Hey guys, sorry for the late review. Been very busy with college and work, but I've returned with the next chapter, and right before my 20th birthday (October 8th), too! I'm not entirely sure how many chapters I've planned for this, but I'm just going by the episodes I have and my ideas.

Disclaimer…. Sadly, I don't own anything from Pokemon except my own characters: Angelina and Christina Murakami, Danielle Styles, Jeremy Cretonne, and others you don't recognize from the show.

Chapter 2: Stay In Saffron

"Isn't this awesome?" Dani yelled excitedly over the screaming crowd of Kanto's first Crystalline Concert in Saffron City. She wore a lime green top, a blue skirt, and a black pair of boots, and on a black chain around her neck was a rhine-stone Pokeball.

"Yeah… Angelina can't believe she's hosting this concert with Tony Rocksville." Jeremy replied. He was wearing a black shirt with a purple vest, tan cargo pants, and black sneakers. They had front row seats for tonight's concert; Seamus was sitting next to them wearing a blue shirt with a red vest, black jeans and white shoes. Christina was there also playing with Togepi and TJ.

Suddenly the lights went dark again, and a shirtless guy with a guitar across his neck came riding onto the stage on a Rhyhorn. The huge creature roared and snorted, while the shirtless guy applauded himself.

"Who's Ready to RAWWWWWWWK?" The man yelled, holding the microphone out to the audience, who cheered, "I know I am! Now I'm gonna do y'all a favor, and I'm gonna challenge on of you loyal fans! Yeah! Can you believe it?" Tony Rocksville yelled.

Dani had just opened her Poke Nav to answer a txt message, when the spotlight shined on her.

"We have our challenger folks, but what's this? Is her Poke Nav too important than me?" Tony laughed.

Dani gasped, and stood up from her seat, making her way on stage, towards Tony, who had dismounted his Rhyhorn.

"Don't disappoint me now, come at me with everything you've got!" Tony smirked.

"Go Butterfree!" Dani yelled.

Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh
I'm unbeatable

I'm walkin' down this endless highway
With nothin' but my friends beside me
We'll never give in, we'll never rest
Advanced Battle is the ultimate test

From the earth of land, the sea, and sky
We can never win, but they sure can try

Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh
I'm unbeatable
Pokemon
Advanced Battle
Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh
I'm undefeatable

From the stars and the ancient past
They come to play, but they'll never last

Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh
I'm unbeatable
Pokemon
Advanced Battle
Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh
I'm undefeatable

Oh, oh, oh
Advanced Battle
I'm unbeatable
Pokemon

The Rhyhorn charged at the Butterfree, roaring loudly as it neared, and Butterfree barely had time to flutter out of the way. Moving upwards so the Rhyhorn couldn't reach it, the Butterfree planned its next move. The Butterfree's eyes glowed with psychic power, and it launched a Confusion at the Rhyhorn.

The attack hit the Rhyhorn head on, but its dull mind seemed unaffected. It roared again, and its body suddenly sparked, an electric blast hurtling towards the Butterfree. The bolt lanced through the butterfly, and it shook with electricity, before fainting and falling to the ground.

The crowd whooped and cheered as the display went on, and Dani growled, recalling her Butterfree and grabbed another ball. Suddenly the Shock Wave the Rhyhorn used earlier flashed through her mind, and she let go of the ball. Dani raised her hand and sighed. "I'm out of Pokemon."

"What are you talking about?" Rocksville asked, pointing at her belt, "You've got more right there!"

"No…they will all lose! They are all weak to electricity! I don't fell like putting them through pointless suffering." Dani shook her head, stepping back.

"Well, if you want." Rocksville said, before turning back to the audience, "It looks like my Contender has giving up folks! Lets all give her a round of applause before we go back to Rockin'!"

Just as Dani walked off stage and back to her friends, Angelina appears as the crowd gets louder compared to what Rocksville had. She wore a D&G navy mini dress over black leggings. Her large D&G sliver belt matched her large silver D&G blue-lensed aviators. Her Jimmy Choo navy ankle boots had little silver dangles on the zipper that clanged every time she walked. To complete her outfit, she had worn a silver bra that popped out a bit from her dress, skinny silver bangles, heavy square shaped clear bangles, and a cluster of silver chains and charms around her neck. Her blonde wig was straightened, some strands were curled.

"Hello Saffron City! I'm Crystalline with special guest Tony Rocksville! Thank you for having us come out here tonight! Let's open up with our brand new song 'Out Of This World'!" she yelled out as the crowd went wild when the band struck up lite rock music with a pop-ish upbeat.

Out of this world
Out of this world

(Crystalline)
Your smile, gets me every single time I see you
Your eyes, take me away
I don't, really know what this is gonna lead to
but it's like, I'm floating in space

(pre-chorus)
You take me somewhere that I've never been before
There's a whole new place waitin'
when you open up the door

(chorus)
You're out of this world
I knew that you could make it
you didn't have to fake it
you're never coming down
you're out of this world
you can't get any better
we're gonna last forever
keep your head up don't look down

You're out of this world
(out of this world)
out of this world
(out of this wold)

(Rocksville)
The stars, like diamonds up above our heads are fallin'
I know that wishes come true
Your voice, across the universe you were callin'
Like a song from out of the blue

We're flyin' so high,we're almost at the top
But as long as we're together,I never wanna stop

You're out of this world
I knew that you could make it
you didn't have to fake it
you're never coming down
you're out of this world
you can't get any better
we're gonna last forever
keep your head up don't look down.....

"Wake up, Lina! You're missing May's performance at the Pokemon Contest!"

The gang was resting before they travel for the next concert and Angelina's next frontier symbol when they almost forgot about May's first Pokemon Contest appearance at the Saffron Contest Hall.

"Oh no!" Angelina sat up in shock, then jumped off the bed and ran into the living room. She slid to a halt in front of the TV showing May and her Combusken in a pose right in front of the judges. "Gaah! Should've woken me sooner!" she grits her teeth and grabbed hold of her hair agitatedly.

"And worn a robe before you came out here, too."

"Yeah, nice pajamas though."

"Huh?" Angelina blinked, realizing she wasn't alone and saw her ex-rival Seamus staring with a grin that could match Brock's, while her best friend Jeremy was laughing. She blushed, her attire was a white-colored spaghetti-strapped night dress that revealed her curves and figure, and her hair was messy. "Sorry, I'll-"

"Here are the lucky eight co-ordinators who will continue on into the second round," said an orange-haired woman wearing a dark-blue tank and shorts. "Let's hear it for these hard Pokemon trainers!"

"Does Hoenn's MC Vivian have a twin?" Dani asked, sitting on the couch with TJ (Pichu) in her arms.

"Nope, that's her little sister," Jeremy replied, kissing Dani on the cheek which made her smile. "And the Sinnoh Region's MC Marian is their cousin."

"Cool!" Angelina said, then she gasped when she saw the pictures of the top 8 co-ordinators. "Oh no, Harley's there!"

"You mean the creepy-Cacturne guy showed up?" Seamus asked, receiving a couple snickers from Jeremy and Dani.

Angelina shuddered at the memory of first meeting Harley Temple back in the Hoenn Region.....

(FLASHBACK)

Angelina, Jeremy, Christina, and Amber were talking in a local contest hall lobby while TJ (before given to Dani) was playing with Togepi and Houndoom. Their conversation was interrupted by a tall man with long purple hair under a dark green archer's hat. He wore a purple shirt with his belly button exposed, and the jacket and pants he wore resembled a Cacturne.

Houndoom yelped and fled behind Amber cowardly, leaving the purple-haired stranger to coo over a crying Togepi while TJ was startled in confusion and released a blast of electricity.

"TJ/Togepi!" Angelina and Christina cried out, running to their Pokemon. They got caught in the electrical shock with the man and fell to the ground coughing.

"Sir, are you okay?" Angelina asked, kneeling before the guy and shaking him. She stood up when he stirred and muttered something, then looked up with curious purple eyes that widened in surprise.

"Saved by an angel, my goodness!" the man exclaimed, quickly jumping to his feet and slightly towering over Angelina by three inches when he took her hands into his. "And that adorable Pokemon must've been yours, didn't mind the little Thunderbolt, but your darling sight opened my eyes!"

"Wow, lucky me," Angelina sweatdropped, her two friends and sister stared annoyedly. "I'm Angelina Murakami from Pallet Town."

"Oh I've heard of you, sweetheart. I'm a Pokemon co-ordinator, but you're good at the contests for someone who just collects gym badges." the man winked and pulled out a small box. "The names' Harley Temple from Slateport City, we should battle sometime and talk more over dinner. For now you must try my famous batch of homemade Snickerdoodles!"

"Uhm, sure," Angelina smiled nervously. She motioned to her friends to join her, whom looked very disturbed. "These two are my friends, Jeremy and Amber, and my little sister Christina."

"The more the merrier," Harley sing-songed, smiling as he watched them sample his treat. "So, what do you think?"

"Tasty," Amber said, eating her second one with Christina.

"Yeah, very sweet!" Jeremy agreed.

"I like them, too," Angelina said. "My step-aunt bakes, so I bet she'd love the recipe."

"Oh you kids are just wonderful," Harley waved, blushing happily. "Better than that horrible May-girl, but that's another story."

(END FLASHBACK)

"You could've saved me some," Seamus pouted, his arms folded. "I love Snickerdoodles."

"Sorry? Maybe Angelina has the recipe and will make them," Jeremy chuckled, nudging the girl whom blushed.

"That's if I don't burn them like last batch."

Dani rolled her eyes and shakes her head, "Cookies and Harley, nice combination. Can we please keep watching the contest? We're missing it!"

"A one-y and a two, and a buckle my shoe!" Harley laughed, dancing along side his Ariados whom was pulling at the String Shot wrapped around Wobbuffet.

"The heck is going on?!" Angelina and friends stared at the TV confused.

"Jessie thought she could win using Wobbuffet's Counter and Mirror Coat to backfire Ariados's attacks." Christina explained, giggling at her friend's shocked expressions.

"Yeah, I see," Angelina nodded. "Harley knew better of Wobbuffet's abilities, and used Ariados's String Shot, a defensive attack."

"Well isn't that smart," Dani smirked. "Hey Tina, how'd you know Harley's opponent is Jessie?"

"The round green earrings, and who else has a Wobbuffet like that other than Team Rocket?" Christina suggested.

"That's true," Angelina agreed just as the buzzer went off; MC Lillian announced Jessie's lost and Harley was going into the semi-finals.

By the time Angelina and friends were dressed and left the hotel after having lunch, they arrived at Saffron's Contest Hall for the final match between May's Squirtle and Harley's Ariados.

They were in awe as the battle stage was covered in sparkling shiny Spider Web, but Squirtle was stuck to it and couldn't move.

"Go Ariados, Double-Edge now!" Harley ordered.

Ariados lowers itself onto the webbing and crawls toward it's struggling opponent.

"Go Squirtle, use your Bubble attack!" May called out; watching the baby Pokemon blow out bubbles, but were corrupted by Ariados using its feelers on its body. "Wha?"

"A last-gasp attempt from Squirtle with Bubble attack, but it's completely destroyed by Ariados, and that could do it!" Lillian informed.

"No! C'mon May, get'em!" Angelina yelled.

"Yeah, you can do it!" Ash shouted.

While Ariados crawled faster and faster as her points went down, May gasped as she suddenly remembered something. "Squirtle, Ice Beam attack! Go!"

Squirtle fired off a light-blue beam into the air, sending itself flying backwards and crashing through the webs, also freezing Ariados into a block of ice.

"You did it, Squirtle!" May said happily.

"No way!" Harley gasped, stepping back in surprise.

"YEAH!" Angelina and friends cheered with the crowd. They saw Max, Ash, and Brock standing and supporting in amazement.

"Go Squirtle, Bubble attack!"

Squirtle jumps back onto the web and blows out a barrage of bubbles, breaking the ice around Ariados and sends it sliding backwards.

"Ariados fight back!" Harley yelled, but his Pokemon can't get a grip on the webbing since it was coated in ice.

"You got it now, Squirtle!" May called encouragingly. "Finish up with Tackle!"

"Squirtle-Squirt-Squirtle!" Squirtle slides down the web and smashes into Ariados, sending the spider Pokemon falling through the web and into the stage floor unconscious. "Squirt-Squirtle! Squirtle-Squirt-Squirtle!" the little turtle lands on its opponent and flexes its muscles.

"Ariados cannot continue!" Lillian said over the screaming crowd. "In an impressive come back, May has pulled off the big win here in Saffron City!"

"Yay! May won!" Angelina and Christina cheered; not bothering to watch Harley re-call Pokemon and walks off in disgust.

"Ladies and gentlemen! Join me now as we present May with the prized Saffron Ribbon in honor of her remarkable victory here at the Saffron City Pokemon Contest!" Lillian announced. "Let's hear it for her!"

"We Love You May!" Angelina and Christina yelled; catching the brunette's attention as she waved back to the girls. This also made Ash and his two friends look up and notice them.

When the Saffron Contest was over, Angelina and her friends met with Ash and his friends outside the contest hall.

"Congrats May," Angelina hugged her brother's friend.

"Thanks Angel, so now we're heading off to the Battle Arena for Ash's next symbol."

"That's great, let's catch up again sometime." Angelina said.

While Ash and his friends head out of Saffron City toward the next Battle Frontier Facility, Angelina and her friends walk off with plans for the next concert and a new adventure along the way.

To Be Continued

*Based off the episode 'A Hurdle For Squirtle'.
*May competes and defeats Harley in the Saffron City Pokemon Contest.
*Angelina and friends relax after the first Crystalline Concert in the Kanto Region.
*Angelina remembers meeting Harley in the Hoenn Region.
*Jeremy and Dani are together
*Tony Rocksville is based off the actor Johnny Knoxsville, he shall make another appearance later on.
*the song 'Out of This World' is by Cosmic Blush and Proto Zoa from the Disney movie Zenon Z3: The Zequel.
*Dani battles her Butterfree with Rocksville's Rhyhorn before the concert.

So there's chapter 2, guys! I originally wrote 8 pages, but there's more quotes added in, and the Advanced Theme Song will be taken out after the next chapter. Thanks for reading! All comments are welcomed! I'll be back soon!