(A/N: Hi. Sorry if it has been taking a while to update. This chapter, one of the Commander's Generals (Or the mysterious commander can be known as the Leader or the Director or the Queen or...oh just forget It.) appears. Which one though?

Okay! HEEERRREESSS the disclaimer!

I do NOT own Kingdom Hearts or Kid Icarus. I just own my OCs.

Ad before I forget, I appreciate xxNeverEndingTwilightxx (previously XxKenseyXx13) for reviewing and I appreciate the anonymous reviewer Anonymous Hearts. When I looked at your review, I think you were saying the story was funny? I'm a little confused though (since I barely laugh at the things I write and the only time I cracked up was when I read my Hello Kitty Adventures fanfic), but I guess thank you for telling me the story is funny I guess! And to the other Guest reviewer, thanks for the review. There's no way I'm stopping this story!

Oh, and just so you all know, the Warriors in the Commander's army mostly all female. I have my reasons. There are some exceptions with Jade though, since two of her puppets are boys. Yes, I know I just revealed one person, but Jade isn't the one in this chapter.

So here we GOOOOOOOO! (Yes, I got that from New Super Mario Bros. Wii.)

Chapter 3: The Water Angel

It wasn't really all that peaceful in Skyworld. Why? Palutena woke the Angels up early due to an emergency.

"*Yawn*…Lady Palutena, have the Aurum come back?" Pit asked tiredly.

"No, it's worse. The ocean is under attack again and Lord Poseidon requested our help." Palutena answered.

"Oh no! Atlantica is under attack?" Sora asked.

Riku face palmed.

"Sora, if we were in Atlantica, wouldn't we be underwater?" Riku asked.

"Oh…good point. But still, we have to help."

"I'm staying here though." Axel indicated.

"Why, Axel?" Xion asked.

"Well, I dislike dealing with water, and the ocean is FULL of water."

"Axel, we've been to the ocean before though…I think." Roxas indicated.

"No, that's different. I dislike PHYSICALLY dealing with water."

"Um…okay. So, who is going and who is not going?" Palutena asked.

"Kairi, Naminé and I will stay here since Axel isn't coming." Xion indicated.

Sora, Roxas, Pit, Dark Pit and Riku nodded.

"So you guys are going?"

"Yeah…but hasn't anyone noticed something different today?" Riku asked.

"No…?"

"Penelope hasn't shown up like usual." Riku indicated.

"You're right. I wonder where she is."

"But still, that's not important right now. I'll call Viridi so Pit and Dark Pit can activate to POF." Palutena indicated.

"I'm already here Palutena! I can't stand that this person is just messing with nature! Who do they think they are?"

"I don't know. I swear Hades is behind this! He did something like this last time!" Pit stated.

"Ah man, I hate Hades!" Sora stated. (They are referring to two different Hades')

"I know right?!" Pit asks.

Riku and Dark Pit look at each other in confusion before shrugging.

"I think you two are referring to two different Hades'." Riku indicated to Sora and Pit.

"What…?"

"Never mind that, we need to get going." Roxas told the others.

"Right. Let's go!"

Then the five set off to find out who was behind this.

(That ocean place from Chapter 7 in KIU or something like that)

"I know I've said this before BUT, I SWEAR Hades is behind this. Who else would attack the ocean?!" Pit angrily asked.

"Sorry to say this, Pitty Pat, but it's not me this time." Hades suddenly said.

"It's not you? Then who…?" Palutena began to ask until…

"Hey…where'd you all come from?" A voice said from nowhere.

"Who's talking?!" Pit asked in confusion.

"Teehee…I am, silly!" The voice answered once again.

"Are you the one attacking the ocean?! And who are you?"

"I'm Yami. Yami Tsunamagashi. And I take that as and offense! I'm NOT attacking the ocean." The voice answered.

"How are you able to speak from the ocean? I don't get it." Viridi stated.

"Wow…that's harsh! I should probably stop talking…" Yami stated.

"HEY! Well WHY are you in the ocean in the first place?!" Pit angrily asked again.

"Pit, quit asking questions. Unlike you, we haven't said anything yet." Dark Pit stated.

"Um…guys? The ocean?" Palutena indicated.

The five angels looked to see that the ocean was parted.

"Oh…thanks Lord Poseidon!" Sora shouted before Yami growled, "Hey! Why isn't the ocean in one?"

"Because we're coming to take you out, Yami! Even though I am a little unsure what you are but…"

"PIT! SHUT UP!" Dark Pit snapped.

"What? But why?"

"YOU AREN'T LETTING ANYONE ELSE TALK, THAT'S WHY! NOW SHUT UP!" Dark Pit answered.

"Okay Yami, why are you in the Ocean in the first place?" Sora asked as he, Pit, Dark Pit and Riku flew into the Ocean, with Roxas following.

"Because. The Commander positioned me in a place where I was comfortable. And I can breathe underwater like a fish!"

"What does that have to do with anything?" Riku asked, sounding annoyed.

"Because. You can't breathe underwater, can you?" Yami asked.

"…"

"…"

"…"

"…"

"I knew it! One point for Yami!"

"Doesn't Yami mean "dark"?" Riku asked.

Yami went silent. "I don't know why my name is Yami! But still…I'm not dark at all…unless you mean my dark side."

"Well…everyone has a dark side! Right Riku?" Sora asked.

"Sora, I don't like talking about that!" Riku snapped.

"Sorry…"

"Can I…?" Pit began to say, but just received glares from Dark Pit and Riku.

Pit continued to be silent.

"You guys forgot I was here as well!" Roxas yelled.

"Oh! Hey Roxas!"

"Since he is here, can I…?" Pit began but here was his answer: "NO."

"Aww…"

Pit continued to remain silent.

The four angels continued flying until Yami said something again. "You four are so persistent. How come you're after me?"

"Because you're disrupting the balance between…" Pit began until he got hit with one of Pittoo's blades. "PIT. LET EVERYONE ELSE TALK DAMMIT!"

Pit whined before Yami growled, "I haven't done a thing to stop you guys, so I think I will!"

Then jets of waters began shooting from the walls violently and the group had to split up, leaving Riku alone to fly by himself.

Riku cursed under his breath before he and the others flied gracefully up, over and around the water pillars, upsetting Yami even more.

Quick torrents of water began blasting everywhere and it started getting faster and too quick to dodge but then it got slower and slower until Yami started to feel exhausted.

"Just…Just let me catch my breath…"

"What's wrong? Are you too scared to use your godly powers against us Yami?" Dark Pit taunted.

"I'm not a GOD. I'm a girl. I'm not a Goddess either. I'm an Angel! Couldn't you tell I'm a girl?" Yami angrily asked.

"Wait. Wait, wait, wait. YOU'RE A GIRL?!" Pit asked in shock, finally breaking his silence.

"Well DUH!"

"Isn't Yami usually a boy's name or something? And I thought you were a boy with a girlish voice!" Sora said with a surprised tone.

Yami went silent.

"ALRIGHT. ALL OF YOU QUIT STALLING! GET TO THE UNDERWATER PALACE NOW!" Palutena shouted.

The group shrugged before heading to the Seafloor Palace in a rush to get to Yami.

-SEAFLOOR PALACE-

Poseidon had put the ocean together again once Sora, Pit, Dark Pit, Roxas and Riku got in. "WE ARE GOING TO STOP YOU YAMI!" Pit shouted.

Pit instantly got glares.

"What? You haven't been letting me speak."

"That's because you got a whole entire game to speak Pit."

"Game? What game?" Sora and Roxas asked.

"Never mind."

"How did you people get in here?!" Yami suddenly asked.

That startled Sora and Pit.

"WHAT THE PANCAKE?!"

"…"

"…"

"…"

"…"

"…"

"Really Pit?"

Pit frowned. "I was trying to be original! What the fish is too cliché."

"Is not! Just cause Zia says it a lot doesn't mean its cliché!"

"We're getting off topic!" Viridi snapped.

"THERE IS NOTHING WRONG WITH RANDOMNESS! YOU PEOPLE MUST DISLIKE RANDOMNESS!" Yami snapped.

Palutena as well as everyone else went quiet.

"What? Is Water Girl here trying to make a joke? If she was I'm not laughing."

Yami's voice suddenly got deeper and more intimidating. "Shut it, Hades."

Hades went silent.

"ALRIGHT! LETS GO FIND YAMI AND FIGHT HER! FORWARD!" Pit shouted.

Sora, Roxas, Riku and Pittoo shrugged before following the Leader.

(20 minutes later)

"PIT, WE'VE BEEN WALKING IN A CIRCLE. JUST HOW LONG HAS IT BEEN SINCE YOU LAST CAME HERE?!" Dark Pit roared in anger.

Pit tilted his head. "Um…"

Sora sighed. "IS THERE A MAP ANYWHERE?! PLEASE TELL ME THERES A MAP!"

"There's not."

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! HOW WILL WE GET OUT OF HERE?!" Sora yelled.

"Uh…guys, look. Were those arrow signs there before?" Roxas asked.

"The ones on the floor or on the ones on the wall that I've never seen in my life?" Pit asked.

Riku rolled his eyes. "The ones on the wall, duh."

"Oh, yeah. No they weren't."

"Well, if they popped up out of nowhere, lets follow them!" Pit said in optimism.

"I have a bad feeling about this." Dark Pit grumbled as he and the others followed Pit.

(25/2 minutes later! Yes, I used 25/2.)

(Throne Room)

Yami was twirling around her light blue hair before Pit suddenly opened the door, startling her a bit.

"ALRIGHT YAMI! WE'RE HERE TO STOP YOU!" Pit and Sora shouted.

Yami blinked before her light blue wings spread out.

"HOLY CRAP, SHE'S AN ANGEL!"

A book hit Pit out of nowhere. "You didn't realize that?! She told you, moron!" A familiar voice shouted. The voice was slightly different, but it sounded like Penelope's.

"Yami, remember your orders. If they come, you fight!"

Yami nodded. "Yes Commander."

Then Yami summoned her Aquarius Blade.

"Angel commanded by the Unknown! I am Pit, servant of the Goddess of Light, Lady Palutena, aided by Dark Pit, the Angel who serves himself, Sora, Riku and Roxas! And. You. Are. History!"

Yami walked up to Pit and smacked him with her Aquarius Blade.

"I KNOW WHO YOU ARE IDIOT!"

Pit rubbed his face.

"Still, we came here to defeat you to stop the threat you're bringing!"

Yami huffed. "I'm not bringing a threat, you are."

"No, YOU ARE!"

"ARE NOT!"

"ARE TOO!"

"ARE NOT!"

"ARE TOO!"

"ARE NOT!"

"BOTH OF YOU SHUT UP!" Riku snapped before summoning Way to the Dawn.

Sora and Roxas took at as a cue to summon their Keyblades.

Then Pit took his Palutena Bow out.

"YOU'RE GOING DOWN DARK- ER…YAMI!"

Yami began the battle by using Aquarius blade to form jets of hot water at blast them quickly at the five boys, who dodged. Pit stuck out his tongue.

"You call yourself an Angel if you only fight long ranged?" Pit taunted.

Yami quickly slid on a newly formed slide of water and she slid and managed to hit Sora, Pit and even Riku when he wasn't looking!

"Nngh! Stupid…water!" Riku groaned.

Yami playfully stuck her tongue out.

"What's wrong? Are you afraid of a little water? Well take…this!"

Yami created a fountain of water and spun up in the air and dove right in. Then a moving jet of water came on its own and Yami wasn't anywhere to be seen!

"You can't hit what you can't see!" Yami taunted from somewhere.

"She dove in the water, right? Maybe she's controlling the jet!"

"IF SHE WERE, WOULDN'T SHE HAVE DROWNED BY NOW?!"

"Idiots. Yami is a special angel. She practically IS water; therefore, she can breathe water as if it were air." The mysterious Commander informed.

"So her weakness must be…THAT'S IT! Riku, Roxas, come on!" Sora commanded after coming up with something.

Riku and Roxas shrugged and Sora began to charge his Keyblade with a Thundaga spell. Riku and Roxas understood what he was doing and did the same.

Pit and Dark Pit were puzzled until the other three were done charging.

"THUNDAGA!"

A huge thunderbolt struck the jet, causing it to explode, making Yami vulnerable as electricity momentarily zapped her.

Then Dark Pit went melee on Yami with his Silver Bow and Pit shot arrows from his Palutena Bow.

Then the last blow was almost inflicted on Yami until she turned and she had a maniacal grin on her face and darkness went around her. Her eyes turned a dark blue and she teleported.

Dark Pit's eyes widened in panic as well as the others as they stepped back.

"I…I think this is what she meant by dark side!" Dark Pit shouted as Yami appeared in the center of the room.

Darkness was still around Yami as she floated up into the air in the center of the room. Water swirled beneath her. Then Yami crossed her legs and put her arms out, water swirling around them after coming off.

Yami withdrew the water, confusing the five. Then the palace started shaking as a huge wave appeared.

Sora, Pit, Roxas and even Pittoo were scared.

Riku quickly shouted, "GET BEHIND ME!"

As the wave hit, the four went behind Riku and…they weren't hit, dead or soaked.

Riku had used his shielding skill to protect them. This kept the wave from hurting them.

Yami had went back to normal and had collapsed onto the floor. All of her energy was drained. Pit was about to inflict the final hit on Yami (A non-killing hit of course) until she slowly got onto her knees and weakly breathed, "C-Commander…get me out of here…"

A soft beam of light and darkness shrouded around Yami and then the weakened Angel vanished."

"We defeated Yami! Lets go back and save our game…wait a minute…"

"WHAT GAME?!" Sora and Roxas angrily shouted.

"Nevermind that! At least the threat is gone now so lets go!"

Then the five Angels left the Seafloor Palace.

-SKYWORLD-

Pit and the others arrived in the Temple, where Palutena, Viridi and the rest of the group waited in patience.

"Has Penelope come?" Pit asked.

"No, I haven't seen her all day. Its seems odd though." Palutena indicated.

"Why?"

"That "Commander" person sounded a lot like Penelope, but with a more serious tone. I don't know what's wrong, but Hades is back too, and he isn't a threat at the moment. However this "Commander" is, they need to be stopped, and fast."

-SILENT SANCTUARY-

"Commander…I'm so sorry for failing you! I deserve to be punished or…"

The "Commander" made Yami pause.

"Yami, its fine. I wasn't able to leave base today, but I observed your battle. I might've gotten our enemy suspicious, but I assure you, we will fullfil our goal, Yami. That was just a minor setback. Honestly, you need to control your dark side better."

Yami nodded and knelt. "Yes, Commander. I'll try better to please you."

"I don't need to be pleased, but you've gotten better with your control. Continue on your improvement."

Yami got up and bowed. "Yes, Commander."

"You are dismissed."

Then the light-blue winged angel left the room, leaving the "Commander" to think.

"As long as I succeed, I will overlook the multiple failures. Nobody is perfect."

(A/N: SORRY FOR THE LONG WAIT.

I honestly planned to finish and post this on the same day Melody's Pitch and A Twist of Time with a Search were updated. However, I somehow managed to post this later than I wanted.

What do you think the Commander? And can you tell who they are? Somebody already managed to get it.

See you all in the next chapter! As usual, please review if you can! You don't have to, but it'd be nice. Don't flame either or Yami will use her water ability or Axel…

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