-44 chapters, should be over, BUT IT'S NOT!

"…Chapter 44: And the Story Continues

Chapter 45: NYC

Chapter 46: Chicago

Chapter 47: New Friends

Chapter 48: New City

Chapter 49: New Adventures

Chapter 50: De ja Vu …"

*GAHHHHHHH! This is why every story I read is short and not 50 chapters long with 5 billion adventures! THAT'S WHAT SEQUELS ARE FOR!

-Too Many OCs

"…And, Wren, these are my friends Casey, Joe, Cassandra, Ian, Madelyn, Ursula, Kegan, Quilton, JoJo, MoMo, & Ham.

Casey has blonde hair that was the color of the sun and blue eyes that sparkled with a perfect body and an amazing personality. I was surprised when she told me she never does exercise and hates how she looks.

Joe was OBVIOUSLY a football player. He had brown hair that was BRWN. SHADE #2234 "Warm Mocha" and eyes that were GRN. SHADE #97987987 "African Emerald Green". He was SOO HOT!

Cassandra had bright red hair and deep green eyes. She was OBVIOUSLY Goth because she was wearing a black outfit. She was creepy. Probably gay.

Ian was SUPER McSHIZZLE HOT! OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG! HE WAS SO PERFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! HIS BLONDE HAIR IS SO PREFFFFFFFF! AND HIS BLUE EYES WERE SOOOOOOOOOO DREAMMMMMYYYYYY! HISSSSSSSS BODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD! DON'T EVEN GET ME STARTED ON HIS BOD! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D!

…(insert other useless info here)... and then they waved good bye and headed off to Tanzania for the remainder of this book."

*Wow, author. Thanks for all that useless OC info.

-Useless Detail: EX. 1: Getting dressed

"And so I put on my blue top that is in a low v-neck and has 33 rhinestones across the top. It shows exactly 3.333333333333333334 cm. of my belly and is 5 cm from my short-shorts. Then I put on my 79 cm SLVR SHADE #77777 "White Bliss" colored heels on and walked out the door.

A NORMAL PERSON:

I was wearing a T-Shirt. It was…purple, I guess."

*Shheshhhh. I'd also do too much detail in eating… but I'm too lazy.

-All the guys have a crush on Annabeth, not Piper

"OMG! Thant blonde is so hot. Eh. Her friend looks cool. What is she? Indian?"

*WELLLLLLL It's not like Piper's APHRODITE's daughter or anything… (•u•)

-Demeter=Cereal

" 'EAT YOUR CEREAL!" yelled Demeter as she zapped out of the Agro II."

* C'mon guys… really?

-Bad Descriptions:

" DESCRIPTION: Anniebeth and Percy go on a quest or else thee world wil end.. Be nice its mye first story! Nno Flwames Plz"

*)Spelling

)NAMESSSSSS

)Nobody needs to know that this is your first story!

)Does anyone edit these things?!

Meow. That's all I have to say. Meow.

SORRY FOR THE SHORT CHAPPIE! COMMENT ANY IDEAS!

Ciao for now,

Lizzie

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