Uzumaki Naruto Chronicles Rewrite
Chapter 51
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Most of you will notice that I deleted chapters 35 and 41. I did this because I got too many complaints around them and got sick of being called a horrible person because they were written lol. I was also told that I was losing readers because of them. If there are users that would like to read them pm me and I will send them too you.
A year had gone by and Hinata was still stuck with Orochimaru and Kabuto. Kabuto had gotten far worse. He did less to her physically, but tortured her mentally. Hinata was terrified every time he walked by. Every time she saw him she was worried he was going to do something even crazier. He was going crazy. Psychologically she was breaking again. After seeing Naruto in her dream almost a year ago, she was losing hope. Who could blame her, after all of this, a year of this she was losing hope. She didn't know how to deal with it anymore.
9 and herself had become very close over the year, the woman was like a mother to her, and Hinata didn't think she would have made it this far without her.
Hinata was covered in scars, after the biopsy she had to go through, which had been incredibly painful. Kabuto had first paralyzed her for the entire day, he had then inserted two different needles into her eye. Which of course had been painful, the first needle had gone through the top of her left eye and acted as a flashlight and he could use it to see into her eye as he stuck another needle in and grabbed DNA from her eye. He then cut into the right side of her face. He went through the side and examined her chakra network leading to her eyes as well as the ocular veins. The surgery had given Orochimaru and Kabuto a lot of information on her Byakugan eyes. It left her with a scar on her face, it went from the top of her eyebrow down to her cheek. Every time she saw her face afterwards hurt her resolve a little more. She hated how she looked, Kabuto had marked her in so many ways, marking her as his. She hated it.
To make things worse Kabuto had started to torture her while transformed as Naruto after the first time he did it, he did it every time. She knew it was Kabuto, however for the past year the torture hurt more than ever simply because she saw Naruto doing it all to her.
Hinata hated Kabuto, she often found herself dreaming of his demise, of her killing him in sadistic ways.
She was brought out of her thoughts by 9, "Hinata, what are you thinking about?"
Hinata looked at the woman, "Naruto, I wonder how he is."
9 smiled gently at her, "Shocker, you thinking about Naruto, but I am sure he is fine."
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Naruto was pissed, again. He and Jiraiya had just checked the last known base, Itachi had met them there. Jiraiya had taught Naruto everything he had to teach him. Naruto had control of the 4 tails chakra cloak but nothing else. He couldn't do any more because he was angry and had so much hate. The hate and anger would take over when he tried to go past the fourth tail.
"Naruto it is time to start your training. Less looking more training. We don't know anywhere else Orochimaru could have Hinata. We will have a look in a different way. More importantly you need to train." Itachi told him. Itachi would be taking over Naruto's training from Jiraiya.
Naruto got mad, "I will not stop looking for her."
Itachi sighed, "Naruto even if we had her location you are not strong enough to rescue her. If you were to face Orochimaru you would die."
Naruto got pissed, "Bullshit. I can beat him."
Itachi smiled, "How about you and I battle then. If you can beat me you can keep looking for Hinata. If not then you have to train under me until I think you are ready. We will try to find Hinata still. If information comes we will check it out. Deal?"
Naruto growled, "Fuck it then, deal."
Naruto backed away from Itachi before getting into a fighting stance, he knew he would have to be careful, Itachi was good. Naruto just didn't know how good.
Itachi immediately disappeared showing up next to Naruto. Naruto fired a punch but Itachi deflected it, grabbed his collar and jumped over him flipping and throwing Naruto through a tree. Naruto grunted, climbing to his feet and released his weights. He shot forward and met Itachi with a kick. Itachi matched it and they both backed off. Naruto growled Itachi didn't even have his sharingan active. He wasn't taking this serious yet.
Naruto jumped back going through hand seals, "Wind style: Pressure damage!" A giant vortex of wind appeared creating a giant dome around where Itachi was. Itachi appeared next to Naruto though and fired a fireball at him. Naruto dodged, but barely. He jumped back cursing. This wasn't working yet.
He released Kurama's chakra and went into his first tail state, shooting after Itachi. Itachi was caught slightly off guard as Naruto hit him with a clawed fist. Itachi shot backwards before activating his sharingan and creating clones. Naruto went right after them, they all jumped towards him as he hit the first one and a massive explosion went off.
Itachi grinned, exploding shadow clones were a lot of fun. It certainly was not enough as Naruto shot out of the smoke in 2 tailed cloak. He appeared next to Itachi but the man blocked his snap kick with ease. Itachi jumped back in a back flip as Naruto followed him, only to be hit by a giant fireball. Naruto shot backwards before sending a blast of wind at Itachi. Itachi turned into a group of crows and shot around the blast. He appeared next to Naruto and attacked him. Itachi fired punch after punch destroying Naruto. He blasted Naruto back through another tree.
Naruto stood there for a moment thinking, Itachi was incredible, truly incredible. Not even Jiraiya handled 2 tails with this much ease. Itachi was beating him around like a ragdoll. Naruto had not even gotten a hit in yet. He growled, he went through hand seals, "Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu!" Naruto screamed as he shot a giant dragon out of nowhere. He then went through more hand seals as the dragon raced after Itachi, "Fire Style: Great Abyssal Flare Jutsu!" He shot a purple flame out of his hand spiraling after Itachi and the dragon.
Itachi grinned and went through his own hand seals, "Earth style: Mud Wall jutsu!" A giant wall of rock grew up between Itachi and the dragon, the dragon slamming into it and breaking apart, Itachi wasn't done however as he finished more hand seals "Water style: Water wall jutsu!" He created a wall of water using Naruto's water dragon and it shot up and blocked the fire jutsu. Next Itachi grasped his hands together and clenched them. The rock wall in front of him shattered and Itachi jumped up and started kicking and punching the rocks at Naruto. Naruto was shocked, he wasn't ready for that. He started to dodge and try to get away from the sharp rocks. He got hit by a large one and substituted. Naruto charged at Itachi, realizing that ninjutsu would not work against Itachi. Naruto slammed into him, with a right haymaker. Itachi blocked but was shot backwards from the force of the blow, but Naruto had to throw up a block as Itachi appeared next to him firing a snap kick.
Itachi dropped into a leg sweep, Naruto jumped over it but Itachi just turned into a round house kick launching Naruto skyward. Itachi followed up with Shuriken which Naruto blocked, but he was left open for the giant fireball Itachi shot at him afterwards.
The fireball hit him square on launching him backwards. Naruto growled as he went into 3 tails state. He shot after Itachi and was now fighting him on an even level. Naruto could not believe how good Itachi was. This was incredible. Itachi was so smooth in every move he made and Naruto could not match it. Itachi was not even breathing hard. The man had yet to slow down at all. However in 3 tails Naruto stood a better chance, but it still was not enough. At this rate he would lose.
Naruto drew Kitsune and disappeared, Itachi blocked the strike with his own tanto which Naruto had no idea how he had gotten, he just pulled it out of nowhere. The two went into an epic duel of swords. But Naruto could still tell Itachi had him out matched. Itachi kicked Naruto back and then appeared next to him drilling him with a roundhouse kick putting him through a tree. Naruto got up and was getting rather angry. He could only go up another tail and go into his chakra cloak mode, it was a giant powerup for sure. But if he did he limited himself to brute force. Itachi had complete and perfect skill. Brute force may not be enough. Naruto growled again and disappeared from sight, he appeared next to Itachi and struck at him. Itachi grabbed his hand blocking and pulled him forward. Itachi fired an elbow into Naruto's face before firing a fist into his gut. Naruto stumbled back and Itachi drop kicked him.
Naruto shot through another tree and once again growled, "Fuck this. I'm sorry Itachi but I can't lose to you here."
Naruto screamed as energy was released he went into 4 tails chakra cloak. He disappeared rushing at Itachi. Itachi's eyes widened and he jumped back dodging Naruto. For the first time all day Itachi was on the defensive. Naruto attacking with a fury Itachi had not seen from the boy. Naruto opened his mouth beginning to form a tailed beast ball. Itachi cursed as Naruto fired it at him.
There was a giant explosion as Naruto looked on. The smoke cleared to show Itachi in the center of a giant chakra being, Susanoo. He had blocked the tailed beast ball with its shield. Naruto's jaw dropped, he had no idea Itachi could produce such a thing. What the hell even was it. He glared and charged only to be batted away by Itachi's shield. Itachi then sprung forward his hand crashing into Naruto trapping him against the earth as he struggled.
"It's over Naruto, there is nothing you can do from here." Itachi told him.
Naruto continued to struggle however, until Itachi lifted him up and pounded him back into the ground, knocking him unconscious and the chakra cloak fading to show Naruto's skin burnt.
Itachi powered down and picked him up, taking him back to Jiraiya.
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Naruto and Hinata Dreaming
Naruto woke up seemingly in a cell, he looked around and saw Hinata, she gasped as she saw him, "N-Naruto? Is that you?"
Naruto walked over to her, "Hinata, are you okay?"
Hinata shied away from Naruto, "P-please don't hurt me."
Naruto looked at her bewildered, "I would never hurt you Hinata."
He walked closer to her and wrapped her up in a hug. She sank into it smiling. "Naruto are you coming to save me?"
Naruto nodded, tears in his eyes "I am trying Hinata, I am trying so hard, I just don't know where to look. Where are you Hinata?"
Hinata had tears as well, "I don't know Naruto. I wish that I did but I don't. Just please, I can't take much more of this."
Naruto nodded, "Hinata, you have to stay strong, please for me. I'm coming for you. I will never stop looking for you."
That being said Naruto kissed her full on the lips. Hinata was shocked but kissed him back, she had missed him so much.
"Hinata, what are they doing to you?" Naruto asked.
Hinata shook her head, "P-please don't ask, they are doing horrible things...A-are you r-really alive? Sasuke told me that he had killed you."
Naruto laughed, "He tried, but come on, you can't get rid of me that easily."
Hinata grinned as she continued to hold onto Naruto as if for dear life. However this would not last long as Hinata started to be pulled away, someone was trying to wake her. Naruto grabbed her though, "Hinata, stay strong, please I will find you. I will save you."
Hinata nodded as he kissed her one more time. She kissed him back before being pulled into consciousness
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Hinata was woken up by Kabuto, he was violently shaking her awake. "Wake up mutt!"
Hinata did so as she looked up and saw Kabuto she glared at him. The fire back in her eyes. She didn't say a word but instead stood up and continued to glare at him. He wasn't having that as he knocked her to the floor. I will be back later, for your torture time. Be ready for it. Continue to give me that glare and I will knock it off of your face.
Kabuto walked away as she glared at him. As soon as he was out of sight she looked towards 9 who had been thrown into the corner by Kabuto.
"9 that doesn't sound good, what is he planning? He has never come to warn me before."
9 shrugged, "Don't worry sweetheart, he is just trying to psych you out, I'm sure of it. You looked like you were having a nice dream, what about?" 9 asked her trying to get her thoughts off of the impending hell.
Hinata grinned at that, "I spoke to Naruto. He is training hard, he must have been rather upset he seemed it."
9 nodded, "He is probably worried about you Hinata."
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