Raptor Abilities

"I was not a nest wetter!" Peregrine yelled appalled.

"Indeed, you were." Rile laughed. "Master Zeal would often complain about it."

"GAAHHH!" Peregrine huffed and fell onto his back in defiance of the truth. "How did we even get onto this subject?" Rile's face appeared in Peregrine's field of vision. It blocked out the sight of the crescent moon in the night sky.

"Well, first you asked if there were any embarassing habits your brother had as a chick. I answered no, and then mentioned that you had one. You asked me what and from there I began to explain-" Rile elaborated.

"It was a rhetorical question, Rile." Peregrine interrupted. He flipped backwards off the ground and in front of Rile. "Let's just get back to the training please. We had just finished sparing, and you said we were going to go on to using Rampage now."

"Very well, master Peregrine." Rile chuckled, but his face soon grew stern. "Are you sure you're ready for this, master Peregrine? This next part is quite difficult and may result in a great deal of pain."

"I've eaten, had a nap, and answered nature's call. I'm ready." Peregrine bounced from foot to foot eagerly.

"Good. Now concentrate and do exactly as I tell you, and I garuntee you will tap into your primal side." Rile circled Peregrine with a sturdy and diligent gaze. "Now close your eyes and listen." Rile said almost harshly. Peregrine did as he was told. "Concentrate on anger."

"How do you do that?" Peregrine questioned.

"Think of all that enrages you, young one. Think of dominating all enemies that oppose you. Think of pure power!" Riled yelled in encouragement. Peregrine grimaced as he focused, eyes closed but determined. "Speak what think, young one!" Rile demanded.

"I feel anger...towards the humans." Peregrine stated.

"Good, good. Continue." Rile said circling the young raptor.

"They took me...and Zeal. We didn't...even do anything...to deserve it." Peregrine growled. "Why us?" His rough hide began to flash from brown and red in consistent intervals. Wind began to swirl in the open field Rile had chosen as training ground.

"Yes." Rile beamed with joy. "You're almost there. Push yourself. Don't let go of the anger!"

"It's starting to hurt." Peregrine hissed in agony.

"Push through it! You're almost there! Give yourself that final edge!" The Utahraptor yelled.

"I...I...I..." Peregrine struggled. "I can't!" He dropped to his hands and feet as his body stabilized itself to it's normal state. The velociraptor was breathing in heavy gasp, struggling for air.

Rile walked over to Peregrine. "Stand up, youngling. We will try again." His tone left no room for arguement. Peregrine rose to his full height and closed his eyes once more. With Rile's instruction, he repeated the process once more. He managed to reach the point he had been at previously, before he dropped to the ground again. "Try again." Rile ordered. Without hesitation Peregrine jumped to his feet and again attempted the agonizing process, and again failed. "Again." Peregrine tried for a fourth time. This time however, his skin stabilized to a deep dark red shade. Peregrine yelled out in both fury and pain before he fell over once more. "Again!" Rile ordered.

"No." Peregrine was barely able to breathe on hands and feet.

"No?" Rile questioned. "Are you giving up so easily, young master?"

"No. I just need some time." Peregrine answered.

"Where's all that energy you had before? Sounds like an excuse to me." Rile taunted.

"It's not." Peregrine growled rising to his feet.

"I believe it is. All your brash talk, but no bite." Rile pushed further. "I never expected the son of a legend to quit so easily. How disappointing."

"I am not a quitter!" Peregrine shouted. Rile smirked inwardly when he had struck a chord. "Take that back!" Peregrine hissed intensely.

"How can you make demands when you can't even tap into your primal ability to enforce them?" Rile shook his head. "It seems I am not the only failure here."

"I don't see you struggling through extreme pain over here." Peregrine pointed out, his rage building to new heights.

"Young master." Rile said calmly as the ground began to vibrate. He walked a distance away from Peregrine and turned to face his direction. Rile's feathers on his body began to grow slightly in size. "I have succumb to more pain than you could care to imagine." Rile's eyes changed from their natural color of bright yellow to a dark, sinister blue. "And until you suffer an equal amount of searing punishment." A visible blue energy could be seen seeping from the Utahrator's body. "You will be stuck in that pathetic form without the use of Rampage." Peregrine was pushed over the edge then.

"I am not pathetic!" The young bird of prey's skin glowed deep crimson red. "I am not a quitter!" He dug his claws into the ground as his body trembled with rage and pride. "And I am most definitely not a failure!" The larger carnivore smirked and disappeared in a waver of a faded image of himself. He reappeared inches from the velociraptor's nose.

"Then prove it." Rile taunted as he disappeared once again in the same manner. The large bird of prey reappeared a fair distance away from Peregrine.

"I'LL SHOW YOU! RAAAAAAAAHHHH!" Peregrine roared into the sky as his eyes shot from yellow-green to blood red. A wave of wind burst from around him and rushed outward. Rile appeared unaffected. Peregrine, in his full on Rampage, glared at Rile standing calmly in the open field. Completely fueld by rage, the velociraptor rushed the larger predator at blinding speed. Rile waited for the perfect moment and then simply side-stepped Peregrine's charge. He stuck out his big toe claw, and as expected, Peregrine tripped over it and rolled.

"Is that the best you have, youngling?" Rile taunted. In one speedy and fancy motion, Peregrine twirled from his back, to his sides, to his tail, and then to his feet. He hissed in aggravation. "I haven't used my Rampage in four years, and that pathetic attemp you call an attack is what I'm rewarded for showing you this?"

"I'LL GIVE YOU SOMETHING TO COMPLAIN ABOUT!" Peregrine roared. The velociraptor disappeared. Rile was actually surprised.

"Such speed and the skill to use it is not often gained so qucikly." Rile spoke. Peregrine reappeared a few feet above the larger bird of prey. He was behind him to his left in the air. Peregrine spun to land a slash. Rile didn't move, nor did he even look behind his self to see where Peregrine was. He simply scoffed and blocked the slashing kick by raising his left hand. Immediately Rile countered the still airborne velociraptor by knocking him through the air with his tail. "Too easy." Rile huffed. Peregrine skidded across the ground until he was slow enough to pushed him self into a back flip onto his feet. When he regained his bearings Peregrine noticed Rile had not moved, nor turned to even see the result of his hit. That only fuled the young raptor's rage.

"Why don't YOU make a move, coward!" Peregrine screeched. His primal side was more in control than anything.

"Becuase it would probably kill you." Rile stated calmly. The larger predator knew that knocking the velociraptor senseless was the only way to restore his sanity from Rampage, but pursuing a full on attack would proably end his life. Peregrine let loose a battle cry and charged at Rile for a second time, but when Rile side-stepped Peregrine flipped over him and tried to stomp on his back.

"Too predictable." Rile smirked as he swatted Peregrine to the ground with his tail. The young raptor crashed at Rile's feet, leaving a decent sized imprint of his body. Peregrine pushed himself out of the imprint with shakey arms. He faced the Utahraptor only a calws length away. The velociraptor's pants were heavy and raspy. He was getting wore down. "That all?" Rile questioned.

"Not even close!" Peregrine growled, swinging his foot around swfitly which was easily blocked by Rile's own foot. But the raptor did not give up. He continued to attack with an onslaught of slashes, kicks, clawing, and tail swings, all of which were mirrored and blocked by the larger Utahraptor.

"Focus and concentrate your rage." Rile coached as he continued to block Peregrine effortlessly. "Do not attack me with blind fury. Only when you control your anger can you use your Rampage to it's full extent." Rile blocked a kick from Peregrine. He then moved his arms in a flapping motion only once. A powerful gust of wind knocked Peregrine several yards back. "And only then will you actually be able to land a hit." Tired, beaten down, and the brink of falling out, Peregrine stubbornly took the advice given to him. He slowly stalked a circle around Rile instead of just charging head first into an attack. He plotted a manuever he was sure the older predator would not see coming.

"Block this!" Peregrine yelled. He ran, full speed at the Utahraptor, but at the last second disappeared.

"Hmm? Interseting." Rile admitted. Suddenly Peregrine was behind, but he disappeared again. Then Peregrine was above him, but he disappeared once more. Then he was to the side of him, and then gone. Peregrine continued his disappearing act for several minutes at blinding speed. Rile realized he was actually becoming confused trying to keep track of the velociraptor, for he kept appearing and reappearing in different spots within less than a second of each other.

"Now you see me." Peregrine stated appearing three times within the length it took for his words to disappate. "Now you don't!" to Rile's surprise, he reappeared in front of the Utahraptor delivering a powerful kick to his chest, sending the larger bird of prey sliding on his feet back a few yards. Satisfied that he landed a blow, Peregrine collasped on his side in utter exhuastion. He no longer had the energy to sustain his primal ability, or to stand for that matter. He felt like if he rested just for a little bit, then he would be up and raring to go again. Rile made his way to the semiconscious velociraptor.

"Not bad, master Peregrine." Rile chuckled while leaving his Rampage ability. He was but a foggy blur in Peregrine's vision. "Not bad at all."

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"Lieutenant Colonel!" A sergeant ran into the cargoship's main control room. The only man in the room turned to the sergeant. "The reinforcements are here. And wait till you see the shit they brought with them!" Both military men ran out of the control room. Outside on the deck, they were greeted with the sight of over 20 Huey, Chinook, and Apache helicopters flying over head. The Chinooks were carrying amred vehivles while the Hueys had amred men inside; some of which were now rappling down onto the deck of the ship.

The Rampage Zeal listened closely as the whirring of the many helicopter blades outside had grabbed his attention. "Those idiots just don't give up." Zeal said with hatred in his voice. He stretched his body and muscles. He could here the sound of dozens of feet running atop the ship. "Time to send up the body count." Zeal sneered. He walked over and took a bite of that delicious yellow substance he had found in the crate he was in. He had no clue what it was, but it sure was addictive.

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Peregrine woke with a massive headache. He sat up to take in his surroundings, unfortunately for him his surroundings happened to be the many faces of the Utahraptor pack.

"Whoa, too many Oaltreheol!" Peregrine jumped back a few feet, saying the word for Utahraptor in the ancient Saurilied langauge. "Personal space, much?"

"Sorry about this, master Peregrine." Rile emerged from the crowd of Utahraptors. He was clearly the largest. "Do we not have duties to do this afternoon or shall I add more on to them!" Rile shouted to the crowd of raptors. Hurridly, even scattered to their own tasks. Rile turned his attention to Peregrine. "Sorry for their rude awakening, young master. When I spoke that you had used a technique that takes months to master everyone had to see just who I was talking about." Rile sighed. "The job of a pack leader is never done...So how about you; feeling well this afternoon?"

"Afternoon!" Peregrine parroted.

"Yes, you've been out ever since you tapped into your primal side. Feeling any better since yestarday?" Rile pursued the question.

"About that..." Peregrine hesitated, realizing what a jerk he had been. "Sorry for the temper and insults..."

Rile just lauhged. "There is no need for apologies, master Peregrine." Peregrine gave Rile a confused look. Rile noticed. "Did your eldanrae in the other pack not teah you anything about the effects of your first Rampage."

"No. First I was with a pack of Deinonychus. They weren't all too social, so when we broke free I went on my own until I ran into Zeal's former parqou. An eldanrae named Weisen explained some things about primal abilities, but not much." Peregrine explained.

"I see he failed to mention that your first Rampage is fueled by rage, and rage alone. Any sense of kindness, justice, or right and wrong goes away, but it applies only to the first time use of it. You should have control when you use your primal ability next time." Rile informed. "So there is no need to apologize, master Peregrine. Your temper tantrum was all part of the process. Just like me provoking you."

"You mean manipulated?" Peregrine said sourly.

"A young raptor's pride is a useful target when teaching them to use their primal ability." Rile laughed. "I do apologize, however, if my words did cut too deep."

"It's fine. But those tail slams are another story, though." Peregrine whined as he rubbed his still sore sides. Rile laughed loudly at his comment.

"Sorry about the brutal force, master Peregrine. Why don't you go ahead, and try accessing your ability. You'll find it much easier, and natural." Rile suggested. "Just feel for something...something..." Rile tried to think of a word to describe how the something should feel. Then it came to him. "Primal."

"Here goes nothing." Peregrine closed his eyes and focused. "Something primal, something primal, something primal." Peregrine repeated in his head. In his mind he could feel himself grasping that primal side of his being. He could feel the control becoming his as the raging of his primal side settled to a focused power. Peregrine opened his eyes. "I felt it but, I don't think anything really happened...Why are you tinted red?"

"Maybe you should reconsider what you said before." Rile grinned. Peregrine got the hint. The velociraptor looked at the world around him. Everything was in a red tint. Not enough to overbear the natural colors of the world, but just enough to be noticable.

"I didn't even feel the change." Peregrine said.

"You'll get used to it. Try and get a feel for it." Rile stated. Peregrine didn't need to be told twice. He lowered his body as far to ground as possible and then pushed with only his legs so that he could become airborne. He jumped 30 feet skyward.

"This is awesome!" The young velociraptor shouted. He landed with a light thud. He then turned to a nearby tree and ran at it full speed. He stepped on it with his right foot and proceded to run striaght up it. When he started to lose momentum he flipped off backwards."WOOOHOOOO!" The bird of prey shouted as he flipped through the air.

"Younglings these days." Rile sighed and shook his head. Peregrine ended up landing next to Rile.

"WOO! That was cool!" Peregrine stated with extreme excitement.

"Are you done?" Rile asked.

"You were the one that said try it out." Peregrine pointed out, leaving his Rampage.

"Yes, but I didn't say show off." Rile sighed.

"Where's the fun in that?" The velociraptor tilted his head.

"Nevermind...There are more important things to discuss." Rile stated. He started walking in a random direction.

"Yes, like when did I become the son of a legend?" Peregrine questioned, jogging to catch up with the Utahraptor's long strides. Every one of Rile's steps were three of Peregrine's.

"I don't understand your question." Rile admitted.

"You mentioned something about me being the son of a legend during my training. What were you refering to then?" Peregrine asked.

"Well, your father of course." Rile said it as though his statement was obvious. He looked down at Peregrine and saw a look of confusion plastered on his face. "You don't know?"

"Know what?" Peregrine interrogated.

"Of what happened after we were taken from the island?" Rile asked. "You surely should have learned of it by now." Peregrine shook his head vigorously. Rile sighed. "Then it is not my place to tell you. It is best you learn of it on your own, or from another source."

"All this mystery surrounding my family is beginning become a pain in my tail." Peregrine huffed. "Can you atleast tell me what my dad meant when you said he mentioned something about me and Zeal's "little talents"."

"Now that I can explain." The older raptor smiled. "You and Master Zeal have very unique talents that are hard to master. No doubt you inheirted them from your mother and father."

"What are they?" Rile asked impatiently.

"If master Zeal was trained correctly, then he can use a technique called Perfect Timing." Rile elaborated. "It is a very tiring technique because it uses masses amounts of muscle energy to perform, but it nearly makes him untouchable if used properly for defense, and a force to be reckoned with for attack, and it makes him deadly coupled with his Rampage."

"So he can be super fast without using his primal ability." Peregrine understood.

"Exactly." Rile confirmed. "And from what I've seen you do from the little training we have had together, you have mastered your technique quite well."

"I have?" Peregrine tilted his head in his 'that's interesting' manner.

"Apparently you don't even know you do it." Rile sighed under his breath. " You perform what is called Air Rushing."

"Cool name." Peregrine commented with a sly grin.

"Your technique, master Peregrine," Rile continued. "Is the polar conterpart of master Zeal's. While he speeds up, you slow down...in sense of the word at least. If your techniques were ever to be used in a fight against each other it's very likely neither of you would land a blow for quite some time." Rile paused to think. "Ever notice how you can stay airborne longer than most other treheols?"

"Yep, I have." Peregrine nodded.

"That is your Air Rushing at work." Rile explained. "As I'm sure you know, most raptors have light hollow bones which allow us a great deal of speed and dexterity, but when a raptor can use Air Rushing his bones are much lighter than other raptors; yet, at the same time are much much denser as well. Which allow for them to take more punishment than they normally would."

"No wonder those hits from yestarday don't hurt as bad as they should." Peregrine rubbed his sides again.

"It also explains your greatly increased manueverability while in the air, letting you be able to dodge with much greater speed and far less effort than any Saurilied not imploring the technique." Rile elaborated. The Utahraptor suddenly stopped walking. Peregrine followed suite. They were now at the edge of the river where a sign with human writing was posted. "Raptor Rapids? Only humans would make such lame play on words." Rile commented on the sign.

"You can read that?" Peregrine questioned.

"You learn a lot when most of your young life is spent in human hands." Rile answered. "This is where Grant most likely came to." He directed the young velociraptor's attention to the river. "I was informed by one of my patrols that there was a boat here, but it looks as if Grant took it."

"So how am I supposed to follow him if he's on the water?"

"Across the river about a mile into the jungle you'll find some ancient human structures made of stone. There, Reker will assit you in reaching Grant." Rile smiled down at Peregrine.

"You expect me to get across that?" Peregrine indicated the river. "How? It's atleast 30 feet across, and the water is moving too fast to swim." Peregrine complained.

"My young friend," Rile sincerely spoke, and placed a clawed hand on the velociraptor's back. "I have told you basically all that I believe will possibly be useful to you on your little adventure to make it off this island. You have matured into quite the young raptor, master Peregrine Featherclaw. You have mastered your technique without any true prior training, you unlocked your primal ability in a day where it may take others weeks, and despite the front of lack of interest you show in the world around you, you have great awareness and cunning. That being said, you should be able to figure the answer to how to get across the river, my young friend."

"You got all that from a few hours of chatting then sparing?" Peregrine questioned suspiciously. He didn't feel like all that the Utahraptor had said applied to him, but maybe the larger carnivore saw something in him that he didn't. Peregrine pushed the thought aside and began pondering on Rile's last sentence. '...you should be able to figure the answer to how to get across the river...' "Maybe there's more to Air Rushing than I know." Peregrine grinned to him self. "Rile, you might want to take a step back. My instincts are telling me something." Rile smiled knowingly and took a few steps back.

"Very well then. Let your instincts take you. They are never wrong." Rile spoke encouragingly. Peregrine lowered himself to the ground as far as he could. He placed his hands down as his chin touched the ground. With awesome strength, the bird of prey launched his self towards the river's opposite side. A resulting gust of wind pushed Rile a little. Halfway across, Peregrine began to lose height. He was descending much slower than a normal raptor, but with more than eight feet to go till he reached the other side of the river he was going to fall into the rushing water.

Peregrine closed his eyes, calmed his mind, and let instinct take hold. He felt something solid begin to form at the base of his feet. Off of reflexive, the bird of prey pushed away from the solid object, giving him a good push in return. Peregrine opend his eyes just in time to see himself crashing into the ground on the other side of the river. He quickly caught himself in the tumble and stood up. Over the sound of the river, he could here Rile laughing loudly. Peregrine turned and saw his old caretaker on his back laughing in hysterics.

"Brilliant, master Peregrine! Most excellent!" Rile righted himself. "And nice landing by the way!"

"What in the name of Nexcreeg of Great Saurilieds, just happened!" Peregrine demanded, in shock.

"You used another part of Air Rushing. The air push." Rile shouted across the river. "No Saurilied really knows the anatomy behind it, but it's basically pushing yourself off solid air."

"Sooo..." Peregrine jumped once. He immediately let his instincts take hold again. He felt the solid air form under his feet and pushed off it, allowing him to jump a second time while still in the air. He tried for a third, but felt nothing. "I can jump twice! Awesome!" He yelled when he landed. "This adventure just became a whole lot cooler."

"The term is double jump. It should be very useful." Rile smiled, but it was quickly replaced with a small frown. "This is where I leave you, master Peregrine. My territory ends here, and I must attend to my other duties as pack leader as well." The Utahraptor perked up. "Remember, it's about a mile into the jungle before you reach the old human structures. And try to keep yourself out of trouble, young master!"

"I appreciate all the hospitality, and everything, Rile. And as for the trouble...I make no promises." Peregrine said. Rile chuckled at the comment. "I'll be sure to say 'hi' for you if I ever run into Zeal." Peregrine started to jog off into the jungle.

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"Aaahh...Aaaah...Aaahh-Choo!" Zeal wiped his nostrils. "Who's talking about me?" He asked with a growl. Only a room of dead bodies and silence greeted his question. "This is so boring!" Zeal complained. He looked over his red tinted hands and claws, inspecting them for any sign of blood he didn't clean off. "They haven't sent down a single human since the last two I slaughtered. I need something to kill you know!" A Rampage Zeal shouted to particularly no one. "Well I can wait. Hopefully the next moron they send down will be more of a challenge. Maybe they'll even send down another raptor in Rampage." Zeal laughed. "As if." He hopped on top of a metal container and scanned his enviroment, taking in the sight of all the humans he had killed. He heavily inhaled the air which carried the sickening smell of blood and decay. "It's good to be in Rampage." Zeal laughed maniacally.

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It only took a few minutes of jogging and Peregrine was already at the human's ancient stone structures. A massive gate of stone carvings greeted him at the entrance. He walked under them, feeling an ominous presence befall him. Stones were over turned and broken in places. Everywhere he looked carvings of twisted hate filled faces of monsters stared down at him.

"Worst taste in design...ever." Peregrine hurridly walked further into the stone ruins into a what looked like a tunnel. Inside, it was too dark, even for a raptor's night vision to see. Only a light was visible at the end. Curious, and not willingly to turn back now, the velociraptor jogged to the light. When he came out of the tunnel he was greeted by three massive pyramids. One in front of him, and one on either side of him. There was more than enough space between all the pyramids for two super predators to duke it out, but it was a dead end other than the tunnel. Peregrine decided to see if Reker was anywhere around. "Hey Spinosaur, you here! Rile sent me to get your help!" Peregrine yelled out. He listened intently for any sound of response.

The ground began to rumble beneath the lone raptor's feet. An earth shaking roar sounded a little too close for comfort. It hurt the velociraptor's ears to listen. At the peak of the pyramid in front of him a large red sail came into view. Quickly followed by a dark grey crocodile-like snout, and then the entire body it was attached to. The Spinosaurus made its way over the top of the huge pyramid with three long strides. It stormed its way down the side, knocking some of the old stones loose, and stomped to a stop in front of a frozen stiff velociraptor.

The humongous predator had to be between 60 to 70 feet long, and towered a little over 30 feet, not including the sail. Peregrine knew that this Spinosaurus was nearly twice the size as a normal one. He also knew that like the reptiles they were related to, Saurilieds never stopped growing. They're growing rate only slowed to a crawl, so if that was the case with this Spinosaur, then he must be as ancient as the ruins he lived in! The base of his white back and his red sail were lined with small scars. His greyish-blue body was as well. The super predator lowered his head to get a decent look at Peregrine. The Spinosaur took two heavy intakes of air to take in the lone raptor's scent. A second later, the few tall spiked red and white feathers on his head stood up in alertness, then he spoke.

"A son of legend needs my aid? An interesting day, this event has made." The Spinosaurus thundered. The percussion of his voice nearly knocked Peregrine over. "Where are my manners, an introduction you are due. My full name, I will give to you." The Spinosaurus rose to his full height and roared with such power the air visibly vibrated in waves. "Keeper of the Temples, that is my name! But address me as Reker, for it is all the same. Guardian Spinosaurus of knowledge, is my mask. Foilage and fauna I control as a task. Now tell me young Peregrine, what do you wish to ask?"

Me: Hope you enjoyed the chapter. I'm not sure if it was noticable or not, but I made Reker have a ryhming thing.

Peregrine: That all?

Me: No. I just have to say...HO...LY...CRAP. I am wiped. I'm just about fizzed out.

Peregrine: I would say something sarcastic, but I have a feeling it would only end badly for me at the moment.

Me: Good call, Peregrine...which reminds me; good call with Allosaurus The Silence. Indeed, I did know what you mentioned about them, but honestly I had completely forgotten about incorporating the King of the Jurassic in this story. Shame on me, for Allosaurus is another one of my favorite dinosaurs. If I am not able to put Allosaurus in Book 2, then I can assure it will be in Book 3...hmmm this may require some intense thinking.

Kenduari: You don't wish to burn out. You should rest.

Me: But I still have ideas and stuff I have to write down at least.

Kenduari: They will just have to wait, or be written while in bed. For now, you are on bed rest with Zeal.

Me: Is he still out?

Kenduari: Yes, and I believe he will be for some time. He was probably traumatized.

Peregrine: You guys are just mean, you know that.

Me: Hey, I'm not the one that fainted at the 'good' news.

Kenduari: Yes, and now I'm sending you to bed before you do faint of exhaustion.

Me: *storms off to bed grumbling to self*

Peregrine: I'll take over from here. Thank you ALL faithful readers, and readers that are jst popping by. You honor us by reading this work, and you are tremendously appreciatiated; as well as, your favs, alerts, and reviews.

Kenduari: Any of your ideas or constuctive criticism is very well welcomed. It helps to further improve on writing and get an insight to what you might like to see.

Me: And before I forget again...Sorry, but Spartans beat Elites Tick Tock. Just ask the Master Chief. Mwahahaha!

Kenduari: BED! NOW!

Me: *storms of to bed again* Your just mad cause you agree with Tick Tock.

Kenduari: What was that!

Me: Nothing.