So, when I read this story. I felt that it was lacking a lot of things. It's not quite understandable at some point and a bit confusing to most. So, I decided to Revised and edit it to the best of my abilities. I hope you would like this. I'm currently slowly changing each chapter with the edited version.
Disclaimer: I DON'T OWN GHOST HUNT, only the plot of Lost Lover.
Chapter 1
Normal POV
It had been 6 years ago since she died; everything didn't go the same after that. Naru became more withdrawn since then. They could see the changes in him, yup he is still cold, arrogant and narcissistic as ever. The changes in everyone is there Monk and Ayako got into dating scene a few years back. But still the same. Masako had move on from Naru and had found someone who can appreciate her. John is still a priest. Yasuhara as sneaky as ever he is currently a full timer at the office and of course Lin and Madoka is sweet as ever be, being engage and all. (A/N: well you can imagine guys)
At the present time SPR members are in lounge with Naru waiting for a client who was expected to arrive 10 minutes ago. Just then the SPR door opened revealed a beautiful young lady, with long blond hair, when she took of her sunglasses revealed cinnamon eyes. The lady bowed down and said
"Oh! I'm so sorry for being late! It's just that I was from a company meeting" she said softly and politely.
"Please take your seat Miss?" Yasuhara said
The lady took her seat and said "I'm Mari Wilson, age 24 and from England. Nice to meet you all" she said flashing her pretty smile. The SPR members also said their greetings.
Naru who was silently studying the said person in front of him think that 'This girl she seems familiar, somehow I had feeling that we meet before. And she gives off this familiar presence.'
"Nice to meet you, Miss Wilson. Shibuya Kazuya head of SPR, and this are my associates. From right…" Naru said, pointing at monk,
"Takigawa hoshou a monk." Bou-san said
"Matsuzaki Ayako a miko." Ayako said
"John Brown a priest, nice to meet you." John said
"Hara Masako a medium." Masako said
"Yasuhara Osamu a researcher." Yasuhara said
" Lin Kojou." Lin said
After the introduction and everyone is now settled, so Naru asked her "What can we do for you Wilson-san?"
"Please just call me Mari everyone does" She said
"Okay Mari what can we do for you?" Naru replied
"Well, I recently bought this house in the outskirt of the city. I just recently moved at the house. The 1st month that I lived there everything was okay. Then on my 2nd month of living there, there are strange things that happened almost every night we could hear a woman and a child screaming, then banging of doors. Then blood would appear on the wall. Recently one of my guest room was like murder room blood splatter will be on the wall furniture will be overturned. There was also one time when I was pushed down the stairs. Then I can hear footsteps my hallways at night. I lived there with my maids and butler. I am also having weird dreams like there was a couple inside the house a child. And I believe that that family was the reasons for the hunting there. So please take my Case!"
"Okay we will take it, Mari. And Yasuhara will give you the details." Naru said
"Thank you! Shibuya-san" Mari said
"Call me Naru" he said suddenly
"Is it alright?" as she was confused why he will insisted
"It's alright" he said
"Okay, thank you again Naru. Oh! Look at the time, I better go now. I'm going to be late. Here is my address and cell phone number. Please contact me regarding the details, Yasuhara-san. I'm running late with another meeting. Goodbye and good day everyone! Bye Naru!" Mari said quickly and left the office in a hurry.
Naru who was still confused as to why he was behaving like that but thought about this. 'What's this the way she says my name, the cheerfulness. It makes me remember of her.'
The SPR members who just witnessed the conversation there was a bit awe struck for Naru to call someone other than that person (Mai) her first name. And even let a stranger called him Naru. But they didn't miss the familiar presence that the stranger was giving off.
"Ne,Naru-bou? why did you call her Mari?" Bou-san asked
"….."
Naru didn't answer and only rise up from his seat. Then he said "Lin come with me in the office need to talk with you."
Then he went inside his office and told Everyone,"prepare for tomorrow be here at exactly 8:00 am."
-NARU'S OFFICE-
Inside Naru's Office he sat down at his table in thinking pose. He was deep in thought when Lin opened the door and asked him.
"Naru what is it?" Lin asked
"Lin could you do a background check on Mari Wilson?" he said
"Sure, Why?" Lin replied
There was a short silence as Naru was thinking…
"It's just, I don't know?" He replied
Lin who gave up from getting the answer from his charged just *sigh* and replied "Okay"
Naru only nodded and continued reading the case file.
Someone's POV
There was someone who thought this while looking outside the window.
*sigh* I miss them all, I'm sorry everyone for not telling you yet. It's just that I'm not ready yet and it still a chaotic moment and I'm still trying to settle down here in japan. But I just need this time and I will tell you when this is finished. I am really sorry.
-FLASHBACK-
"Hmm…" ah, my head is aching… I could smell the antiseptic in the air, I guess I'm in a hospital.
*knock* *knock* the door opened a nurse came in. "Oh, You're awake. I'm going to inform nurse station that you're awake so that they can inform the doctor." Then she went out a bit quickly and came back "I'm going to check your vitals for now." She said
"Um… where am I?" I asked
"You're in a hospital in Southwest of England." She replied "May I know your name?" she said
"My Name?" I said I tried to think of my name but there's nothing that I could remember. Then the dull throbbing in my head intensify. "Ugghh!" I started clutching my head. My head it's aching so badly.
"Miss? Miss? Are you okay? Mila call a Doctor?" that's the lasting I heard.
-END OF FLASHBACK-
I was found in the seashore by a couple then was in coma for 6 months they were nice enough to take me in as I was trying to get my memories. I was cu off my thoughts when my driver called me.
"Ma'am we are here" I was cut off from my thinking
"Oh thank you Mr. George"
AND I CAME BACK TO JAPAN NOW!
So,this the first chapter of the lost lover! Hope you like it! I added some scenes and make things a bit clearer than the previous one. Please commit and Review!
READ FIRST THE LOST LOVER: THE BEGINNING IF YOU UNDERSTAND!
Love lots,
Miss KuroYuki
Revised and Edited 3/16/20
