Legends of the Dragon pirate
Update for chapter
I'm not quitting the story if you are wondering so don't worry about that, but be prepared to wait awhile if you don't see a new chapter very soon. I'm starting to have a writer's block and i'm trying to figure out what i can do to make the story more entertaining so please don't hate me if I b.s something just leave a review and i'll try harder to make it better with the next chapter.
Q and A
Q From GokuMisticsaiyan547: hey dude again awesome chapter dude I'm really big fan of your story so please don't give up... and if you want to make your story more interesting then please must read golden fairy fanfiction what a story and really worth it...
A: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you really enjoyed it, I saw the fanfic and it was really good! thanks for telling me, it can help me build off some ideas to making the chapters a little bit better. Thanks for reading my story and i hope you continue to read it!
Q From Theconnieusour : First:Obvious nerfing goku(slaping him around does not equal bullet tanking)
Second:Jinbei was in that prison so it is 5 schibukai on the battlefield(Not that they ever would fight together)
Third:(Should fall under first)Even at the beggining of DB when goku fought hungry against Yamcha he was flung multiple times trough boulders and had a boo-boo
Fourth:Level 6 prison is not where they would put goku considering he does not have a bounty nor do they know his ability (pointless sea stone cuffs), maybe the 3rd floor for the chizled body intimidation
Fifth:For a story with this much OC'ness it is following the storyline way too much in other words don't put OP characters in a story and have it play out the same
got others but those points are enough
A: Thanks for the review! I know that some parts are frustrating with my story and i completely understand it. Ill try my best to clarify it so you can understand what my purpose was.
1) I wasnt trying to nerf him i was trying to build up drama for some chapters. Like when he was being punched by the marines,or slapped by hancock i know its impossible for him but i just wanted to build up drama.
2) Yes thank you for telling me i understood my mistake because I actually was reading one piece and saw that jinbei was in prison so that was my fault all the way. If i looked at it more carefully i would have seen it early and changed it so sorry for making the error
3) (same with 1) i was building drama for the readers so they can enjoy it more because it would be so boring if goku just one hit everyone, also i remember hearing goku has a bad habit of not taking a fight very serious in the beginning so im using that to my advantage right now.
4) the only reason i put him on the 6th prison is because Goku "supposedly fought a shichibukai" ie. Boa hancock so it would consider him dangerous since he didn't get killed by her. So thats a reason i put him there. Dont get me wrong his build is enough to intimidate someone but i thought it would be better. Also for the sea stone cuffs i had the kuja women put it on him not the marines, so that they think he was a devil user.
5) Yes your right im using a lot of parts resembling to the storyline because it was respect to the original storyline by both creators but i tried to incorperate some of my own ideas into it as well. Im sorry if this bothers you and ill try to incoperate more of my ideas with the original storyline so then its a mix of the two. Please dont hesitate on with holding any other points i would really love to hear them! Im sorry if you dont like my story but what am i going to do right? Im just a writer lol. Anyways thanks for responding with your concerns/review and i hope to keep you and everyone else entertained thanks and enjoy!
Q from Gogeta89: Good chapter! But can you have Goku turn ssj god i know that sounds ridiculous but it would be badass if he turned ssj god (doesn't have to be blue) in front of everyone. That would put it over the top. If not its cool hope you update soon!
A: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story and I hope you keep reading my story. That's not a bad idea really, I can see it now, like goku turns ssj god but not just like that, but in a tournament against champa and beerus hold on... UPDATE: NEXT CHAPTER Goku vs beerus and champa and a friend returns to help even the odds! back to your question I hope this can tell you what i think of the idea lol. Stick around to see the next chapter thanks and enjoy!
This will be a chapter that i want to see what everyone thinks so leave a review and tell me what you think should I make this chapter with a tournament with Goku and an ally vs. Beeurs and Champa. because it's a really good idea so I want to know what you the readers think. again thanks for reading this story it really means a lot to me and i hope to write to you soon!