Okay and I am very glad I rated this fic M! Warning there is lemon in this so don't like don't read! Hope you enjoy and if you follow Dangerous Souls please read the note at the end! Thanks!

Also I am aware of the OOCness and currently don't care this is a bit of an experiment since I don't write this sort of thing... at all...let me know what you think


5-Perfect

Almost a year after Mai and Naru started dating, aside from various cases they had taken on and a trip to England, their relationship was rather mundane. This night was not much different. After dinner and a show, Naru had invited Mai to hang out in his apartment for a little while. So here they were, sitting on Naru's couch, the TV on, but they were too preoccupied to notice it.

At the beginning, Mai had cuddled up to Naru's side, but as the night grew on, the distance between their lips didn't. Mai had pulled him over, so her back was against the arm of the couch and one hand on the back of his neck, the other tangled in his hair. Naru was kneeling over her with one hand bracing himself on the arm and the other running through her hair. They both had a passing thought of how incredibly lucky they were. Neither one of them though they would be so happy with someone, let alone each other.

Maybe it was why when they both came up for air there was a different look in their eyes. "I love you," they both said without thinking. But they smiled and Naru pulled her up and over so he was lying with his back on the other arm of the couch and Mai lying on top of him.

Their lips crashed against each other hungrily and they held each other close. Mai had never felt this way before. A warm unsettling feeling filled her stomach, almost like butterflies, but she liked it. She knew Naru felt it to. Maybe that was why when she came up for air with a flushed face, she blushed as she said, "I think…I think I'm ready."

From the beginning, Naru had made it known and insisted that they would not so anything simply because enough time had passed. No, he didn't want this relationship to be one of regrets. Returning the favor is how he thought of it. She waited until he was ready for a relationship so he would wait until she was ready for anything else. The only exception was their trip to England. Luella had insisted Mai tag along for a visit. Of course, they were in separate bedrooms and nothing other than maybe a kiss happened.

But when Mai said this, Naru hesitated. He knew he was her first and she knew she was his. But there was something in his mind, telling him he didn't deserve her. Fear that he wouldn't be able to please her. But Mai leaned back down and began kissing him again.

They weren't too sure how is happened, but while kissing they had migrated to his room, their clothes left in a trail behind them. Now they were down to their underwear, in his bed, touching, feeling, caressing each other. Their hearts raced in anticipation.

Once their relationship began, Ayako had made sure Mai was on contraception, and Lin and Madoka made sure Naru had a small supply of condoms. Needless to say, they were both prepared, just not mentally ready. At least, not until now.

It was clumsy, it was awkward,, bit it was perfect. Naru tried to remove her bra with one hand, but failed miserably. With a giggle, Mai reached behind her with one hand and snapped the garment off. "You'll have to teach me that," he commented with a smirk.

"Later," she said, leaning back and pulling him with her. Naru parted their kiss and propped himself up on his forearm. Mai felt a wave of self-consciousness. She felt his eyes travel across her bare breasts and she bit her lip, looking away. "Naru, please, don't-"

"You're beautiful," he said breathily. Mai wanted to cry. It wasn't like he was just saying it for the sake of complimenting her. No, he truly meant it and the way he looked into her eyes, she knew he didn't think he was worthy of her. It broke her heart, because there were days where she thought the same of him.

So she nodded. "It's okay." She smiled. "You can touch." She watched curiously as he placed one hand over her small mound. Her breath hitched, more in surprise than anything, as he lightly pinched her nipple. They both watched like lab students watching chemicals react as the little nub hardened. Mai blushed furiously when she realized they were both gawking at her chest. Which was why she pulled his head down for yet another kiss. But his lips didn't stay on hers for long. No, he had a brand new toy beneath him and he wanted to see just what she would do.

He vaguely recalled the most awkward talk of his life from Madoka. Even Lin was there and had crossed his legs uncomfortably. "You need to make sure it's pleasurable for the both of you," she had told him. "Especially after what you both went through. I know it was years ago, but still. Light, sensual touches to start. And communicate, nothing is more frustrating than a partner that won't listen to you, or tell you what they want."

That was an interesting conversation and told him more about his friends' sex lives than he ever needed to know. But he put it out of his mind and brought his attention back to the girl beneath him. His lips had traveled down her neck, kissing, nipping, and sucking as his fingers trailed behind. The sensation was so foreign to Mai, no one had ever touched her like this. One drunk ex groped her breasts, but that was so different from Naru's gentle touch. She gasped sharply as something warm and wet surrounded her hardened nub.

Naru was shamelessly sucking her nipple like a newborn. The act made her back arch and she tangled her hand in his hair. She winced when she felt something graze the nub. "Please, Naru, no teeth."

He mumbled an apology as he kissed it and moved on to give the other side the same treatment. He trailed his fingers down her stomach, cupping his hand over the mound covered by light blue panties. He smirked as she tried to hold back a squeak. At least he knew she was enjoying this, her panties were soaked through. He used a finger to trail her slit through the cloth, earning a moan.

Mai grabbed his hair and pulled him back up. Her lips hungrily crashed against his, briefly distracting him as her tongue explored his mouth. She used the distraction to her advantage and pulled down her panties, Naru understanding her intent, helped her remove the clothing.

Naru was now kneeling between her spread legs, gazing thoughtfully at his first official sigh of the female anatomy. Mai blushed again and tried to close her legs, but Naru stopped her. "It's okay," he said softly.

Then she did something totally unexpected, she took his hand and placed it on her mound. Trying to show him what she wanted. She looked in his eyes and nodded with a smile. He ran a finger up and down her slit just barely grazing her clit. She shuddered each time and her eyes were shut tight when she moved his thumb in slow circles over the nub. She bit her lip, stifling a groan and Naru took to pinching the bundle of nerves lightly.

With her practically writhing beneath him and her wetness dripping between her legs, he inserted a finger into her depths. She clamped down reflexively on the intruder and there was no doubt in his mind that she was a virgin. He briefly wondered how his own member would fit, but reminded himself that one day a baby would have to fit through there. Would it be his? He pushed the idea out of his head for the moment and began curling the digit as he continued the pressure on her clit.

Her face was twisted in pleasure. Naru felt her tense up and knew she would soon be thrown over the edge. So he slowed down until he became still, earning a frustrated cry from her. He began his onslaught again and stopped just before she reached her edge again. "God! Naru!" she groaned, her head turning side to side.

He liked having this control over her. He loved the feeling of her quivering body as she gave into her pleasure. He loved that he was the one to have this affect on her. Loved that he was the one doing this to her. He began his pace once again, adding another finger, Mai continued to writhe beneath him. He reached forward with his free hand and pinched her nipple.

Her face was so flushed and she was so glad she had kept her eyes shut. She didn't want to see him staring at her face as it contorted in time with the feelings he was giving her. Oh, she knew he was watching her very closely, but she didn't want to see it. She felt the coil in her belly tighten and twist with white hot intent. She mentally warned her boyfriend to not stop like he had been before. She was about to voice it when her coil snapped and she couldn't hold back her cry of ecstasy.

She fisted the sheets beneath her and thrashed her head as she rode out her high. Naru didn't stop his pace even when she clamped down on his fingers in a fit of spasms. Her legs shook and quivered as Naru watched. He wouldn't help but feel a sense of pride as he removed his hand and watched as her chest heave with her breaths. "Did you like it?" he asked and Mai laughed lazily.

"My God, Naru!" she gasped. Struggling to sit up. He reached over to help. "Are you sure I'm your first.?"

That was probably the best thing she could ever had said. It made him feel that not only had he satisfied her, but that she had thoroughly enjoyed it. He had been, at one point, afraid he couldn't live up to the task. But Mai was full of surprises as their night was nowhere near over.

He hissed when Mai leaned forward and lightly touched the bulge in his boxers. Startled, she pulled her hand away, but he caught her wrist and shook his head. "Sorry, you caught me off guard."

He removed the clothing and his member sprang to life. Mai had only seen pictures of a penis in her health class. Back then, she thought they were weird and grotesque looking, and honestly, had no idea how any guy could walk around with one. But now…with Naru…it was…different. At first glance, the organ was terrifying. Just two of Naru's fingers were a tight fit in her. How on Earth could she accommodate that thing? But logic came through to tell her just what it had told Naru a little earlier. She reached down and circled her hand around the member.

It was hot and throbbing and by the look in Naru's eye, it might have been painful. She had no clue what she was doing, but continued to stroke the phallus. "Gah!" Naru grunted. "Not so tight, Mai." Mai muttered an apology and lightened her grip. She saw the first pearl of precum on the tip and used her thumb to wipe it over the head. She could feel him tense as he reached a hand down to stop hers.

"Naru?" She looked at him quizzically as he stood up and opened a drawer in his dresser. He came back to the bed and was about to put on a condom, when Mai grabbed his hand. "No, Naru." It was his turn to be puzzled. "I…" She couldn't tell you why she stammered. After almost a year of dating and what they had just done, there was nothing to be embarrassed about. "I'm on the pill. I have been for a while. You don't have to do that."

Naru still hesitated. He couldn't tell you why. But he was grateful when Mai wrapped her arms around his neck and pulled him on top of her. He was finally able to form words when their lips parted. "I'll go slow, let me know if I'm hurting you." Mai nodded as Naru position himself and she wrapped her legs around him.

He reached down and rubbed her clit before he entered and just the heat radiating off her was enough to make him shiver. He placed the tip at her entrance and slowly pushed in. It was hot and wet and tight and he only had the head in. Mai squirmed beneath him and he wasn't sure whether or not to continue. Mai answered that question by squeezing her legs and thrusting her hips to meet his. Naru answered by thrusting the rest of himself into her. He almost lost control there.

Mai had dug her nails into his shoulders and held him like a vice. Naru swore when he saw a tear, but he kept perfectly still. He wiped it away with one hand. "I'm sorry, Mai. I hurt you."

Mai had kept her eyes shut but shook her head. "It doesn't so much as hurt, but I'm not comfortable."

But her hold on him was dangerous and he wasn't planning on stopping now. So he kissed her again and explored her mouth. The distraction helped and soon Mai had relaxed.

"Can I move?" he asked, coming up for air. Mai nodded. He moved slowly, pulling himself out almost all the way and thrusting slowly back in. For good measure, he began applying pressure to her clit again. Once she was moaning, he moved faster.

It felt better than either of them had imagined. She was so warm and tight and he filled her so full. Clumsy kisses were exchanged, along with ear nibbling, and whispered love confessions. Naru's free hand had found one of hers and their fingers laced. The moment was too good to last, and they both knew it.

Naru's steady fingers brought Mai to her edge first and she screamed his name beside herself. Naru wasn't that far behind her. Her spasming walls were all it took to send him over the edge. He threw his head back and moaned her name as his high took hold of him. Her walls felt his hot spurts of semen and seemed to clamp harder, trying to milk him try.

They were still for a minute, catching their breath. Naru pulled his now limp member from her and rolled over to the side of her. Mai followed his movements and found herself with her head on his chest. Both of their cheeks were flushed, but they were content.

Mai found it hard to keep her eyes open, she had heard her friend complain about her boyfriend falling asleep after sex when she wanted to talk. But after this, Mai could use a nap herself. Guess I just have a better partner, she thought proudly. "That was amazing, Naru. Thank you," she said as he pulled the covers over them. He wrapped one arm under and around her shoulder. As he pulled her close and kissed her forehead, she imagined if every night were like this. Sex or no sex, just holding each other as they drifted to sleep. With a narcissist like Naru? Mai decided she would be happy with that. Very happy indeed.

As Naru held her, he looked down and watched the slow rise and fall of her back. He felt her fingers draw lazy circles on his chest. He had known he loved her for a long time, he was just too afraid to admit it. Their trip to England, just a month prior, wasn't just to help his father with a case. It was to introduce the woman he loved to his family. And Luella wanted to get to know her before he popped the question.

Once they got back, Naru had to be sneaky. Talking to Monk was not a big deal, he could just tell Mai it was about a case. The hard part was getting Michiru and Keiko to help him find a ring and not tell Mai about it. Then he just had to figure out how he would ask her. He knew it wouldn't be as public as Yasuhara's proposal to Kiko. Or as clever as Monk's to Ayako. Or even as romantic as Lin's was to Madoka. He really had no clue how he would ask and the little box was burning a hole in his nightstand.

Oliver Davis was a very private person and had just shared a very private and intimate moment with the one person he cared about more than any other. Maybe that was why he shook a very sleepy Mai awake. "Mai? Mai, wake up."

Mai sat up and rubbed her eyes. "How long was I out?" she yawned. Naru had rolled out of bed and Mai realized it was still nighttime. "What are you doing?"

Naru ignored her and found what he was looking for. Mai had crawled over to his side with a perplexed look. Her eyes widened when she saw him, in all his naked glory, on one knee holding a little black box. Her jaw dropped, she couldn't believe it.

"Taniyama, Mai," he began, his own heart racing. "Will you marry me?"

Mai couldn't help but stare. Frozen to the spot she couldn't get her words out.

"I love you, Mai. I have for a long time. You are the best friend I've ever had and I don't want to know a day without you."

Tears welled in Mai's eyes as he opened the box and a white gold band with a single diamond in the center sat in it. It wasn't extravagant, but it wasn't plain, either. It was simple and everything Mai had ever imagined it would be. "Y-yes!" she said as her tears fell. Naru slid the ring on her finger and joined her on the bed. Mai wrapped her arms around his neck and he fell back on the bed.

Was it the proposal they had always imagined?

No.

Was it perfect?

No.

But it was perfect for them.


This was originally just going to be a lemon scene, but then I got to thinking "How would Naru propose to Mai?" And this sort of just happened.

So on Monday I came home from class and found my laptop had basically just died. -_-' Which has all of my chapters and ideas already written out! I had four chapters of Dangerous Souls completed and waiting to be posted and the little bugger went to crap! I'm taking it in to get fixed tomorrow, I really hope nothing is permanently gone otherwise my update on that probably won't be until much closer to Christmas.

So, if you follow that fic or know someone who does please just be patient. Feel free to contact me if you want an ETA on an update! In the meantime, thanks for reading! :D