FIRST OF ALL…TWO THINGS.
1) CROWN OF PTOMEY IS OUT! :D
2) I PUBLISHED A FANFICTION (more on that later…)
Anyways…
Look at my (somewhat exaggerated) outline of a typical Percabeth story. (MISTAKES ARE ON PURPOSE!)
"I am Annabeth Chase. I am invisible to everyone. I have a crush on Percy Jackson. He is the school hotie. Seriously. Like OMG, his orbs are to die for. Anyways, I have beautiful blonde curls and excusite grey orbs.
One day I was just mindinf my own beeswax when OMG percy came over to me. I was like at th bookshop cause that's where nerds like me hang out.
'Hi. Im percy. You are so pretty.' He said.
'ummmmmmmmmm thaks.'' I sazid
Then he kissed me, we made out, got married and had kids. THE END."
Honestly, Jiper stories are more creative. Mainly because you have to think more about their personalities than with Percabeth.
Anyway… I hate when stories tell you about
)what their eating in unnecessary detail
)what their wearing in unnecessary detail ('I was wearing a long, blue dress' would suffice!)
ALSO! When they are referred to by their ship names.
"'C'mon guys. Chiron called a meeting.' Annabeth nodded as Percabeth stopped making out."
1. WTF
2. WTFF
3. WTFFFFFFFFFF
Dude, that was unnecessary.
When they use (IN THE STORY!)
-u
-k
-lol
*****SAVE IT FOR TEXTING...
JUST SAYING: IF YOU HAVE ANY CRITISISM OF MY STORY, PLEASE PM IT TO ME. IT WOULD BE APPRECIATED. THANKS. :D
I KNOW THAT THIS CHAPTER WAS REALLY HALF-AS*ED, BUT I WANTED T TELL YOU ALL ABOUT THE FANFIC THAT I JUST PUBLISHED FOR ONE OF MY FAVORITE MOVIES, GO FIGURE. IT'S CALLED "MAYBE BRONZE ISN'T SO BAD"!
I SWEAR TO THE GODS THAT FOR EVERY FANFICTION I SEE UNDER
FANFICTION-MOVIES-GO FIGURE
I WILL PUBLISH ANOTHER CHAPTER OF THIS BOOK!
(NOT THAT ANYONE WILL, BUT WHATEVER!)
byee
~Lizzie
P.S. Call me a hypocrite if you want, but I used clichés in it. :D