Uzumaki Naruto Chronicles Rewrite

Chapter 85

Whew! So last chapter I completely forgot to do this and it was so rude of me, but big time thanks to Naruhinaryu, and Crazywizard73, for their ideas on jutsu, as well as what the fox eye could do. So rude of me not to thank you guys last chapter but here it is, big time thanks! If any of you have any more jutsu ideas please let me know I love new jutsu, also there will be a fox eye level 2 at some point and I need ideas for that, please either pm me or review with them!

Special thanks to: Rose Tiger, nightwind83, Crazywizard73, NaruHinaRyu, sasmith, GaiaDragonSlayer, and Einjeru Hatake for their reviews on the last chapter!

Hinata was unsure of what to say, "I have to have Naruto in my life. He is the only one I can count on, please don't take him from me."

Naruto started to wake up at this point, "Kurama what is going on, why is Hinata here, why is there a barrier around me."

Kurama just continued talking to Hinata. "Then are you prepared to fight me for your right to prove to me you will stick it out for Naruto?"

"Kurama what the fuck are you talking about! You aren't fucking fighting Hinata!"

"I…Yes! Naruto, its fine, I can do this!" Hinata said, with that she lunged forward at Kurama, firing a gentle fist strike at the woman.

Kurama slapped the strike away before firing a punch into Hinata's gut, before turning and firing a roundhouse kick into Hinata. Hinata flew to the side and crashed into a tree. "Is that the best you have to give for your Naruto? Is this a joke! Show me what he means to you!"

Hinata glared at her before sprinting back in at Kurama, the fox woman lashed out with a punch, Hinata dodged it and turn dropping into a leg sweep, Kurama jumped over it and fired a knee at Hinata's face. Hinata leaned back, dodging the strike, before turning and firing another palm strike at Kurama's face. Kurama slapped it away and Hinata moved closer getting inside Kurama's guard. Hinata unloaded a series of palm strikes at Kurama trying to strike the woman, while she was in her guard and up close.

Kurama laughed as she blocked every strike the girl threw, she jumped back before running through hand seals, "Fire Style: Grand Fireball jutsu!" Kurama shot a giant fireball at Hinata. Hinata shot to the right dodging the massive fireball, before running at Kurama, she had to stay close to the fox woman to have a chance. Hinata fired another palm strike to Kurama's side, Kurama stepped into her and grabbed her before throwing her into the air and firing a miniature fireball at her. Hinata had nowhere to go, she crossed her arms in front of her and tried to guard. She let out a yelp of pain as the fireball hit her. She fell towards the ground only to by caught by the shirt by Kurama.

"Is that all you have!? This is all you have in order to keep Naruto?" Kurama asked her.

Hinata grinned opening her eyes, she jabbed her fingers into Kurama's arm, hitting five pressure points in a fraction of a second. Kurama's hand stopped working and Hinata dropped to the ground, a look of determination on her face, she fired both hands into Kurama's chest, pulsing chakra into them, Hinata spun around her hitting her in the side twice, before hitting her back multiple times. Hinata jumped back breathing hard, before dropping to her knees, that fireball had done more damage than she had thought. But with that combination of attacks Kurama should be out of it.

Kurama disappeared from sight, before reappearing in front of Hinata and firing a knee into her face, Hinata shot backwards, and into the same tree, she let a cry of distress out as Kurama looked at her, "That was better, but you have to show me more! COME ON! IS NARUTO NOT WORTH IT TOO YOU!"

Hinata climbed to her feet, wiping the blood from her lip, she shot forward again, Kurama saw what was coming and hit a pressure point in her right shoulder, before hitting the same point in the poor girl's left shoulder, then jumping and spin kicking Hinata in the head. Hinata shot to the side and dug into the ground skidding along and creating a divot in the grass.

Hinata rolled over and stood up, her arms hanging uselessly by her sides, a trickle of blood running down her head. She was breathing hard, but she charged once again, Kurama raised an eyebrow but threw a multitude of strikes, Hinata dodging, till she saw a strike she could use, Kurama threw a punch at her head, and instead of dodging, Hinata jumped up and to the side, allowing the strike to hit the same pressure point in her shoulder, she let out a cry of pain as she was thrown away. Hinata grinned and stood up, she raised her right arm and pressed the point in her left shoulder giving her access to it again.

"Very impressive Hinata, but you haven't beaten me yet." Kurama told her.

"Kurama! That is enough!" Naruto shouted.

Kurama and Hinata both ignored him, and Hinata shot forward again. Kurama started to throw attacks but Hinata bent around them. She hit Kurama in different points on her body as Kurama struck at her, Hinata grinned as she turned and slid into a different stance, "You are in range! 8 Trigrams: 32 palms!" Hinata rushed forward and attacked Kurama.

She swung twice, "Two palms"

"Four Palms"

"Eight Palms"

"Sixteen palms"

"Thirty-two palms!" Hinata unleashed the final barrage onto Kurama, but like every strike Kurama caught them, blocking every single strike with one hand, before grinning, "Rasengan!" with her other hand Kurama slammed a low powered rasengan into Hinata.

Hinata shot backwards and crashed through a few trees before landing and rolling to a stop. Kurama watched for a second, ignoring Naruto who was screaming his lungs out as Hinata lay there. Then Hinata slowly stood, coughing up blood as she did.

"Hinata, you are beaten, you just used your best attack on me, and it didn't faze me, not even a little. Keep this up and all you get is pain. Just admit you can't beat me. Naruto will never be there with you ever again." Kurama said cruelly.

Hinata shook her head, holding her ribs, as she slowly walked back towards Kurama, "I will never give up on Naru, he never gave up on me, and I refuse to give up on him! No! I need him! Every bit as much as he needs me, I need him. So please, DO YOUR WORST!"

With that Hinata charged again, Kurama smiled and told her, "That's enough Hinata, you pass, you proved to me what I needed to see. Well done, you refused to give up no matter how hard I thrashed you, you fought to have Naruto. I want you to remember how hard you fought to get him."

Hinata looked at her confused, "What?"

Kurama laughed, she released Naruto's barrier and Naruto charged out and started to check on Hinata, "Hina, I'm so sorry are you okay?"

Hinata nodded, "I'm fine Naru. I am just confused, Kurama what was all of this for?"

Kurama laughed again, "Well sweet child, I will tell you, but only if we have privacy, Naruto I need you to leave for now, I had to show Hinata something, now I need to talk with her about what just happened and I just need you to trust me. Hinata will explain everything to you in the morning I promise."

Naruto raised an eyebrow and looked towards Hinata, she nodded towards him and he sighed, before leaving the mindscape, leaving the two alone.

"Hinata first I want to show you some of Naruto's memories, is that okay?" Kurama asked her.

Hinata nodded, "I guess, from when?"

"From when you were gone. I want to show you some of what Naruto has gone through first." Kurama told her.

Hinata nodded and Kurama placed a hand on her head before Hinata was given a third person view of Naruto, he was alone, sitting on a tree branch he was crying, looking up towards the stars, begging Hinata to come back to him. Hinata's eyes widened, and Kurama took her to another memory, when Naruto was fighting with Itachi to be allowed to continue to look for Hinata with Jiraiya, she showed Hinata the emotional distress Naruto went through during the thrashing Itachi gave him. Kurama showed her the memory of Jiraiya and Naruto talking about how he was supposed to go on with his life without her.

Finally she pulled Hinata out of the memories, "Do you see the distress he was in while you were gone?" Kurama asked.

Hinata nodded, "I-I understand, I'm so sorry Kurama."

"Hinata it wasn't your fault. Now listen, I was able to pull you in here because you have a soul connection to Naruto." Kurama told her.

Hinata raised an eyebrow, "A soul connection?"

"Hinata, whether you want to admit it or not, you and Naruto are soul mates. Now I went ahead and brought you here because I wanted to talk to you about this. As you can see, we both care deeply for Naruto. If Naruto doesn't have you in his life he will continue living his physical life, but his spirit will die, resulting in a great loss in his power, loss in his drive, he will end up getting himself killed." Kurama told her.

"I'm not worthy of Naruto." Hinata told Kurama.

"Hinata you just crossed fists with a tailed beast for him, what do you mean you aren't worthy." Kurama asked.

Hinata tried to stop the tears, she tried to stop the memories of what Kabuto did to her from coming back, she failed. Hinata broke down dropping to her knees, "I'm dirty! I am used, Kabuto forced me to do horrible things for his pleasure. He maimed me, scarred me. I can't let Naruto settle for me. I am so dirty, I am disgusting. How can I even look him in the eyes? Kabuto did things to me, so terrible, he degraded me he made me into something less than human. I am not all here for Naruto. I am scarred in my most private places! It's disgusting! I'm disgusting!"

Kurama looked at her, "No, sweet child no, you are not disgusting, you had no control over what he did to you. I know about what happened to you in there Hinata, but if you were to talk about it with someone it could help. I am here for you sweet child."

Hinata shook her head, "I-I don't want to relive it all right now, I can't talk about it yet, please don't make me."

Kurama shook her head, "I would never make you relive what he did to you Hinata."

Hinata sighed as Kurama hugged her, "Hinata, I know you aren't ready for a relationship with Naruto, but you two have to be aware of the connection you two have to end up together. If you don't Naruto will be dead inside, is that what you want?"

"NO!" Hinata yelled.

"So, what is the issue?" Kurama prodded.

"I'm not worthy! I'm not worthy of someone like Naruto! I am a mutt. Just like Kabuto told me, it's what he turned me into."

"No child take back your life. Anko was also tortured and had horrible things done to her by Orochimaru, she isn't worthy of Kakashi, should I stop her being unsealed so they can't be together?"

"No! That's…it's different!" Hinata started but was interrupted as Kurama continued.

"What about Kushina! She has been held captive, tortured, everything Naruto's entire life, should we not go find her, because now she is unworthy?" Kurama demanded.

"NO! that's different! WE HAVE TO FIND 9…KUSHINA!" Hinata yelled. "That's not what I'm saying, I just… I can't undo what's been done to me."

"True but you can choose to overcome it or let it rule you. Don't run away from this, from him, don't live this empty life when you have a chance to live with him. You have the chance to live out your life in happiness why would you not take it!" Kurama continued.

"Stop it! I want to be with Naruto! I want to stand by him, I want save Kushina! But I am far too weak! I am unworthy of standing by Naruto's side! I am dirty, and used!" Hinata yelled.

"Then let me help you get stronger! I will teach you. I can help you become stronger. But you will have to work on your attitude. What do you want in life!"

"I want to stand by Naruto, I want to be strong enough to do so, I want to save Kushina." Hinata told her.

"NO! I want a ferocity in your words Hinata! I am the Nine tailed Fox! The greatest of all the tailed beasts. Show me you want it!"

"I WANT TO BE WITH NARU! I WANT TO SAVE KUSHINA AND I WANT TO BE STRONGER!" Hinata yelled, frustrated.

"Good, Hinata, I am going to take you on as an apprentice. I want you to become my pupil, I want you to become the first ever fox summoner." Kurama told her.

Hinata looked at her eyes wide, as she shed a few more tears, she hugged Kurama, "Thank you, you are so nice to someone like me, why would you do this?"

Kurama knocked her upside the head, "NO! As my student that type of thinking will not be allowed! I only teach those worthy of my teachings, what does that say about you Hinata?"

Hinata looked at her, "That I'm worthy." She said quietly.

"I can't hear you, what does that say about you Hinata!" Kurama asked again.

"That I am worthy… to be your student!" Hinata said a little louder.

"I'm sorry do you really want my help? I might change my mind, what did you say?" Kurama goaded a little further.

"THAT I AM WORTHY!" Hinata cried out hugging Kurama as Kurama ginned and patted her head.

"See my apprentice, that wasn't so hard, was it?" Kurama asked.

Hinata shook her head, "Thank you Kurama."

Kurama nodded, "You are welcome Hinata, I see great things coming from you. I think you will be a great apprentice. Oh and by the way, You and Naruto will be training here every night, on techniques, your physical body needs work. For now, go back to sleep, we will talk the three of us in the morning, okay?"

Hinata nodded before wiping her tears away. Kurama did a few hand seals and Hinata disappeared from Naruto's mindscape, "Hmmm, I like that girl, she has some fight in her, this is going to be fun."

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Big time thanks to NaruHinaRyu, this whole chapter was mostly her idea, along with the talks that Hinata and Kurama had, almost copy pasted from the ideas she gave me, big applause to her, as she is also my 700th review!