Uzumaki Naruto Chronicles Rewrite
Chapter 108
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Naruto's vison immediately started going hazy he felt blood pooling out of him and he was weakening substantially. He started to slump back over when Hinata got to him. Hinata caught him and ripped the bandages off of his stomach, getting a look at it with her Byakugan. She cursed, what bit of the wound that had healed, was now open again, and blood was pouring out.
She activated a healing jutsu and begun to heal him, "Naruto, are you okay?" Hinata asked frantically. Trying to help him. He was out of it however.
"H-Hinata?" Naruto asked before falling into unconciousness.
Hinata cursed and picked him up, taking him to his room and laying him on some towels, trying to adjust she got into the bed with him, and laid his head in her lap as she continued to heal him.
Naruto woke up an hour later and was groggy, he looked up and Hinata leaning over him, she was working on his stomach. He realized that the two huge mounds next to his face were of course her breasts and grinned. He was angry but he wasn't going to complain about being this close to the holy land. Naruto grinned as they brushed his face, the clothe from her shirt was soft. Yeah he wasn't going to say a word. He was going to enjoy the feelings and the sight for the moment.
Naruto couldn't help but sigh after a moment of it all. Hinata gasped and backed away, looking down at him. Naruto pouted and sighed again this time in defeat. "Hey Hina."
Hinata sighed, "Thank God you are okay Naru. I was so worried."
Naruto raised an eyebrow, "Worried about what? There is just a hole in my chest no big deal."
Hinata glared at him and tapped his head in a light smack, "Naru, it is a big deal, anyone else would have died!"
"Good thing I'm not anyone else." Naruto replied.
Hinata sighed, leaning down and kissing Naruto's forehead. He grinned up at her for a moment before sighing, "Hina, can we keep talking please?"
Hinata nodded softly, not really wanting to keep talking. "Hina, I still love you, that hasn't changed."
Hinata nodded tears welling up in her eyes, "Naru I-I'm so sory, I didn't mean to hurt you."
"Hinata, you just…I don't trust you right now, you've lost my trust, you have lied to me too many times. All I've asked of you is that you don't lie to me, you don't have to tell me everything but to do what you did…it's just not okay." Naruto told her, sitting up off her lap slowly, groaning in pain.
Hinata looked down at her legs, "Naru…I'm sorry."
Naruto got a little mad, "Sorry isn't going to cut it this time Hina, you need to show me with your actions, not your words. Words mean nothing, you know that. You telling me sorry right now is simply lip service."
Hinata nodded sadly, "I-I'll try my best Naru."
Naruto nodded, "If you say so Hinata, I'm sorry."
Hinata nodded trying to hold back more tears, "I'm sorry I've been such a terrible friend, and an even worse girlfriend, if you can even call me that."
Naruto shook his head, "Don't give me that shit, I'm not going to feel bad right now that you feel bad. I'm sorry Hina, but you pushed it too far this time."
Hinata couldn't hold the tears back anymore, she nodded and stood up, "I-I'll do better Naruto, I will try to start putting you first, I promise."
Naruto nodded, and Hinata walked to the door, opening it, "I'm sorry Naru." She cried.
Naruto bit his lip, "You don't have to go though Hina."
Hinata turned to him, tears rolling down her cheeks, "Naru I…I don't know what I'm supposed to do. I messed up, I've messed up before, I know I have I'm not stupid, but you have always forgiven me. Now you decide not to forgive me, I took you for granted and I feel terrible about it now that I realize what I did. If you aren't going to forgive me though, then I have no reason to be here. I need to train." Hinata turned away, he could tell she was sobbing, her back was heaving.
"Hinata! Don't go yet, please." Naruto asked of her, it was too late however she had already left his room and walked into the training dojo.
Naruto growled and punched the wall, he wasn't happy. Why couldn't things with Hinata be easy for once. Naruto sighed and climbed out of bed gritting his teeth as he did. He finally climbed up and walked out of the room. He slowly but surely made his way to the dojo. He was after all her sensei and he would be damned if he didn't help her train. Their personal life would not interfere with her training, he had made himself that promise when he found out he would be her sensei.
Naruto walked into the dojo and Hinata looked up at him, "Naruto you shouldn't be out of bed."
"Can it. I'm your sensei, you are training, I am going to be here. Get over it." Naruto told her almost coldly.
Hinata blinked surprised at what Naruto had said. She turned around however and went back to training. Naruto walked over to a wall and slid down it, sitting on the floor of the dojo, he began to point out all of her flaws and he wasn't nice about it either. Demanding perfection from her, however helping her to attain it. He was a good sensei, Hinata knew that, he was demanding, yet fair and helpful. He wanted perfection, and had an eye for any flaws she had. When he fixed them he wasn't necessarily kind about it right now like he was usually, he was more strict than normal but still fair, praising her when she did things right."
Naruto was working her hard, and she was sweating like no tomorrow, finally he told her to stop, he opened a seal on his arm, and out popped a water bottle. Naruto threw it to her and she caught it, plopping down cross legged on the floor and downing it. "How are you feeling Naru?"
"I'm fine, I hurt a little, but I will handle my drugs. I'll be back in a moment." He placed a seal on the floor where he was sitting, then held up another hand seal and flashed away, flashing into his room and taking a few pain pills before flashing right back to his spot in the dojo. Hinata looked at him sadly.
"What is it Hinata?" Naruto asked.
"Naru, I…I" She sighed, "I could have gotten that for you."
"No. I will be handling my own care for the foreseeable future." Naruto told her.
Hinata raised an eyebrow, "What?"
"Sorry but I don't exactly trust you to handle it right now. You did just drug me. I can handle my medication, and my own healing. You needn't worry about it anymore." Naruto told her.
Hinata opened her mouth to say something, however there was nothing for her to say, she had been in charge of Naruto's medication, and healing, she had fucked up, and now he didn't trust her to do any of it. Instead she just nodded, and stood, turning away from the blonde ninja and beginning to go through her flowing gentle fist katas again, Naruto couldn't see the tears falling from her eyes as she worked however.
Later that afternoon, Naruto told her, "Hinata, Tenten and Yugao will be coming over shortly, I agreed to help them with their sword skills, I'm going to shower first though. Take a break, you've been hard a work, good job."
Hinata nodded smiling at the praise, he really did do a good job of giving praise at the right time, and giving the right praise to make her feel good about herself. "Naru, can I please change your bandages and look at the wound?"
Naruto shook his head, "No. I have it under control, I know how to change bandages, and I know how to heal a wound."
Hinata frowned, "Naru, I know you're mad at me, but you are just being silly now, let me help you, please Naru."
Naruto grit his teeth, "No. I said I'm fine Hinata."
Hinata recoiled slightly, Naruto had never spoken to her like that, she bit her lip and nodded, "F-Fine, if that's how you feel. I will just keep training."
"Hinata, you need to take a quick break." Naruto told her in his stern teaching voice.
"No. I'm fine. I have plenty of stored up energy and I am going to use it." Hinata told him just as sternly.
Naruto growled, "Fine, don't get sloppy. I will leave a clone to watch over you. Do what it says, for talking back you will do 5 sets of max weight workouts."
Hinata's eyes widened, "What?"
"Pushups, crunches, squats, and then your Katas, max weight seals. 100 a set, 5 sets since you have so much pent up energy." Naruto told her, creating a shadow clone.
Hinata glared at him but nodded, she turned all of her weight seals up to max and got started as Naruto walked away to shower.
Naruto sighed sadly as he got to his room and took his shirt off, slowly ignoring the tightness in his upper body. He finished taking off his shirt and created another clone, the clone took off his bandages and applied some healing chakra to his wound, just for a few minutes before Naruto got into the shower.
Hours later Tenten and Yugao showed up, Naruto went ahead and told them to head to another dojo, Hinata was occupying the taijutsu dojo, but they had the weapons dojo to work with. Naruto helped them with form, having them spar together. Yugao was better, she had more skill and more experience, Tenten had trouble beating her. Naruto was helping Tenten with her form moving her and repositioning her himself to get her into perfect position. That was when Hinata walked in, covered in sweat and panting slightly, she looked in on them and glared at Naruto as her jealously spiked, obviously not enjoying seeing Naruto with his hands on Tenten, even if he was just training her.
"Hinata, are you finished with the five sets?" Naruto asked.
Hinata didn't say a word but nodded instead. "Good work Hinata, that is a lot of hard work. Feel free to take a break and watch if you want." Naruto told her, oblivious to the jealousy she was feeling.
"I want to fight Tenten." Hinata told him.
Tenten scoffed, "Hinata, do you really think you're ready to fight me?"
Hinata glared at her, she walked over to the weapons rack and pulled out the copies of her daggers, she held them in her palms with the blade coming up past her middle fingers. Tenten sighed and leveled her sword at Hinata. "Are you sure about this?" Tenten asked.
Hinata nodded and charged Tenten quickly, Tenten moved out of the way, she was a much better duelist than Hinata at the moment. Hinata's footwork was sloppy, Tenten picked that out first. With superior footwork and blade skills Tenten punished Hinata. As soon as Hinata would attack, Tenten pivoted out of the way, firing an elbow down into Hinata's back driving the girl into the ground. Tenten spun her sword in her hand, turning it to reverse grip and driving it down at Hinata. Hinata rolled out of the way, she threw the dagger in her left hand at Tenten, she charged after it. Tenten deflect it into the wall only for Hinata to clash blades with her, Tenten pushed her away, keeping Hinata at a distance, using her reach to her advantage. Tenten was too skilled for Hinata.
She turned and fired a kick into Hinata's stomach, launching Hinata into the wall. The Hyuga woman hit hard before rebounding off the wall and Tenten impaled her on the sword. Pulling it out and the redmark showing on her stomach. "Hinata you need to work on footwork and technique before you stand a chance against Tenten, you would be far better off engaging her in a taijustu battle right now." Naruto told her.
Hinata just got mad, she tossed the other dagger into the wall, next to the weapons rack and walked out of the dojo, "It's getting late Naruto, I am going to eat dinner and then go to bed."
Naruto nodded and turned to Tenten, "Sorry about that."
"What was that about Naruto, you were being a little harsh don't you think?" Tenten asked.
"No I don't. I'm her sensei I am only trying to teach her." Naruto responded.
"Naruto sensei or not, you shouldn't let her fight an opponent much stronger that her, she never stood a chance in that battle." Tenten told him.
Naruto nodded, "She wasn't going to listen to me. She was being stubborn, I'm exhausted Tenten, Yugao, come back tomorrow for more training, okay?"
Both girls nodded and left together. Naruto walking into his room and climbing into bed, it had been hours since he had taken his pain pills, he took another batch trying to ward off the immense pain he was in. He then laid down and tried to sleep.
Before he could sleep however Hinata knocked on the door. "Yes Hinata?"
Hinata sighed, "I can't sleep. Would you mind if I climbed in bed with you, I always have a better chance of sleeping when I'm in bed with you. I feel safer."
Naruto nodded, opening the comforter for her to get in, she climbed in and he turned over. She sighed frowning as he did. "Naru…I love you."
"I love you too Hinata." Naruto told her.
"I-I know you're mad at me Naru, but please can…can you hold me? I just…I feel safer from Kabuto when I am in your arms."
Naruto nodded, turning back over and wrapping Hinata up in a hug. "Hinata everything will be fine."
Hinata nodded, but started to cry into his chest. "I don't want to have another nightmare Naru."
"Shhhh it'll be okay Hina." Naruto told her, before placing two fingers on the back of her neck and shooting a pulse of chakra into her, knocking her out cold.
With that Naruto fell asleep himself only to be wrapped up into the night's cold embrace as he had his own nightmare, the same one he had been having lately. Or at least all the nightmares lately had a similar ending. Each time Hinata would leave him for some reason or another. She would abandon him, to go to Kiba, or Kabuto. She would marry off to some other ninja in some other village and leave him. He wasn't strong enough to keep her. He hated these nightmares but he was plagued with them nightly for the past month. He wasn't sure where they were coming from but he needed them to end.