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Barry stared in confusion, wondering why was everything happening the same way it had before Cisco called out. "Hey, what's going on? Dude."
"Huh? Yeah. Cisco, I'm here." Barry said.
"What happened? Why'd you stop?" Cisco asked.
"I just got a little disoriented." Barry stammered.
"You need to make up some time, man. You'd better hurry up." Cisco said.
"Hurry? What are...?"
"Hurry, as in, get to the morgue." Cisco reminded, now confused.
"The morgue? I was there. Yesterday." Barry said, puzzled.
"What are you talking about? Come on, you gotta go." Cisco ordered as Barry sped to the morgue.
Barry entered the morgue and to his surprise, everything was happening exactly the same way it did the first time he entered the previous day, with the CSIs and detectives making the place a crime scene, with the coroner dead.
"Hey, Barr, what's with all the water? Did the sprinkler system go off or something?" Joe asked.
It took a moment for Barry to realize what was going on. "What? No, I checked the sprinklers. They're all intact."
"And it's not pipe leak either." Patty added.
"But the water has ice in it." Barry said before they neared the coroner's corpse. "And the bruises on the coroner aren't just on his face. Check. Look at his torso."
Joe lifted the coroner's shirt to see bruises on his torso. "Whoa."
"How did you know that?" Patty asked.
"He was killed by hail." Barry said. "We have to listen to the recording."
"Recording?" Joe asked, puzzled.
"Joe, Patty, we got something." Eddie entered with a recorder. "The coroner's office just installed an automated dictation system. Listen to this."
He turned on the recorder as they listened to the coroner's frightened voice, while Barry wiped his face. "Please. No more."
"I'll stop when you tell me." The other man said as Joe and Patty recognized the voice.
"Stop."
"Who killed him?"
"Oh, my God…" Patty paled.
"That's Mark Mardon." Barry said as she and Joe turned to him in surprise. "He wants revenge."
Again, he heard the coroner beg before he screamed in pain.
Later, S.T.A.R. Labs
"Clyde Mardon has a brother?" Caitlin asked as they saw the profiles on the screen.
"So, both brothers survived the plane crash and then the dark matter released from the particle accelerator explosion affects them both in virtually the same way." Wells said.
"Virtually the same way." Barry said, repeating Wells's words as Wells turned to him in surprise.
"That's right." Wells said, a bit surprised.
"Only Mark's not like Clyde at all." Barry added. "He can do things that you couldn't even imagine."
Cisco chuckled. "You mean he's sort of like a Weather Wizard?"
"Weather Wizard?" Barry repeated, much to everyone's surprise.
"Yeah." Cisco said as he took a sip from his drink before groaning as Barry remembered what happened next.
"Trigeminal headache?" Caitlin asked.
"Trigeminal headache?" Barry said at the same time as Caitlin, Joe and Patty stared at him before Wells narrowed his eyes.
"Mr. Allen. A word, please." Wells said.
"Yeah." Barry said, following Wells into the treadmill room.
"You ruptured the time continuum, didn't you? You're experiencing temporal reversion." Wells realized as Barry closed the door behind him.
"Yeah." Barry nodded.
"How long?" Wells asked.
"A… a day and some change. It's like I'm living it all over again." Barry said.
"Yeah, that's good. That means there's not too much you could've messed up yet." Wells nodded. "How did this happen?"
"Uh, I don't know. I mean, I was running faster than I've ever ran. And… and the first time I lived this day, some horrible things happened. There was a tidal wave and—"
"No. Do not tell me." Wells interrupted Barry. "I do not wanna know anything about the future you experienced. Nothing."
"OK, but, Dr. Wells—"
"Barry, time is an extremely fragile construct." Wells cautioned. "Any deviation, no matter how small, could result in a cataclysm. Here's what you're going to do." Barry sat down, rubbing his face. "Everything you did before, every word you uttered, every step you took, you're going to do again. And you're not going to tell anyone this happened."
Barry sighed.
Wells entered the Time Vault as he turned on Gideon.
"Good day, Dr. Wells."
Wells sighed. "Time will tell, Gideon. Show me the future."
"As you wish." Gideon showed him the newspapers about the Flash vanishing in Crisis with the byline name changing from "Iris West-Allen" to "Julie Greer" and back. "The future remains in flux, Dr. Wells."
"If anything changes, alert me immediately." Wells said.
"Of course, doctor." Gideon said.
Later, CCPD
Barry saw Singh arguing with Joe, Eddie and Patty in his office as he remembered what had happened to Singh the first time around before Joe, Eddie and Patty went out.
"Barry, back in that morgue, you knew exactly what we needed to look for. How?" Patty asked.
"Lucky guesses, I guess." Barry shrugged.
"Just as much as it was back in S.T.A.R. Labs?" Patty questioned.
Barry shrugged and Patty was about to ask more before Joe intervened. "Look, Mardon's dangerous and you need to stay put, Patty."
"Joe—"
"Patty, Singh's orders." Joe intervened.
Barry was about to open his mouth, trying to warn Patty about Mardon before remembering what had happened with him attacking her. "Patty… I gotta run an errand. I'll see you later, all right?"
"OK…" Patty trailed off as Barry left.
Central City
The Flash sped into the apartment complex in which Mardon was hiding before he found him in his apartment as Mardon got up from his bed. "I didn't know there was anyone else like me."
The Flash's eyes were pulsing with lightning before he grabbed Mardon and sped off.
Later, S.T.A.R. Labs
Mardon was locked up in a cell in the Pipeline as he glared at the Flash, Cisco and Caitlin.
"I'm gonna break out and I'm gonna create a tidal wave that destroys your entire city!" Mardon yelled before the door to the Pipeline closed.
"So, I still don't understand. How did you find him?" Cisco wondered.
"Uh, I just had a hunch." Barry shrugged.
"That's gotta be some kind of record." Caitlin noted.
Cisco laughed. "Yeah." He turned around, about to leave. "Well, there goes my excuse for bailing on my brother's birthday." He left with Caitlin as Wells glared at Barry.
"Do you have any idea what you've just done?" Wells demanded.
"Yeah, I do. I just saved a lot of lives." Barry said.
"I warned you not to mess with the timeline." Wells reminded.
"Dr. Wells, if you would let me tell you what was going to happen, you'd understand why I did this." Barry said.
"Whatever tragedy you think you've just averted, time will find a way to replace it and trust me, Barry, the next one could be much worse." Wells said grimly.
Later, Barry was running on the treadmill but nothing was happening as he panted out.
"I don't get it. I've been running just as fast as I was when it happened and nothing. I'm still here." Barry said as he stopped and sat down.
"Any number of things could've triggered the wormhole that allowed you to repeat your day." Wells said. "Your emotions, circumstances, cortisol levels, all of the above."
"I mean, my adrenaline was super high since Patty and the entire city—"
"No, no, no, no details, I told you." Wells interrupted Barry before he could explain.
Barry sighed as he got up. "I'm sorry, but Mark Mardon's already locked in the Pipeline and nothing bad has happened."
Patty then entered and knocked on the door. "Am I interrupting?"
"Not at all, Patty." Wells said.
"Hey. What are you doing here?" Barry asked.
"When were you going to tell me you got Mardon?" Patty demanded, more than a little hurt, glaring.
"I just haven't had a chance yet." Barry lied.
"What were you busy with, tell me." Patty folded her arms, skeptical.
"Patty, if you're mad, I'm so—"
"I'm not mad. But honestly, you were acting strange back in the morgue." Patty said, skeptical.
"I always act strange." Barry lied.
"Stranger." Patty corrected.
Barry was about to tell her before he saw Wells's look. "Look, Patty, there are just some things that I can't tell you and you're gonna have to trust me."
"Barry, you know you can tell me everything, do you?" Patty pleaded as he sighed, remembering what Mardon had almost done to her.
"I… am not ready to tell you yet." Barry said hesitantly. "But I'm just glad that Mardon is not going to hurt anyone anymore, especially you. So… how about we go out on a drink? I mean…"
"Are you going to tell me what really happened?" Patty asked.
"I… I just want to make sure we make the best of what we've got." Barry said as she stared, considering.
"O…kay…" She trailed off as Barry left, leaving her confused.
Later, Central City
"Barry, would you please tell me what happened?" Patty asked as Barry was hesitant to tell her, while they were in a bar with Cisco. "And I want the truth, how did you know where Mardon was?" Barry stopped, hesitant as she shot him a look. "Barry, please. All I'm asking you for is to be honest with me. What's going on?"
"I…" Barry was hesitant to tell her. "This is going to sound crazy—"
"Barry, we've seen a guy turn into mist and a woman blow stuff up by touching them, so I think that 'crazy' might be our new normal." Patty said.
Barry was about to open his mouth before he saw Cisco talking to a pretty blonde woman. "Wow, looks like someone's got a date tonight."
"Well, Cisco, you sly dog." Patty teased before she turned to Barry again. "What were you going to tell me?"
Barry sighed, not sure how to tell her or whether he should, considering Wells's warning. "I… just… had a feeling."
"About where Mardon was or about where what was going to be or what was going to happen?" Patty asked skeptically. "Barry." She gave him a look and Barry sighed.
"It's… I had a hunch, that's it." Barry said and she snorted, immediately seeing through him.
"You know, after everything we've been through, I thought you'd be honest with me." Patty said with pleading and understanding look. "Barry, if you need to get something off your chest, I'm always here for you. But, please, just don't lie to me."
"I don't want to lie to you." Barry admitted.
Patty scoffed. "But you don't want to tell me the truth, either. What's going on?"
Barry sighed. "It's… complicated."
Patty sighed with a disappointed look as she left, leaving Barry hurt.
Cisco entered with the woman, who had introduced herself as Lisa, into the house as it was dark in the room.
"I can't believe this. The day started out pretty terrible, but it's turning out pretty damn good." Cisco said.
"I'll say." Lisa quipped as Cisco looked around the house.
"Wow. Look at this, these are nice digs." Cisco said, taking off his jacket.
"Oh, we're just squatting." Lisa said.
"We?" Cisco asked, confused.
"Yeah." Lisa said, revealing her blonde hair to be a wig as she took it off, revealing brunette hair. "Me and my brother."
The lights turned on as Cisco recognized the voice, while turning around. "Hello, Cisco. What exactly are your intentions with my sister?" Snart asked.
"Oh, come on." Cisco groaned, realizing he had been duped. "I should've known better. I am not that lucky." A dreadful realization hit him. "Please, don't kill me for kissing your sister."
"You kissed him?" Snart asked the woman.
"You're not Dad, Lenny." Lisa shrugged.
"I know, Dad's in jail. Sterling role model." Snart drawled.
"What do you want, Snart?" Cisco demanded, glaring.
"Guns. Heat and cold, to be precise." Snart said.
"There's no way I'm making weapons for you. Never again." Cisco glared.
"Mick." Snart called out as Mick entered with Cisco's brother Dante, who was gagged and tied up as Cisco paled. "I know I would do everything in my power to protect my family. The question is, will you?"
Later, S.T.A.R. Labs
Caitlin and Wells heard Barry tap the doorframe as he entered the Cortex, while they turned to him, confused.
"What? No whoosh-in?" Caitlin asked.
"I needed the walk." Barry said, clearly tired.
"What happened?" Wells asked.
"Nothing. Uh... Patty and I… I don't wanna talk about it actually." Barry said.
"OK." Wells said, for a brief second smiling in satisfaction.
"Have you talked to Cisco? I've been trying him on his cell, but he's not answering. I'm kind of worried about him. He had a rough night." Caitlin said.
"Trust me. It got better." Barry assured before his phone went off and he answered the call. "Hey, Joe, what's up?"
"Yeah, Snart's back." Joe said and Barry paled.
"Wait, Cold is back?" Barry demanded.
"Yeah, he was spotted at the Santini crime family casino. If he's hitting the Santinis, we could be looking at the beginning of a mob war." Joe explained. Barry hung up, sighing in frustration before turning to Caitlin and Wells.
"Well, this day just keeps getting better, doesn't it? Wells drawled.
Later, Central City
Snart and Lisa were in a casino in a shootout with the Santini mob as Lisa used her new weapon that sprayed some gold-like substance, encasing one of the mobsters before the Flash sped in, taking out the mobsters.
"How many times are we gonna go through this, Snart?" The Flash demanded.
"Until the best man wins." Snart said as he went out from his cover, about to shoot the Flash until he held Lisa as a human shield.
"Drop the gun!" The Flash ordered as Snart mockingly raised his hands in surrender.
"We both know you're not going to do anything to her." Snart gloated. "Oh, by the way, meet my baby sister. Lisa, Flash. Flash, Lisa. Cisco has been very, very busy. Unless you want me to mail small, frozen pieces of him back to his family, I'd take your hands off her."
The Flash glared and seethed, realizing Snart had him before he let Lisa go. "Let him go, Snart."
"I'll think about it." Snart said as Lisa blew the Flash a kiss before they both left.
"God." Barry groaned.
Later, the police was making the casino a crime scene as Joe approached Barry.
"Barr. Witnesses reported seeing the Flash. They said you had Snart dead to rights, but you let him go. Why?" Joe demanded.
"Cisco. Snart and his sister have him." Barry said.
"Oh, man." Joe sighed. "OK. Get to S.T.A.R. Labs. Patty and I'll get there when I can."
"Well, I…" Barry hesitated as he saw Patty looking at him apprehensively. "OK."
Joe noticed how Barry and Patty were looking at each other. "Is everything OK between you two?"
"Everything's fine, Joe, really." Barry lied as he left.
Later, S.T.A.R. Labs
Barry sat down, disappointed as he and Wells were examining the footage.
"So there's Cisco getting into a car with Snart's sister. The license plate is iced over." Wells said as Barry banged the desk in frustration.
"All right, Dr. Wells, you were right. I screwed with time, now time is screwing with me. Cold is back, he kidnapped Cisco, and Patty—"
"Stop right there, before you cause another disruption to the timeline." Wells interrupted.
"Please, Dr. Wells. Please, I have to talk to someone." Barry pleaded.
"Go ahead." Wells said after a moment.
"In the previous version of today, Captain Singh is seriously injured, Patty is in danger and she almost dies because of Mardon and I can't stop it." Barry said.
"And now Cisco's life is on the line, while Patty is safe." Wells deduced.
"But she knows something's up. What am I supposed to tell her?" Barry said. "I don't want to lie to her. I care about her."
"Barry…" Wells sighed. "Sometimes the best way to protect the people you love, is by keeping from them the biggest secret in your life."
"I thought that I was helping people by stopping Mardon." Barry said, disappointed.
"Yes, but this new ability of yours, Barry, is a dangerous thing. You only traveled back in time one day. What if you traveled back decades? Centuries?" Wells pointed out, putting down his glasses. "Imagine the havoc you could wreak."
Barry stared, considering. "But I will have the opportunity to travel back in time in the near future and save my mom." He turned to Wells, feeling betrayed. "Are...? You're saying I shouldn't?"
"I'm saying how many more people could die, if your mother lives?" Wells pointed out.
CCPD
"Is everything OK between you and Barry?" Joe asked as he walked down the precinct with Patty.
"Honestly, I don't know." Patty said. "Don't you think…"
"…he's been acting strange the whole day? Yeah." Joe nodded.
"He's never lied to me before. What's going on with him?" Patty wondered.
"I'm not sure." Joe said. "But the best thing you can do, is let it be for now." He took a breath as he sat at his desk, while Patty listened.
"The first few weeks he lived with us, he would often get sad, angry, upset and frustrated." Joe said. "And quite often he acted…"
"…off?" Patty asked and Joe nodded.
"He would never tell me or Iris what was going on with him. It was mostly about the man in yellow killing his mother, not that we believed him at the time, of course." Joe said. "We tried to be there for him but he would rather push us away than let us help him. And when there were other issues, like bullies or… him behind with a science project, he'd rather deal with it alone, than let someone help, since he would want to keep that pain bottled up and channel it all on his own. And it would take weeks for him to let us in. And… maybe the deal with the Reverse-Flash has been bringing it all back to surface." He took a breath as Patty considered. "All I'm saying is… he needs some space to process. You can be there for him but you can't push the issue."
S.T.A.R. Labs
"There's nothing on the satellite thermography." Caitlin said, looking at the computer.
"You were right. This is all my fault." Barry sighed.
"How is this your fault?" Caitlin asked, confused.
"Brave heart, Barry. We'll get Cisco back." Wells assured.
"I'm back." Cisco said upon entering, much to their surprise.
"My God, are you OK?" Caitlin asked as she hugged him. "We were so worried."
"What happened?" Barry asked.
"How did you escape?" Wells inquired.
"I didn't." Cisco shook his head.
"Snart just let you go. Why?" Barry asked, confused as Caitlin pulled away from Cisco.
"He… he tortured my brother." Cisco said, breathing out, hurt. "And he said he was gonna kill him if I didn't... if I didn't tell him..." He stopped, unable to continue.
"Tell him what?" Caitlin asked.
"Who the Flash really is." Cisco said as Barry and Caitlin sighed. "I... Honestly, man, they could've killed me... but they were gonna kill my brother." He started to break down in tears. "I couldn't let them do that."
"Hey." Barry neared Cisco, assuring him.
"I'm sorry, Barry. I'm so sorry." Cisco said as Barry put a hand on his shoulder.
"No. I put you in that position." Barry pulled him in for a hug. "I'm the one who's sorry." Cisco breathed out as he pulled away, about to leave. "Where are you going?" Barry asked.
"I don't deserve to be here. I won't be the one to put you in jeopardy, not again. Never again." Cisco said as he left.
Cisco was in his workshop, packing things up as Wells entered.
"Don't worry, I'll be out of here soon." Cisco said.
"Well, before you shuffle off forever, may I show you something?" Wells asked as Cisco followed him to where they had trapped the Reverse-Flash on Christmas.
"I get it. I failed." Cisco said.
"No, no, no. Now, you're an incredibly clever guy, Cisco. So, why don't you tell me why would I bring you down here?" Wells asked.
Cisco paced down the room, looking around. "Because we all failed that night, but we kept going." He eyed the trap he had built. "We kept trying to protect each other and Barry, despite the setbacks."
"Making a choice between two people you love, that is the hardest dilemma you will ever face." Wells said.
"Well, you won't have to worry about me making the wrong decision again." Cisco drawled as he sat down.
"All you proved today, Mr. Ramon, is that you're human. All you proved today is that you love your brother. And the reason that we all want you to stay, is that we love you too." Wells assured as Cisco stared, considering. "Now, I am not a parent but in many ways, you have shown me what it's like to have a son."
Cisco looked down, contemplating before Caitlin called out over P.A. "Guys, you should get up here."
"Shall we?" Wells asked before he and Cisco returned to the Cortex.
"The casino wasn't the target." Barry said.
"Then why did he do it?" Cisco wondered.
"Casinos keep tons of cash on hand to cover their markers, not to mention the money that they make." Caitlin said.
"But if they're under attack, the protocol is to relocate the money outside the casino." Barry said.
"So, that was Snart's plan all along, to trigger the move." Wells realized.
"OK, where is it now?" Cisco asked.
Central City
Snart, Mick and Lisa were on bikes, ambushing the transport truck as the mobsters opened the cargo door, shooting at them but Lisa disabled one of their guns with her gold gun, while Mick burned the tires before the Flash grabbed Snart and dragged him into the forest as Mick and Lisa fell off their bikes, while the Flash and Snart faced off in the forest.
"Good to see you… Barry." Snart said.
"We have to talk." Barry said, taking off his mask. "I know Cisco told you who I am."
"Can't really blame the kid for giving you up. You or his brother? Come on. I put him in a tight spot." Snart smirked. "Same kind I got you in right now. Can't really stop me, now that I know who you are."
"I could speed you to my private prison where you'll never see the light of day." Barry countered.
"You could but then I won't be around to stop my own private uplink that'll broadcast your identity to the world." Snart said and Barry sighed, realizing he had him. "So, the million-dollar question: What to do with me now, Barry Allen?"
"I won't let you keep stealing whatever you want, whenever you feel like it. It needs to end." Barry said.
"Can't do that. It's what I do." Snart shrugged.
"Then find a new line of work." Barry pointed out.
"Don't want to."
"And why's that?"
"The same reason you keep running after guys like me. The adrenaline. The thrill of the chase. I love this game. And I'm very good at it."
"Then go play it somewhere else. Leave Central City."
"Can't do that either. I love it here." Snart took a breath, looking around. "This city is my home."
Barry took a breath, nearing Snart. "You've seen what I can do. You know that I can stop you. You wanna keep pushing your luck, go for it. But from here on out, no one else dies. If you're as good as you say you are, you don't have to kill anyone to get what you want."
Snart smirked. "That's true."
"And if you or anyone in your rogues gallery goes near any of my friends or family again, I don' t care who you tell my identity to. I'm putting you away." Barry warned as Snart stared in consideration.
"I guess your secret's safe… Flash. For now." Snart said as Barry put on his mask. "Oh, I don't suppose you'd give me a ride back to town, would you?" Barry chuckled as he sped off, while Snart smirked. "The Rogues. Cute." He smiled at the thought of his group named like that.
CCPD
Barry entered his lab but stopped, eying Patty nervously as she stared at him with passive look.
"Look, Patty, I—"
"Barry, before you say anything, let me start first." Patty said as he stopped. "I… I understand how hard it's gotta be for you regarding the Reverse-Flash that you think you gotta deal with it alone. I was pissed the other night, when I found out that Mardon was back. And, God, did I want to smash something so badly." She smiled. "You know, I've imagined in my head dozens of scenarios of me rushing to him without a second thought and almost getting myself killed, without me listening to you, Joe or Singh and it made me realize how worried you must have been for me."
Barry breathed out. It was close enough to what happened to the previous version of today. "Yeah. Honestly… you freaked me out the other day and I… I just couldn't stop worrying about you, all I could think about was that we needed to find Mardon ASAP."
Patty nodded, looking down, a bit ashamed. "I guess I owe you and Joe an apology."
"No." Barry shook his head. "No, I get it, really. I just… I don't want to see you get hurt and imagining what Mardon might do to you frightened me to the bone." He held her hand. "I just can't stand the thought of losing you."
Patty gave him a reassuring smile. "You're not going to lose me, Barry." She said as she pulled him in for a kiss.
CCPN
Mason Bridge was writing an article before the computer turned off and he heard a distorted voice that frightened him as he looked around for the source.
"Harrison Wells. What do you know about him?"
Mason turned around before the Reverse-Flash punched him, sending him crashing towards another table before Mason crawled on the floor.
"What do you know?"
"Everything I know is in that drive. I swear." Mason said, terrified as he faced the Reverse-Flash.
The Reverse-Flash punched Mason, knocking him towards the ceiling before punching him again, sending him across the room as Mason crawled back in fear. "Everything?" The Reverse-Flash demanded.
"Everything! Just take it!" Mason wailed, crawling towards a wall. Suddenly, a fist protruded from his chest before pulling away as Mason closed his eyes and went limp.
"You really were on to the story of the century. Well, this century anyway." Thawne said as he phased his hand into Mason's hard drive, erasing all evidence he had before disposing of the computer and Mason's corpse.
Later, S.T.A.R. Labs
"Do you think I made a mistake? Letting Snart go?" Barry wondered as he was with Wells in the Cortex.
"You did what you felt was right in the moment. And really, Barry, that's the best any of us can hope for. For now, let's be thankful the timeline remains intact." Wells said as he turned to the monitor.
Barry suddenly remembered, wiping his face. "Oh, I keep forgetting, I've been meaning to ask you. It's about Simon…" He stopped as he stared in shock, as he saw on the computer the news bulletin about Mason Bridge going missing, realizing something indeed was off about Wells.
"You were saying, Mr. Allen?" Wells asked.
"Uh..." Barry quickly turned off the news. "Nothing. Sorry." He got up and left, putting on his jacket. "Goodnight, Dr. Wells."
"Goodnight, Barry." Wells said before he looked at Patty's photo. Well, if Mardon could not do the job, he would have to try another tactic.
Later, CCPD
Joe and Patty entered Barry's lab as he stared outside the window.
"Is everything OK, Barry?" Patty asked.
"Why'd you wanna meet up here so late?" Joe asked.
"I think that maybe you were right about Dr. Wells." Barry said, turning around to face them.
"Which part?" Joe asked.
"All of it." Barry said.
I've debated whether Barry would tell Patty about time travel or not but then I remembered how I didn't like how Barry was unable to be honest with her in the show because of Zoom threatening to kill her. It always felt to me that if Barry had been more honest with Patty, it could have worked out but Patty had been written off because of Shantel VanSanten being casted into Shooter TV series and the way Patty's send-off was done was terrible and they left her forgotten.
But she has also shown to be understanding and more mature than Iris, so I didn't want to have her be too angry at Barry for lying, like how Felicity is at Oliver or Iris is at Barry. I tried to have her reaction more leveled down, not sure if I did OK there.
So, what do you guys think?
Please review and let me know if you have been enjoying this and want for me to continue.