Uzumaki Naruto Chronicle Rewrite
Chapter 96
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To the guest that asked about neutering Kiba, soon don't worry, Naruto won't take kindly to that, if he lives that is, MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA
To Hypernova5.0, The seal can't explose quite yet, not with Tobi right there, if Kurama were to come out, she wouldn't have much of a chance against the same sharingan that controlled her years ago.
To the Guest that say while I can appreciate you wanting to shock your readers, Well you may have been 1 of 2 reviewers that saw that coming, so I'll take it, though I really do appreciate your review, and I'll switch it up from here I promise, as for Kiba going in, they sent three people in to help the ones coming out, because they didn't know the situation, they weren't sure who would need help and who wouldn't he didn't go in for Naruto, but when he found him he made the best of an opportunity and took who he saw to be a threat to him and his future out. I really do appreciate your review and your compliments I thank you for saying my writing style has improved and I look forward to trying to get you twisted with one of my plot twists in the future in other words, "Challenge accepted."
To that guy, minus the rage and hate you have for me? Ouch bro, that hurts not sure what I did for the hate but respect for calling me out. I appreciate your compliments and I am taking it more than 20 more chapters, I have exciting things planned for the future, just wait! Pm me if you want more info but I am excited for it, and you're right, lemons don't hurt and I will be adding one soon!
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Kiba walked into the room and looked around seeing Tobi and Naruto, "Naruto, let's go!"
"Kiba what are you doing here? Get the hell out of here, I need everyone out of here before I leave." Naruto told him.
Kiba grinned, as a plan popped into his head, "Come on, just come flash us both outta here!" Kiba told him. Naruto nodded and appeared next to him, placing a hand on his shoulder before, he was about to flash outside, when Kiba planted a kunai in his gut. Naruto coughed up blood slumping over before Kiba whispered, "Go to your death demon, The Hidden Leaf Village and Hinata will both be better off without you." Kiba then ripped the kunai out and plunged it into Naruto's chest this time. Naruto's eyes widened in shock, before Kiba twisted the blade and pushed Naruto off of him, as Naruto gasped in pain, falling to the ground.
"Why would you do that to your own comrade?" Tobi asked him. "He valiantly saved three ninja from your village, why would you betray him like this."
Kiba shook his head, "That demon isn't my comrade, he stole Hinata from me. He is a bastard. He has no place in the leaf village. Take him, kill him. You want him, right?"
Tobi nodded, "People like you are exactly why I am doing what I am doing, you are scum."
Kiba nodded, "Yeah, I can live with that, it is for the betterment of my village, think of me what you will. I'm a hero." Kiba turned and ran out the way he came, Tobi grabbed Naruto and shook his head.
"I'm sorry Naruto, that was unfortunate, I like you, I really do, but in order for me to save the world I need the power inside of you." Tobi told Naruto as he held his stomach where the kunai had entered. Tobi then slammed his fist into Naruto's face knocking him out. Then he grabbed the boy and teleported out of the room. He still needed to get Yugao from Kakashi, he would make the man suffer.
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Hayate was on his way back from a mission when he got a messanger hawk from the Hokage, he stopped and opened it reading the message. Hayate's eyes widened in horror. Yugao's team had been taken hostage. Yugao was MIA and no one knew if she was alive or dead. The scroll had the last known coordinates, he wasn't far away. He told his squad and broke off from them, heading to the last known location. She was with Kakashi, Gai, and Tenzo, whoever had overtaken them must have been very powerful. Hayate sped towards the location, hoping to meet up with the assault team she had sent to save them.
When Hayate arrived, he found the group fighting outside of a mountain, he saw Yugao sitting on the ground, being held up by a tree next to Tenzo, Anko was guarding them, as Shizune worked on healing them. Hayate jumped next to her taking her in his arms, "Yugao, thank God you are alright. I was so worried when I got the note saying you were missing. I don't know what I would do without you."
"It's okay Hayate, I'm okay now." Yugao told him. Though she looked much worse for the wear. Yugao had been put through the ringer today.
Hayate stood up and sighed, pulling out his sword, "Well I may as well kick some ass while I'm here."
"Be careful Hayate." Yugao told him.
Hayate nodded and charged into the fight, destroying ninja that came his way. His skill with his sword, unable to be matched by these ninjas. However, after a few minutes of fighting he heard Yugao scream, he turned around to see a man in a mask standing behind her, he had Naruto over his shoulder and he was now holding Yugao in a choke hold.
"Kakashi Hatake!" Tobi shouted out, making the fighting stop, Kakashi looked at him shocked. "I am taking your teammate, consider yourself scum worse than trash. You failed to protect your team, and your Village's Jinchuuriki."
Kakashi was already sprinting at the man as fast as he could, trying to get to Naruto, and Yugao, Hayate was blurring there as well, but Tobi was too fast and begun to phase away, laughing at them. He was phasing away too fast for them. Kakashi was there first, with a lightning blade charged up, but it was too late. Tobi was gone, he took Yugao and Naruto.
Kakashi screamed in anger, shoving the lightning blade into the ground and letting it go. The ground blew up as he looked around. He charged at the ninjas still fighting his team. He and Hayate incapacitated them all within seconds they were so angry. Kakashi was seething in rage as he killed the last man, driving a kunai through his skull.
He turned to the rest of the group, making a plan, as Kiba ran out of the hideout. "Kakashi, I'm sorry, I tried to help, but he took Naruto.
"We know, he showed up with Naruto and took Yugao, Naruto had two Kunai wounds. How did he get hit with Kunai, he would never be taken out by kunai, he is too fast and too skilled." Kakashi asked Kiba glaring at the boy, he was never kind to Naruto.
"I was too slow, I was just in the way, and Naruto took the kunai for me. He saved my life at the cost of his own health. He dove in front there was nothing I could do, as soon as he was down Tobi took him, it was over. I'm sorry Kakashi." Kiba lied to them.
Kakashi glared at him, "Okay, we need a plan, Hayate, Gai, Anko, you're with me. We are going to get Itachi, and Jiraiya, the rest of you, take Tenzo and go to the village, you are all too tired to help, we are going after Naruto and Yugao."
"Kakashi, Yugao is my teammate, my partner, I will not go to the village without her." Tenzo told Kakashi.
"Fine, come, stay out of the way, you are injured." Kakashi told him.
Tenzo nodded and the group set out for where Jiraiya was, the other group heading home.
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Kisame was being toasted, there was nowhere for him to go, the toad sage was extremely powerful and smart. He was looking for a way out when Jiraiya appeared next to him and drove a rasengan into his back. Kisame growled in pain as he climbed to his feet looking at Jiraiya.
"Toad Sage, you are powerful, but it isn't enough, I am going to kill you." Kisame told Jiraiya.
Jiraiya laughed gallantly, "I am going to fry you like the fish you are. Pfft Shark don't make me laugh, more like guppy."
Kisame's eyes went wide with anger as he charged Jiraiya. Jiraiya charged another rasengan and charged the shark man as well, He was about to impact with Kisame when Tobi appeared, kicking him in the face.
Jiraiya flew backwards, landing on his feet before looking at the two Akatsuki agents, Tobi had Naruto and Yugao with him, both out cold, Jiriaya immediately clapped his hands together as he saw his Godson had been taken out by the man, he would need sage mode. Before he could activate it however Kisame grinned and placed a hand on the man, they began phasing away, Jiraiya could only watch and wait as they disappeared, growling in anger, the Akatsuki had Naruto.
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Kakuzu's attack crashed into Itachi as Itachi stood there waiting. Kakuzu grinned, he had ended that fool Itachi, he had just stood there and waited as Kakuzu's attack impacted on him, there was no way Itachi could survive he thought. However, the dust cleared and he saw Itachi standing in the middle of an ethereal man, made of what looked like red chakra. Kakuzu's eyes bulged as Itachi stood there staring at him confidently, "This is Susanoo, it is one of my ultimate attacks, and defenses. You have done well to force me to use it."
Kakuzu growled as Itachi charged him using Susanoo, he swiped his sword at the man, and he jumped back dodging away from the attack, Itachi pursued him however, swiping at him, Kakuzu was so focused on Susanoo, he didn't realize that he got stuck in a genjutsu again. The Susanoo was a genjutsu Itachi had cast. Itachi appeared behind him again, sticking his Tanto into the lighting mask, Kakuzu screamed in pain turning to see Itachi once again. He moved to attack Itachi, but the man jumped back and just grinned at him, "Kakuzu you are going to die, you are down to two hearts."
Kakuzu glared at him, and was backing away, that was when Tobi appeared, Itachi saw it coming however, a kunai already flying at Tobi. Tobi phased through the attack and laughed, Kakuzu grabbed onto Tobi and they were about to phase away when Itachi was next to them, he attacked them trying to hit them seemingly, he aimed at them when he threw a punch, what they didn't see was Itachi used a slight of hand and threw a miniature tracking seal onto Tobi, before the man phased through his attack. Tobi laughed and punched Itachi in the face, Itachi allowing the attack to land, to lower Tobi's suspicion.
Itachi sprawled backwards and landed as Tobi disappeared from sight. Itachi grinned as he knew exactly where they went. He was shocked when Jiraiya dropped down next to him, Hanara walking out of the trees, as she had been no use in the fight, and just let Itachi fight Kakuzu as he didn't need her help to beat him.
"They have Naruto, we need to regroup with Kakashi, they will be making a run at rescuing Naruto and Yugao." Jiraiya told Itachi.
Itachi nodded, "Well I was able to plant a tracking seal on one of them, I didn't see Naruto or Yugao, but a man appeared and took Kakuzu with him, I wanted a way to track them down and end their organization. Seems the tracking seal will be far more useful now."
Jiraiya grinned, "How did you manage that?"
"Slight of hand, he was focusing on my attack, and I flicked a seal on him while he was focused on my punch. Quite simple really." Itachi told Jiraiya.
Jiraiya laughed, "You really are a fantastic ninja Itachi. Let's get Kakashi and go save my Godson."
With that the three headed to where Kakashi and his team was. "Kakashi, we know where they are, let's go." Jiraiya told Kakashi as he landed.
Kakashi nodded, he was pissed, he motioned to his team and they started to head towards the new Akatsuki base.
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Hinata had a bad feeling she knew something was wrong and she was terrified for Naruto. She had felt this way for the past few hours, Tenten was trying to reassure her, but nothing the girl said could calm down Hinata. That was when they heard a knock at the door.
Hinata opened the door to see Neji, along with Lee, and Kiba. Hinata glared at Kiba, "What do you want?"
Neji spoke up first, "Hinata, I'm so sorry, there was nothing we could do, Naruto went in to save Kakashi, Tenzo and Yugao, he told Lee and I to stay and create a diversion to keep people away from him, after the three of us had gone ahead to scout."
Hinata's eyes widened, "W-what are you saying?"
Kiba then spoke up, "Hinata, I'm so sorry, I went in to try to help Naruto, I know we haven't gotten along lately, but he is a comrade, I got cocky, thinking I could help him. I walked in on a fight between him and an Akatsuki agent, Naruto was having a harder time than normal, I thought I could help. I just got in the way though, they were both too strong. So when I tried to help, I was to slow to get out of the way of the Kunai Tobi threw at me…Naruto jumped in front of me, he took two kunai and fell. He was still alive, but Tobi teleported to him, and took him before I could do anything. I'm so sorry Hinata, but Naruto is gone."
Hinata fell to her knees as she stared into the distance, "N-no…NO! I don't believe you Naruto isn't gone, he hasn't taken! You are just trying to get at me!"
"Hinata, I'm sorry, but Naruto was taken by the Akatsuki, their mission is to extract the tailed beasts from their jinchuuriki. That process will kill him if they succeed. I saw them take him Hinata, I'm sorry. Kakashi led a team to rescue him, but it will be hard. The man that took him teleported away, taking Yugao as well." Neji told her.
Hinata was in denial, "NO! Naruto is too strong! Tenten back me up! It isn't true! It can't be true!" Hinata was holding her head with her hands shaking it.
"Hinata," Kiba started, "Naruto, when he jumped in front of those kunai, he told me to tell you he loves you, he told me to protect you. I…I've changed Hinata, I'm here to protect you now. Nothing else, I owe Naruto my life, so now I am here to protect you."
"Neji, Lee, are you sure? Naruto was taken?" Tenten asked.
They both nodded, "He sacrificed himself to save Gai, Kakashi, YugaNOo, and Tenzo." Lee told her, "He went in alone to save Tenzo."
Tenten bowed her head, she leaned down to Hinata, "Hinata, it will be okay, they will save Naruto. Don't give up hope in him. He will do everything in his power to get back here to you. He won't die on you."
"NO! HE CAN'T BE GONE! I CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT HIM! I NEED HIM! THIS CAN'T BE HAPPENING!" Hinata screamed in despair.
Tenten bent down and hugged her, "Hinata, you will be okay, I promise, Naruto will be okay."
Hinata wasn't in the mood though, she shoved Tenten away, standing, "NO! you-you don't get it, I need him. More than anything in the world I need Naruto to survive. To get through this hell." Hinata started crying she broke down. Unable to handle the truth.
Tenten got mad, Naruto was her good friend too, she knew his pain when it came to Hinata. "Hinata! If he means so much to you, why do you keep pushing him away! Just earlier today you pushed him away, told him he was responsible for what had happened to you. He cried about it Hinata, and now you give a shit!?"
Neji got sour, "Tenten! That's enough."
"NO! Neji, she needs to understand what she is doing to him, Hinata, you are hurting him. He loves you so much despite everything. Why do you keep pushing him further and further away?!" Tenten pushed.
"I DON'T KNOW!" Hinata yelled, "Because he is too good for me. Because he deserves better than a-a used up, dirty whore like me!"
Tenten immediately felt sorry for the girl, "Hinata he doesn't want anyone but you. You are his princess, you are his one and only."
"He says that, but he has been engaged to me since birth, he hasn't actually had a choice. He thinks he loves me, but he has never known any other kind of love. He has never had anyone who can give him all of them. I am already trash. H-he deserves much better than me. I don't compare to a girl like you Tenten, he deserves a girl like you." Hinata sobbed out.
Tenten shook her head, "Hinata, all he has ever wanted is you."
Hinata stood, "I don't think that's true, but I have to get him back. I'm going to go find him, and bring him back!" Hinata started to rush forward running towards the gate, until she felt someone strike her from behind. Her vision went blurry as she fell to the ground, falling into unconsciousness as Neji caught her.
"I am sorry Hinata," He whispered as he carried her back towards her room, "But it is far too dangerous for you to pursue Naruto right now."
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Naruto woke up in a cave he shook his head, he felt lightheaded and weak, he thought back and tried to recall what happened. Then he remembered, Kiba showed up, asked him for help, then stabbed him, twice. He looked around and saw the man he had been fighting, Tobi. Plus, many other Akatsuki agents he had read up on. "Fuck this isn't good. I need to flash out of here if I can." Naruto thought before sensing around, he realized it was no good, he was way out of range of any of his Flying Thundergod Seals. He couldn't even sense one in the area. He had no idea where he was. Naruto then realized the Akatsuki members were all running through hand seals. He cursed as he realized what they must be doing.
"AGGHHHHH" He screamed in pain as he started to feel his chakra being ripped from him, Kurama was screaming in agony in his head as well. Naruto took in a deep breath as he tried to calm himself, but it was no good, he was panicking as he realized, he was about to die.
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