Uzumaki Naruto Chronicles Rewrite

Chapter 49

Author's notes: So I am going to go on a little rant about anonymous reviewers flaming, First off the whole kill yourself virgin thing, really? Because I wrote something? Grow up a little, secondly you assume virgin is a bad thing, in reality a lot of people in the world who are virgins waiting for marriage are quite proud of it. The reality being you are probably a virgin and don't like it, which is why you consider yourself a virgin. Last but not least if you don't like the story, and have nothing to say that is constructive (no telling someone to kill themselves is not constructive) then stop reading the story, I won't miss a reader like you. If you wanna say something like that man up and send me a pm with it and we can talk like adults about the problem you have with the story. Otherwise please feel free to take your own advice.

Special thanks to Danny vs A Month, Pochi-san, Naruhinalover20, nightwind83, luisdox, thor94, and Rose Tiger for their reviews.

So it just came to my attention that the Horizontal lines I have been putting in between scene changes aren't showing up online so from now on i will use just ellipses (...) to show a scene change. Sorry for the confusion.

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Sorry for the long author's note and the rant.

Hinata woke in her cell when a guard dropped 9's broken body into the cell with her. Hinata crawled painfully over to her, Hinata's feet too burned along with her now shattered right knee. She rolled 9 over, and gasped. This was far worse than anything they had done to her. Kushina had been beaten, violated, cut to pieces, whipped. 9's entire body was destroyed, she was unconscious. The signs of puncture marks were present all over her bruised and beaten body. Her body was swollen and purple and black in most places, burn marks were present as well.

Hinata wrapped her arms around the woman gently as she pulled her into a hug and cried, Hinata had no idea what she could do. 9 was always saving her, and yet she could do nothing to help 9. Hinata didn't know how much longer she could take this. She was trying so hard to be strong, for Naruto. However she was starting to think that Naruto would never even want to look at her again after all of this. She had never felt that she was pretty, she had never been super thin like Sakura and Ino, never tall like Ino, and she never thought she really had that great of a body. Now her body was a mess, she was scarred, broken. She could never be a strong ninja like Naruto now that her leg was messed up the way it was. She cried at the thought, everything depended on her being a strong ninja, she was supposed to be the clan head one day, she couldn't do that if she couldn't even walk right. Naruto would be Hokage some day, he couldn't be with a weak girl like her.

Hinata started to sob, where had it all go so wrong, how had she let herself be tricked by Kabuto the way she was, she had let him touch her, let him kiss her, she had kissed him, now she didn't have a choice, Kabuto was right she thought, she was just a mutt.

It was a couple hours later when 9 finally woke up, she woke up to Hinata crying holding her the best the poor girl could, "Hinata, sweetie, whats wrong?"

"9 I-I can't do this anymore! What am I supposed? I am helpless here. I can do nothing!" Hinata cried out.

9 shook her head, "It will be okay Hinata. I promise."

Hinata looked at her, "How will it be okay? How will it ever be okay!"

9 couldn't answer for a moment, "Hinata, you just have to keep faith, if you lose your faith you won't make it through this, you can't."

Hinata looked away, "Maybe I don't want to make it through this! Maybe I just want it all to end here and now."

9 gasped, "Hinata, what about Naruto? What about your family?"

Hinata bit her lip, "What about them? Naruto is dead as far as I know. My family won't mean anything when I get home if I ever get home, I will most likely be disowned so that my younger sister can be heir. I will be excommunicated from the Hyuugas because of this knee, and all my scars. Unable to be married off, and unable to be clan head. There is no longer anything left for me, nothing but pain."

9 started to cry now, "What about me? You have me."

Hinata nodded, "I'm sorry 9. I'm so sorry. You are all I have left right now."

"Oh well that is just precious." Kabuto laughed out, "I know how to punish the two of you now, you two didn't think we were done after you tried to escape did you? Ha! these next punishments will be quite fun."

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Anko was again in the water, Kakashi had left a clone with her to watch her and make sure she was okay as he went through his own training. He was training hard, she had never seen the man so motivated, he had so much talent when he was young, all he did was train, he never had time for friends, but after Obito had died, he had changed he became more aloof, only really trained to upkeep his skills never really improve on them.

His driving force had of course been Orochimaru, he wanted to kill the snake bastard. Anko herself was trying to walk, not having much luck with it, but she was slowly walking across the the water now, she was finally able to stand on her own outside of the water as well, not just in the water. She sighed this was tough, so tough, she hated how big of a burden she was on Kakashi now.

Kakashi didn't seem to mind though, as he took it in stride, she had really hurt his feelings, but he stayed with her. He didn't bring it back up either, but she could tell she had done a little damage. Not that he would tell her. He was too strong, too prideful maybe, or maybe he didn't want to make her feel bad. It was probably the latter as he really didn't mind sharing his rough past.

The man was a genius though, really such a prospect, trained by the Fourth Hokage, and the White fang of Konoha.

Kakashi was the best Jonin the village had the only ninja that could beat Kakashi in a fight at this moment in the village was the Hokage himself, Itachi Uchiha, and Jiraiya of the Sannin, she didn't think Kakashi would even lose to Tsunade of the sannin at the moment. Now that he was taking his training seriously again, it was incredible what he could do. She needed to be just as strong as him. He could take down any other jonin in the village, she didn't think that he would break much of a sweat beating her when she was still at her ninja fighting form.

She lost her concentration and she plopped down into the water as she growled, she was tired, she was considering stopping for the day, but when she looked at the Kakashi clone, he had his eyebrow raised at her. She humphed and stood back up, grunting as it was difficult. She started running her chakra through her hands again and began taking steps.

She grinned as she realized she did in fact have more in her and that Kakashi was driving her pretty hard to get this down. He was too good to her really.

Kakashi had 3 clones running through katas for taijutsu while the one with her was running through every hand seal for every jutsu he knew getting faster at getting them off. He had 3 clones doing jutsu as he worked on his physical strength. He had a weight seal across his back and one on every limb, he was doing thousands of pounds in 1 handed push ups.

Anko looked at him hungrily, his muscles bulging, he was extremely sexy to her. She watched the sweat drip off of his glistening abs as he continued to work himself harder and harder. She felt a twang in her desires as heat rose in her, she wanted him, they hadn't had as much sex as they usually did and she wanted him. She blushed but pushed the burning desire down as she needed to get back to work. The Kakashi in the spring with her was smirking a very cocky grin as he watched her as she looked at the original him.

"Anko, if you want I can have all of the clones take off their shirts as well." The clone told her cockily.

Anko laughed, "That won't be necessary Kakashi, thank you though."

The clone nodded as the two continued to work on their separate endeavors. Anko stealing a glance at the man everyone in a while.

After a while longer the real Kakashi looked over to her, "Want to get lunch? It's a good break time for me."

Anko grinned, "Kakashi can we get dango? I have yet to have it since getting out of the hospital."

Kakashi sighed, "I suppose." He said jokingly.

Anko grinned wide, "Whooo! Dango!"

Kakashi nodded, "Why don't I help you get dressed and I will send a clone and we can take a quick break."

Anko grinned and nodded, "I would love that Kakashi."

After dango the two went right back to work. Anko was frustrated as she had tried to walk on the floor and had failed, she just couldn't get it, she couldn't put it together on dry land.

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Naruto blocked a kick before spinning and lashing out with his own, he wasn't fast enough however and Jiraiya punished that with a swift punch to his gut. Naruto flew into a tree before sliding down it.

"That's enough Naruto, we need to make our way to the next hideout, who knows, maybe Hinata will be there." Jiraiya told him, after having beaten him around the battlefield like a rag doll.

Naruto got up rubbing his shoulders, "Yeah yeah yeah, let's go ero-sennin."

Jiraiya grinned, "Just remember that's what you get when you ask to spar when you are nowhere near my strength level."

Naruto groaned, "It's a spar you are supposed to go a little easy on me."

"I was going easy on you brat, just keep in mind how much you have to grow if you want to be the greatest Hokage ever." Jiraiya said.

"I don't know if I even want to do that now." Naruto responded

"What are you talking about brat?" Jiraiya asked him with an eyebrow raised.

Naruto sighed, "Everyone in the village hates me with the exception of a few. Why should I try to be their leader? They have tried to kill me multiple times. I don't really care about being Hokage anymore. I am going to become the strongest ninja in the world though, I have to, I won't let anyone like Orochimaru take one of my loved ones ever again."

Jiraiya nodded, "Well in that case you have a long way to go. Your father may have been one of the strongest ninja of all time, there are few that will ever reach the level he attained. He could knock me around when I was still close to my prime with no issue."

Naruto nodded, "Don't worry I look forward to that day."

Jiraiya laughed, "Well until then I won't be going any easier on you so catch up brat."

Naruto nodded, "3 tails state for travel? Full weight capacity?"

Jiraiya nodded, "I need to add another couple weight seals soon. Try to keep up with me."

Naruto nodded and Jiraiya added a weight seal to his wrists, ankles, and torso." Naruto at this point was digging into the ground as Jiraiya put the weight on them.

Then Jiraiya took off, Naruto went into 3 tails, gritted his teeth before blasting off after the old man.

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Shikamaru walked into the Hokage's office wondering why he had been called, hopefully he wouldn't have to go on some mission, he, Naruto, and Kakashi were supposed to have a while off to train. He knew that Naruto was away on a training mission, and Kakashi was taking care of Anko. So why was he here.

"Ahh Shikamaru, please come in, sit." The old Hokage told the young Nara.

Shikamaru came and sat down, and looked at the Hokage questioningly.

"Shikamaru, I am going to let you in on a bit of a secret, since Tsunade is back for good, I will be spending less time as Hokage, as she will start to fill the roll. I have convinced her to take over in almost all aspects, within the next year she will become the official Hokage." Hiruzen told him.

Shikamaru raised an eyebrow, "Uh, okay, so why tell me?"

Hiruzen laughed, "Well my boy, it came under my attention after the chuunin exams just how smart and talented you are, while lazy you are the smartest person the village has had in a very long time. Smarter even than my old student Orochimaru."

Shikamaru nodded, "I try not to show it off too much, but I guess you could call me smart."

Hiruzen nodded, "Your academy tests didn't show this level of genius from you. But that doesn't matter, your father is one of the smartest people I know as well, and he didn't test well either."

Shikamaru nodded, not sure where this was going.

"Anyways I would like you to become my next student, I believe you have the smarts to take in all of my teachings, I undoubtedly will eventually pass from this world, but I would like to leave behind everything I know before I do. You obviously also know that Naruto is by far the strongest of your generation, and likely if he continues to grow in strength as a ninja he will be up for Hokage, while he is smarter than his own tests would seem to suggest, he will need an advisor, you being his best friend could end up being that advisor. I would like to pass down to you all of my tactical, battle, and worldly knowledge. So what do you say? Want to be my first student since the Sannin?" Hiruzen asked the genius.

Shikamaru's jaw dropped, "You're kidding right?"

The Third Hokage shook his head, "We start now. Let's go to the training fields so I can teach you."

Hiruzen first worked with Shikamaru and taught him how to make shadow clones. Once Shikamaru had learned the shadow clone jutsu, Hiruzen had him create multiple shadow clones and he created the same amount and the shadow clones went off to talk ninja theory, battle theory and the professor once again had a student."

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BRUTAL SECTION, SIMILAR TO LAST CHAPTER.

Kabuto came back and grabbed Hinata and 9 soon after, he healed 9 when he got in until she was in decent shape, she could walk on her own. He forced Hinata to her feet.

Hinata screamed in pain as he lifted her up and placed her on her burnt and destroyed feet. They hurt to have anything touch the soles of her feet, her feet hurt in general. Her knee gave out immediately and she started to fall before Kabuto slapped her in the face hard. She fell even harder before he grabbed her hair and dragged her out of the room.

When they got to the torture room, Kabuto chained Hinata to the metal chain wall, leaving her spread eagle. Then chained 9 up and pushed her to the ground.

"Now, you two hurt several of the men, using swords, and fists. So in order to allow them retribution they will get to do whatever the two of you did, but to Hinata." Kabuto told them.

The first man walked in, he grinned as he saw Hinata naked, he walked over to her, pulled out a sword and slashed it across her, starting from her shoulder and going down to her hip. Hinata gritted her teeth in pain as she tried to stop the scream from coming. This continued for some time the men coming in and hurting her in whatever way they had been hurt during their failed escape attempt. All of them touching the girl in a way which would cause most people to cringe. Hinata refused however to scream, she would not give them the pleasure.

Kabuto grinned, he walked away for a bit leaving the two women there, 9 looked as bad as Hinata did, she could not believe the things the young woman was being forced to endure because her decision.

Blood dripped from Hinata's body from the sword slashes, she was pretty sure she had multiple broken ribs and one of the brutes was kind enough to kick her messed up knee. She had almost been unable to contain the scream after that one. Her knee was messed up beyond recognition at this point.

They heard footsteps and turned to look, 9 didn't recognize the blonde man. Hinata on the other hand smiled, "Naruto! Please help me!"

The blonde laughed at her, "No Hinata, now it is my turn to hurt you, you hurt me after all. It is about time I return the favor."

Hinata's eyes widened as he walked over to her, he had a sadistic grin on his face, the same grin Kabuto always wore.

9 gasped as the boy punched Hinata square in the face. He repeated multiple times until her face was bleeding. She was pretty sure her cheekbone was broken at this point.

The blonde then hit her hard in the stomach and she coughed up bile and blood as she tried to recoil down, it was no use though as copper wire just bit into her neck. The boy laughed as he continued to beat her.

"This is just what you deserve you dirty mutt." He told her.

She looked at him tears streaming down her face, "Naruto, why are you doing this? I thought you loved me!"

The boy laughed at her "I could never love a dirty mutt like you, you are weak, and pitiful Hinata."

Hinata cried as he continued to beat her. Finally he placed electrodes over her body. He lit her up with electricity as she screamed more. The pain hitting her, but not nearly as much as 'Naruto's' betrayal of her. She really thought it was him. Coming and hurting her like he was.

"Please, Naruto, stop! It hurts." Hinata wailed.

The boy just laughed, continuing to electrocute her. She was crying when he finally stopped, her body hurt, her muscles sore from the convulsing she had been doing as he electrocuted her. He hit her one last time before walking away.

Hinata was broken, her body hurt, yes, but her soul was broken, truly broken she cried.

"Hinata! you know that wasn't Naruto!" 9 told her.

Hinata didn't say a word as she cried. She hung there as 9 had been forced to watch her as she was broken.

Finally Kabuto and Orochimaru walked in.

9 was immediately infuriated, "You fucking bastards! why would you do that to her!"

Orochimaru grinned, "Sounds like you want a turn 9."

"Do whatever the fuck you want to me pervert bastards! Just leave her alone." 9 screamed at them.

Orochimaru laughed, "Oh we are going to leave her alone for now, you on the other hand, well you are going hurt her now."

9 was taken aback, "No! I refuse."

Orochimaru laughed again, "Either you take up the roll of torture, or I do to her what I did to you."

9's eyes widened, "Please no."

Orochimaru grinned as he unlocked her chains, "Go on. Hurt her, if I am not satisfied with it, I will take over. Understand?"

9 began to cry, but she stood up, and looked at Hinata, "I am so sorry sweetheart." With that the redhead flicked the electricity on and Hinata's body went stiff as she let out a scream, then started convulsing. 9 kept it on for a while before turning it off and letting Hinata have a breather.

"9! do not relent." Orochimaru yelled out.

9 gulped and picked up a whip before whipping the poor girl. 9 was crying as she hit the girl, ripping her flesh off and Hinata looked on blankly.

After a while longer, more electrocutions and whippings, before having to beat on the girl some more.

Finally Hinata was unconscious and 9 was allowed to stop, before they moved Hinata back to the cell, of course now it was 9's turn for a beating. Orochimaru grinned as he had his way with her.

END OF BRUTAL SCENE

what you missed, Kabuto let anyone who was injured in the girl's escape attempt was allowed to do whatever had been done to them to Hinata. Kabuto transformed into Naruto and beat Hinata making her think it was Naruto beating her. Then they made 9 torture Hinata, to hurt 9 more than Hinata but it didn't help how Hinata is feeling.

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