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The Entrance is Quite Shocking as the Man is Completely Boycott to Come inside this Residence from almost 4 Months, Opened the Mouth of Father and Son who comes close grabbed Abhijeet Upper Arm and Tell in His Soft Straight tone….
Ashoke (straight): Daya ICU mein hy….
The Bag fell from Abhijeet another Arm Grip while Mr. Pradyuman and Abhijeet rushed with Ashoke to the Reason of their Lives….
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The Hospital having Police and Media Little Confused Thrice as Ashoke Only got Gupta Uncle Call and rushed to Pick Abhijeet and Pradyuman Uncle without asking much….
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They Immediately taking inside the Separate Ward where Daya already in UnConcious mode upon Life Support System….
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Abhijeet just Pushed Rajeev who is trying to Entertain and then giving His Best Attempt at Ashoke too while entered inside the ICU with Cracked Heart and Teary Eyes with His Father….
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Ashoke really feeling Alone in this Big Crowded Corridore so sit over a Chair and thinking about last few months which pressing Hammer on His Nerves to Support or say Extra Encourage Daya on His this Interest….
Ashoke (happily patting over Daya soulder with): Wah bhae, Apny Chotay Partner bhi ab (sitting over stairs beside Daya with) Champion banny ki Daur mein lug chuky hain… hain bhae….
Daya (in disappointed tone): Kya Ashoke Bhiayya… (stressing) 10th aaya hun Main…
Ashoke (with shocking tone): Arry Sach… (in pleasant tone) Main tou samjha Last aayey ho…
Daya (again in low tone): Wo bhi aa hee jaon ga….
Ashoke (now in His usual way): Daya… (displeasingly) kya ho gaya hy…
Daya (detailing Him as): Aap ko malum hy 4 Race mein Main Part ly chukka hun, sub mein aisy hee 16, 12, 17, 10… hunh… (Sadly) Lala Apni Second Race mein hee 3rd aa gaye thy… aur Main… (jerking head with) just Disappointment….
Ashoke (again softly): Beta, Disappointment kiya… (telling him as) Us waqt Kum Log Part bhi leety thy, ab tou Racers kitny hoty hain 30/35 in Simple District level.. City Level mein tou aur Participants bhi hoty hain…
Daya (still in same tone): Phir bhi, Main ny na Papa ky Room sy Chupky sy (picking an Photo Album from His side with) ye Album nikala hy… Dekhyey (opening page) Papa ka Face Dekhyey aur Lala ki Smile aur ye Dekhyey (showing few current ones with) Mery Waqt… Farq Saaf hy Ashoke Bhaiyya…
Ashoke (again): Daya Beta….
Daya (in wet tone: hr Samy… aisy Last Numbers pr aana thori Acha lagta hy… (with hopeful tone) Main ny Papa aur Lala ko kabhi Disappoint Nhai kiya.. pr ab… (sorrowfully) Lala Mujhy Practice bhi Zyada Nhai krny dety… Pata Nhai… Main (seeing the big Happy smile over His Father Face in Photograph with) Papa ky Chehry pr aisi hee Light dekhna chahta hun aur Lala ki is sy bhi Bari Smile… Apni Kamyaabi sy… Apny liye… (hearing His Father Call from Inside) Daya…. (Daya replied) Jee aaya… (now standing and moving with) shayed Main Buht Bara Soch rha hun.. hain na Ashoke Bhaiyya aur Main tou Chota hun na… (trying to make Him Little Enthusiastic as) Baray Kaam Zara Mushkil hy… wo Apna tou kuch aisa hee hy…. (again calling back to His Father Call with) Jee.. Comin Coming… (to Ashoke with teary smile) Tata Bhaiyya…
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Somehow that Small Sentence turn such Meaningful and Strongly Impact a Hard Nail over Ashoke Heart who started that Pushing session without Abhijeet Permission/Liking/Suggestion/Opinion and All…
Abhijeet (wrapping His Cuff with): Ye kya Chakker hy Daya… (sitting over table with) Papa bata rhy hain Tum 4 Din sy 1 Ghanty ky lie Ghayeb ho jaty ho… (uttered) Ain…
Daya (munching carrot with): Lala… (dragging Plate towards Abhijeet side with) Papa na bas Breaking News Banaty rehty hain aaj Kal…
Papa (scoffed): Barkhurdar….
Daya (nodded with): Haan Haan… ye Ba Khabar Sun rha hy.. (back to Abhijeet) arry Lala Ashoke Bhaiyya kay Pass jata hun…
Papa (coming with Chicken Roll Plate, sit on His Chair with): Kehriyet… (tease) ye Bary Miyaan sy Choty Miyaan Sub Ashoke ky hee Gun Gany lagy hain Aaj Kal…
Abhijeet (picking Roll and grabbed Ketchup Bottle with): Main Nahi gata… Wo tou (mock) Aap hee Us pr Waari jaty hain…
Daya (laughing as taking ketchup bottle from His Bro hand with): hahhahah… kya Lala… (repeating) Waari…. Sach (naughtily) Papa ny Urdu as Foreign Language ly kr na Humara Kabara hee kr diya hy….
Abhijeet (pointed out): Beta Jee… Baat ko Ghamao Nahi…
Daya (biting piece with Yum and add): Arry Lala… Practice Samjhy… (with wink) Practice makes Man Perfect….
Abhijeet (murmuring): Practice…..
Ashoke is Brilliant and giving Tuition to those who Contacted Him even at their time Abhijeet also taking Help from Him especially in Mapping and Design Accuracy as He was Dealing His Family Construction Business and having More Practical Working Experience than Other's…
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Abhijeet does not Pressed about the Issue till One day during coming towards His House, He found Daya rounded by a Cheering Mob who was Shouting for His Winning over Racing Track….
Abhijeet (angrily): Tumhein Kaha kis ny tha aur (strongly) Tum hoty Kaun ho Daya ky baary mein koi Faisla leny walay… (rash) haan…
Ashoke (shockingly): Main hota Kaun hun… haan.. (repeating) Main hota kaun hun…
Abhijeet (agreed): Haan… (pointing) Tum… (chewing each word) He is My Brother Ashoke… Samjhy….
Ashoke (calm): Haan… (accepting tone) Samajh gaya….
The Acceptance Comment was too Cold but Abhijeet could not find the Resistance as Daya will Not going after this Argumnt in between Both…
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Abhijeet Discussing the Matter to His Father and feeling HimSelf a Complete Stupid after finding it as…
Abhijeet (stunned): Aap Jaanty hain… Ohhh.. (taunt) Good….
Papa (strong): kyun Tumhein koi Aitraz…?
Abhijeet (protest): Papa…
Papa: Kya Papa… (reminding) Usy ye Raasta Dekhany waly Tum thy Abhijeet….
Abhijeet (angry after getting the Correct Blame with): tou Mujhy kya Malum tha…
Papa (meaningfully): Tumhein Apny Bhai ki Abilities pr Shubah Nhai karna chahyey tha…
Abhijeet (again): Aap ko Pata hy kitna Dangerous hy aur Ashoke… (harshly) wo Usy Mentally Prepare kr rha hy…
Papa (casually): Haan… tou… (add) Healthy Shouq hy… aur Hum Tum Bethein hain na…. Phir….
Abhijeet (again getting weakness of His Points whine): Papa…
Papa (now in His Famous Straight tone): To be Honest Abhijeet… (pointing) ye Aag Tum nay Us kay ander lagaii hy… (softly) kuch Shauq Jaker lety hain Insaan ko… warna ab tak (teasingly) Tum Khud Nikl aaty Is sy… (seriously) Isy Bujhany ki Koshish Na karo… Bharak gayii tou Hath sy Nikl jaye gii…
Abhijeet (displeasingly): matlab Ashoke jo kr raha hy Saheh kr rha hy…
Papa (sodt): Wo Usy Track ky ander rakh rha hy…
Abhijeet (rash): Aap ko malum hy Wo Saala Usy Wahan Jany ky Gur bhi Batayey ga…
Papa (raising brow): tou… Ye tou Acha hy…
Abhijeet (mock): Ahan… (ask) Kesy….?
The Father giving a too much Meaningful Look over His Elder Son who could not Handle it and Leave the Place atonce…..
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Abhijeet and Mr. Pradyuman coming out from ICU room where Only seeing the Numb White Stark Face of their Link of Life lying over Bed wearing Many Beeping Sounds Devices just giving them Pain and Pain….
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Abhijeet found Ashoke and Rajeev Talking at Corridor… the Anger Burns His Emotions with such Huge Spark which He Splashed by giving a Hard Push over Ashoke Chest and the Scare which coming in Both Figures Eyes and Throats Froze Him for a moment…
Rajeev with His Reflexes grabs Ashoke Arm and Pushed Abhijeet in Back with an Angry Snarl as…
Rajeev (snarl): Dimagh Saheh hy….. (to Ashoke) Ashoke… Calm… (shouting in Panic) Staffff… Stretcher….
The BloodLoss Face of Ashoke, Trembling of Lips and Pain Contorted Face with a Small Tear Leaking from His Eyes giving Something New where Ashoke Shifted to Stretcher while Rajeev and Staff takes Him towards ER although Abhijeet Personally found a Hard Grip over His Arm from His Father so Abhijeet turned and Taunt to His after UnGriping His Arm from His Father Hand as…
Abhijeet (angry taunt): Main hee shayed Aik Ullu ka Pttha hun yahan…
Obviously His Father Face Instantly Telling Him His Known Knowledge about whats going on with Ashoke few minutes back who gives a Stern Look at Abhijeet with a Tired tone as…
Mr. Pradyuman (tired tone): Abhijeet… Please….
The Man Stomping His Feet and Left the whole Corridor in a bit while the Old Man really Pressing His already Tensed Nerves…
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After almost Half an Hour, Rajeev Joined Mr. Pradyuman still sitting over the Bench against ICU Room so sat with Him heard…
Mr. Pradyuman (ask): kesa hy Ashoke…?
Rajeev (softly): Theek hy Uncle… (thanking way) Shuker Buht Hard Hit Nhai tha… (again consoling Him as) Daya Theek hy Uncle… Baaqi tou Doctor abhi Aap ko bata dein gy but Honestly, He is Fine….
Mr. Pradyuman (nodded with sweeping the whole corridor having few family members of patients admitted inside ICU, asked): Salunkhy kahan hy…?
Rajeev (simply): Un ko Police ny Arrest kr liya hy….
The Man Gasps and Stand Up, just Diverted as a Doctor Approached towards Him with a Nurse Call as Daya Pradyuman Family….
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Abhijeet who was coming back with Slow Steps Fast His Movements and before Mr. Pradyuman look back at Doctor face after Not Finding His Oldest Son, feel a Occupied Place beside Him…
Doctor: Hello (shaking hand to Both with a Small Intro) Main Dr. Rohan Kumar hun.. Daya Mery Under Treatment hy (towards Bench) aayey please… (after Mr. Pradyuman and Abhijeet Settling, Rohan sat with Soothing tone) Mr. Pradyuman, Seriously it's a Miracle, but Daya is Completely Safe and Sound…
Abhijeet (tauntingly): tou itni Machines sirf Paisy Banany ky liye lagai hain…?
Dr. Rohan Biwild and a Specific Flare appeared over His Eyes Confused Abhijeet while Listen Doctor Smiley tone….
Dr. Rohan (briefing as): Aik IV Pole, One Pint Blood ka tha aur Aik IV Pole Drip Bag ka tha, jo kay (pressingly) Dono Khatam ho chuky hain tou Hata diye gaye hain… (adding more) Aik Heart Monitor hy, jo kay bhi ab Hataya ja chukka hy.. (more) aik Respiratory Moniter hy cause Daya ka Oxygen Mask Hata kr ab Usy Nasal Canula pr Shift kr diya hy… (softly) Spine ko Alleviate krny ki Device bhi ab Hata dii gayii hy… (add) Neck Gauge abhi laga rhy ga.. baaqi (smirky) Bed sy Utaar kr Usy Floor pr Rakhna Mera Nhai Khayal Aap Pasand karein gy…
The Small Smiles Spreading across Rest Figures Lips while Abhijeet getting Some Familiar Reminiscence from the Calmness….
Mr. Pradyuman (to Doctor): Daya kub tak DisCharge ho jaye ga…?
Abhijeet (added): aur Travelling kr payey ga…?
Dr. Rohan (simply): dekhyey Discharge tou Wo Kal Shaam tak ho jaye ga agar (stressing much) Sub aisa hee rha jis ka Mujhy Yaqeen hy… magar (sighing) Travelling.. I think almost 15 days baad… (telling) Usy Jerks Kum sy Kum lagny chahyey… Baaqi Jub Wo DisCharge hoga.. (sweetly) Hum aagy ki Medical Care ka Chart with Prescribed Meds Aap ko dy dein gy…
Abhijeet (ask): aur Daya ko Hosh….?
Dr. Rohan (seeing His Wrist watch with): abhi tou Aik Ghanta lagy ga… Aap Log Relax ho jaye… He is really Fine (stand up and turn towards Rajeev with) Bhaiyya Nahi aayey Kya…?
Rajeev (soft): Emergency mein hy…
Rohan (towards Him with): kya hua Rajeev Bhaiyya… (tense tone) Bhaiyya Theek tou…
Rajeev (pattng over His Arm with Relaxing way): arry Kuch Nhai.. Itni Lambi Travelling thi na… (Relaxing way) Main ny hee Zabardasti Lita diya.. Tired lug rha tha…
Rohan (moving with): acha Main Dekhta hun…
He turns but after Hearing an Announcement where He want to be Report at Recovery Room on Immediate bases Completely Changed His Running Path…
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Abhijeet got the Familiar or Similar kinda Impression but as He Met Rohan few Years back so Hazel the Face Resemblance now Standing with…
Abhijeet (grabbed Rajeev Collar and in His Stone Cold tone ask): kya hua hy Ashoke ko…?
Rajeev (tackling His Collar and in Straight tone): Heart Surgery… 2 Stunt daly hain… Aik Hafty Pehly hee Release hua tha…
He Left the Corridor in Rash shade while Abhijeet turn to His Father and Teased Him as….
Abhijeet (tease): ab ye bhi Confirm kr dijyey kay Maa Jee ki Maut hui thi ya Un ko Qatal kiya gaya tha…?
He Jerked His Posture and went towards Reception while His Father sat over Bench again with a murmur…
Mr. Pradyuman (murmur): Jaaty Jaaty bhi Taunt krna Nahi Bhoola… (look at upward with) Shanti chali gayii magar Apni ye Aadat Pukhta kr gayii Apny Bety mein…
The Door of Room Opened with a Bang and a Closed Eyed Patient Open His Peepers heard…
Abhijeet (rashly): Mujhay Batany ka Irada tha ya Apny Sath Qabar mein ly jana tha…
Ashoke (instantly): Humaray yahan Jalaty hain…
Sometimes Abhijet really Beats by this Man Cool Spontaneous, Witty and Accurate Response which really Shut His Throat such Tight Not to Open again and there He Uses His Volume-tic Vision to Retaliate…
Abhijeet (murmur): Bastard….
Ashoke (calmly): I got it… Very Early…
Abhijeet (dismissing with): Bako Mut… aur (ask) ye Dil ka Roag Kub sy laga liya… Ain…?
Ashoke (simply): Pushtaini Jaidad hy…
Abhijeet can't Control and burst Laugh bring a Sweet Smile over His Buddy Lips too…
Ashoke (sadly): Mujhay Idea Nahi tha kay Wo Larka itna Barh jaye ga…?
Abhijeet (shocking tone): kaun Larka…?
Ashoke (confusingly): Nikhil… (tell) Gupta Uncle ny Fire kiya tha na….
Abhijeet (pressing teeth although wandering off with): Saaly Mian hee Aik Jahalat ki Dukaan reh gaya hun….
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