Review Response
EternallyLostAuthor: Thank you for your very constructive critique of the earlier chapters. I was writing this story on the FF App and I am sleepy when I write. So, formatting was kinda shit and I can't read the chapter in a overview to see my structural errors. But, I made some addition and revision keeping in mind what you said. Knowing my bad habbits I think there is still errors that I haven't notice my self.
I wrote this fic for fun, and it's not fun for me if I made a confusing piece of work. So, thank you for your insight. It is true I made in the momment decisions without putting depth and weight on my idea.
I want to make my story as enjoyable much as possible I want it to be made by myself so I can better practice my grammar.
Your right when you say I catered the story to have Minako be the MC. So, I made Izuku have Full-Cowl earlier. Now, in the revisions he has now got 11 Months before U.A so the Sludge Incident happened a month early. So, the month leading to the Entrace Exams was now spent training with Gran Torino, who in this universe married Recovery Girl.
I ovehauled the first 4 chapters you read. Go se what I change and decidde if its good or not.
You're a great help.. Thank you
Bucio: Though I butchered my idea in the earlier chapters. I want thank you for seeing merit on those ideas I made.
Minako's scent is a like pheromone she doesn't know that, but it subtlely affects Izuku. You can smell her horniness.
You'll see what I will do to Todoroki eventually.
Thank you.
TheGreatBubbaJ: I fixed the missing chunks. I felt Todoroki could be a good rival character to Minako so I genderbended her. Inb4, I turned this fic into a reverse harem for Minako with the Class 1-A Best Boy Trinity. Plus, I personally think that 1-A didn't have a good equal male and female ratio.
Thank you for the review.
Anouncement
Chapter 1 - 4 are revised and fixed some grammatical errors. Read if you like.
Onto the story.
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Grapvine
Chapter 5 - A Heart-racing Election
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It was very early in the morning and Minako couldn't believe that there was a large group of reporters and media moguls were crowding the front gate of U.A. They here for All-Might
"Mornin, Minako-san what's going on?" Izuku asked.
"Deku-kun, I think they're here for All-Might they keeping asking any passing students for any information about him." Minako said.
"Hmmm..." Izuku had a perplexed look as he put his finger on his chin.
"This should be confidential information though. Nobody should know who are the staff of U.A to avoid any information leaks. And they ask us students to not share such information about a Pro Hero or Students alike. So, Villains can't exploit any weakness a Pro Hero can have through this information" Izuku said.
"Maybe All-Might presence is too widely know so their is no need in hiding such information. I mean he is the #1 Hero and Symbol of Peace afterall." Minako said.
"Maybe..."
"What's wrong Deku-kun?"
"Nothing, anyways let's go to class-"
"You couple over there is it true that All-Might is teaching in your class?" a female reporter asked.
"No, we're not like that." Izuku said but the reporter ignored what he said.
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Homeroom started after the teachers and staff intervened with the media reporters just outside the school. Even, now they still there waiting for a chance to see the #1 Hero in UA.
"Good job with yesterdays battle training. I've overlooked your performance and all of you did well."
"Bakugou!"
Bakugou tensed upon the mention of his name.
"You were reckless and brash, though I commend your sheer battle instinct. But, you're sorely lacking the necesary cooperativeness of being a Hero. Grow up already and stop wasting your talent." Aizawa scolded.
"Midoriya you did well for your first time fightining someone with a Quirk and actually kept a levelhead. Relying on one's Quirk could only take you so far. I suggest you go to UA's Support Department and cooperate with them to make a Hero Suit that is actually functional not a last-minute set-up from a Costume store."
"As for you Minako. You did well, you followed Izuku's plan to the letter and completed it, but you let your emotion get the better of you and almost jeopardize Izuku's plan by lashing out at Bakugou. Heroics isn't sacrificing oneself to save someone, it's about saving everyone without risking yourself. You don't have a temper problem as far as I can see but think before you act."
"Now on to Homeroom Buisiness.."
'Wow such a mundane activity.' Everyone thought.
"I want all of you to assign a Class President. You decide what method you will use." Aizawa said as retreated to his sleeping bag.
Everyone began everyone wanting the role. The class was in an absolute noisy chaos.
In normal schools, a President role entail mundane tasks nobody wants. But, in a Heroic Course the President entails a leading role fitting for a Hero.
Izuku, Minako, Iida, Shoko and Fumikage weren't exactly joining in the loud activities of their class.
"Leading the many is a heavy responsibility. Mere ambitions does not equate to skill. The sacred office demands the trust of the constituents...! This is a democracy so I forward a voting system for said role." Iida said.
"Hey, this is a class not a congress." Said by Kaminari.
"We'll just go around in circle if we can't decide who will be the leader, Kero. It is reasonable to decide through an open vote."
"Will you allow this, Aizawa-sensei."
"Do however you want, just make it quick."
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Izuku Midoriya - 3 votes
Momo Yaoyarozu - 2 votes
Were the final results.
Iida looked devasted.
"Me?!" Izuku said in confusion.
"Who voted for Deku!!" Bakugou glared at Minako.
But, the purple hair girl just ignored the ash blonde's atempt for intimidation.
"Well at least we know it wasn't you." Sero jokingly said.
"Zero votes... I thought as much! This is the harsh reality of this sacred office." Iida said in defeat."
"Deku is great at situational analysis, and had a level-head against Bakugou." Minako said.
Bakugou growled from that statement.
"And, Yaoyarozu was great at breaking down on what went wrong in the fights and analyzed the pros and cons of everyone's aproach." Shoko said with a matter-of-fact tone.
Izuku and Momo went in-front of the class. Izuku was akwardly rubbing the back of his neck.
"Then we're both in your care." Izuku and Momo simultaneously said.
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Lunch came after Homeroom decided who were the leaders of class 1-A.
Minako sat with the usual group on the cafeteria. Eating their favorite lunches and Uraraka still bringed her packed lunch.
She was saving money she said.
"There's a lot of kids here?" Minako said as she noticed the ever increasing number of student thar stated to fill the cafeteria.
"UA unlike most Hero Academies houses a Heroics course, Support course, General course and a Marketing course in its campus. Most of these Hero schools would usually catter to one or two of those courses as a focus." Izuku explained.
Izuku sighed.
"But, I think I can't be the President it doesn't feel right. I'm a little worried about disapointing everyone." Izuku shrugged as he eat his Katsudon Bowl.
"Midoriya, your sharp and analytical mind is made for this task of the sacred office... That's why I voted for you."
"You hesitated, you want to be the President didn't you? Kero." Asui pointed out.
"Again, ambition and suitability are different matters... I just chose the option that felt right." Iida calmly retorted.
"Hmmm..." Uraraka hummed as she eyed Iida.
"What is it Uraraka-san?" Iida asked.
"The way you speaking you're like a rich kid. The same vibes I get from Momo-chan." Uraraka said.
'Uraraka just say what pops out from her mind... Oh, no...' Minako thought.
'She might slip to both of them of my rather risque hobbies.' Minako thought as she'll discuss this topic to her later.
"... I don't really hide it, but I don't want to people to know, but..." Iida said as he shied away from the rest.
"Yes, I am from a renowned Hero Family, the Idaten Company."
"I am the second son."
"Of course, thats why you're name sounds so familliar. I had my suspicions but I didn't voice them. Ingenium the Hero that hired 65 sidekicks they're now based on Tokyo."
"How very informed of you. He is indeed my older brother."
'He's now very frank about it now.' Mimeta thought.
"He leads people with an unwavering adherence to the rules and regulations. He's truly a beloved Hero. My admiration of him is what led me to want to become a Hero." Iida said with a smile.
"Huh, I think this is the first-time I see you smile, Iida-kun." Uraraka giggled.
"You usually have this stiff aura about you, kero."
"I smile ocassionally." Iida said.
'Vreeeeeeee~!!!'
The alarms came to life.
"Security Level 3 has been breached. All students please evacuate in a orderly fashion." An automated PA system said.
Everyone in the cafeteria began rushing to the exit as immediately began to cramp in the exit.
"What's does Level Three mean?" Iida asked.
"It means the school has been infiltrated the building. This hasn't happen in my three years here." Said by a Senior passing by.
Every student went for the exit and made a stampede. And, Minako was caught in it.
Various loud voices that said, 'Move.', 'Ow.' and 'Stop pushing.' were heard in the chaos around them.
Minako was being trampled or specifically she was being dragged along the crowd.
By the second she felt she was being squished more.
But she was lifted away from that.
"Mineta-san, I thought you were a goner." Said by a relieved Izuku.
Izuku was currently lifting her by the armpits putting her on his shoulders. It was embarassing but atleast wasn't being stepped on. Mineta looked towards the windows and noticed the Press from earlier.
"Iidaaa-kun! The looked by the window."
Minako said as she pointed.
"I see so it is the press who breached UA. Why aren't there any teachers handling the situation?! Mineta-san lift me up and place me where Uraraka is."
Minako nodded as she began to wrap her hair around Iida. Mineta lifted Iida, she scanned the area for Uraraka. Minako found the bubbly girl in between other students 10 meters away where they are.
Minako move Iida to where she is.
"Uraraka-san make me float." Iida said as he reached out for Uraraka.
"Okay." Uraraka said as she slapped her hand on Iida.
Iida felt weightless on Minako's hair and hia weight wasn't straining her hair.
"Mineta-san throw me to the exit over there."
Minako complied and throw Iida as hard as she can.
Iida soared through the student body and as he approached the exit sign. He used his Engine Quirk slow down so he doesn't crash on the wall.
Iida held on to the pipe above the exit sign and he was on a weird pose.
"Everyrhing's alright!!!"
The whole school body calmed down.
"Its just the press. We're student of UA so we must behave befitting to our great instituition!" Iida said aloud.
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After the Cafeteria Incident classes started without issue.
Izuku wanted to announce something to class.
"After some consideration, Yaoyarozu and I decided to elect Iida Tenya as the Class President. I believe he is more deserving of the role. As you can see earlier in the cafeteria. He led everyone through a crisis."
"Iida was pretty manly earlier, so I got no problem to that." Kirishima said.
"He was like a beacon on that exit sign." Kaminari commented.
"Just get on with it." Aizawa said.
"I see I shall accept your offer, Midoriya-san."
And, that's Iida became president of 1-A.
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Minako was done for the day with its wacky and crazy things the happened. She thinks nothing will top this day.
She remembered that she was low on ink and comic paper. So, she went to the store where she usually buy her stuff.
It was art supply store the owner knows what she makes. And, she was a fan of work. Minako buys there since she has a 20% off discount and she only had to give her newest work when their done.
Minako stood in-front of store named Irimi Art Supply. Minako entered the rather small store, but it was packed with supplies for painting, sculpturing and other art paraphernalia. The bell jingle by the door alerted the store owner, Kana Katou.
Kana is a woman in her late 20's. She had an average height and mid-length brown hair. Her eyes looked like a cunning foxes. She was wearing a white shirt with a work apron and jean pants. She had a cheerful vibe to her.
"Ah, Mika-chan you're back, would you like the usually?"
"Yes, Kana-nee." Minako curtly said.
Kana began gathering Minako's usual buys like ink and comic paper.
"So, how was UA? Any boys that got your eye?" Kana slyly asked.
Minako's first thought were of Izuku. How sweet boy was with her since the start.
Minako's cheeks redened.
"Ahhh, to be young so give me some juicy deets." Kana prodedd.
"N-no! It's nothing like that, its just... I don't know."
"What do you mean?" Kana asked.
"Its just that I'm really confused at the momment... I'll admit I do find him cute, but it's too early since 'that'..." Minako said as some dark memory of her Middle School.
"I see... Is he anything like that bastard?" Kana asked knowing what Minako was talking about.
"No, no, not at all. He's very sweet and considerate... Things I'm not."
"There you again with that self-deprecating crap, if you like him why not ask him out?"
"I'm not sure he'll reciprocate what I'm feeling. What will he think of my passion. Will he find it disgusting? Repulsive?!"
"Listen, Mika-chan the crap is behind you. You text the other that the girls in your class found out about your hobbies and they accepted you. I think this boy will be different. What is his name anyway?" Kana asked.
"Izuku Midoriya."
"Hmmm, that names familliar where did I heard it again?" Kana said she tried to remember.
The front door opened and followed by a ring.
The figure walked to the cashier.
It was Izuku.
"Katou-san, can I have a new sketchpad and some new pencils?" Izuku asked for the items.
Minako froze in place.
Kana had a realization. She made a foxy grin towards Minako.
"Midoriya, its been awhile since you last visited like almost a year ago. I thought you were gone?" Kana asked.
"Well I was busy back then, so I had no time to make Hero Analysis and Hero Drawings." Izuku said as he sheepishly scratched the back of his neck.
Izuku finally noticed Minako to his side.
"Ah, Minako-san what brings you here?" Izuku asked as he down to where she is.
"I was buying some stuff..." Minako screamed inwardly as she never expected Izuku to go here.
"So any new drawings, Midoriya-kun?" Kana asked.
"Not much, I have been training for UA since I got in." Izuku said with a smile.
"Oh, that's why you look beefier than usual."
"By the way, are you classmates with Mika-chan over here?"
"Mika?"
"I meant Minako-chan, its her nickname you see."
"I see, she is my classmate."
"What do you think of her?" Kana's foxy eyes were on Minako.
"Ah... Uhh..." Minako couldn't find a proper retort without looking like a fool.
"Minako-san, hmmmmm..." Izuku put his fingers on his chin as he think.
"She's simply amazing, I never saw a more versatile Quirk than hers. And, she's really good at helping others. She's more than her Quirk and I find that really inspiring." Izuku earnestly said.
"Umm, Katou-san I'll take my items now. I still have errands to do."
Kana happily gave him what he ask. And, slip in a surprise for him. It was thin brown booklet that blended perfectly with the sketchpads.
Izuku paid for it.
"See you later, Minako-san." Izuku waved at the two.
This wasn't lost on Minako as her mind began to return to reality. She knew what that book was...
"W-what did. you put in their!!!" Minako grabbed Kana by the collar.
"Teehee, what do you mean my cute, Mika-chan?" Kana mockingly said.
"You know what I mean."
"Oh, come on. You heard what Midoriya said your hair was beautiful~" Kana said with kissy face.
"He said my Quirk is versatile.."
"Meh, Semantics, he'll have a great night that's for sure." Kana playfully stuck out her tongue.
"I have to save my dignity!" Minako slammed her playment on the counter and grabbed her supplies.
Minako left in a hurry.
Kana giggled to herself.
"Ahh, to be young." She said blissfully.
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