* means my commentary

-"stormy grey eyes"

*CANT ANYONE THINK OF BETTER WORDS TO DESCRIBE ANNABETH'S EYES THEN "STORMY" or "INTENSE"?!

-Annabeth is obsessed with correcting people's grammar in Facebook Fanfics.

"Percy: i wuv my new piwopwet!

Annabeth: *^I *^love *^pillowpet"

*(sigh) WHY?! *does overused kneeling facing the sky position while it conveniently thunderstorms above*

-Annabeth's boyfriends are always freaking meanies. (I can think of many bad and inappropriate words to describe them but I'll leave that up to you...) The're also named Mark a lot. IDK why...

"Annabeth smiled at me and said 'Percy, (whom I have honestly only known for three minutes. We've had not even one conversation, just met, and feel a weird attraction for each other. But don't worry, this is totally normal for two strangers.) meet my boyfriend, Luke.' Then they started making out."

*WHY. Just...why? •-•

-Annabeth is the perfect package.

"She was perfect. She was beautiful, tough, courageous, fearless, lovable, funny, (ect.)...many more words here...but to bad she has a boyfriend."

* ^(0o0)^ OKAY I'M DONE! AUGH!

-Annabeth dates Luke.

"Luke approached me and put his warm hand on my waist. (THIS IS ANNABETH'S POV YOU CREEPERS!) 'I love you.' He whispered in my ear. Then we started making out while everyone stared at us."

*I think they're just as grossed out as I am reading this.

-Annabeth either: Hates Percy instantly or Starts to like him immediately or Is Percy's BFF

#1: HATE: "Get the fu** outta my way, Jackson. I hate you, you make me sick."

#2: LIKE: "He was so cute. His black hair was matched perfectly with his dreamy sea green eyes."

#3: BFF: (aka the mega friend zone) "Oh. I'm sure you'll be very happy with Rachel. Not like I had anything planned..."

*Umm...no..Too Cliché.

-Annabeth can:

•defeat Gaia

•survive Tartarus

•outsmart basically everyone

•fight like a super ninja or something

•get Daedalus' laptop

•read emotions

•help fulfill tons of prophecies

•and MUCH MUCH MORE!

But cannot tell when Percy is planning to propose or surprise her.

*Is she just have a bad day or something? Sheesh. Get yo schist together girl.

-She and Percy always end up together in the most cliché way possible.

"'I like you.' 'I like you too.' We kissed." (Enough said...)

*I love this and all, but they can at least try and make this more sentimental... Geez. /(•_•)\

-Annabeth falls for Percy.

(Must I give an example, we've all seen this one.)

*At least try. MAKE A LOVE TRIANGE! Or Annabeth (PLOT TWIST) dosen't like Percy after all but instead likes her brother's friend's aunt's niece's grandmother's baby's mother's aunt's nephew's turtle, Marty. (😏)

🐢- MARTY

(aka the man who stole Annabeth's heart not Percy)

-Annabeth has the SAME tragic backstory.

"My mother, Athena-a successful architect, died of cancer when I was two. Then my daddy got remarried to this evil witch named Stacey who abuses me. Then I got two demon brothers, Bobby and Matthew. They all hate me and abuse me. THE END."

or

"My mother, Athena, and my father got divorced when I was two. Mom lives in NYC while I'm here in San Francisco. Then my daddy remarried this evil witch named Helen who hates me (for no reason BTW). Then I got two demon brothers, Bobby and Matthew, and they hate me. They all hate and abuse me. THE END."

*GAAAAAAAA! Stop! /(-o-)\ ALSO... In the PJO series, Athena never showed ANY interest in Architecture... that was PURELY ANNABETH!

-Annabeth loves the color gray and is obsessed with owls.

"I looked at Annabeth's room. The walls were painted a light gray and there was an owl comforter on her king sized bed."

*Seriously? Nowhere in any Percy Jackson books does it say that Annabeth loves gray and owls. I mean... can't she love pink and poodles or something?

MORE QUICK ONES:

- Too oblivious (Percy can surprise her. (o.0)\ )

- Too lovey-dovey (ick)

- WAY too big know-it-all attitude (uh-HUH) *city girl 'Z' snap*

- Lets Percy be an idiot (What happened to 'SHUT UP SEAWEED BRAIN!'?)

HELLO!

I'm so glad that I have gotten (so far) positive reviews on this story! If you have any more suggestions write them in the comments section!

Percabeth & Blue Food,

Lizzie