Uzumaki Naruto Chronicles Rewrite
Chapter 50
Author's note: So may have gone overboard with too much Hinata torture, so won't be doing much of that anymore.
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Hinata looked up as 9 was placed in the cell with her, the woman was beaten, but conscious and as soon as the guard walked away she limped over to Hinata and and hugged the girl, "Hinata I'm so sorry I did that too you. It would have been worse if I hadn't.."
"9 it's fine, I know you didn't want to do it, I know it hurt you as much as it hurt me, I just...Naruto…" Hinata interrupted her.
9 swallowed, "Hinata that wasn't Naruto. You know it wasn't, it was Kabuto being a dick."
Hinata's eyes teared up, "I-I, How do I know it wasn't Naruto?"
9 was shocked, "Hinata, you can't believe that it was Naruto doing that to you?"
Hinata was full on crying again, "Because after everything I did to him, why shouldn't he. My life has gone to hell, why shouldn't that follow?He has every right after what I did to him. I am just a disgusting mutt. Look at me, I am ruined, completely ruined. Who the hell in their right mind would ever want to even look at me?"
9 wasn't sure what to say to the poor girl, "Hinata, sweetheart please, it's okay Naruto would not do that too you, you don't deserve this, no one does, Naruto is still going to love you."
Hinata continued to cry however, it was no use, the girl seemed just broken, physically and mentally. However 9 began to finally heal the wounds that had been inflicted on the poor girl, holding her against herself.
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Kabuto growled he was in his room and in quite the amount of pain, the damned rasengan blast had done a ton of damage to him, and the scarring was still there. Not only that but it still hurt for some reason. "Damn this thing, it medically makes no sense that there would still be pain coming from it."
Little did he know, Naruto had mixed in some wind chakra into it, the chakra had cut into him on a molecular level, that even he could not sense. It kept the man in pain as his nerves stayed damaged and in a level of pain. How could this happen to him of all people, he had a plan.
Kabuto was going insane, the power trip he got from dominating Hinata along with the immense pain he was in, it drove him to hurt her even more. To force her to share his pain, Orochimaru wasn't happy with him. He had been neglecting his duties to rain hell down upon Hinata. Orochimaru had spoke to him about it, telling him to cut back on the torture and go more with experiments. He cared more about the knowledge from experimenting then Kabuto getting his sick fix out of this entire thing.
Kabuto laughed, he was going to schedule then a surgery for the next week, he would leave his little mutt alone other than healing her for no., but from now on when he did torture her, he was going to do it as Naruto. As for what he was going to do, he was going to perform a biopsy, Orochimaru had been wanting some DNA tissue from the Byakugan eye, as well as the chakra lines going to it. He was going to have to cut into the girl's face to do it. Leaving more of his scars on his mutt. He loved to scar her, leave his marks on her, it was marking her as his in his fucked up mind. Kabuto laughed once again, a cold insane, yet calculated laugh.
To do the operation she would need to be in good standing, he would have to heal most of what 9 was unable to heal. The surgery would be done while she was under a paralyzing agent, but she would feel it all.
Kabuto laughed again, "She will feel the whole thing!" He screamed with sadistic pleasure. He would still get his in, while experimenting on the dumb mutt.
He started to cough, "UGH" he yelled in pain as his stomach pulsed pain through his body. He cursed, why was this happening to him. He was strong, he was powerful, nothing should be able to hurt him. It was his job to hurt others not be hurt.
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Hinata was lying still, everytime she closed her eyes she saw Naruto over her with the sadistic grin that really didn't fit on his face. She saw him beating her as he did, she was unable to sleep due to this. She sighed and 9 rolled over to her, she placed two fingers on the back of Hinata's neck and shot chakra through them, knocking her flat out.
9 sighed, at least the girl would get some much needed rest, it still hurt her to do it to Hinata though. She ran a healing hand over the girl once more, tears coming to her eyes for the poor girl, Hinata was put through worse hell than she ever was, Kabuto was shockingly more of a sick fuck than Orochimaru himself. Orochimaru was more about science, while Kabuto just wanted to exert his dominance over Hinata.
Hinata's dream
Hinata found herself finally asleep and dreaming, she was watching Naruto, he was training with Jiraiya.
Naruto was trying to get the fourth tail mode down, he screamed in pain as he went into it, the hellish chakra tearing him to pieces, as he tried to control himself, he was twitching and growling. Finally he shot after Jiraiya but Jiraiya was ready for it, he went through hand seals.
"Earth Style: Great Containing Dragon!"A stone dragon shot out of the ground and crashed down on Naruto, it held his struggling form to the ground, Jiraiya shot forward and slapped a seal on Naruto.
Naruto screamed in agony as the chakra cloak receded. He was breathing hard cursing, "WHY CAN I NOT GET THIS! IT SHOULD NOT BE THIS HARD!" He screamed as he beat down on a tree.
Jiraiya sighed, "Let me speak with Kurama, I think I know why but I want to confirm with her."
Naruto growled and touched Jiraiya's head and the two went to Naruto's mind scape, Hinata followed.
"Kurama, back me up here, the reason Naruto can't get down the four tails cloak right now is because he is angry. Naruto you have to let go of your anger or you won't be able to control the chakra. Your anger takes over in that state. You lose all control."
Kurama nodded, "The pervert is right, Jiraiya if you don't stop staring at me, I will castrate you with a rusty carving knife. Naruto you need to let go of the anger, you will never be able to control my chakra without doing so."
Naruto got pissed, "Yeah well that is easier said than fucking done huh."
Kurama looked at him, "Naruto I'm sorry, I know this shit with Hinata is why you are angry. But you have to let the anger go."
Naruto glared at the both of them, "It isn't happening anytime soon."
They sighed as Naruto and Jiraiya left the mind scape.
"Kid take a break, I am going to go scout the next base see if their are any guards, I will be back, get it under control Naruto. You can do it." Jiraiya told him as the man walked away.
Naruto walked to the river nearby and sat down. He reached into his back pocket and pulled out a picture, Hinata was able to move herself to see the picture, she gasped, it was her.
Naruto pulled out the picture he kept of Hinata, she was smiling, it had been taken when they had first started dating, Naruto's finger traced her hair and tears started to fall.
"Hinata, where are you, I will find you, I will save you. I love you so much. I wish I could find you already. Maybe you will be in this base. I hope you are okay. Don't give up Hinata I am coming." Naruto said, to no one in particular.
Hinata woke up sitting up with a gasp, "Naruto." Hinata had tears in her eyes as she thought of her dream.
"Hinata, is everything okay?" 9 asked the young girl.
Hinata nodded, "I had a dream, Naruto is looking for me, he is training and searching for me, he still loves me."
9 grinned, "See Hinata! he does still love you."
Hinata sighed, "It was but a dream 9, though it did remind me something, Naruto would not like if I gave up. He would want me to be strong. I have to show him I can make it through this."
9 nodded "Well if that is what you take from it I won't argue." The two nodded before lying back down.
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Anko was finally walking on her own, she was still unable to run, and walking long distances was difficult, however and just to walk at all took high levels of concentration. Kakashi had been so happy though, he cried tears of joy when he saw her walk outside the water for the first time. She grinned, Kakashi, he was so good to her. He doted over her nonstop and helped her to get to this point. Now that she was able to walk he had another idea for her. She was unsure about it, but he had yet to lead her wrong and she thought she would give it a shot.
Kakashi wanted her to create as many shadow clones as she could, then each of them would work on walking. He said that because it was muscle memory she lacked at this point. He said that muscle memory was not actually a thing but instead that it was more of a program that your muscles ran. Kakashi had told her that with the new neural network into her lower body that new pathways had to be made, and new motor programs had to be learned. The best way to do that was through repetition. He said that shadow clones while they could not build muscles they could help with writing and strengthening motor programs.
None of that stuff made sense to her personally, however he had explained it multiple times and the whole motor program stuff was interesting she didn't know why he knew so much about it. He had yet to give her that answer. instead he had her create as many shadow clones as she could, telling her to just trust him.
She went through the hand seal, "Shadow Clone Jutsu" And 50 shadow clones popped into existence, she sucked in a breath she had never created this many clones and after not using much chakra lately she had taken a hit to her chakra network with that. She bent over and took a second before standing up and taking her first steps the shadow clones doing the same. They all began walking and Anko grinned, this shouldn't be too hard now right?
After a an entire day of doing this, Kakashi told her to release the clones and she did. She took a hit when their memories all hit her. She held her head and grit her teeth in pain as she processed the memories.
"Try to walk now Anko, don't think about it, but instead let the muscle memory take over." Kakashi told her
Anko took a deep breath but Kakashi could see she was still thinking about it too much, he grinned, he stepped next to her and slapped her ass hard. Anko was shocked and Kakashi was already backing away. The man had a cheeky grin on his face as she glared at him. He just kept backing away. Anko ran towards him, once she reached him she stopped and opened her mouth in shock, she had just ran. She lifted a hand to her mouth as tears built up in her eyes. She could run, she could run.
"Kakashi, I ran…" Anko told him.
Kakashi nodded, "You just got 50 days of experience walking. Without thinking about it the motor program you just worked on took over. It operated perfectly as you can see. Now tomorrow we work on running with 25 shadow clones, while we also have you working on walking still with 30 clones. Then we will work on jumping, and doing other basic moves. Next week you will have shadow clones working on doing just about everything so you can get the motor programs down, we will up the shadow clones daily so that we expand your chakra network as well. Sound like a plan? We have to get you back to your old speed then work on making you faster and better. Using shadow clones we will hone your motor programs as I drill you to hone your muscles themselves."
Anko grinned maybe she could do this after all, she could actually be a ninja again soon. She started to cry, it was too much even for her. "Kakashi, thank you so much, I don't know what I would have done without you." She wrapped him in her arms and began to kiss him.
Kakashi leaned into the kiss as he was inwardly happier than he had been in a while. Now it was time to train to kill that snake bastard.
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Kabuto walked into the cell containing Hinata, "Wake up mutt. I need to heal you, Orochimaru has ordered you ready for experiments. I will be doing a biopsy on you. We will be extracting tissue from your eyes. As well as the chakra cords going into your eyes."
Hinata stood, and glared into Kabuto's eyes.
Kabuto was taken aback, Hinata had this fire in her eyes, she should have been broken, yet here she was glaring at him with an intense glare, she had hope, Kabuto wasn't sure how she had gotten it, but it threw him off way off.
"I-I will come later to heal you."He said looking at her confused.
He walked away still shocked as he tried to figure out what had just happened, how had she awakened that ounce of courage and hope.
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So this was kind of a feel good chapter after that last one huh? Don't worry next chapter time will have skipped forward to the end of the first year of Naruto training with Jiraiya.
If anyone has any questions about how the motor programs and things like that work please don't hesitate to pm me about them. Unfortunately I am not sure when the next update will come hopefully I can get it done tomorrow afternoon, however some stuff came up and I am going to be busier than I first thought the next few days. My hope is to get everything done with Hinata rescued and getting better and then do a christmas chapter but we will see if I can make it in time, I might do one even if I am late on it. If you want a feel good christmas chapter even if it is after christmas please let me know!