Hello,
I have been asked by Sebastian Max to do a review of clichés in his story. Here's what I found.
(A/N: Sorry this is not a PJO Cliché chapter SORRY! *dodges dagger*)
BUT! This will help you see common clichés that are relevant everywhere. *bows from awesome inspirational speech*
The Wind in My Wings (A Percy Jackson and Maximum Ride Crossover)
By Sebastian Max
Comment…
#1: Wow… at first glance this is really well written. I'm impressed.
#2: HAHA. Dam. (Hoover Dam Cliché)
#3: 'beautiful green eyes and dark hair' Typical Percy description.
#4: 'super model girls' PPPPHHHHHH! *dies laughing* (no offence but that's another cliché)
#5: 'time to fly' SUPERMANNNNNNN! (Superman line cliché)
#6: McDonalds (Nico-related cliché)
#7: 'Were you following us' *GASP!* Never heard that one before…
#8: WHOA! WAIT! Leo and (MC) are getting together? (But Calypso…)
Pretty good, but I've never read Maximum Ride… so yeah. I may have missed some, but sue me, I'm tired.
ANYWAYS….
BYE!
Sorry, my story got removed, so I'm a bit late on updating! I was suspended from my account until Friday. *cries at the memories*
Canadian Apologies and Maple Syrup,
Lizzie
I might actually remove this story because of all the bad reviews I have been getting on my re-upload. I'm sorry if I have offended anyone. Lately, 2/3 reviews on my story have been greatly negative and I no longer have a reason to put them in my 'lovely reviews' folder on my email. Instead of smiling, as I used to, I now tear up and feel very sad as I read them. Instead of 'OMG! I love this! THIS IS SO TRUEEEE!' I get '...you're coming off too harsh and I feel offended...'. My policy is that if I get three more bad reviews (a total of 5 then) I will delete this story. I'm sorry to everyone who genuinely likes my story. I just do this for fun, not to stir offence. I am sorry to all that feel offended by this story. Now I see why this is the only story of this kind on Fanfiction.
I remain,
Lizzie
*I'm silently crying as I write this*
FROM THE CHAPTER :'(, Which has been deleted. :)
I know chapters that are just author's notes are not allowed on Fanfiction but I have to say this.
I'm glad everyone has shared their opinions. I am so miserable to see these reviews, I've decided to discontinue my story. The reviews I got are so negative, I cannot take it anymore. Re-uploading was a mistake. I'm sorry if I offended anyone. I will leave it up for those who enjoy it. I hate to have to do this. But, please, keep your nasty opinions of people's stories to yourselves. It feels terrible. Like I said before, five bad reviews and I will delete it and nobody can enjoy my story. I feel selfish, but I can't put up with all the bad reviews.
I am so sorry,
Lizzie
*I am still crying as I write the last words of this story on Fanfiction, the last*
TWO DAYS LATER
Hello,
It's me again. I'm going to continue.
Smiles,
Lizzie