ANSWERING SOME REVIEWS
"I really hate when author's cant even be bothered to put "Slash" or "Drarry" in the summary. What, you wanna trick people into reading it and wasting their time on a story that they're gonna stop reading as soon as they reach a certain part? Nothing against it but not my cup of tea and it's a total deal breaker when reading HP fanfiction. Be more considerate is all I'm saying."
Oi if you actually read the first chapter carefully, under the warnings says what pairing my fanfic is for in CAPITAL LETTERS. I always left that there and saw that when I re-edited the chapter due to some people complaining about chapter one. I'm not trying to be rude but it's rude to assume when you didn't read it properly especially the warnings and definitely thinking I'm "tricking people". Shove it up your ass please, next.
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"where did he get the blackthorn wand from in the last chapter you said his wand was made from elder"
Ah yes I made some changes to chapter two and was planning to redo chapter one later. Reason is because I realised I wanted something different between Harrison's blackthorn wand and the Elder Wand (Deadly Hallows Wand) as it'll make it easier to know which wand he's using when he finally gets that Wand.
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"Please update soon! And does Harry get the Potter lordship too? I know that Harry wants to get rid of his Potter blood,but it would be funny if they try to give it to Kevin but it rejects him and god to Harry! Just a thought?"
It is a great idea! Harrison would have to be verryyyy quick with it otherwise James would claim Kevin as the next heir and disown Harrison.
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"this story looks good, but i will not be reading it.
i am not a fan of slash stories, i have nothing against them, just not a fan. i would suggest putting draco malfoy in the name part of the summary. i took him out of the search peramiters so i would not read stories that have him as a main focus. also, maybe lable in the summary that this will be a slash story so people will know what they are getting into once before they read.
i wish you luck on the story and hope you get many followers/favorites"
This was very helpful but unfortunately something is wrong with the story settings and it won't let me put Draco Malfoy and Harry Potter as a pairing, I did leave a Pairing description under the first chapter's warnings. I will try to change it but might as well put several warnings of slash as some people can't even see the pairing warning on the first chapter.
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"What happened to Harrys godparents?"
Ah yes, they will eventually come up in the future chapters as I didn't thought of Sirius and Remus at all (IM SO SORRYYY). I wanted to build up the storyplot at first then start instructing more characters into it. Thank you for reminding me!
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"When will you update?"
I will try to update a chapter a week but I'm in college now and doing A Levels, it will be difficult to joggle projects and editing fan fiction chapters. I'm kinda an idiot to do more fanfics but I will try to write as much as possible in my spare time.
I thank you all for being patient!
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"Nice! Can't wait for the next chapter."
"I LIKE ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT"
"can't wait to continue on reading this story"
"I love it so far. Please continue :) "
"Please update soon because this is a good story"
"VERY good start! Straight to the point in one chapter! Pretty cool to have Death as Harry's father in a wbwl fanfic.
Hopefully you'll be one of the very few to finish a wbwl fanfic. Good chapter and can't wait to see the next!"
Thank you all so much for your kind comments! (No matter how old they were from like two years ago XD ). I will of course be uploading soon and have no intention of abandoning this fanfic and others.
-Sleepy