Uzumaki Naruto Chronicles Rewrite

Chapter 116

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Naruto's eyes started to turn red and he was shaking, trying to contain the raw rage and hate that was boiling up inside of him. Orochimaru saw this and continued, this wouldn't take much more, "She was very beautiful, and had a wonderful body before we got to her, I enjoyed touching her in her most private intimate places, nothing was off limits to me, I did whatever I wanted to that dumb bitch, and towards the end she started to enjoy it, the dumb slut, you know the best part? You were too weak to save her."

Naruto's eyes went full red, he lost himself to the rage, he charged Orochimaru full force slashing his tanto at the man as hard as he could, putting all of his weight behind it, Orochimaru grinned, he slashed up with Kusinagi as hard as he could, pouring wind chakra into his blade and catching Naruto's tanto, he grinned as the white light chakra sabre snapped, breaking under the force of Kusinagi. Naruto's eyes went wide open, he lost his balance falling, he was defenseless and Orochimaru was right there. Kusinagi came down for Naruto, to bisect him in half, there was nothing he could do, he tried to flash away, but he knew it was going to be too late. Naruto closed his eyes, a tear fell from his face as he cursed himself, he had failed her again. There was no one to stop Orochimaru from going after Hinata, taking her and doing horrid things to her once again.

"Hinata, I'm so sorry, I failed again" Naruto thought to himself.

Naruto watched as the blade came down towards him, he gritted his teeth as he felt the Kusinagi blade cut into him, but then it stopped, he turned and saw Sai knock the sword away from him with a kunai then turn and in one slice decapitated Orochimaru with his tanto. Orochimaru's head rolled to the ground, Sai then whipped out a scroll and drew a giant tiger as fast as he could, "Sealing Jutsu: Crouching Tiger Bullet!"

The giant tiger came out of the scroll, and before Orochimaru could even complete his shed skin, the tiger engulfed him and dragged him back into the scroll, sealing the snake sannin. Sai's eyes widened, he had betrayed his master, his body had just moved seemingly on its own and he had sealed the snake sannin. He had come out of nowhere, and taken the man out. Sai wasn't sure if he should be happy that he saved Naruto, and survived, or if he should be upset because he had saved Naruto and that his master wouldn't be happy.

Hinata was next to Naruto immediately, "Naru! Are you okay?" She was so worried for him, and she had already begun to heal him.

Naruto was staring at Sai, he was grateful, sure but he was also unsure why Sai was here, "Sai, what are you doing here? Not that I'm not happy you are here, but why?"

Sai looked at him, "I was in the area nearby doing my own training, I heard the sounds of a battle, at first I just thought it was training, but it kept going and I came to check it out. I was surprised to see you fighting one of the Village's most dangerous criminals. I stayed hidden and watched, when I saw your tanto break I jumped in, hoping to save you. I guess we got lucky, right?"

Naruto raised an eye and nodded, "I guess we did." Naruto started to stand wincing, he was in a bit of pain.

Hinata got upset, "Naruto, please stop, you're hurt."

"No, how did Orochimaru come out so strong? He should have been much weaker, not nearly full strength." Naruto responded.

"He pulled himself out of Kimimaro as well, then drained both Kimimaro's and Anko's chakra and took it for himself. Both of them are passed out, I started healing Kakashi-sensei, but wasn't able to get to Kimimaro and Anko, all three of them are stable, but Kimimaro and Anko have chakra exhaustion." Hinata informed him.

"How the fuck did he take their chakra?" Naruto asked upset.

"Through his curse seals, he pulled all of Anko's chakra with him, and then because Kimimaro was already connected to him by the chakra he was using to pull Orochimaru out." Hinata told him.

Naruto nodded and started to move towards the others, "Naruto! Please stop! You're injured!"

Naruto looked at her, "Hinata, let's get them to the hospital and then we can go home and you can heal me."

Hinata glared at him but nodded and moved towards the others, Naruto creating clones to carry the injured, he looked towards Sai, "Sai, thanks really, I owe you one, why don't you come to my estate for dinner tomorrow?"

Sai nodded and shushinned away from the area, while Naruto and Hinata took Kakashi, Anko, and Kimimaro to the hospital. As soon as they got there Naruto checked them into the hospital, and then looked to Hinata, he cursed, his vision was blurry at this point and he was starting to stumble.

Tsunade looked at him concerned, "Naruto…are you okay?"

Naruto looked at her and nodded, "Just tired after that fight I think, I'm feeling pretty drained, I think I just need rest, your concern should be Kakashi-sensei."

Tsunade nodded, "If you say so, I need a moment to talk to Hinata okay?"

Naruto nodded and walked out of the room, going and leaning against a wall outside of Kakashi and Anko's room, both were unconscious at this point. Tsunade turned and looked at Hinata, "What happened out there?"

Hinata shrugged, "I…I don't know, Orochimaru came out of the seal and was much stronger than we anticipated, everything went wrong so fast, then I…I froze" Hinata looked away from Tsunade, "I froze and Naruto had to teleport in front of Kusinagi for me. He was stabbed through his right arm, then his White Light Chakra Sabre broke, he should have died, but Sai jumped in and saved him, Sai was training nearby, heard the battle and saved the day. We all would have died if Sai wouldn't have been there."

Tsunade sighed, "Naruto is probably poisoned, knowing my old teammate his blades were coated in a poison, Kurama has probably been keeping it from affecting him, take him home and give him this." Tsunade produced a vial of brown liquid, it didn't look like it would taste good at all. "Have him drink this, it will probably knock him out, good thing too, the poison is starting to take affect and you don't want him awake for that, you of all people should know how bad the toxins Orochimaru has hurt."

Hinata nodded, "Lady Tsunade, can you give me some advice?"

Tsunade raised an eyebrow, "Sure Hinata, what's bugging you?"

"What am I supposed to say to Naruto? If I hadn't frozen..." Hinata stopped for a moment looking down and tears dripping from her eyes, "He wouldn't have gotten hurt. I thought I was passed all this, but I'm not apparently, he got into my head, I was terrified of him, I just kept seeing him doing the horrid things he did to me. He wanted to take me and do them again. He told Naruto and it made Naruto get so mad he made a mistake and it almost killed him. I forced his hand, made him think I was ready, when clearly I wasn't ready for this, and he got hurt." Hinata asked the older woman.

Tsunade smiled gently at her apprentice, the poor girl had gone through so much, "Hinata, Naruto is just going to be happy that you are alive honestly. He is so happy to have you. He won't blame you, he will embrace you and thank God, that he got in front of that blade in time. As for what you say, tell him you were scared, you were. You were facing your worst nightmare and it scared you, it's okay, most people freeze in front of Orochimaru, his raw killing intent is enough to make most people piss themselves, drop dead, or kill themselves. I've seen all three before, when Orochimaru lets loose his killing intent, it has killed people before. I promise Hinata, Naruto won't be mad at you."

Hinata was confused, "Ninja are never supposed to be scared though, I'm supposed to admit I was terrified?"

Tsunade nodded, "To Naruto yes, he is the one person you never keep anything from, he will always be there for you. You love him, never keep anything from him, trust me, you will feel so good telling him everything."

Hinata nodded, a new determination in her eyes, Tsunade grinned, her pep talk had worked. Hinata walked out of the room and to Naruto, "Naru, are you ready to go?" She put her hand on his shoulder.

Naruto opened his eyes and nodded, he held up a hand seal and the two disappeared flashing back to their house. Naruto landed from the teleport and stumbled, falling onto the bed as he did. He turned around and looked at Hinata, who was looking at him wide eyed. "Naru, are you okay?"

"In all honesty, no I'm feeling sick, the entire world is spinning, and my vision is blurry, I'm feeling really weak." Naruto told her.

Hinata sighed, she pulled the vial out, "Here, drink this, it's an antidote, Tsunade gave it to me."

Naruto looked at the liquid and shook his head, "I'm fine thanks, that doesn't look very good Hina. I think I will stick to the room spinning and not being able to see anything."

"You will drink the antidote and you will drink it now, or no ramen for the next month." Hinata told him sternly.

Naruto's mouth dropped, "But Hina! You can't do that."

"Naru! I'm worried about you, please do it for me." Hinata pleaded with him.

Naruto sighed over exaggeratedly, "Fiiiine."

Hinata giggled and handed it to him, he shot it back and swallowed it all in one gulp, taking a deep breath after and grimacing, "Yeah…that was gross Hina…You owe me some ramen after that."

Hinata giggled, "Thank you Naru, I love you."

"I love you too Hina." Naruto let out a loud yawn, "I'm kinda tired."

"That would be the antidote, Orochimaru poisoned you Naru, Tsunade made this antidote to battle his poisons, trust me, his poison isn't something you want to be awake for…It isn't pleasant…" Hinata told him, shivering slightly as she thought about the vile poisons the man had put into her body.

Naruto nodded, "Figures, will you help me out, I can't focus enough to use any sort of medical jutsu to heal myself."

Hinata nodded and started her healing jutsu, running her hands over the gashes and cuts he had all over him from fighting Orochimaru.

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Sai kneeled in front of his master, "Lord Danzo, I'm sorry, I disobeyed your orders, however, I saw an opportunity and felt it had to be taken. Naruto made a mistake and Orochimaru was about to kill him, I intervened and cut Orochimaru's head off, before sealing him in this scroll." Sai took the scroll out and handed it to Danzo.

Danzo took the scroll angrily, "Having Orochimaru is great, I will be able to study him and learn from him, however, that leaves Naruto as a thorn in my side." Danzo's voice began to raise, "AND YOU LET HIM STAY THAT WAY." Danzo smacked Sai in the side of the head, sending the boy flying.

Sai landed hard, scrambling back to his knee, "Lord Danzo, I see this as a way to get closer so I can remove that thorn. Naruto trusts me more than ever, he invited me to join him for dinner at his house. This is the first chance I will have to get inside the estate. I can move closer and closer to him now, being your spy and when the time is right and you are sure you have no use for him, I can kill him and Hinata Hyuga as well. I can kill them both when you ask me too. But for now please allow me to continue to be your spy."

Danzo stroked his chin, "Yes that will work, do not forget though, when I give you an order, you are to follow it. Understood?"

Sai nodded, he sighed and asked, "Understood sir. May I take my leave Lord Danzo?"

Danzo nodded and Sai shunshinned away from the man, frowning and rubbing the side of his head, for an old man Danzo was still very powerful.

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Hinata sighed as she finished healing Naruto, "There you go Naru…"

Naru nodded sleepily, "Hina, tell me what's wrong please."

Hinata looked away, "I'm sorry."

Naruto raised a heavy eyebrow, "For what?"

Hinata sighed, "I froze. I let you down, I wasn't ready, you got hurt."

Naruto nodded, "I noticed that, you want to talk about it?"

Hinata shook her head, "Not really, but I…I owe you an explanation, don't I?"

Naruto shrugged, "No you don't, you froze, it happens."

Hinata bit her lip, "Have you ever frozen?"

Naruto sighed, "In a fight? No can't say I have. However, I have a giant chakra demon sealed inside me, it helps me to never really be afraid. I've never been scared for my own life in a fight."

"I…" Hinata took a deep breath, steadying herself, "I was so scared Naruto. I was terrified of Orochimaru, of what he did to me. I was so scared he was going to hurt me more."

Naruto nodded, "I know Hina, it's okay."

Hinata shook her head, "I'm a ninja, I'm not supposed to ever be scared!"

Naruto laughed, "That's a stupid thing to say, most ninja I know get scared all the time. I was terrified today."

Hinata raised an eyebrow, "But you just said that you never get scared in a fight."

"No I said I have never been scared for my own life in a fight, I was terrified for you today, for Anko, Kakashi, and Kimimaro. I was scared I might fail and you would get taken away from me again." Naruto corrected her.

"So, you aren't mad at me then?" Hinata asked.

Naruto laughed again, "No! Why would I be? You know how terrifying that snake is? He has killed people just by releasing his killing intent, you aren't at fault Hinata. This week we will work on you developing a resistance to a high potency killing intent."

Hinata smiled and hugged Naruto tight, "Thank you Naru. Thank you for being so understanding."

"There isn't anything to understand, I love you Hina, I'm just so happy you're okay, I don't think I could live without you." Naruto told her, kissing her and holding her as tight as his weakening body would allow.

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Kakashi woke up and moved his hand down to his stomach, he felt the bandages there and sighed, he had fucked up. Orochimaru had come out so strong and he couldn't do anything against the man. He growled, he had let his feeling for Anko drive his decisions. It had caused him to make a mistake, he left Orochimaru to Naruto alone, he looked around, he saw Anko asleep, but no Naruto, or Hinata. So either Naruto had been hurt very badly, killed, or he won the fight. Kakashi sighed again, of course he did what he had to do, Orochimaru would have killed Anko if he hadn't jumped in to try to save her, but taking a blade, he was hasty, he should have expected Orochimaru to come out swinging. His comrades had potentially been hurt and he wasn't able to do anything. He clenched his fist, and sat up, walking over to Anko's bed, he pulled the chart and read it, he had been in the hospital enough times to know how to read one, he released a sigh of relief as he saw she had only been slightly injured by the lightning bolt, but was also suffering from very slight chakra exhaustion. Kakashi reached down and looked at her neck, he channeled chakra into her neck and smiled, the mark didn't show, she was in fact free. The woman he loved was finally free from that horrid cursemark. Kakashi was filled with pure happiness at this, he even felt a tear come down from his natural eye. Anko was finally free.

It took a few hours for Anko to wake up, but when she did Kakashi was holding her hand, he sighed again when he woke up, "Anko, thank God you are okay. I was so worried for you. I thought I was going to die. It was terrifying."

Anko nodded, "I know Kakashi, I love you too. Kakashi…I-I'm free. I can't feel the pull towards Orochimaru." Anko's eyes teared up.

Kakashi nodded, "Anko, I love you more than anything. When things were dark you filled the void in my heart. You have always been there for me when I needed you, when I lost everyone and everything. I had nothing and no one and then you came and helped me. You saved me from darkness Anko and I will be forever grateful of that. There is no one I would rather wake up next too, no one I would rather be with than you Anko. You are the most beautiful woman I have ever seen. By far the most fun. You have let my try all of my fantasies on you, hell you pushed to do them as much as I did. You are the only person I know that doesn't care about what I read. What I'm trying to get at her is Anko Mitarashi," Kakashi slid down to one knee and pulled out a small ring box, he flicked it open and asked, "Will you marry me?"

Anko looked at him with tears in her eyes and threw her arms around him, "YES!"

Kakashi pulled away from her and grinned, he pulled the ring out of the box and slid it onto her finger. He then moved up and kissed his future bride.

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