How to train your Hiccup

by ShadowxCatx666

Different to other watch their movie stories I have read as there is story before watching movie parts. Hiccup shoots down Toothless like in the film then it goes differently. The vikings react badly to Hiccup and see her as a traitor to the tribe. Hiccup feels betrayed and abandoned by her people but won't let anyone or anything stop her from doing what is right. Female Hiccup

6. Chapter 6

This is not an update. Just need to clear something's up in reference to a review so it's not confusing anyone. I am working on rest of the story but wish to answer a review so everyone who reads this story can understand what is going on.

Vanilla123catnezzer - good to hear it

LunaM303 - don't worry things turn out right for Hiccup

Fanreader26 - criticism is always welcome. I know the summary may seem a little misleading at the minute but I am working on the movie part of the story and how exactly we are going to get to it but it's taking longer than I would like. Keeping in mind writing a fanfiction story and keeping the escence of the original story and characters isn't easy. Taking a movie script, ripping it apart then putting it back together the way you want while trying to keep the escence of the story and characters is harder. Thanks with your thoughts on chapters 1-3 I might do that. For the rest of your review I will get round to editing the before movie story once I have got the movie part if the story up. I know there are large gaps in the story so far but that will be filled in once I have the movie part up as things will be explained in that. I didn't want to do the movie part and have parts of the movie in the story straight away when I wasn't sure what I was doing with it completely. This is not edited yet but will be editing once the rest of the story is done. Hope that clears some things up for you. Thank you for your review it is useful and I hope you do like the rest of the story when I get to put it up.