Uzumaki Naruto Chronicles Rewrite
Chapter 109
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Naruto woke up sweating heavily, he sighed, he let go of Hinata and rolled out of the bed. That had been a rough nightmare. He had to figure these out. He walked out of his room and onto the balcony he had. He didn't use it all that often, only when he needed a breather from everything. He sat on the seat he had out there and put his head in his hands, wiping the tears that were rolling down his face. He hated the nightmares, he was having a rough time. Everything was coming down on him at the moment. Naruto thought about Hinata, he got angry. The past four days since Hinata had drugged him had been rough. Things had been rocky, he was strict with her and she was snappy towards him. They were angry at each other. Hinata had been very snappy towards him, she had been talking back to him during their training and it was really pissing him off, he was just trying to help her.
Naruto growled thinking about everything was making it worse. He stood and slammed a fist into the stone of the house. Cracking and denting it, he pulled his fist out and slammed it into the wall again. He growled again, he pulled his hand back, it was broken. He hadn't bothered to channel chakra to protect it, he didn't mind the pain. He sighed, healing his hand and walking around on the balcony.
Hinata walked out in her pajamas, "Naruto, what's wrong? What are you doing out here? Come back to bed."
"No. Not right now. I can't." Naruto told her.
"Naru…I know things have been rocky between us the last few days, but we always come together for bed. Please Naru." Hinata told him sadly.
"Hinata, I couldn't sleep, I have been having nightmares lately. That's what woke me up." Naruto told her.
"Naruto, please come inside, we can talk about it." Hinata told him.
"I really don't want to talk about it." He responded.
"Naru, it will help, it has helped me, talking with you." Hinata told him.
Naruto sighed, "Hinata, I don't want to tell you."
Hinata recoiled as if she had been slapped, "What? B-but why? Why d-don't you w-want to tell me?"
Naruto saw the hurt in her eyes, "Hina, it isn't about not telling you, I don't want to tell anyone."
Hinata glared at him, "Yet you would share it with Tenten."
Naruto looked up confused, "Excuse me?"
"You tell Tenten about our fights, you tell her things when you are vulnerable, you tell her but you won't tell me? Are you going to tell me that you tell no one these things, even when we both know you tell Tenten? Is she more important to you than I am? Do you trust her more than me? Is she going to replace me? Is that what this is?"
Naruto was livid, "What the fuck? Tenten is a friend, that I made by the way while I was saving your ass. To be frank I do trust her more than I trust you right now, she has never drugged me. But she is not, nor will she ever be your replacement. How could you even think that Hinata?"
Hinata continued to glare at Naruto, "You train her, you talk to her, you trust her more than me, you go to her over me, what am I supposed to think?"
"That she is a good friend! I love you Hinata!" Naruto told her.
Hinata started to cry again, "If you love me so much why are you cutting me out! You're pushing me away and bringing her in! If you loved me…if you loved me, you wouldn't turn away from me every time I try to kiss you! You have been doing it all week!"
"Hinata…I do love you more than anything, I just…I don't know Hina, I don't trust you right now because you drugged me. I just need some time, we need to work some things out." Naruto told her sadly as she continued to cry.
Hinata shook her head, "I-I'm sorry Naru. I know I messed up, I know I was wrong to do it. I have regretted it ever since, but please just forgive me. I can't keep doing this. I need you."
"I NEEDED YOU! I FUCKING NEEDED YOU TO TAKE CARE OF ME. That's why I brought you home with me, I thought you would be here taking care of me. Not running around chasing after your bitch sister who treats you like shit. You fucking left me. You want to know what my nightmares are about, fine they are about you fucking leaving me, and going to Kiba, or Kabuto, or some ninja in a far-off land, or hell even Sasuke. That is what I have nightmares about, you fucking leaving me for some reason or another. So yeah, I'm a little mad about you fucking leaving me, drugging me when I'm already messed up, and leaving me alone to go off. You took the trust I placed in you and you fucking trashed it like it meant nothing. Before we go further into us, I want you to show me what I fucking mean to you. I'm sorry, I'm in this 100% I always have been, you need to step up and show up me that you are 100%" Naruto told her angrily, his stomach was starting to hurt, and he gritted his teeth.
"Naru…I-I'm so sorry. I didn't think of that." Naruto told her.
"NO! YOU DIDN'T THINK ABOUT IT! You didn't think about it because I wasn't important enough to you to think about it. Hanabi was more important than I was." Naruto told her. He then turned around and walked back inside, leaving her on the balcony.
Hinata sat down on seat that Naruto had just been on, on the balcony and cried. Naruto was right, she had let him down and that's why he wasn't kissing her. He was upset with her and rightfully so. Hinata cried for another hour outside before opening the door and walking back inside. She saw Naruto wasn't in bed, instead the shower was running, she walked up to the door and looked inside. Naruto was sitting down in the shower. His head was in his hands and she could see he was sobbing. She bit her lip, unsure what to do. She wanted to comfort him, but she wasn't sure how she could. She wasn't sure this was the appropriate time. Her fists clenched and she shuddered. She shook her head, turning and heading towards the door, she climbed into Naruto's bed. She laid there and cried. It was another thirty minutes when Naruto climbed into bed, he wrapped his arms around her.
Naruto pulled Hinata into his chest from behind so that they were spooning. Naruto held her tight and kissed the back of her head, "Hina I still love you, everything will be okay. We are having a rocky time but it will pass I promise."
Hinata didn't say a word, she nuzzled into Naruto's arm that was under her head and continued to let the tears fall. Naruto grimaced and just held her tighter. "Hina, please, everything is okay."
"No, it isn't Naru, I love you, but it isn't okay, nothing is okay right now. Just please, sometimes I need to cry. I-I messed things up, I'm paying for that now."
Naruto nodded and just let her continue to cry.
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A few days later and a few more fights, and Naruto was sick of not doing anything, he started training again, just lightly. Now he was sparring with Tenten, Yugao, and Hinata. Hinata was using her daggers, he was using the white light chakra sabre. Tenten and Yugao were using their swords. Naruto was slower than normal, he was still hurting, a lot. He still had a hole in his stomach, but when Hinata had said something about not training because of it, he had told her he didn't give a fuck. He was still weak, unable to go all out, but his sheer skill in the thousands of hours of practice. Naruto grinned as he blocked a strike from Tenten, he spun twirling his tanto, deflecting Hinata's strike, before pushing her back, turning and deflecting Yugao's blow.
They all surrounded him now, blades up and ready to strike him, he was too good for them though. Naruto grinned, "Well ladies, who wants it first?"
"I think we will all take you at the same time." Tenten told him.
All three girls lunged towards Naruto, Naruto flashed out of existence and the girls collided slightly, Naruto reappeared behind Yugao, he slashed her back, a red mark appearing on her back. Yugao frowned but dropped her sword and stepped to the side, "That was a bullshit move Naruto. Using the Flying Thundergod technique in a sword fight."
"We are ninja, if you weren't expecting that, you don't deserve to win. It is a speed technique I use during sword fighting. I will start using it to its full extent." Naruto told her, mad that she would even say something about it.
"That isn't needed Naruto." Tenten told him, really not wanting to get her ass kicked that badly.
"Yeah I want to see it. I'm an ANBU black ops ninja, you think I can't handle it and you can go easy on me?" Yugao told him.
Naruto glared at her, "I have been going easy on you, the three of you wouldn't stand a chance if I started going all out."
Yugao stood and grabbed her blade, "You won't mind backing those words then. I'm coming for you."
Naruto laughed, "I'll let you keep Hinata and Tenten as back up then, you can't touch me on your own."
"We'll see." Yugao responded and charged him.
Naruto grinned, he unsealed a few kunai, "Is it alright if I use Kunai as well? Or should I pull out my other swords."
"Use whatever you damn well please." Yugao told him.
Naruto shook his head tossing the kunai into the air, they were all spinning and Naruto jumped into the air. Naruto then shot into the air, kicking the kunai into different areas. Naruto started flashing around the three girls. Hinata cursed Naruto was flashing around too fast. He was overdoing it. "Naruto, you are over doing it."
"Hinata I don't need YOU to worry about my health. If you want me to stop, you better stop me." Naruto said, angry she would say anything.
Hinata was taken aback, she glared before activating her Byakugan, she grimaced in the slight pain it gave her whenever she activated it now. She could now follow him better, not well but much better by following the chakra. She rushed forward with her daggers but appeared behind her and stabbed at her, Yugao blocked him and he flashed away again, not staying for even a quarter of a second. He flashed to another kunai and stood there. He bent his knees, getting ready to charge, he grimaced in pain, no one caught it but Hinata.
"Naruto please stop, you need to stop, you're hurting yourself like this!" Hinata pleaded with him.
Naruto saw red, "Hinata! That is enough. Either drop it or you're done. We will discuss this after the match."
Hinata glared at him, "Fine." With that she unsealed all of her weight seals and attacked Naruto, going much much faster than she had been going.
Naruto kept moving at his high speeds. Tenten charged him first, and Naruto clashed with her. He flashed away from her sword strike and appeared behind her, Hinata saved Tenten this time, blocking his strike then throwing her dagger at him, he bent his head out of the way, Hinata used the distraction and threw a palm strike at him with her now empty hand. It struck true and Naruto staggered backwards. Yugao came at him from behind and Naruto flashed away before he could hit Hinata back.
Naruto's right hand was limp, Hinata had hit his right shoulder and she hadn't held back. She had shot his shoulder full of chakra, he wasn't going to be able to fix it during this fight. He glared at her, "Full power?"
"How else am I to beat you?" Hinata asked him stubbornly. Naruto growled.
He shook his head, he unsealed his own weights. He flashed to another area in the room, his white light chakra sabre in his left hand, he charged faster than any of them could see, Hinata was first, she was ready though.
She threw a palm strike and Naruto tossed kunai into the air all around her, she tried to track them all, but there were at least twenty of them in the air. Naruto flashed to the first, she tried to slash at him, but he was already gone, she felt one slash, then another, then another, and another and another. She couldn't move as he cut her into pieces, red marks appearing everywhere on her. Hundreds of them, before the other kunoichi could even move.
Naruto then kicked all of the kunai at Yugao, she would be next. Yugao began blocking them but to no avail Naruto flashed to her and utterly destroyed her, he cut her into as many pieces as he had cut Hinata into, then he flashed to a kunai next to Tenten and engaged her, he flashed around her, she was unable to pinpoint him, she was trying to hit him, but he was far too fast. He was instantly behind her and had his tanto stabbed into her back, before he pulled it out, removed the training seal from his white light chakra sabre, before he sheathed it and walked out of the room, "That's enough for today, feel free to continue training here if you would like. Hinata you will meet me in our normal training room in an hour."
Naruto then flashed away, as the other two girls looked at Hinata with questioning glances. Hinata shrugged, "I pissed him off, he wants to yell at me, but won't do it in front of you two."
"Why did he get so mad?" Tenten asked her.
"You mean you don't know?" Hinata snapped at her, "You know damn well the issues Naruto and I are having, I know he tells you everything. I'm not stupid."
"Hinata, he does tell me some things, but he hasn't told me anything in weeks, you crushed him with some of the things you have said to him. However, he hasn't told me anything in weeks. If there is something wrong he hasn't told me, but maybe you should. What the hell did you do?" Tenten asked her angrily.
Hinata glared at her, "Why should I tell you? So, you can continue to worm your way into a relationship with him? You are edging me out, so well done!"
Yugao sighed, "That's enough both of you."
Tenten glared at her, "Yugao, leave, Hinata and I need to have a talk."
Yugao nodded and walked out of the room. Tenten turned to Hinata, "What is your problem?"
"What?" Hinata asked.
"You know I've tried to be nice to you Hinata, but you keep pulling shit like this, so why don't you like me? I haven't said anything yet, as a favor for Neji. I'm done though. Naruto loves you to death! Can you not see how much he loves you!" Tenten asked.
"What do you mean as a favor for Neji?" Hinata asked her.
"I'm don't love Naruto, I'm in love with Neji." Tenten told her.
Hinata's brow furrowed, "What? You and Neji? I'm sorry Tenten, congratulations. I know how he feels about you."
"It doesn't matter how he feels because of that stupid seal your clan gave the both of you. Neji won't do anything with that seal." Tenten told her coldly, "Naruto is a good friend of mine, he has been very helpful to me, he listens to me as much as I listen to him. That's all we are, good friends, you have to get over this jealousy shit, Hinata, I know what you went through, but I don't get it. Hinata talk to me, I like you, I really do. You are a good person and I want to be your friend" Tenten told her.
Hinata looked down, "Naruto talks to you, but he won't talk to me. You are beautiful and not dirty. I'm dirty, and I have been used. I'm heavily scarred, mentally and emotionally."
Tenten nodded, "So you think you are damaged goods, it isn't true, Naruto loves you more than anything, he has told me so much. So, tell me Hinata, what happened? The two of you have been very rocky lately why is Naruto being so harsh with you?"
Hinata sat in the corner and Tenten sat next to her, "I messed up Tenten. I betrayed Naruto, I drugged him with the pain medication he was given. It knocked him out and I left and went to Hanabi's graduation to see her walk. I didn't ask Naruto, I just went. I was going to tell him when I got back and explain things to him, but he found me before the graduation was over. He was so mad, so hurt. He won't let me take care of him now, he won't let me heal him, he doesn't trust me anymore, it's all my fault Tenten. He is just so mad at me right now Tenten. I don't know what to do."
Tenten nodded and sighed, "That was a pretty bad move. Have you looked at it from his point of view?"
Hinata nodded, "I don't blame him, I don't. He is right I was wrong. I have been putting him last, and putting everyone else ahead of him lately, like Hanabi. I took him for granted, now everything is terrible between us. We had started kissing, now every time I try to kiss him, he turns away. He won't let me. I keep trying and he keeps rejecting me." Hinata was crying now, "I-I just got him back, a-and I l-lost him right away."
"Hinata, you haven't lost him. He still loves you, he just has to work through everything." Tenten told her. "I'm going to go talk to him Hinata."
"No…You don't have to fight my battles." Hinata told her.
Tenten sighed, "I'm not fighting your battles, I'm pulling Naruto's head out of his ass. Hinata I told you I like you. I don't owe you anything however, I'm not doing this for you, I'm doing this for Naruto." Tenten stood up and walked out of the dojo heading for the other training room.
She walked to Naruto's room and knocked on the door. "Naruto, can I come in? I need to talk to you."
"Tenten? Yeah sure, come on in." Naruto told her, he was just putting his shirt on as she opened the door, "What's up?"
"Naruto what the hell are you doing?" Tenten asked.
"What are you talking about?" Naruto asked.
"With Hinata. What are you doing. You are being so cold to her, Naruto if you keep this up you will lose her one way or another. Either she will continue to hate herself to the point that she starts reverting back to when she was with Kabuto. Or she will just leave, she doesn't think well of herself. She is going to leave, and she will end up at some bar with some jackass hitting on her, she has no respect for herself and hates herself. Someone being nice to her is what will put her in some other asshole's control." Tenten told him.
"So, you know what happened then?" Naruto asked.
"Yes, I do Naruto. Hinata told me." Tenten responded.
Naruto nodded, "So, because of everything she is gone through, she can do whatever and I'm not allowed to be mad? She abandoned me Tenten. Did you come here to tell me I'm not allowed to be mad?"
"Be mad if you want Naruto, you love her, she loves you, you need to get the hell over it, otherwise you will regret it." Tenten responded, with that she turned around, "I'll leave you to think on it, it's really none of my business, but you obviously love her and this is just making things worse."
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