This is a repost. Thank you for editing MidnightNightm3r3

First of all I would just like to thank you all for the 34 follows and the 15 favorites!

That's the most follows I have ever had for a fanfic

However, I am somewhat disappointed that while I got 7 reviews for chapter 1, I have barely had anything for the following chapters.

I have asked for some help from fellow writers and they suggested that I tone down the pacing with the story. One in particular suggested that I repost the first chapter to make it more "realistic." But I think I should just keep posting a chapter every 1-2 weeks and hope that I make the story interesting enough for you guys to comment. What do you guys think? Please say in a review.

I have also decided not to "rush" my story. After making the first chapter so long I decided I had to make the others of similar length which I thought meant cramming detail. From now on I am gonna pace.

Master Kosa- I am sorry that you did not like my story, I just find a lot of angst appealing, but it was my every intention to add happy parts, just gradually throughout the story.

Amaturaszu- Thank you you have always been a good reviewer

FiveShadows- Yeah, making hateable characters was my intention. But I hope you all will like Anna later on.

And BlossomCharms- I miss your comments

Sincerely Elsa

10:00 a.m. Olaf's Sandwiches

Elsa is wiping down the empty tables as per Lewis's request. Everyone around her is biting into their hamburgers, drinking their milk shakes, crunching their chips, and Elsa is damning herself for just having a cup of hot cocoa this morning.

Ok Elsa, just one more hour and it's lunch time. You can do this.

While trying to remove a dried ketchup stain, Elsa is interrupted by a hairy-hand slamming on the table.

"It's a crime." A masculine voice says.

Elsa looks up and she almost makes the towel in her hand freeze over. And she see's a familiar face, the same one that was yelling at her friend yesterday. Except this time he had what looked like a friendly smile and he was wearing a sleeveless white tank top and blue shorts.

"What?" Asks Elsa trying not to make it obvious that she knew who he was.

"That somebody as gorgeous as you has to work scrubbing dirty counters." He said still smiling, warmth in his tone.

Elsa remembered what Joan had said the other day. He most certainly didn't seem bad, at least not at the moment. So she took a few deep breaths to get her emotions under control, stood straight up tried to talk with a warm tone. Though instead it just came out forced and monotone.

"I'm just working her until I graduate college. I mean I don't really need too but hey gives me something to do. Responsibility and all."

He chuckled "Yeah. I see what you mean."

Elsa stood straight, tilted her head back to see straight into his eyes and put her hands to her hips.

"So what's your name?" Elsa asked.

"Kevin. Kevin Hanson. I own Hanson's Real Estate along with my father. I believe you have heard of us."

"Yes I have. I also remember you from one of my old schools. What was the name of it again oh right. Weselton."

"Heh. Elsa Snow."

At that point his face fell. He tilted his head and rubbed the back of his head.

"Yeah. Look. Elsa. I want to, apologize about the way I was when I was a kid."

Elsa raised an eyebrow.

"Look I was a stupid kid alright. My dad was never there for me and my sis it was always just work. My mom was always drinking. Didn't have much of a family, had lots of money so I guess I was a bit of a spoiled punk."

Elsa saw a tear roll down his cheek. Elsa's face fell completely, she was actually sympathizing with her old tormentor Kevin Hanson. It was true, she remembered Kevin mentioning that their mother was a drunk before.

"I was a jerk ok. I some wanted attention. You were new, I could tell that you were nervous, a little insecure so I just jumped in there. But I know it was wrong now and i'm so, so sorry."

He said that, looking straight into her eyes. And Elsa's face fell into one that looked of sympathy.

"Hey. I-It's ok. It was a long time ago I'm fine now." Elsa said calmly with a smile.

"No. It isn't." Kevin then straightened his neck and turned to face her. "You know what, I wanna make it up too you. Hows about when your shift is over I take you to lunch?" Kevin exclaimed with a smile.

"Lunch?" Elsa asked.

"Or dinner. Whatever you prefer."

"Is this a date?" Elsa asked raising an eyebrow and Kevin chuckled.

"It can be if you want."

Elsa stared at him for a while. Gazing at his face like she was trying to process what was happening. Kevin took the time to gaze her body. This woman was so much sexier than his past girlfriends.

"Hows about at six o'clock tonight you meet me in front of this restaurant and we can go out."

"Great I'll see you then!" Kevin exclaimed making his way towards the exit.

Elsa went back to work but turned her head to watch Kevin leave the building. If Elsa was standing in front of him now she could see the wolfish smirk on his face. One thought went through his head.

Got her.

At that same time Anna was sitting on a brown couch with a game controller in her hand using it to blast zombies in the face with a rifle on the flatscreen TV. Next to her is her cousin Kristoff, on the other end of the couch shooting different zombies on the split screen next to Anna's. Anna usually hung out with her cousin on weekends when there wasn't school or anything, plus the shooting really took her mind off her problems.

"So Anna. Are we going to talk about what happened last night?"

That completely ruined the moment.

"Umm. Oh Kristoff the zombies are coming for you! Shoot em! Shoot em!"

Anna shouted trying to change the subject. But instead Kristoff pressed the pause button and turned on the couch to face her.

"No Anna. This is serious."

"What's there to talk about? Kevin was a jerk. He usually is. Then he comes to me with a bouquet of flowers and those swedish chocolates I like then we make up."

"Anna that has been the running gag for the last three years. Nothing has changed."

"Umm that isn't exactly true. It has just been the last TWO years. The first year he was kind of sweet."

"Anna."

"Look Kris..."

"And the longer you are with him the more that just gives his sister opportunities to make fun of you!"

"Well Kevin said that he would..."

"He isn't going to do anything! He doesn't respect you Anna! He doesn't even deserve to look at you! Do you really love him!?"

"...We have been dating for three years. We have had some good times... In the past."

"Do you want to spend the rest of your life with him?" Kristoff asked, this time tension in his voice.

Anna stared at him blankly and said nothing.

"Anna!"

"NO!"

Anna turned her face away from his, her eyes focused on the floor not wanting to look at anyone else right now..

"I don't love him. I never really did. The only reason I choose to be with him is so that dad doesn't hate me for...you know."

"Liz?"

"Liz."

Anna had told him about Liz. The girl that Anna had fallen for and even tried to kiss. She told him how she ran away and broke her heart. How when her parents found out they nearly disowned her for it.

"Mom and dad think that I should be with a man. That's the way of the world isn't it? Kevin had his eye on me so I guess...I don't have much of a choice."

"Yes you do Anna! Dump that asshole and find someone else. Just because uncle Frederic and Aunt Tina want you to be with a guy that doesn't mean him."

"Kristoff I don't want to date ANY GUY."

Anna put her hands to her head, bending down.

"Liz was the only person I have ever felt so passionate about. Sure, sometimes I see another girl and it makes me feel something but never a guy. If I find another man. One that comes to love me the way I loved Liz. I won't be able to reciprocate. And I will just have broken another soul."

Kristoff looked sadly at his cousin. He put his hand on her shoulder and tried to comfort her. Anna was wrapping her arms around him and burying her cheek into his chest. But then Kristoff lit-up with an idea.

"Anna I have the perfect guy for you!"

"No Kristoff didn't you hear me? I don't..."

"No no wait just hold on a second! I have a friend named Sven. And-uh, he doesn't exactly bite for girls himself."

Anna raised her head and faced her cousin. Wiping the tears from her eyes in the process.

"Wait what? What does that have to do with me?"

"I have an idea. We have to get Sven onboard of course, but I think I know how we can get rid of that jerk for good and get your parents off your back."

It was 6:15 at night, Kevin was right outside Olaf's wearing a slick black suit and his hair combed back. He was leaning against his car, his arms folded as he waited impatiently for the super-hot former freak to leave the building so he could take her on their date. He waited for twenty minutes as he had arrived five minutes early and he was growing more impatient every minute since six. He watched one by one, two by two, entire families leave the building. And Kevin was about to explode.

"Damn where is this girl!? If she's taking this long she better be even more gorgeous."

"Who?"

Kevin turned to his side and saw a familiar face, it was the fat man that he was yelling at the other day when he was here with Anna. He had his arms crossed like he had, covering his apron. But unlike Kevin, his face was one of smug amusement.

"None of your business Fat-Man."

"My name is Lewis."

"Don't care. Just go back in there and if you can stop snacking for five minutes tell your hot friend to hurry up!"

Lewis face-palmed himself, making a loud laugh. Others were staring at the two as they entered and left the building. Kevin was looking at him in confusion.

"Elsa got off a hour ago!" Lewis said finally able to catch his breath.

"SHE WHAT!?"

Lewis reached into his front apron pocket and pulled out a folded piece of paper that had a drawing of a snowflake on it. Right under it were the initials "E.S."

"She wanted me to give you this. See ya dick! Also if you come back here i'm calling the cops."

Lewis handed Kevin the paper and walked back inside, smiling triumphantly. Kevin stared at the paper and opened it up. Written on it was a letter, from Elsa herself. He read it in his mind.

Kevin,

When you came to me this morning, I actually believed you. I honestly believed that after all these years you would have grown up from being such a little-shit to an actual human being.

But then I remembered the other day. I heard you talk to my friend at the counter. I heard you yell and insult him for his weight. Call him Fatty. And most importantly. I heard you say that you were already on a date with your girlfriend.

But even if you were not a lying, cheating, son of a bitch I would NEVER even CONSIDER going on a date with a man who had abused me as a child. Who called me gross and made me want to not go to school every day. I do not know who this poor girl is that you're dating but I hope that she realizes what a dick you are and leaves you for good.

You do not deserve to be happy,

Sincerely,

Elsa

And if Kevin wasn't already pissed about being stood up he heard his phone ring. He pulled it out of his pocket and he was receiving an incoming call. From Anna. He slid the screen to answer the call and put the phone to his head.

"Anna this isn't the right time!"

"No Kevin. It is PAST the right time." Anna said on the other line.

"What the hell are you talking about?"

Anna sighed "Listen Kevin, lately. I have been thinking that...We don't exactly work together..."

"WHAT!?" Kevin yelled, startling Anna on the other end.

"I'm sorry Kevin but I just haven't been happy in a long time. And I think that we can both benefit if we see different people."

"FUCK YOU BITCH! WHO TOLD YOU TO DO THIS!? WAS IT YOUR DUMB COUSIN!? God I never liked that guy what a dick!" Kevin growled.

"Ok Kevin you know what FUCK YOU! I never loved you! Never! You are selfish, rude and if anything else. A jerk. Just a plain Jerk. The only reason I decided to go out with you was because of my dad but I have another boyfriend now so you can go to hell!"

"New boyfriend. You're leaving ME! For somebody else!?"

"Unlike you he actually is nice."

"NO! Listen to me you little bitch you do not get to leave ME! I am the co-owner of the biggest Real Estate agency in Arendelle city! Hell if it wasn't for me you wouldn't have survived high school!"

"Goodbye Kevin."

"ANNA!"

"..."

Kevin looked at the phone. Anna had hung up and he was angry. He had just been rejected by TWO girls on the same night. And Kevin thought.

This is an outrage. Who do these chicks think they are dumping ME! You know what fine! What the hell was I thinking about either of them? The freak and the loser I can't believe myself!

No. They are not gonna get away with this.

So Anna finally dumped Kevin and Elsa got to have sweet revenge. YES! Now, anyone who wants to "see" Elsa confront Anna please comment.

Also, if not too much trouble. Please review :)