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"Bhai"
Abhijeet opened his heavy eyes and answered in sleepy tone: aa gaya tu..(forwarding his palm) aa ja, kabse wait kar raha tha main tera.
Daya held his brother's palm and sit near him while caressing his hairs: soye nahi tum ab tak
Abhijeet: tera wait kar raha tha...(asking in worried tone) kahan reh gaya tha itni der
Daya: kuch jaroori kaam me ulajh gaya tha Abhi..ab aa to gaya hoon...(placing his head near him on which Abhijeet smiled and started caressing his hairs listening to Daya) tumne dinner kar lia na
Abhijeet: haan kar lia aur tune
Daya closing his eyes feeling relaxed with the magical touch of his brothers soothing hands: maine bhi..(suddenly grabbing his hand and sitting straight) main aaj yahin ruk jaun Abhi (pleading way) please
Abhijeet look at him and a similar tone and face come in front of his eyes just a little younger in age.
"Bhai please de do na"
Abhijeet strictly: Daya aise zid nahin karte na..Doctor ne kaha tha na jab tak cavity theek nahi ho jati no toffee no chocolates phir kyu zid kar raha hai.
"pal bhai, bus ek hi to mang laha hoon (confirm way) ek se kuch nahin hota hai"
Abhijeet melting with such innocent tone still trying to pacify his chote: Chotu dekh ek baar teri cavity theek ho jaye to ek kya do chocolates doonga par abi ruk ja na plz...dekh phir tujhe hi dard hota h na raat ko.
Daya who was looking at his Big B with hope till now, bow his head down with dull face and hopeless eyes when in the next moment his eyes shinned in happiness seeing a small piece of chocolate in front of his eyes...he grab that piece and ate it instantly hugging his brother from waist.
"Thanku Abhi Baaiya"
Abhijeet in sweet taunting tone: accha ab Bhaiya ho gaya..waise Abhi...Abhi hmmm...
Daya smiled sheepishly at this hugging his brother more tightly.
Abhijeet come back in present feeling a nudge in his elbow while listening along with it as...
"Kya Abhi tum to sun hi nahi rahe ho..kabse bol raha hoon (pleading again) rukne do na aaj pakka kal se nahin rukunga..aaj last last."
Abhijeet although wanted to be his kid but being a big brother he managed his emotions and answered: par bacche tu thak gaya hoga na kaise soyega yahan..aur kya yahi formal pehen kar so jaega..tere kapde bhi nahin hain aaj yahan.
Daya removing his shirt from his pant and unfolding his sleeves ahile unbottoning them too, finally removed his shoes showing Abhijeet as: Lo ab to free hu..aur main yahan (placing his head beside his brother again) aram se sounga. Pakka na Boss.
Abhijeet who was silently watching all this finally smiled and surrendered: theek hai lekin bus aaj
Daya sweetly: pakka..Thanku Abhi Bhaiya and he lay down beside his brother who was looking at him with lovefilled eyes...his brother's soothing fingers soon took him to a tention free dream land giving peace to his tensed brain.
Abhijeet after confirming Daya's sleep pressed the call bell button...A nurse arrive their is few minutes looking at later in shock: aap ab tak jaag rhe hain...maine kabka sone kaha tha apko..apke request karne par maine aapko sedatives nahin din aur..
Abhijeet who was till then trying to shut her by placing finger on his lips finally shrieked in a very low tone...
"please, wo so raha hai"
Nurse look at a small dude obviously huge is built but younger from heart, sleeping peacefully beside her patient.
She too smiled a bit knowing well about their bond in all these months asked in sign language: What do u need?
Abhijeet in low tone: please aap ise mild dose sedatives dekar wahan couch par lita dijiye apne ward boys ko bulakar raat bhr aise letega to sprain ho jaega ise.
Nurse smiled and nodded her head in yes coming back with ward boys and two injections. One she inserted in Daya's vein slowly on which Daya flinched but didn't woke up as his brother was thoroughly pressing his shoulder and head to keep him relax...ward boys shifted him in sleep only and the second injection she injected in Abhijeet's drip and told him strictly: ab aap bhi so jaiye. Apke lie itna stress theek nahi.
Abhijeet nodded but speak instantly seeing his brother lying comfortably on couch: Sister wo
Nurse turned and asked: jee kahiye
Abhijeet requesting: wo use blanket..(lowering his eyes) please use aise neend nahi aati h
Sister smiled again and covered Daya properly with an spare blanket placed in Abhijeet's room cupboard, on which Abhijeet took a relax breathe..thanked the Nurse and finally drifted in deep sleep.
Next morning rises and sun rays fell on his face..his eyelids fluttered and he opened his eyes slowly. He got up and saw a sleeping face at his first sight which filled his heart with delight. His big brother who is his everything. He can't imagine his life without his brother..he glance more keenly at him and he realise where he is..a dark shade covered his face. He move toward his reason of life with slow steps. He grab his palm. His eyes went moist, he gently kissed on his big brother's palm and ruffle his hairs.
"Uth gaye Daya"
Daya turned and saw Rahul standing at main door...he turned his face and wipe his eyes, turning his head again to Rahul after composing himself.
Daya in smile: good morning Bhaiya
Rahul noticed those teary eyes but didn't say anything and replied him in same smile: Good morning Chotu...bus ek din hi apne bhai ke bina reh sake tum hmmm.
Daya: Nahin bhaiya..bus kal dil hi nahi hua iske paas se jaane ka...Rahul Bhaiya mujhe aapse Abhi ke baare mein baat karni hai.
Rahul: mujhe pata hai. Abhijeet mein ab bohot improvement hai..apni feets and ankles ko wo ab move kar pata hai. Doctor ki batai hui exercise bina jyada pain ke kar pata hai..jo muscles stiff ho gaye the wo bhi dheere dheere loose hone shuru hue hain.
Daya in smile: To bhai ab jaldi hi theek ho jaiga...
Rahul: beshak ho jayega Daya...bus thoda waqt aur.
Daya in relief: Bhaiya aapne bohot achi khabar sunai hai. Kal Chi Chi ne mujhe ek idea dia tha. Maine kal raat ko Abhi se discuss nahin kia socha pehle aap se pooch lun.
Rahul in question: han batao na Chotu.
Daya in annoyance: kum se kum hospital mein to mujhe Daya bulaiye na.
Rahul in smile: accha accha Daya ab batao bhi kya baat hai.
Daya nodded with: Abi lekar aya..neeche car mein hai.
Rahul: chalo main bhi chalta hoon sath. Humari baton se kahin ye jaag hi na jaaye. Abi ek ghante tak aur sona chahiye ise.
Daya: haan theek hai aaiye Bhaiya.
Rahul and Daya went downstairs at Parking. Daya unlocked his car and pulled out a medium sized Target Board and few arrows.
"Chi Chi keh raha tha ki Bhai ko ispe target practice karni chahiye...unki muscles bhi move hongi aur wapas thoda routine me aayega to positivity aur badhegi. Self confidence build up hoga..wapas purani life ki ore uske kadam aur mazboot honge"
Rahul in broad smile: bohot hi acchi idea hai Daya..Jeet uth ta hi hoga tum khud use...
Daya's cell ringed and he pick up the call instantly: Good morning Sir...Sir Abhi ke paas aaya tha...jee bus wo uth jaye main...(confusion lines appeared on his forehead) acha sir main nikalta hoon. Jee..jeee.. okay sir.
He disconnected the call telling Rahul in hurry: Bhaiya mujhe abhi nikalna hoga. Acp sir ne foran bulaya hai. Jaroor kuch important kaam hoga. Abhi se main sham ko mil loonga aur free hote hi use call karoonga. Aap please ye de dijiyega use.
Rahul: Chotu tu kuch kha leta.
Daya in tense smile: are bhaiya abi saans lene ka waqt nahin. Acp sir ne jis tarah se bulaya hai na mujhe to ab tak nikal bhi jana chahiye tha.. main chalta hoon Bhai sorry..bureau mein kha loonga pakka. Aap Abhi ka dhyan rakhiyega main aa jaunga jaldi.
Rahul look at him in confusion but nodded simply and Daya rushed out from their is seconds.
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...
Daya entered and straight went inside Acp sir cabin as remaining all were looking at him grave silence making him more confused where he is already confused with that immediate call of Acp sir.
Daya knocked the cabin's door noticing well that three more persons were sitting their.
Acp sir look at with tough expressions.
Daya greeted everyone and at last look at Acp sir.
Acp sir: Daya kal sham ko chaar baje tum bureau se nikal gaye the..kahan gaye the tum.
Daya look here and their and answered: Sir wo khabri se milne gaya tha.
Acp sir look at him with piercing gaze while rest of the persons standing their look at him in disbelief.
Daya was getting hell confused and scared..his heart was searching his soul presence beside him and save him from all these weird gazes but...
Acp sir: kya information mili khabri se.
Daya think for a while then answered quitely: Sir wo.. information galat thi sir..kuch mila (he shooked with a loud bang of paperweight on table)
"Dammit"
Daya look at Acp sir who was now standing in anger...his back was facing Daya.
Daya glance at the rest of persons whom he don't know..out of whom one says: See Pradyuman..your (teasingly) brilliant, honest, brave officer is lying on your face.
Daya look at Acp sir in shock..he knew he is lying...he uttered in silence: Sir ye sab
Acp sir come near him dangerously and threw an envelope in front of him on table. Some pictures came out of it. Daya's eyes go wide in shock..he picked up few photographs..his eyes burned in rage...
"Ye..ise kya..."
Acp sir in anger: jaante ho na tum ise..
Unknown person speak in irritation: C'mon Pradyuman..he killed him last night aur tum us se jaan pehchan ki baat kar rahe ho.
Earth slipped away beneath Daya's feets and he uttered in shock: Sir ye maine nahin kia..sir main sach keh raha hoon.
Acp sir look at him...this time directly in his eyes and asked: Daya kya tum is ladki ko jante ho?
Daya's lips get sealed...he lowered his eyes and speak after taking a deep breathe: haan sir main ise jaanta hoon..kal raat main is se milne gaya tha..par sir maine isko nahin maara. Sir mera yakin kariye.
Acp sir in anger: kyun milne gaye the tum? kya lagti hai ye tumhari?
Daya look at him in shock: Sir aap...(he closed his eyes not knowing what to say)
Acp sir in same angry tone: mujhe tumhare jawab ka intezaar hai.
Daya look at him and turned his face aside before finally telling the truth.
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"Chotuuu"
Rahul grab him: kya hua Jeet..koi bura sapna dekha tum theek ho haan.
Abhijeet look at Rahul: Chotu wo kahan hai..
Rahul: wo bureau gaya hai urgent kaam tha..tum let jao please abi jyada back ko move karna theek nahin.
Abhijeet lie down quietly..still with open eyes and restlessness in his whole body.
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