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the BOLD parts are PAST Scene either in Daya Thought/ Abhijeet Thought or Simply in Flashback Scenes...
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Abhijeet always Scared with His Partner in Calm and Crimes from His College Life… He could not Spot why He come Close to this Silent Figure during His Initial College days….
He still remember His First Meeting with this Young Fellow where He Occupied Abhijeet Fav Bench at Cafeteria….
Abhijeet: Hey… (Figure look at Him heard) ye Meri Jagah hy…. (figure look around then rolled His eyes against Abhijeet in Question mode heard a Clarification as Abhijeet knock over Bench with) Ye Bench….
Figure Look at Him, Stuffing His Open Books inside His Bag, Grabbing His Paratha Roll with Fuzzy Drink and Left the Bench such Easily and Quietly totally Stunned Abhijeet who was Expecting atleast few Angry Glares at least….
Both are Completely Opposite to Each One… Abhijeet is a Fire Ball while Ashoke is Deep Ocean…
The Day by Day Silent Scenario dragging Both not against to Each One but Side by Side….
The Healthy Competition in between Both from Studies to Sports which Spreading from Morning to Night and from College to House….
Ashoke is Living in College Hostel while Abhijeet obviously with His Father and Kid Brother…
Ashoke also Loved and Cared Daya a lot as He does not have any Sibling so Younger than Him although He Personally having a Younger Brother as His Own so Treat Him like a Child and Daya is Both Kid….
Somehow Abhijeet too much Strictness is the Only Issue creating Arguments and Conflict Time to Time between the Hardcore FriendShip of these Two which somehow Weaken this Lovely Knot Slowly but Steadily….
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Voice (Hesitatingly): Hello….
The Journey is Not Hectic or Messy cause of Less Distance, Lovely Weather and Cheap Ticket and Last but not Least Nice Company during Ride although its Little Strange for a Young Lad to Move without any of His Family Member…
Voice 2 (look at Him with): Kahan sy aayey ho…?
The Place is too much Deserted with Weeds and Broken Fences although having few Old Vehicles Parked inside the Big Dusty Yard…
Voice 1 (softly): Mumbai sy… (giving Refrence as) wo Mujhy Ashoke Bhaiyya…
Voice 2 (cut Him with): Acha Acha… (irritating tone) Raam Kahani Nahi… (eyeing at His Crawler with) Raho gy bhi Yahan…?
The Younger Pal Stunned after Hearing it as Ashoke Comments Echoing inside His Ears as…
Ashoke (happily tone): Arry Tum Chalna na Daya… (sweetly) Uncle Gupta na itny Sweet aur Soft hain na….
Daya: matlab… (nautingly) Lala jesy Nhai….
Ashoke (laughs): Hahahha… (scolding Him lightly with) No Bak Bak abt My Friend…
Daya (reminding): He is My Bro too….
Ashoke (tease): Jaldi Nhai Khayal aa gaya…. (smirk) Hain…?
Daya (stopped Him as Both Strolling towards as): Aap ko bhi lagta hy Papa ki tarah kay Main (ask straightly) Lala ko Hate krta hun…
Ashoke (serious way): Kya Nahi lagna chahyey….?
Daya: Ashoke Bhaiyya… (stressing each word) He is the Only One I Loved the Most… (pressed) Always Remember that….
The Man Smiled although His Smile now looking like Smirk when this Flashback Wipes from Daya Vision hearing more….
Voice 2 (Again): hmmm… (annoyingly) Najany kahan kahan sy… Khair… (ordering) ander jao… Rajeev hoga… (instruct) Bata dena… (angry) Buddhy ky Mehman ho (Daya murmur Buddhy Listen more) aur haan (Stressed) Mehmaan hee Ban ky rehna….
Daya nodded and moving inside with Lazy Step as His All Enthusiasm and Happiness Lost just in Smoke after Meeting with Mr. R. P Salunkhy Gupta…
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The Physical Fight turning HeatFul when Two Elderly Man Separate Both Breathless Figure's…
The Dragging and Pushing with few Direct Slaps Hit over the Jaws of Both Abhijeet and Ashoke Mouth's really giving Moment to Halt that Fight after Seeing the Hitter's and after Spitting Blood over Dirt moved to Opposite Direction…
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Fredric (ask): Kahan ja skta hy Sir….?
Obviously He and Mr. Pradyuman having such Strength to Stop that Fight among Friend with Force and now just Discussing the matter as…
Mr. Pradyuman (with sigh): Kahan jaye ga Fredric… (simply) Khud hee Hisaab laga lo…
Fredric (after getting the meaning ask): tou jub Aap itny Sukun sy Bethy hain tou kya Abhijeet ko ye Malum Nahi hoga….?
Mr. Pradyuman (confirmed tone): Hoga kyun Nhai… (asking way) warna Chain sy Baray Sahab Larny ka Ehtamam kr ky aaty….
Fredric (questioning tone): Phir….?
Mr. Pradyuman (now tired way): Pata Nahi Fredric… (sadly) Kahan, Kub aur Kis Baat ka Gussa hy na….
Fredric (giving His Own Opinion as): Shayed Ashoke ki Encouragement ny Mamlaat Kharab kr diye aur (sorrowful tone) Dono ki Dosti mein Farq daal diya…
Mr. Pradyuman (straight): Nahi… (giving the solid reason as) Khauff ny… Darr ny…
Fredric takes Sigh on that Part while seeing Ashoke who was taking Medical Care from Vivek while Abhijeet already Vanished from the Spot….
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The Feet are Hanging from the Footer of that Dirty Bed which Cleaned by Daya with His Own Scarf He Stole from His Big Bro Neck while a Voice Lingering during Cycling His Ankles as…
Daya (innocent tone): Ye kya Baat hui… (disappointing voice) aakhir Main Lala ky Bed pr kyun Nahi So skta ab….?
Papa: Aap Baray ho gaye ho na Bacchy balky (murmuring) hoty hee ja rhy ho….
Daya (whine): Papa… (complaining to His Bro with) Lala dekhyein Papa Bol rhy hain Main Jack and BeanStalk ban gaya hun…
Abhijeet: Aww Papa… (to His Father and Both Father and Son moving around the Youngest say) Aap kitna Ghalat Bolty hain (closing Daya Eyes with Blindfold added) Apna Chotu tou Hulk hy Hulk…
Daya: Lala (patting over His Waist still moving with Help of His Brother and after a bit when Opening those Soothing Eyes by His Bro found a Big Wooden Bed heard ye His Bro as Ye rha Apny Bacchy ka Bara sa Bed, turned and Hugged His Brother and trying to take His Father too in that Hug with) Thank You Lala…. Thank You Papa… (jumping over His Bed with) Yay…. Kya Baat hy… (lay over Bed with) oye hoye… (with wide happy smile) is mein tou Main Poora aa gaya…
Papa (tense way): arry Hum ny Extra Jagah bhi tou rakkhi thi.. ab Us ka kya hoga Abhijeet… (ask) Hain…?
Abhijeet (casual way): koi Nhai Papa… (usual) Hum Daya ko Utha kr Bahar Phaink dein gy… Theek…
The Pouting and Laughing now Stinging inside His Closed Eyes having Tears and Tears….
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The 24 Hours are too much to Restrain HimSelf after getting Each and Every Report of His Kiddo from the Road to Bus to Passengers to Way to Reaching the Destination Safely…
The Next Morning started with a Strong Announcement with All Preparations at Dinning Table…
Abhijeet (announcing): Main Ja rha hun Usy leny… Bas…. (to His Father) aur Mujhy koi Nahi Roky ga….
Papa (ask): aur Tumhein lagta hy Wo Tumharay Sath aa jaye ga…?
Abhijeet (arguing): Kyun Nhai aayey ga… (telling about His Multiple Options with) Zabardasti Khench Khaanch ky warna Maar Peet aur Behosh kr ky laany ka bhi Option hy Mery Pass Papa… (in tough tone having shade of doubt as) Mujhy tou Sach yehi lug rha hy in Sub ky Peechy Ashoke Nhai.. (straight) Aap ka hee Hath hy…
Mr. Pradyuman standup from His Dinning Chair while Folding the NewsPaper and Tell…
Papa (softly): Wo Nhai aaye ga Abhijeet….
Abhijeet (ask in rash): aur Aap ko kyun is Baat ka Yaqeen hy…. Ain…?
Papa: Kyunky Wo Humein Chor ky Nhai, (little low tone) Khud ko Hum sy Durr ly gaya hy…
Abhijeet (shout): Tou kya Jaany dun Us ko….?
Papa (calm voice): Intaizar karo…
Abhijeet (ask): aur Wahan….?
Papa (now in His Specific tone): Tumhein Us ki Safety pr Shak Nhai hona chahyey….
Abhijeet (understanding but still arguing with): pr Aap Us Kharosh Buddhy sy Waqif hain… (wet tone) Tarsa dy ga Mery Bhai ko…
Papa: Ye Raasta Khud Daya ny Chuna hy… (telling Him) Chalny do Usy… Kaanty Nikalna Us kay Hath hy…. aur (remind) Salunkhy itna bhi Kharosh Nhai hy…
Abhijeet (disagreeing with): Hunh… (grumble) haan Bas Dono mein 19/20 ka hee Farq hy…
In Return He got a Tough Glare which Shut His Mouth even His Attempt of Leaving House with His Stuff…
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Voice: Good Morning Beta….
A Nice Handsome Figure coming from Upstairs in Formal Dressing and taking His Chair with a Greet heard…
Daya (low voice): Morning…
Man (asking): Ye kya… itna Dheema Morning… (eyeing over His Cereal bowl where Daya playing Pinball with Spoon say) btw Khailna Nhai hy is sy Khana bhi hy isy…
Daya (suddenly): wo na Rajeev Bhaiyya… (telling about His Fav as) Main na ye OatMeal Nhai Khata… Mujhy na Chocolate…
Mr. Gupta (strong): Baap ka Ghar Nahi jo Farmaishein Poori….
The Short Heighted Man Left the Kitchen from Back Door after giving a Blaze over Daya who down His Face while Ignored Rajeev Embarrassed Face…
Daya (grumble): Kharos Uncle… (murmuring to Himself) Papa ny tou Mujhy kabhi aisa Nhai kaha aur Lala tou Meri hr Fav Cheez ka Stock rakhty thy….
Rajeev: Kya Sochny lagy Daya… (softly) Aaj ye Kha lo.. Kal Main Chocolate Flavour la dun ga … Ok….
Mr. Gupta (again taunt): Apni Salary kay Hindsun pr bhi Nazar rakhyey ga….
Both (with making face): Kharosh…
The Smile turned Wide after the Two Voices coming out with Same Term from Daya and Rajeev Throats…
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Daya (ask): Aap Kharos Uncle ky kaun hoty hain…?
The Two days Routine atleast telling Him Only the Existence of these Two Members in such Big Yard having Pent House too although All Covered in Dust and Dirt…
Rajeev trying to give Him Company although its Tough for Him cause He is doing His Job in a Hospital nearby to Place…
Rajeev (simply): Bhateeja… (clearing) Un kay Bhai ka Beta… (telling) Mery Dad and Mom Aik Hadsy mein Expire ho gaye thy tab sy Main Uncle ky Pass hee hun…
Daya (sad): Haaa… (jerk head) Expire… Bad Word….. (telling about Himself) Meri bhi Mom Nhai hain… (lovingly) We Lost Her Life but Not Her Love and Soul….
Rajeev (smiled with): Medical Profession ki wajah sy aisy Kehny ki Aadat par gayii hy… tou (ask) Tumhein Apni Mom Yaad aatii hongi…?
Daya (telling): Kafi Kum… basically Main kafi Chota tha na tou Mom ki Death ho gayii.. (add) Mujhy Lala ny Paala hy….
Rajeev (taking a sip of tea as Daya eating Ice Cream): hahhaha… (rhyme) Lala Paala…..
Daya (embarrassingly laugh as): Heheheh… Papa ny bhi…
Rajeev (naughty): matlab just for Icing….
The Laughing was too much Fresh and High having Many Loving Colors regarding Relations….
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Next Morning, the Chance coming in Reality when Daya find a Bowl full of Chocolate Cereal with a Bunch of Keys placed over Marble Counter of Kitchen takes Him to a Past Ride…
Abhijeet (sitting over Bed with Loving tone): Aww… Mera Gudda… (ask glancing at Screen with) kya Dekh rha hy….?
Daya (enthusiastically): It's a Movie Lala… (telling happily) Cereal Killers…. Is mein Sub Log Cereal Khaty hain aur Sub ko Krinch….
The Abrupt Changing of Channel with Wide Eyes and AINNNN Dissolved in Loud Tantrum created by His Little Brother still Spread a Smile over Young Fellow Lips after Hearing this Story when the Dude was Not coming to His Teen Days Multiple Times from His Big Brother….
He was coming back in Current Finish His Bowl while when coming out at Parking Lot with Key Bunch, saw a Cham Chamati Vehicle with a Voice….
Mr. Gupta (ordering seeing Him as): Chalo… (telling) Betho…
Daya (with Bright Face): Sacchi….
Mr. Gupta (teasingly): Nahi… Mazaq ho rha hy yahan….
Daya (under breath): Gandy Buddhy Baba….
The Gunning of Engine, the Changing in Gear Shaft, the Spring of Accelerator Shoot and Vehicle Rushed across the Big Yard….
Mr. Gupta Look at the Young Lad with Keen Interest found another Figure taking place beside Him with a Smile…
Rajeev (seeing the moving vehicle): Kesa hy….?
Mr. Gupta (eyeing the Driver with His Handling add): hmmm… (Appreciate tone) Spark tou hy…
Rajeev (again): Phir… (asking) kya Khayal hy….?
Mr. Gupta (simply although Rajeev already found the Interest): Acha hee hy….
Both Audience Entertain Themselves with the Circular Path where the Driver Enjoying the Ride or Happy after seeing Visitors Sparkling Eyes by Showing His Initial Expertise…
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The Man really Sad seeing the Emptiness in those Deep Expressive Eyes which always makes Him Scared or say Enthusiast….
Ashoke (calming His Buddy with): Arry… Jany bhi do Abhijeet… (casually) Bacchy Aapus mein Lar jaty hain… School Fights hoti hain…
Abhijeet (strong): Not with My Brother… (stressed) Understand….
Ashoke (up His hands with): Okay Okay… Cool…. (trying to lighten the moment with) Ab Pata chala… (sitting over bench with) is Bench pr Stamp laga hua kyun hy… Bhai pr Nazar rkhni hoti hy…
Abhijeet (agreed easily): Haan… He is My Only Reason to Live…..
Ashoke (again): pr Abhijeet… (trying to understand His Point too as) Tumhein Nahi lagta kay is tarah kr ky Tum Usy Over Shadowed kr rhy ho… (softly) Usy Khud bhi Apni Laraiyaan larny ka Mauqa tou do Yaar….
Abhijeet (raising brow): Kyun… (tell) Main hun na Usy Protect krny ky liye…
Voice: Over Protect….
Abhijeet (seeing the Man joined Both): Papa….
Papa: Nahi Beta… (sitting with them adding) Ashoke is Right… Tum hr waqt jis tarah Us ko Safe rakhny ki Koshish krty ho na… (attempting as) ye Usy Suffocate kr rha hy…
Abhijeet (standing with): tou kya karun Papa… (moving ahead with tears as) Jaany dun kya Usy bhi… aisy hee… By Basi sy…..
The Wet tone, the Sudden Quietness while the Slouchy Posture of a Father Indicating about any Hidden Secret in between this Father and Son Duo Unknown by Ashoke…
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Daya: Hunh…. (telling His Father about the Latest Fight Scenario as) pata hy Aap ko.. (adding) Sub kitna Mazaq Ura rhy thy… (angry tone) Bol rhy thy kay Daya Ek Mukka bhi Nhai laga saka Us Nikhil ko…
Papa (calmly): tou Aap ko Un ko Mukka laga kr Dikhana tha na…
Daya (rash): kahan sy Dikhata… (tauntingly) aa gaye thy na Hawaldar Sahab…
Papa (admonishing tone): Daya… Buri Baat hy na Bacchy…
Daya: Papa… Buri Baat Nahi hy… (irritatingly) aakhir Main Defend tou kr skta hun na Khud ko… (sadly) School mein Judo Classes lii hui hain.. already Lala ny bhi Khud Mujhy Fighting Tips diye hain na tou (ask annoyingly) kub Azmaon ga Main wo sub… Haan…?
Abhijeet (entering inside with): Jub Waqt aa jaye tab…
Daya (grumbling): Aa gaya Waqt….
Abhijeet (strongly): Daya…
The Lad look at Him and then Left the Dinning Hall which just Complete after Joining Abhijeet who just Late cause of taking Shower…
Daya (leaving table with): Good Night….
Papa (trying to stop Him after standing from His Chair): Arry… Khana… (calling) Daya…. Daya…. (turn to Abhijeet with Displeasing tone) Bara Nahi hony do gy na Tum Usy…
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The Classes with Practice's started from Next Morning which is really too much Hectic for a 17 years Old where the Fridge is mostly Empty, Water Pressure is extremely Low in Shower, Drinking Water is Warm, Bed is Short as per His Height and Built, Walls and Floor really Dirty although Bed Sheets and Pillows giving Him Only Itching and Itching…
It's just His Big Brother Lesson's got by Daya because of Travelling to Different Towns or say Cities Relax Him regarding any Skin Allergy….
They mostly Travelling and obviously where Abhijeet, there Daya so He knows how to Survive in such Messy Place's….
He easily got that Kharos Uncle Personally does not Like Home Chores and obviously can't Afford any Maid too….
He is Only Working in His Old Garage where Once in a while Some Racing Car coming for Repairing and giving Him Few Notes for Rainy Days while in Other Hand, Dr. Rajeev Salary is basically Fulfilling their Working and Living Needs….
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Daya could not have much Money and now He is Cursing although He was Banned for having More Money than 1000 Rupees in Month after He caught Red Handed doing Smoking at Back Yard of His School…
Daya: hunh… (seeing few notes in His fist with) Us Suraj ki wajah sy Mery Paisy bhi Cut gaye… (angry over Himself with) Cigarette Wigeraate tou Choro… Lala ny tou Lungs Specialist tak ko Bulwa liya tha… hunh… (sadly disappointing tone) Aik Cigarette ka itna Bura Anjaam.. aur (reminding the taste of tobacco with) thi bhi kitni Gandi… Ewwww… (making face with) itna Dhuwaan aur itni Khansii… pata nahi (thoughtful) Log Us kay Addict kesy ho jaty hain…
He always Mesmerized seeing Suraj and His Group mostly Bullying, Smoking, Harassing Younger Kids at Back-Yard of School…
He doesn't like that Group and having few Verbal Sparring in His Earlier Classes or Meetings but when Suraj Challenged Him, Obviously Daya really turn to Abhijeet Brother with…
Daya (snatching Cigarette from His Lips with): Lao….
He Snatched the Lightened Cigarette from the Mouth of Suraj and just Suck a Breath Doubling into Fits of Cough surrounded by Erupting Laughter and when He Look Upwards with Tears in Eyes due to Coughing find mostly all in Ground while He was in His Brother Iron Grip….
The Few Low Blows He got over His Back really Seeing Him Stars where Ashoke takes Abhijeet Far while His Father said….
Papa (angrily): aur bhi koi Shauq reh gaya hy tou Shabzady Aazma lein….
Daya (having Luke Warm Water and Smokers Gum in front of Him from His Brother say): Papa… (telling the reason with) Suraj ny Mujhy Challenge kiya tha…
Abhijeet: haan tou jao (smack over His head with) aur bhi jo Harkatein wo krta hy na wo bhi Poori kr lein Sahab….
Ashoke (dragging Him with): Acha Abhijeet… Choro… Chalo Tum… (telling about the clutter They already Created with) abhi wahan bhi Phailawa Sameetna hy….
At Night, Daya Personally called Ashoke at Night from His Cell Phone which His Brother Gifted Him for His Good Grades in Exams with…
Daya (ask): kya hua Ashoke Bhaiyya… (tensely) Larai hui kya Aap Logun ki…?
Ashoke: wo Choro… (detailing Him) wesy bhi Principle aur School Staff aur Students ki hee itni Complains theen kay Suraj kay Parents Khud hee Sharminda hoty rahy… wesy, (naughtily) Aapus ki Baat hy Choty Partner… (asking although winking at someone with) Kesa laga, Hero banna….?
Daya (making bad voice and face with): Aghhhh…. Ewwwww… (telling about His Experience as) Sachi Ashoke Bhaiyya… itni Gandi.. No Taste… bas Dhuwaan Dhuwaan aur itni Khansii… (telling about the issues with) Mera Gala bhi Karwa ho gaya.. abhi Papa sy Chup kr Ice Cream Khai tou kuch Better hua hy… pata Nahi Log Kyun Smoking krty hain.. Hunh…
Ashoke (smilingly): tou aagy kya Irady hain…?
Daya: ab (with pause) Drinking…
The OYE really Dipped inside a Loud Cute Giggly Laughing Voice erupting from the Device really brings a Big Smile over His Lala Lips who was at Ashoke House Hearing All in Speaker….
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