Uzumaki Naruto Chronicles Rewrite
Chapter 15
Author's notes: Special Thanks to Rose Tiger, Narhina, Ultimate Kuuga, and Danny vs a month, thank you all for your reviews and support. As for the Guest that reviewed asking about a scene in the original story, please pm me so we can talk about it, if not hopefully your answer will be answered with this, the scene in the original was poorly written, it was a trashy porn scene, to put it kindly. That particular scene is gone, but there will be similar aspects in this story, done very differently and written very differently I do not want to go further into it because I do not want to ruin the scene for those that have not read the original and don't know what to expect. Please do PM me, no judgement but I legitimately want to discuss this with you and let you know what to expect. Please Read ad Review
Hinata was not happy, she was not excited about this mission. She was still so hurt by Naruto. Every time she saw him it was worse and worse. Her heart hurt so much. She was trying to do anything she could to get it to stop. That was why she was letting Kabuto court her the way he was. She knew she loved Naruto, she loved him more than anything. Yet somehow when she was with Kabuto she felt better. Kabuto treated her well, he was so kind to her, and it made her feel better. She was painstakingly thinking about starting to date him. She was hoping he could fill this void in her. She had to find something she couldn't keep doing this. It hurt so much, she did not know what to do. So far the only thing even slightly filling that void was Kabuto. She would have talked to Naruto about it, but it hurt even more to talk to him. She was so mad at him for what he had done to her, he broke her. According to him it was to save her from hurting later, but that wasn't good enough for her. She needed someone to be mad at, and she could not think of anyone better than Naruto. He was after all the one who broke her.
Hinata was broken out of her thoughts by Anko calling out her name, "Hinata check the surrounding area please."
Hinata nodded "Byakugan" She gained her 360 degree view and checked around them, they had been traveling for the last 3 hours, and had just gotten to the boarder of the Fire Country. Hinata held up her hand, there were 4 ninja inbound.
Kakashi called out, "Formation B"
Shikamaru and Hinata jumped down by the merchant as Naruto, Anko, and Kakashi jumped down surrounding them.
There was a whistling through the air as Kakashi screamed "Get Down!"
A large sword whistled through the air just over their heads, as Shikamaru pulled Hinata and Janshi down with him to the ground. A man appeared on the sword as it embedded itself high in a tree. Kakashi attacked the man instantly throwing Kunai at the man.
"It's Zabuza, the demon of the mist. Stay out of this fight all of you, he isn't on your level. That goes for you as well Anko." Anko glared at him but nodded.
Zabuza chuckled, "Well if it isn't Kakashi the copy ninja. You are quite well known."
Kakashi shook his head, "What do you want?"
Zabuza looked towards Janshi, the merchant, and nodded. Janshi kicked Shikamaru away, then grabbed Hinata pulling her hand behind her back and yanking it up. Hinata grunted in pain, as the man continued to apply pressure on her arm, while taking a kunai out of her pouch and putting it to her throat.
Naruto was not having that, he appeared next to Janshi in the air aiming a kick at his head. It was blocked as a ninja in mist hunter nin garb blocked the kick, turning and throwing him into a tree. Naruto twisted his body however and landed on the tree on his feet.
Naruto was just a distraction as Shikamaru sent out his shadow to trap Janshi. He made Janshi drop Hinata and back away. Hinata jumped away and Shikamaru released the man. Hinata and Shikamaru jumped back next to Naruto and Anko moved in front of them.
Anko was furious, this whole mission was a trap to get the Hyuuga heiress, but Hinata was Anko's student and she cared for the girl. She would not let her be hurt.
Janshi spoke up, "Step out of our way, let us have the girl and we will leave you all alive."
Anko glared at the man, "Go fuck yourself, you will never get your grubby fucking hands on her."
Zabuza sighed, "If that is truly how you feel, fine. Take them all, capture the snake mistress if you can, I know some people who will pay big money for her."
Anko growled now she was really pissed, she charged Janshi, but was knocked to the side by a ninja that identified himself as Haku. Anko attacked him leaving Janshi to the others.
Naruto attacked Janshi appearing next to him and firing a kick at his head. Janshi pulled a sword and swiped down at Naruto, he figured Naruto had nothing that could block his sword from here.
Naruto grinned and fired a pulse of chakra into his hidden blades. They fired out and he blocked the sword with one, and stabbed at Janshi with the other. The fake merchant jumped out of the way grinning, nice trick he said.
Zabuza leapt at Kakashi swinging his giant sword from behind him, Kakashi dodged out of the way. Zabuza kept his momentum though and spun his sword changing the direction and angling at Kakashi. Kakashi blocked the attack with a kunai and pushed the sword away firing a kick at Zabuza, the ninja jumped back and went through handsigns, "Hidden Mist Jutsu."
The entire area was blanketed in a thick mist as Zabuza grinned. Kakashi could no longer see in the mist. He grimaced and pulled his headband up, allowing him to see a little better. But the mist was chakra laced and he could not see well. However he was not the kind of ninja that let his other senses go, just because he had a superior eye. He closed his eyes and let his other senses flood his mind.
Zabuza snuck around through the mist until he was behind Kakashi, he was shocked when Kakashi turned and hurled a kunai at him. Very few ninja were capable of fighting him in this mist, he knew Kakashi was supposed to be good, but not this good, that was ridiculous. He was even more surprised when Kakashi appeared next to him firing a kick into his head. The kick hit and Zabuza rocketed to the side. He dug his sword into the ground to stop his momentum. He planted his feet on the ground and charged back at the copy ninja. Zabuza attacked swinging his sword at Kakashi's neck, Kakashi ducked the sword and fired back up, firing a punch into Zabuza's stomach. The demon of the mist stumbled back gripping his gut.
Hinata was terrified, she could not see anything, but she stood behind Shikamaru and hoped he could protect her. She knew they were after her eyes, the same eyes that had killed her uncle, and the same eyes that were failing her right now. Her Byakugan was useless, and as a result so was her fighting style. Shikamaru would be alone if one of the ninja's got pass her teammates.
She had forgot that there had been two other ninjas approaching them. The two popped up and one kicked Shikamaru, while the other popped up behind Hinata, she turned around and fired a blind palm strike at the man, but he brushed it aside and laughed at the girl. He punched her in the face, and while she was stunned he turned her around, bound her hands together, and then knocked her out. He grinned and took off with her.
Naruto was getting sick of the mist, he created a large amount of clones and they all went through hand seals the all let out the same justu at the same time, "Wind style: Great wind gust!"
The mist spread out and away, Naruto grinned but then was floored when he saw Shikamaru fighting a ninja, and Hinata nowhere in sight.
"Fuck!" Naruto yelled as he jumped away from Jashin and sent his clones at the man. Naruto jumped next to Shikamaru and kicked the man he was fighting away.
"Shikamaru, where the fuck is Hinata." The blond asked the genius.
Shikamaru sighed, "Two men popped up these are the demon brothers, one of them took Hinata I could not stop them. I am sorry."
Naruto cursed again, but had to block a strike from Jashin as he laughed, "By now your Hyuuga heiress is on her way to the Hidden cloud. They want the Byakugan. They are not fans of leaf ninja, so there is no telling what they will do to her. Once she crosses the border into the Land of Lightning, it is over.
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