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Dear sarge1130
Indeed, a couple of weeks after posting this story for the first time on Deviantart I decided to make an account on here (Made sense since this is one of my favourite sites.) and post it here aswell. As I said in my last post on DA, I went away with my family for my grandfathers first birthday after passing away, But I was still able to update here because I was a couple of chapters behind on this site. On DA you were the only one to take the time to help by giving me feedback on my story and for that I am very grateful. I have been slack and will update on Deviantart as soon as this chapter is posted. (1) I'm sorry, but I have never seen or heard of Flame Of Recca (I don't get alot of anime time these days ( TT^TT). A tad further into story I do plan on showcasing how versatile Enoy's DF can be i.e attack, defence, stealth and even housework (as you've seen). The Hairy Hairy no mi is similar to Mr 3's Doru Doru no mi in the way that the users imagination greatly influences the way they use their power, a creative the person can make more complicated shapes like weapons and armour to even sentient-like monsters. whereas someone who is not very imaginative could only really make a fist at best. (2) I'm glad you like Enyo, it would seem she has a lot of growing up to do. (^_^) and I don't think anyone can win over Bepo's cutness. (3) YES THE BREAD! You can't not have the bread joke, its a classic. Thanks again for the review I hope you continue to enjoy reading my story
Chapter 11 The First day of the rest of your life part 2
'Fight Bepo?' Enyo just watched as Law casually made his way over to the back left of the room and leaned comfortably on the wall. 'He's not even gonna take this seriously... ( -_- ) But then again... now is my chance to get Bepo back for tricking me into being the cook. ' "Alright then, let's go." Enyo said with a confident smile.
"Aaaayyyyyyeeeeyyyyaaahhhhh" Bepo lunged straight towards Enyo Kung Fu style but with a sudden sweep of her now alive hair she quickly stopped his oncoming attack and tied him up, dangling him upside down. Law watched intently. "Ok. Now start again, and this time I want you to engage first and Bepo will try and defend against your attacks." "Ok." Enyo positioned herself with feet about shoulder width apart for balance and right foot slightly infront ready to fight, and after a brief moment swiftly gestured her right arm forward and her hair flew out toward Bepo, about 20 locks formed into clenched fists all aiming for their fluffy target. Over and over again the makeshift hands beat over the bear but he was much faster and blocked every blow. Noticing this Enyo willed a tendril to sweep under the distracted bear and take out his footing, once again hoisting him up like a snare trap. Seeing this was getting them nowhere Law addressed the problem. "Enyo-ya, you're too dependant on your devil fruit abilities. Start again. and this time no powers." "Y-yes captain." Enyo's demeanour changed and she became visibly more anxious with her task but took on another fighting stance none the less. Well... Barely a fighting stance, put up her dukes more like it. Once again the martial arts teddy flew towards a now trembling Enyo, he prepared for what looked like a high kick but instead went low and swept her legs out from under her like she did to him, sending her body crashing to the floor. Dazed but conscious Enyo forced herself up off the hard floor with a red embarrassment etched across her face. 'Why didn't she do anything?' Law pondered but told them to continue. This time it was Enyo's turn to strike first so she tightened her right fist and rather ungracefully ran at the bear. she threw a punch, which Bepo easily blocked and yet again paid her back by kicking her legs out from under her.
Enyo just sat on the ground leaning on her hands with her legs to the side and hair hiding her face. Law had seen enough and pushed himself off the wall and walked over her defeated figure. "Enyo-ya." He addressed but there was no reply, Law lowered himself to her level and pushed some of her obstructing hair out of the way, drawing back the soft curtain that hid her face he revealed a very flushed Enyo with tight lips and puffy cheeks, clearly frustrated and embarrassed. He smirked "You can't fight can you?" Law said actually amused for once at her childish ways. "no." She replied curtly. "Were you ever taught how to fight?" . . . "no." she said a bit softer. Law sighed and rose back up to his full height "Very well then, starting tomorrow Bepo will train you in combat. You will learn how to fight without the need of your devil fruit." Law ordered and extended a hand to help her up off the floor. Enyo reluctantly took his hand and refused to look him in the eye as he helped her up, confirming with a short "yes captain." Before going silent again and staring at the floor. "Now, I have some things I need to see to, Bepo you may go now and Enyo-ya, Jean Bart wants to see you in the navigation room." Enyo's unhappy mood began to be replaced by curiosity and after she bid farewell to her captain and her new "Sensei" she made her way to the navigation room.
Elsewhere . . .
I rolled over in my nice warm blanket and cautiously open my eyes, as if I would go blind if I saw the world too fast. Peering over to my bedside clock the little red digits conveyed the time as being 9:02. "Crap! I was supposed to be at my station at 7:30!" I jumped out of bed and quickly ran across the hall to the bathroom. After splashing some cold water on my face to wake up I swiftly did my hair, brushing my side fringe and bangs down while teasing the rest of my ebony mess in all directions. I was about to leave but realised I wasn't even dressed! So I ran back across the hall to the men's quarters (in my boxers) and threw on a standard white jumpsuit and slipped on my black boots. Now that I was actually wearing clothes I practically flew to the navigation room.
My warpath came to an abrupt stop as I burst through the door and closed my eyes saluting and apologising for my tardiness. Opening them I was met with Jean Bart's shaking head, half disappointed half unsurprised. Even though I've been in the crew longer than him he's a lot older than me, and was a pirate captain before being captured as a slave so I trust his wisdom completely. He probably thinks I'm just some irresponsible, lazy kid. I am only 17 after all. Noticing another presence in the room I turned only to encounter a soul piercing teal eye, and when I focused on the creature it belonged to my breath evaporated in my throat. She was so beautiful, just like Penguin and Sachi said. "Dorian." Bart-San pulled me back to reality and I realised I was staring. If I wasn't blushing before I sure as hell must be now. "This is Enyo, our new crew mate and cook." "I-It's nice to meet you." I managed to choke out. "You too." She nodded. Even her voice was pretty, she sounded like a classy lady but with a sultry edge to it. "So Bart-San, what was it you needed of me again?" And just like that our brief interaction was over. "I wanted to know if you can tell us about the next island? Any information is better than nothing."
"That is true. Well I know the island is called San Avarice, aaand it's supposed to be some fancy holiday destination. The Count would often go there after collecting a large bounty."
"Do you know if there is a Marine base on the island?"
"Hmmm... I don't think so, but I'm not entirely positive."
"Anything else?"
"lemme think. . . Nope, just that it will be crawling with snobby nobles." She shrugged. "Ok" Bart nodded "Thank you Enyo." "No problem." ( ^_^ ) "I'll see you guys later~." Enyo waved as she left the navigation room and headed back towards the kitchen. 'That kid had the most amazing blue eyes I've ever seen. I wonder if he would let me draw him sometime?'
Elswhere. . . again
Law yawned as he went through his notes and double checked Enyo's test results. 'Everything seems to be fine, her iron levels are a bit low but that can be corrected with supplements.' After another yawn escaped he put down his pen and leaned back in his chair, putting his feet up on the desk and his hands behind his head,. Interlocking tattooed fingers tipped Law's fluffy hat down over his eyes that decided he would take a nap. It didn't take long for the peace and quiet to be shattered by a knock on his office door. "Who is it?" The captain grumbled as he rubbed the bridge of his nose. "It's Enyo sir, may I come in?" she hesitantly asked. "Yeh" Enyo made her way cautiously into the office and shut the door behind her. "Hehe, you look comfy." She chuckled
"I was." Law replied flatly.
"Oh I'm sorry! I-I'll come back later." She was obviously anxious about something.
"No it's fine. What can I help you with Enyo-ya?"
The new pirate's face began to redden. "Well you see... Ummm. About that breast exam..." She trailed off
Law grew concerned and sat properly in his chair to give her his full attention. "Is everything ok? Did you find something?!" Her shy gaze met his only briefly before going back to the floor, her blush deepening. "No no." Law silently breathed a sigh of relief and noticed she was nervously fiddling with the hem of her dress. "I - I was thinking about it... And.. I've never actually done one myself and you're a doctor so... I was wondering if that offer for you to check them was still available?"
Heyyyy, me again. Sorry if this chapter is a bit short but I had to stop so I can put an appropriate content rating on the next one.
If you know what I mean. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)