the door. I take off his shirt and he throws me on the bed. I start to take off my shirt and he helps me the rest of the way. He starts to lead a trail of kisses down my collarbone then comes back up to kiss my lips. His hands move down to my bra straps and he unhooks them. I throw my bra across the room. He admires me for a moment then kisses my neck. He starts trailing down again when I hear my door open. I hear a whistle and some clapping. Shauna. I forgot she was coming over for dinner today. She completely ruined the mood. I glare at her as we put on our shirts. "No, don't stop because I am here! I am glad my sister found a boy!"
"I've got to go" Esme says and he walks out of the room
Tris' POV (End flashback)
Shauna starts laughing as soon as Lyne stops while everyone else follows behind her except for Susan who is in complete shock over what she just heard. "I don't think we can beat that" Zeke says trying to surpress laughter while he talks. "I think that was the finale! Good God! It is almost One in the morning! You all have your first day of work tomorrow!" Tobias says He starts pushing everyone out trying to get us all home. "Susan you can stay with us tonight if you would like" I say
"Yes that would be lovely thank you." We start walking away from the crowd. I feel a hand grab me. Max.
"Tris, there has been a change in plans. You are going to have to go to the meeting with Abnegation tomorrow"
"Yes sir" I say. Trying to get back to Tobias and Susan. "The meeting starts at eight thirty. Be there." I nod and run to catch up to Tobias and Susan.
Ok guys I apologize for the long chapter, but I was trying to get the Party over with so we can get into the good stuff. I knew I should have had Christina throw the party. If that had happened it wouldn't have been so long. I am not going to be able to write as much because our school is having us do our work at home starting Monday. I will at least try to write every Tuesday and Thursday if possible. Again I would like to say a special thank you to Nasa0.0 for the review and another thank you to all of you in general for reading this. Stay awesome, stay lucky, and peace out!