I wrotte this in one day, I had the idea "what if Luffy ended in Etheria after the Whirlpool, Don't take this seriously it was just to pass time and it took me only four hours it was just for fun, I could publish a sequel depending of the reactions to this story.

I considere this as a challenge I give and if no one answer after the 14 jully I will writte it as a real fanfiction.


The members of the rebellion were going to Salineas, the Sea kingdom in order to protect their kingdom from any invasion by sea, they got a ship from a sailor named Seahawk (although some thought he changed his bird name for this one), the 'pirate' accepted to take them after they beat him at arm wrestling, the rebels were :

- Glimmer, the princess of Brightmoon/ headquarter of the rebellion.

- Bow, her best friend and a good archer

- Adora, a deserter from the Horde, an evil empire trying to conquer the world; she was also the new She-ra, defender of Etheria.

Their mission was important but till now the captain was more of a boaster than a sailor, they did all the preparation to the boat without his help or any indication, considering Seahawk was supposed to be an experienced sailor that said a lot; He tried to impress them by fishing a barrel he saw far from them, he took it to the boat with the help of a harpoon, he tried to show them he was a good marksman, he expected to find gunpowder or even rotten food but instead he found a boy with a trawhat sleeping Inside.

"You knew someone was in danger from such a distance !" shouted Bow, impressed by what he believed to be an incredible skill.

"Yes, someone who sailed as long as me couldn't miss that.", it did not happen like he wanted but he impressioned someone, at least.


When the kid woke up, they gave him lemons in case of a lack of vitamine, He ate all the reserve alone and now he was going for the apples.

"Thanks you, I was really angry." he thanked them while they looked at him in awe, not just because of how much he eat but also because his belly inflated in an inhuman size, he was two time Adora's height."Also, my name is Monkey D. Luffy."

"how is it possible ?" an incredulous Adora asked.

"I have no idea." Glimmer told her, she could teleport but even that had no explaination.

"How did you got there ?" asked Bow.

"I was heading to Grandline but my ship got sucked in a Whirpool."

None of them knew what to said, it was obvious why he got into that barrel but if it really got sucked by a whirpool and so far away he must have been Inside for a long time.

"What is Grandline ?" asked Adora since the Horde did not have knowledge of this place.


It was hard to explain what Grandline was with Luffy words and the place he described were unknow to them, "East Blue, Goa, Fushia, Laughtale." thoses names were aliens to them so they just assumed that he got a injury to his head, they could probably find a doctor at Salineas for him; during their voyage, Adora and Seahawk were armwrestling while Luffy was waiting his turn, he also came back to a normal size.

Then the ship shook, they looked to its source and they saw a sea serpent, it was attacking the ship, Adora tried to take her sword to fight the monster but Luffy was faster.

"Gomu go mu no." his arm stretched for at least ten meters behind him before his fist went to the monster's head "pistol" the monster was knocked out from the impact.

Seahawk's jaw toutched the ground in an anime way, bow had stars in his eyes while Glimmer and Adora were just trying to accept what they saw.

"what was that ?" shouted Glimmer.

"My punch as strong as a pistol, I worked on it since I was seven." he answered.

"Your arm ! I'm speaking of your arm !"

"That; I ate the gomu gomu no mi when I was a kid." Luffy told her while Glimmer did not know what the gomu gomu no mi is.


Maybe he was not as crazy as they thought even if the story of his powers were strange, stranger than this story of pirate king but they had more important things to do, when they arrived at Salineas there was no sign of life it was an empty kingdom with a large gate who blocked any ship to enter it.

"Awesome !" Luffy shouted at the view.

Then he surprised them by stretching his arms to the summit of the gate composed by the statues of tritons, he propelled himself right into the castle.

"I think we can forget diplomacy." Glimmer declared a bit worried.


He landed in the bathroom just when the princess was Inside, so even if the princess was alone with her butler they were far from being welcomed.

The princess was named Mermista, Sha was tanned with blue hair, she was glaring at Luffy who had a black eye after what happened.

"We are terribly sorry, princess Mermista, but he is not with us." apologised Glimmer.

"But you brought him here." she blanckly answered.

"We just helped him."

"Anyway, I wasn't going to join your alliance, I mean my entiere kingdom is desert while the Sea gate is falling appart and if the Horde attack us we are dead so no." the mermaid told her.

"But we traveled across the sea to come here."

"Yeah, that sad; butler bring us hors d'œuvres" she asked her servant.

Luffy was staring at her blanckly.

"Do you want to join my crew ?" asked Luffy with a wide smile to her.

"what ?" the tanned girl was incredule at this question.

"what ?" everyone else was shocked by him.

"You're alone here and you are funny, join my crew !"

"What's wrong with you !" exclaimed Mermista with a slight blush on her face.


They finally agreeded when Adora proposed to fix the gate if Mermista join the alliance after, when Adora transformed in she-ra, Luffy was in awe because he saw 'a super hero'; fixing the gate asked a great concentration for Adora and she could not move during all the process.

But suddently, the Horde came with a ship and shot on the gate with a laser, everyone in the kingdom were unpreapared to fight against a warship from so fear was a natural reaction from them.

"A LASER !" exclaimed Luffy in awe at the sign of the weapon and the ship, he was a pirate without a ship and he liked laser so he decided that he wanted it.

The rubberman propelled himself toward the ship before anyone could react.


Catra was a force captain, one of the highest rank in the Horde; she wanted to destroy Salinea and caught her former best friend Adora, she had a crew, determination and was prepared for anything; but not from a flying moron who landed on her.

"Catra !" yelled her colleague, Scorpia, a female scorpion large and muscular.

They were five oldiers in this boat, four on on the deck and one at the canon.

"Who are you ?" asked Lonnie, a human girls.

"I'm Luffy, futur pirate king and I take your ship." he declared with a big smile.

Catra was knocked out from the shock, her comrades had to fight this boy, three against one but he was too skilled, when Rogelio a large lizardman punched him it seemed that Luffy's head flew away but it came back to headbutt the Lizard, none of them could Believe it was true but they saw it, then Lonnie hit him with a stun-baton but even electrified he did not cared and he punched her with so much strenght she lose the air in her pulmons.

The weakest of them, Kyle ran toward Luffy, eyes closed, the pirate just moved a bit to the right and the soldier fell out of the boat, three soldiers were defeated in two minutes by one man.

Scorpia had to leave the canon to face him, she was determined.

"Cool !" Luffy said at the view of a hybrid, he never saw a scorpion tail on someone before, she tried to sting him he every time she tried to attack him he dodged everything easily. "how do you eat with claws ? and can you poop " he asked her.

"Don't ask that to a girl." Scorpia was embarrassed by his questions; she forgot the fight.

"I was just asking, I never saw a scorpion woman before, did you eat a devil fruit too ?"

While Luffy was speaking, Catra got up and tased him with her baton at maximum, she thought he would be dead but he just elbowed her.

"Sorry, it was a reflexe."

Scorpia was angry after that attack toward Catra and tried to fight him harder, she caught him with her claws but he quickly overpowered her, he was stronger than her and that was a surprise to her; then he threw her away from the boat, their attempt to invade Salineas was over in ten minutes because of a pirate.

"Who hou !" shouted Bow while everyone around him were shocked by the display of power, it was out of this world to them.

"I got my ship Luffy said."

"I want him in the alliance" Glimmer told Adora.

It was a weird day for the rebellion but they got an alliance with Salineas and got a powerfull ally, Glimmer couldn't wait to talk about this to her mom.


At the Fright zone, kingdom of the Horde, the soldiers from the invasion were in front of lord Hordak, the leader of the Horde and he was angry, they lose a ship against one man.

"I understand that you followed the orders of Shadow Weavers but you lost a warship against one man !, the rebellion got a ship and if the learn how to make more it could become a serious problem, you did not even destoy it !" he yelled in front of Catra and Scorpia, they were scared of him.

"But lord Hordak, we couldn't win … this pirate had a devil fruit !" she defended herself as she reminded of her conversation with the pirate.

"Devil fruit ?" he asked.

"Yes, Kyle, show him the datapad !" ordened Scorpia to the weak blond.

The bat-like creature, Hordak, looked at the video taken from the captains' badges and at what he saw he became calmer, all his wrath was gone.

"You are excused." he declared.

"really ?" asked Scorpia, glad to be spared.

"I have a more important mission for you, I want this 'pirate' alive, bring him to me and you won't be a force captain anymore but my second in command." he said to Scorpia.

"What !" the soldiers yelled.

It was a deal too beautifull to be true bu Hordak needed of him to leave this world.


Here, it could have too much flaws because of the few time I spent on it but it was for fun and I could try to correct it later, about this story : how Luffy come here was a joke if the Whirlpool was fate while Hordak want to capture Luffy because he knows he is not from Etheria also Luffy won because the soldiers were unpreapared and Garp trainning made Luffy too strong for them, and you knows how strong Luffy was at the start of the journer.

the challenge is this :

- everyone is in character at start

-It is the begining of Luffy's Journey so he won't have the gears (but he can get them later) and he Don't know the haki at the begining.

-Hordak heard about devil fruits before and knows Luffy is not from Etheria and he want to capture him

-Luffy has a ship from the horde he stole.

- at princess prom, if luffy is there he act friendly toward scorpia (and everyone)

-Luffy memories are show in 'the promise'

- weapons like lasers or magic can hurt Luffy.

I hope you like this challenge

Let reviews and tell me what you thought of it

If after the 14 juillet no one answer the challenge I could do a sequel as a side projet of pirate of etheria (I will never let this one down)