Uzumaki Naruto Chronicles Rewrite

Chapter 136

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Hinata gasped in shock as Naruto turned around and started to walk out of the room, leaving the clone with her. "N-Naru…d-did you just b-break up with me?" Hinata asked him, trying to keep the tears in her eyes from falling.

Naruto sighed, he shrugged, "Honestly Hinata, I don't know, you tell me. Either you need to get over this, we need to break up, or you need a new jonin sensei. Because what we're doing right now clearly isn't working." As soon as he said that he stood and started walking away. He walked out the door letting out a sigh that was weighed down by the sadness it carried.

Hinata was shell shocked, sure things had been rocky, but she had only come here to make sure he would be alright. "N-Naru…w-wait. Come back!" She cried out to him.

"No, I'm done with this shit Hinata. I'm done with you disobeying me. With your blatant disregard for me and what I do for you." Naruto told her.

Hinata had tears in her eyes, "So what? You're just going to leave me here tied up and helpless?"

"I'm right here. You aren't in any danger, but you are being held for your insubordination. You clearly aren't going to listen to me, and can't pay attention to your surroundings, you're going to get yourself or someone else fucking killed. So, you're staying right the hell there. Period." Naruto told her, finally just walking out, leaving the girl to her thoughts.

Hinata was without words, how had things gone this wrong. She glared after him, her eyes burning holes in his back as he walked away from her. Finally, the tears were too heavy and fell from her eyes.

Naruto fought back his anger as he walked away, he couldn't believe Hinata has said all of that too him. His ears perked up as he heard something, someone else was here, sneaking around. Naruto growled, he had just found something to beat. He closed his eyes, activating his Fox tracking jutsu, enhancing his sense of smell and hearing. He could hear everything, the heartbeat, it was fast, the man was around the corner ready to strike. Naruto went through a hand seal and a clone reappeared and disappeared, letting the clone he left watching Hinata know what was going on.

Naruto walked two steps closer the man was just left of him, around the corner trying to get a drop on him. Naruto pushed off jumping to the wall on his right, he pushed off of the wall back to the left, it surprised the man, allowing Naruto to land a flying superman punch. The man shot backwards into the wall behind him. Naruto charged him, burying a fist into his stomach, forcing the man to bend over forwards.

Naruto wrapped his hands around the back of the mans head and fired a knee into his face once, twice, three times before allowing the man to start to fall back. Naruto pulsed chakra into his palms, allowing a kunai to pop out of each seal and into his palms, he fired the kunai, pinning the man's hands to the wall.

His head slumped forward but Naruto grabbed his face and slammed his head up and into the wall holding him there, watching as the blood poured from his shattered nose. "Who the fuck are you?" Naruto asked him.

"Go fuck yourself." The man told him.

Naruto growled and pulled his head forward before slamming it back into the wall again, "Let's get something straight right the hell now. Your life, your livelihood is in my hands right now, so when I ask you a question your answer better be respectful and correct. Now let's try again, who the fuck are you?"

"Go fuck yourself" the man said again through gritted teeth.

Naruto slammed his head into the wall again, this time pulling another kunai and slicing across the man's chest. "You are going to come clean sooner or later, its up to you how much pain you go through. Naruto's eyes had turned demon red and his voice had become demonic as well.

The man was terrified, and Naruto grinned, "Who are you, why are you here?"

"Fine, I'm one of Orochimaru's men. He left me to guard this base." The man told him.

"Is there anyone else?" Naruto asked. The man didn't say anything, looking guilty. "Listen, if I have to go find them I'll torture you all like the sick sadistic fucks you are. Call them out and to surrender themselves."

The man still didn't say anything, "NOW!" Naruto yelled, his demon traits coming out again, trying to terrify the man.

"Its just one other, he was heading after the girl. He was waiting for me to distract you, he should be engaging now." The man told him.

"RASENGAN!" Naruto heard his clone shout and the man came flying down the hall crashing into the wall next to Naruto. Naruto tossed two kunai, pinning the new man to the wall.

Naruto sighed in relief, until Hinata yelled, "Naruto, what's going on!?"

"Nothing, I'm taking care of it." He yelled into the other room, he then turned to the two men now pinned to the wall. "So, let's talk, why are you still here?"

"Don't say anything." The second man told the first.

Naruto glared at him with the red demon eyes and a kunai immediately buried into his knee cap, the man screamed out in pain as Naruto turned to his original captive, "Don't make me ask the question again."

The man nodded, "Right, we were stationed at a base nearby, this was left as a trap for you and the broad. Our orders were to kill you and return her to Lord Orochimaru and Lord Kabuto. After Kabuto got into a scuffle with you, he figured that you would go to the Tankus village. He figured it was only an amount of time until you found this, we were to ambush you both after the poison had taken affect."

Naruto scoffed, "Kabuto really is a dipshit if he thought you two were a match for me."

Naruto's second captive spoke up, "You say that, but the poison obviously hit the girl. If I take her to Kabuto, he will give her the antidote. We'll leave you tied up here, say we couldn't kill you, but you can't follow us. It's a win for everyone, she gets to live, we look like heroes, you get to live."

Naruto sighed, and another kunai buried into the man's other knee. As he screamed in agony Naruto turned back to his first captive once again, "I already neutralized the poison. You think I would come here without a way to neutralize the snake bastards poison?" Naruto laughed, "Now, Orochimaru has a redheaded woman held captive, her name is Kushina Uzumaki, but he inhumanely assigned her a number, he calls her 9. Do you know the woman I speak of?"

"Don't fucking tell this blonde bastard anything." The second captive again spoke up.

Naruto growled, "I'm running out of spots to impale." Another kunai flicked out of his hand, this time impaling the man's shoulder, Naruto walked over to him, slapped a seal on him to prevent him from using chakra, then teleported the man into the room with all the dead women. Naruto tied him up and left him there, before flashing back to his original captive. "Now you were about to tell me about Kushina Uzumaki. What do you know?"

"Not much, she was in Orochimaru's good graces, at least for a prisoner. Then she messed up Kabuto while she was supposed to be healing him, Orochimaru beats her and breaks her daily. He sealed her chakra, only unsealing her when she is to forcibly heal people. She was brought here and healed multiple people. They took her away after that. I haven't seen her since. She is Orochimaru's personal toy, has been as long as I've been a part of his army. She only recently within the last year started getting taken everywhere with Orochimaru. That's all I know about her I swear." The man told him fearfully.

"Where is she now?" Naruto asked.

"I don't know, I only know she was taken from here to another base. I'm sorry, I can tell you care for the woman." The man told him.

Naruto nodded, "What kind of transportation did they use, and which way did they go?"

"They stuffed her, hogtied into a covered wagon, and went west into the setting sun."

Naruto nodded, he unpinned the man, and tied his hands, before starting a healing jutsu and healing the wounds he had caused. "I can't just let you leave yet."

"So, you aren't going to kill me?" He asked.

Naruto shook his head, "I don't know yet, you have further use to me, so I won't do anything yet. You were kind enough to help me and answer my questions, so I didn't want you too uncomfortable."

Naruto turned and walked back to the room Hinata was in, he sighed as she glared at him, "Naruto, what was that about?"

"Kabuto sent them to kill me and capture you." Naruto told her.

Hinata's eyes widened in panic, "H-He knows we're here? We have to go, let me out of here, we need to get away from this place."

"I can't let you go Hinata, you're being held there because I can't trust you not to go anywhere in here." Naruto told her sadly.

She reached for the ankle cuffs, intent on using chakra to break them, but Naruto caught her hand with his gently, his deep blue eyes looking into her own eyes, "Hinata…please stop, you have to trust me." Naruto begged her softly.

Hinata was too terrified now, "H-He's coming for me! He'll kill you, and torture me! He'll rape me, and torment me! Don't you care!" Hinata yelled franticly, trying to break away from Naruto's grip.

Naruto's eyes widened as he realized she was having a panic attack, she was moments away from lashing out. He picked her up, sitting down and pulling her into his lap, he hugged her tight from there holding her, making sure if she lashed out she wouldn't hurt herself, he whispered into her ear, "Hina, everything is okay, he won't touch you again. I won't let him hurt you, but we have to stay here until Jiraiya gets here, then I'll take you home, leave you in my house. You'll be safe."

Hinata continued to struggle, but Naruto held her tight, and she started to calm slightly, tears rolling down her cheek, Naruto continued to whisper that she would be okay in her ear, calming her down. "Deep breaths, just take deep breaths, you're okay, I promise, he isn't coming."

Hinata took several deep breaths and seemed to calm down as Naruto slowly unwrapped his arms from around her. "You back?"

She nodded, and Naruto let her go, "I won't let anything happen to you I promise, but I need you to stay in here in those for now."

Hinata bit her lip as Naruto set her down, but she nodded in affirmative, "Fine."

Naruto got up and went to leave the room when she spoke up again, "We're not okay are we? Even though you helped me, and held me there, we aren't okay. You're still mad at me, and you won't teach me anymore, will you?"

Naruto swallowed, "I'll always teach you when you ask, I will always help you, however it may be best if you move to another jonin sensei for a while. You don't seem to listen to me, it puts you in danger during missions, it's a failure on my part, not yours. I'm sorry Hinata." With that said Naruto walked out and began to further investigate the base, dismantling the traps and studying them for knowledge on his opponents.

That's when Jiraiya appeared next to him, "Why is Hinata tied up?"

"She keeps fucking disobeying me, she refuses to listen to my orders. She has an issue following orders. I told her not to come here, she does it anyways, she shows up panics, vomits, and gets hit by a poison arrow, it fucked up her shoulder joint. So, I did what I had to in order to keep her from getting hurt again. I'm taking her home and coming back to help you investigate."

"Investigate what Naruto, it's a fucking unmarked grave." Jiraiya told him.

"Mom was here, two weeks ago, taken away towards the west via wagon, we can find a trail and follow it, it's the biggest lead we've had yet. I have two prisoners, at the very least we can ransack a couple bases and kill some of his fucking men.

Jiraiya nodded, stroking his chin, "Fine, but let me talk to her first."

Naruto nodded, "Go for it, nothing I say is getting through to her."

"Go ahead and release your clone for me." Jiraiya told him, Naruto nodded and dispelled his clone.

Jiraiya walked to the room as Naruto continued to study a trap. When Jiraiya got to the room he saw Hinata cut through her ankle cuffs with one of her daggers, channeling lightning chakra through it. He crossed his arms and stood against the door, "What are you doing?" He asked, his voice sad and disappointed.

Hinata looked up at him surprised, "Jiraiya, what are you doing here?"

"Naruto asked me to come and investigate this place while he took you home, what are you doing?" Jiraiya asked, his voice giving away hints of anger.

"I-I was…I had to make sure Kabuto couldn't get me." Hinata told him, looking at the floor.

"Naruto told you everything would be fine, he asked you to trust him, yet here you are disobeying him again." Jiraiya told her.

"He didn't trust me though! He left a clone to guard me!" She told him angrily.

"Why should he? You did exactly what he told you not too. This is disgraceful." Jiraiya told her, never raising his voice once.

"Because he should have never restrained me! I'm not his property to do with what he pleases!" Hinata exclaimed.

Jiraiya sighed, "If that's your current mindset, I have no words for you." Jiraiya then walked away.

Naruto flashed next to her shortly after, the hurt in his eyes apparent. He placed a hand on her shoulder, "I'm teleporting us towards home." He told her sadly. With that they started a series of teleports taking them all the way to the hidden leaf village. Naruto took in heaving breaths when they landed in his house. "Do not try to leave this house." He told her harshly, before looking into her eyes, glaring into him. "Please Hina, don't leave this house." With that he disappeared, flashing to Tsunade's office to tell her what had happened. He appeared at her door and knocked.

"Come in." Tsunade called out from inside.

Naruto walked in, and Tsunade smiled at him, "Naruto, good to see you!" But she immediately saw the sadness in his face. He wore a frown, and his eyes, he looked broken for some reason. Tsunade was immediately alert, "What's wrong?"

"The mission was successful, I took out the leader, they won't be giving Orochimaru anymore soldiers…But Hinata," Naruto sighed sadly, "I must request that she be given a new jonin commander. I am unfit for leadership."

"Naruto, what happened?" She asked.

"She won't listen to me, she constantly disobeyed me in the field, I've trained her, she is strong, she is chuunin level or higher in strength. However, she is going to get herself killed because she won't follow my orders. I can continue to help train her but taking her on missions will have to be put to a halt. I-I failed, I'm sorry Tsunade." Naruto told her.

"It must have been rather bad for you to be reporting her to me, I could kick her out of the ninja corps, I should kick her out. Not following orders is a serious breach of the village rules." Tsunade told him seriously.

"Please don't do that, I think its purely because its me instructing her." Naruto told her, worried.

"I won't, but she will be disciplined. Anko, Zabuza, and I will take over her disciplinary training. It will be an opportunity for her to make up for her sins against this village, as well as get stronger, much stronger." Tsunade told him.

"Thank you Tsunade. I'm leaving again, please have Haku make sure she doesn't leave the house and get into trouble. I found a den of captured women that Kabuto left to die, they all died but at one-point Kushina was there, I'm going back to help Jiraiya, we are going to look for my mom. I don't know how long I'll be gone, but please allow me to do this." Naruto asked her.

"And if I say no?" Tsunade asked.

"I'll accept that, but these last two missions have been incredibly dangerous, and without me you wouldn't have been able to get them done. I did your dirty ops without questioning, without but c rank mission pay as a favor to you." Naruto told her.

"I know Naruto, I know. I'm going to let you go, I just wanted to see how you would have handled me saying no." Tsunade told him.

Naruto nodded and was about to step out when Tsunade spoke again, "I do appreciate you doing those missions, and the many more I will have for you to do. You are one of my top operatives and you hold my highest regards not just as a ninja, but as my grandson of sorts. I love you Naruto, you've done so well."

Naruto smiled softly at her, "Thanks Granny."

"Take Kakashi with you, if you are raiding the snake's bases you will need him, he is to come back in between raids to do other missions. Kushina was like a mother to him, he wants to help her. And do me a favor before you leave, bring Hinata here, I will set rules for her, and explain what is going on. It isn't your job to reassign her and hear her grief, its mine." Tsunade told him.

Naruto nodded and flashed away, flashing back with Hinata, "Hinata, there are going to be some changes, Tsunade will inform you about what change will be taking place." With that Naruto flashed away, heading to explain things to Kakashi and leave a note for Hinata. He would leave a note in their bedroom for her.

The note read, "Hinata, I'm sorry about all of this, I feel I've failed you as your sensei, best friend, and betrothed. I love you more than anything, and wish I was here right now. I need to find and save my mother, I have a chance and I need to take it. I'm not abandoning you, I will be back for you. I just don't know what to do right now. I'm so scared of you getting hurt. I'm sorry for everything. I left you a seal under this note, you can write to me and seal it in that seal, just like a storage seal, and I will get it. I can also write you back, when I send a note it will pop up wherever you leave this note. I was in a hurry to get back on the trail to find mom. I have a real chance here, so I have to take it. I love you, please write me and we can talk. If you choose not to write me I understand and, I guess I'll know where you stand. Love Naruto." Naruto left it on her pillow on their bed, knowing she would see it, and hoping it would give her some hope that night. He sighed, before flashing to Kakashi's location.

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Tsunade turned back to Hinata, "Hinata, Naruto informed me of what happened over the mission, he thinks that its his failure, but I know its yours. Your disobedience, whether its because you were under him or not, will not be tolerated. I'm moving you to new jonin sensei. Zabuza Momochi, you will train with him and Haku, and Anko. We will be in charge of your punishment training. Your attitude during this training will determine whether you continue being a ninja or not. This is an opportunity to grow stronger and show me that you are worth keeping as a ninja." Tsunade told her.

Hinata stood there biting her lip as tears rolled down her cheeks, "So Naruto is abandoning me?" She asked.

Tsunade sighed and shook her head, "He would never do that, the fact that you would ask shows how much distrust you have in the man that saves you and shows you love constantly. Can you not see what you are doing to him? He begged me not to just go ahead and kick you out of my ninja corps, I told him I wouldn't. Are you so thick headed you don't see that he does everything for you?"

"Then why is he leaving?" Hinata asked sadly.

Tsunade shook her head, "He has another mission. Hinata you have two options right now. I'm well within my rights to send you to prison and keep you in a cell until you have proven you can follow orders. Or I can have you escorted home, you will not leave that house until I send someone to escort you anywhere. You have no privileges right now, thus you will not leave for any reason other than your punishment."

"P-please don't lock me up. I can't live in a cell anymore." Hinata told her sadly.

"You have no privileges right now, thus you will not leave for any reason other than your punishment. You can consider this house arrest if you'd like. You are allowed to live there and take your punishment. If you try to leave you will be finishing your punishment period living in a cell. Hinata I don't want to do this, but you have to learn when to take orders." Tsunade told her.

Hinata nodded sadly, "When will Naruto be back?"

"I've sent Naruto on a mission, he will be doing missions for now, he won't be in the village very often. I think you two need some space, I think Naruto will agree with that. His mission right now is long term. He won't be back for a couple months at least. It gives me plenty of time to whip you into shape to be a proper ninja and follow orders." Tsunade told him.

Hinata nodded biting her lip, "I'm sorry Lady Hokage."

"SAVE IT." Tsunade snapped, "You have a problem with authority, you aren't actually sorry yet, but you damn sure will be. Tomorrow morning be ready to go by 5 am, if you are not ready you will be spending the rest of this punishment period in a cell. If you disobey one order or disrespect your sensei one time you will be spending the rest of the period in a cell. Naruto would object to this, but he won't be around. You will learn respect and obedience. Now I will have Haku escort you home."

"Wait, can I see Naruto before he leaves? I want to at least say goodbye." Hinata asked.

Tsunade glared at her, "No. He should already be gone from the village, your punishment starts now, either go home with Haku, or my ANBU will arrest you and take you to your cell."

Hinata nodded sadly, as Haku walked into the room, "Come on Hinata."

Hinata walked in the front door, not having said a word to Haku the entire time, she walked quietly with her head hung in shame. Her hair covering her face as tears rolled down her cheeks. She walked in sad, not believing Naruto would just leave and not say goodbye, he really had abandoned her she thought. She sighed going to her room, as opposed to his, she didn't think he'd want her in his room right now, she wouldn't go in until he was back.

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