Snowcrystal of Thunderclan- Yup! Stick the dog! :D Why thank you, I'm rather proud of coming up with the idea! XDI feel bad for Cindy too, but she and Leon do makeup in the next part of the sequel, which my friend gave me the best idea for! I love the idea a ton! :D It displays so much stuff that it is the perfect plot for the second part of the sequel! :D I updated when you were babysitting? I did wonder why you took so long to review ^-^
iDragonSpyro- I am in the middle of writing the next part ^-^ but it won't be uploaded till after the Great Battle along with a bunch of other chapters I have written but won't upload just yet ^-^ I know right? Cynthia's pain is tugging on all of our heart strings and I nearly cried writing that chapter! I don't know what you are talking about *looks innocently at you* Bree's not hiding anything, nothing at all! (I promise it will be revealed in the second part of the sequel) Leon may be being an absolute pain in the tail (get it?) but he's really hurt, betrayed, and confused, his family lied to him for a long time, he fell in love with a girl who doesn't really exist, his girlfriend is finally free, and Cynthia wants to kill him with her bare hands. (not really, although she's super close to giving him to his group and actually does in the next part of the sequel ^-^)
Featherflight123- I'm glad you thought the last chapter was really good! And here's the kitty chapter! :D I had fun with Leon and Lionblaze's interaction ^-^ It's okay the review was short, as least I got one and I know your excited! :D
iDragonSpyro (again ^-^)- No! Don't cry! Cynthia will be okay, I promise! The one you'll have to worry about is Bree, she's got a lot of stuff that she's about to go through :( Nah, Cynthia won't train Hannah, she'd rather strangle herself that teach the blond how to be a silent thief ^-^ In regards to Fighting For Love And Hope, I am nearing the end of the rewrite chapter, I'm super close to finishing it! :D
Here's a snippet of the sequel to the last chapter! :D :D :D (I'm so mean! XD)
"Bree! Behind you!" L.I.O.N broadcasted through the pretty brunette's watch and Bree spun around.
Leon quickly shoved the cloth over her face while Bree fought against him, her amber eyes narrowed as she struggled not to breath in the chemical.
Leon ignored his brother's attempts to get up and pushed the cloth harder against Bree's mouth and nose.
"Bree don't breathe that in!" L.I.O.N spoke and Leon was nearly blinded by the car flashing its headlights, blinding all three of the humans.
Leon dropped the cloth, quickly took a taser from his pocket and jammed it onto Bree's watch, getting highly annoyed by the flashing lights from the AI.
Bree screamed and struggled against him, struggling to get him to release her and her wrist as the taser melted part of the wrist band to the inventor's tannish skin and short-circuited L.I.O.N and the watch itself.
L.I.O.N's lights dimmed to nothing and steam emerged from the car's hood, the super car had short-circuited from the traser's massive jolt and Bree's screaming turned into whimpers of pain as Leon removed the taser from her watch.
"Bree!" Jay finally managed to get to his feet and find his visor. He gaped at his brother, "Leon?! What are you doing?!"
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"shock yourself." He (Leon) said, shutting off the taser and throwing it to his brother.
"Jay don't!-" Bree said before Leon slapped his hand over her mouth and stopped her from speaking any more
Jay looked at the device and grimaced, he then turned on the taser, screwed up his face, and shocked himself. A moment later a thump was heard as he crashed to the floor, unconscious from the jolt.
Bree stared at Jay's unconscious form before Leon sharply hit her in the temple and knocked her out.
Leon felt some triumph, finally, I'm better that then and I didn't lie, he thought as he lifted Bree up and left the flat.
I haven't updated in so long! Oh, my heavens! You all probably thought I gave up on the story or something right? Well, I didn't! I promise! I'm just having issues coming up with the requested chapters! I have three other chapters finished or super close to being finished, but I won't upload them till after the Great Battle so updates are really really slow at the moment, I apologize!
Meet the kitties AU
(The Warriors Characters don't mind humans in this one)
Cynthia, Leon- 19 ½
Holly, Bree, and Jay- 20 ½
Caylee- 21 ½
Go to my DeviantArt for descriptions, cause I'm lazy and I don't want to write them out :P
"Wait," Holly said as she crouched down and stared at the five cats squished together in the cat carrier in front of them. "What?"
Caylee (me) rolled her eyes and repeated her earlier statement, "these our cat counterparts."
" Ooh! I wanna see!" Bree squealed and looked at the carrier in hyper excitement.
Cynthia looked a little intrigued, "they're really us?" she asked as she knelt beside Holly and peered into the carrier.
The six cats were squished together, a dark brown tabby she-cat was attempting to sleep through having a gray Tom practically sitting on her, a silver tabby she-cat was hissing in annoyance at a large golden Tom as his tail whacked her repeatedly in the face as he tried to shift his position into a slightly protective one, a small gray tom was attempted to sit comfortably, but he ended up sitting partially on top of the dark brown tabby, a black she-cat was fidgeting uneasily, and a very small ginger tabby she-cat with a tan underbelly and an incredibly short tail was curled up in a ball at the front of the cage.
"Auh, they're so cute!" Bree squealed happily as she looked at the six cats, "is the dark brown one me?! She's so pretty!"
"Calm down," Jay snorted, "you might scare them to death if you don't calm down Bree."
"Just ignore him," Caylee rolled her eyes and knelt down before opening the carrier and pulling out the ginger tabby, "each of you sit down on the ground and take an ear piece, it'll allow you to understand what they're saying." The small ginger tabby snuggled closer to Caylee, a loud purr rumbling through its tiny body. "This is Tigerwish, she's my counterpart." She introduced the cat small enough to fit in the breast pocket of her denim collared shirt.
"Are you sure this is a good idea?" Holly asked as she took an earpiece and put it on, a doubtful expression on her face. "I mean, they could be hostile."
"Relax Holly," Cynthia rolled her eyes and settled down on the floor near the cage, sitting criss-cross in a comfortable position. "It can't be that bad."
"We could get scratched and bite." Jay grunted as Bree guided him into a sitting position on the floor, which she copied a moment later, sliding out of her wheelchair and lowering herself with her arms.
"But it'll be so cool!" Bree chirped excitedly, "I mean, these are our counterparts from a different world!"
Caylee snorted and tucked Tigerwish into her shirt pocket, the tabby's head poking out of it, the tabby's bright blue eyes were wide and curious with no traces of fear. "Well let's get started," she said as Leon took a seat between Bree and Cynthia, "now be careful, if you offend them too much they may get hostile so be careful not to annoy them too much. Bree, you're first, since you seem to be so excited and you're clearly not disturbed." She carefully pulled the brown tabby she-cat from the carrier, "Bree, meet your counterpart Briarlight, as you can see, she's just as paralyzed as you are."
"Gimme!" Bree chirped excitedly as she waited impatiently for Caylee to let her introduce herself to her cat counterpart.
Caylee rolled her eyes and she carefully deposited the injured cat into Bree's lap where the brown tabby stared at Bree through drowsy amber eyes.
Bree smiled and gently brushed her finger through the tabby's soft fur, "hi!" She chirped excitedly, her amber eyes gleaming with excitement, "Briarlight's a cool name! And your fur is so soft!"
Briarlight purred with amusement and twitched her ears as she leaned into Bree's gentle stroking of her mottled fur, her purr rumbling through her entire body.
Bree looked delighted that Briarlight liked her and her amber eyes gleamed happily.
"Cynthia, your next," Caylee said as she deposited the ticked off looking she-cat onto Cynthia's lap where Cynthia stiffened like a board when Cinderheart's claws dug into her jeans. "This is Cinderheart, your counterpart Cynthia, and she is just as stubborn and independent as you are."
"Ow," Cynthia hissed before carefully asking the aggravated she-cat in a strained voice, "can you please retract your claws? They're really sharp!"" She practically squeaked at the end of the sentence, the pain from the cat's claws had caused her voice to raised dramatically in pitch.
Cinderheart looked startled but she sheathed her claws and perched awkwardly in the human's lap, her sapphire blue eyes focused on Cynthia's blue ones, the shade matching to the last detail of silver that gave the blue a gemstone like an appearance.
"Leon, be careful with this guy, he may bite you," Caylee warned as she deposited the large golden tom into Leon's lap, "he's rather protective over Cinderheart. This is Lionblaze, he's Cinderheart's mate and your counterpart Leon."
Leon cautiously eyed the golden tom in his lap who was sitting there looking at him through narrowed amber eyes, "I'm not going to hurt Cinderheart, uh, Lionblaze," he stumbled over the tom's name, nearly forgetting it already. "I wouldn't do that."
Lionblaze flattened his ears and eyed Leon, clearly, he wasn't sure about the muscular teen's motives.
"Holly, this is Hollyleaf," Caylee introduced the battle-scarred black she-cat as she set her in Holly's lap "she's your counterpart and just as much of a sharp tongue as you do."
Holly watched the she-cat nervously for a few moments, not quite sure what to do with the cat.
Caylee rolled her eyes and sighed, "and this," she said as she pulled out the grumpy looking gray Tom, "is Jayfeather, and boy does his attitude match yours, Jay." She then dropped the cat into his lap and took a seat on the floor as well.
Jay gazed sightlessly at the cat in his lap, "If I'm blind then he's blind right?" he asked Caylee in a grouchy tone.
Caylee rolled her eyes, "yes Jay, he's blind, now just along with him will you?"
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Leon fumbled for something to say, but something temporarily stumped him and he looked at Holly before he mouthed, 'what's a mate?'
Holly looked up from her counterpart, rolled her eyes, and mouthed back, 'someone the cat is in a relationship with.'
Leon's eyes lit up, now he had something relatable to the cat sitting in his lap, "your mates with Cinderheart right?"
Lionblaze nodded, a spark of confusion entering his amber eyes, and the tip of his golden tail flicked slightly uneasily.
"Well Cynthia," Leon said, pointing to the teenager sitting next to him who's thigh was brushing his and who was currently softly talking to her counterpart, "is my mate as you call it."
Lionblaze gave him a disbelieving look and spoke, the device in Leons's ear allowing him to hear what he was meowing, "no way, I don't believe you." Lionblaze's mew was rather deep, something that slightly startled Leon.
Leon rolled his eyes and leaned back on his arms, looking at the disbelieving tom, "how can I prove it?"
Lionblaze shrugged his golden furred shoulders before he gained a slightly smug and sneaky look on his face, "Cinderheart's expecting my kits, what about you and your mate?"
Leon looked at the tom and flushed, his face pinkening with embarrassment. He then ducked closer to the cat and nodded slightly, "yeah. But don't tell the others!"
The golden tom's ears perked in surprise and his jaw loosened slightly before he quickly recovered, "Cinderheart's better than your mate." He mewed smugly, his tail curled proudly around his paws.
"No way," Leon shook his head vigorously and denied the cat's words, "Cynthia's way better than Cinderheart."
"Says a human." Lionblaze retorted.
"Says a cat-" Leon shot back.
"We're the same person!" Cynthia and Cinderheart both exclaimed Cynthia's alto voice mixing with both Cinderheart's higher pitched mew and the cat's translated slightly higher alto voice. Both females' eyes gleamed with amusement as they look at the golden-haired human and the golden furred cat. Cynthia and Cinderheart then looked back at each other and Cynthia cracked a grin while shaking her head in amusement and laughter, "boys and their pride."
Cinderheart flicked her tail, her blue eyes glimmering with amusement, "tell me about it." she purred.
Lionblaze ducked his head and licked his chest fur a few times, his fur burning with embarrassment.
Leon on the other hand blushed but recovered quickly and slid one arm around Cynthia's waist, a cheeky grin on his face, "hey, you don't seem to mind my pride."
Cynthia gave him, a bland look, "if I didn't you would've fallen over by now with how large your ego would be." Leon released her and pouted, nursing his wounded pride.
Cinderheart purred louder in amusement, laughter dancing in her sapphire blue eyes.
Lionblaze prodded Leon in the abdomen, his amber eyes glinting smugly, "ha, your mate totally just out witted you."
"Your just as bad Lionblaze," Cinderheart mewed and gave the large tom a firm shove with her nose, "after the battle with Shadowclan you would not shut up, my ears were practically bleeding from how many times you boasted about the story."
Lionblaze's ears flattened embarrassedly and he hid partially behind Leon, awfully embarrassed by his mate's words.
Cynthia's grin widened and she rubbed Cinderheart's head between the ears, her eyes full of amusement and triumph, which matched Cinderheart's perfectly.
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"So you left your brothers too?" Hollyleaf asked Holly curiously, her emerald green eyes flashing with curiosity. Her mew was a rather calm deeper alto.
Holly nodded, "Yeah, but for a different reason, I left because I told Cynthia's secret and couldn't bare the pressure."
Hollyleaf nodded miserably, "I couldn't handle the truth and ran, where I ran into the tunnels and almost died in a rockslide. I broke one of my legs."
"I ended up running into the water filtration system and fell through a grate where I broke my left leg."
Hollyleaf gazed at her counterpart, "wow, our stories are so similar it's oddly disturbing."
"I completely agree." Holly agreed a moment later, a small smile on her face.
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"Wait, so Lionblaze was in this special prophecy and you thought you weren't good enough for him?" Cynthia asked, looking at her counterpart in surprise.
Cinderheart nodded meekly, "yeah, pretty stupid right?"
Cynthia snorted with laughter, "are you kidding? That's so much better than all the crap Leon and I have gone through for the past four years! I wish I had been you at that point in time!"
Cinderheart's whiskers twitched with amusement, "a lot of your issues were fear related, that's so much better than an inferior complex."
Cynthia sighed, "insecurity is worse."
Cinderheart shivered, her fur standing on end and her tail slightly fluffing out, "agreed, that is the worst."
Both of them looked at Lionblaze and Leon who were awkwardly staring at each other, and Cinderheart mewed, "the things we do for the toms, or guys in your case."
"Yup, pretty much."
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"Come on Jay," Bree sighed, "just talk to him!"
"Please Jayfeather?" Briarlight mewed hopefully, nuzzling his cheek in the process from her position in Bree's lap.
"No." Both Jay and Jayfeather grunted curtly and they both refused to talk to their counterpart.
"How grouchy can you get?" Briarlight mumbled under her breath.
"I know right?" Bree sighed.
"I can hear you Bree/Briarlight." Jay and Jayfeather growled.
Bree and Briarlight just giggled, finding it amusing how in sync the two grumpy males' replies were.