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Chapter 5: Prison? Or heaven?
Humphreys P.O.V (7:25AM)
I woke up feeling like I accomplished something.. Like I climbed a mountain that no other guy has climbed, even though I haven't reached the summit (If you know what I mean *Wink). I got up and got the clothes I wanted to wear for the day.. American Eagle long sleeve grey with blue sleeves and some black American Eagle skinny jeans. I went to the bathroom and… low and behold.. The door was locked.. My sister takes so fucking long in there I don't even know what she does and I didn't care I knocked on the door
"C'mon Liza! I need to get ready too" I said angry
"I'm not decent!" She said back
"Well get decent because I need to shower" I said and with that I heard her bumping around and then she opened the door with a towel around her up to her breast. I looked up and down and then walked in.
"Wait!" She said as I walked in
"What?" I asked putting my clothes on the toilet, which was closed by the way.
"I need to get dressed" she said motioning to her clothes on the sink.
"Do it in your room" I said turning on the shower faucet to get the temperature right. I guess I should tell you what my sister looks like.. She looks alot like me, y'know blue eyes and grey fur but she has a lot more white on her face down on her belly. In my opinion she is very attractive and got all the looks.
"In my room? And walk through the hows with only a towel?" She asked with her hands on her hips.
"Yup"
"Fat chance!" she said looking at me
"Liz.. we're all family why does it matter?" I said looking up at her and she looked like she was thinking.
"I guess" she said
"So just change here I'll be in the shower anyway" I said get in the shower closing the curtain and then taking off my underwear and throwing them over the curtain.
"EWW!" she said as I peeked out the curtain and saw my underwear on her head
"HAHA s-sorry sis" I said almost dying of laughter just because of the fact that I didn't mean to do that.
"UGH" she said throwing them off as I went back behind the curtain. I heard her take off the towel so I got really curious.. I peeked out and saw her ass in the air as she was picking up her panties that fell down. She had a pretty tight pussy and a nice ass she must b- WAIT! She's my sister what am I doing! I quickly went back behind the curtain as I saw her begin to come up. I started my usual shower in order of.. Soap, Shampoo, and teeth then got out seeing my sister was gone and she shut the door. I dried off and put my underwear on then put on some Old Spice deodorant and put my cloths on along with my usual shoes (Ones from Chap 1). I rolled my sleeves up and went down stairs after grabbing my keys, wallet, and phone.
"Morning fam" I said walking down stairs seeing mom making breakfast and Liza on her phone.
"Hey bro" she said looking up smiling and then back down to her phone texting away
"Morning hon, eggs and bacon?" mom said looking at me
"Now.. how can I pass that down" I said said sitting down and checking my phone.
*Group message with H- humphrey, S-salty, Sh-shakey, and M-mooch:
S- Guyz
S- Guyzzzz
M- What?
Sh- What!?
S- I don't wanna go to skl
H- None of us do bud
Sh- I mean it's not THAT bad
S- Stfu Shakey
M- Yeah
H- Guys guys guys leave him alone it's just an opinion.. I mean it's a stupid one but.. Still an opinion.
S- Wut ever you gonna pick me up today Humph?
H- For sure man
S- Thanks dude
M- Eh me too please?
H- Yeah
M- You da best
S- Couldn't agree with you more :)
*end
I put my phone back in my pocket and got up.. I ate my eggs and bacon while I was texting
"C'mon Liz let's go, gotta pick up my friends, and no not Shakey" I said picking my bag up tossing it around my shoulder she gave me an evil eye and walked out the door.
"Bye mom" I said kissing her cheek and leaving.
I put my bag in the back seat as did Liza and we got into the truck. I started it and let it heat up for about 2 minutes then drove off to Salty's house. We got there and he waved and got in the back.
"Hey guys" he said seeming pretty happy.
"Hey Salty" Liza said looking at him then back out the window
"Hey bro how's it hangin?" I said putting the truck in reverse.
"It's goin pretty good" he said.
"Now where's the fucking aux cord I wanna try out your new subs!" He said excited and I smirked and handed him the cabble. He plugged it in and played 'Losin Control' by Russ and I have to admit when the bass dropped it sounded amazing on my new sound system I put in the truck.
"Damn!" Salty said as he nodded his head.
"Ha ha money well spent!" I said pulling up to Mooch's house. I turned down the music as he got in.
"Holy shit! I could hear that from in my house!" he said getting in and we all laughed.
"Turn that shit up!" he said as I did and we jammed out until we got to school.
"Hell sweet hell" Salty said as we saw a grey 2002 Mustang park next to us and the driver got out as it was Shakey.
"Hey dude" I said doing our usual handshake
"Hey man" shakey said as we ended the handshake and everyone else said hi to eachother as we started walking to the school.
"Hey Salty…" I said as I realized something
"Hm?"
"Why did I have to drive you today? You have a Stealth" I said curious
"Oh right! Dude my engine won't start I don't know why it makes this terrible sound like pounding" he said.
"Salty.. Did you fill the oil like I said last time?" I said with an eyebrow raised.
"Ummmm" he said looking up
"No" he said and we all face palmed in unison
We got to the school and went to our new lockers which were assigned to us at the end of the year.
"So you guys trying out for hockey again this year?" Shakey said, all of us were the top on our team last year.
"Hell yeah dude" Salty said
"Oh yeah man" Mooch said opening his locker
"What about you Humphrey?" Shakey said but I was distracted
"Humphrey?" Salty said. I was looking at the most beautiful girl in the school. Kate Jackson. Looking at her brought back all the memories from last night and when were kids playing and hanging out but that changed when I went in a shell after my dad died.. I just.. Shut down and didn't talk to anyone (A/N: God I miss my dad)... that is until these guys.. My best friends helped me forget about all that and move on.. But it still doesn't change the fact that he's gone (A/N: Love you dad).
As I was looking at her she turned around and we locked eyes. She started blushing and as did I and then it was ruined when I saw some fingers snap in front of my face.
"HEY!" Salty said as he snapped his fingers in front of me.
"What?" I said as I looked and saw Shakey and Mooch smiling like idiots
"What?" I said again
"Dude. Just give her up she's out of everyone's league." Mooch said putting his hand on my shoulder.
"We don't want her to break your heart bro" Shakey said. I brushed his hand off and then said
"Look you guys are great friends and all. But this year is the year I'll be with her" I said opening my locker and grabbing my math and chemistry books and then closing the locker.
"Suuuuurrreee bro" Mooch said as we did our handshake and went our separate ways.
Kates P.O.V:
Me and Humphrey had just finished staring into eachothers eyes when my friend Ashley snapped her fingers in front of my face.
"Hellloooo earth to Kate" She said as I looked at her and stopped her fingers from snapping
"What?" I said looking at her kind of angry because she ruined our trance
"Are you looking at… Humphrey?" Candy, my other friend, said
"No…" I said in denial.
"Is it about how sweet he was yesterday?" Sweets, Candy's sister, asked
"He was sweet wasn't he" I said getting lost looking at him walking to class, and DAMN LOOK AT THAT ASS.
"Earth to Kate again" Sweets said
"Okay fine I like him, he's cute, funny, smart, and the sweetest guy I've ever met" I said in a dreamy tone.
"Wow.. you're on cloud nine huh?" Ashley said cocking her head
"Yeah" I said in response (no shit)
"Well I mean.. She's not wrong about any of those things" Candy said and I gave her the death glare.
"B-but I mean.. He's not my type" She said and I smiled and nodded.
"Anyway let's get to class girls" I said as Candy and Sweets followed me because we're in the same math class.
Humphrey's P.O.V:
I walked into class and sat down in the back. I looked around and saw one of my oldest childhood friends, other than Kate, Jack Goodyear (yes.. Like the tire..). I couldn't believe how good he looked from when I last saw him.. He was a lot more muscular than from when I last saw him, I recognized him because of his red hair that goes on his head to his sides then his white hair that goes from under his muzzle to his belly, and then the black hair that goes from his eyes like a mask and then down his back to his tail (Need a picture? Look at my profile pic). I also saw his best friend, Keith Anderson, a full white wolf with white eyes… Both of them are like eye candy for all the girls.. I don't know why but I get told I'M eye candy too but I don't believe it. Anyway I decided to go sit next to them so I move all my stuff over (I hate doing that btw it's so awkward).
"Hey guys" I said after their conversation stopped.
"Humphrey!?" Jack exclaimed
"Bro is that you?" Keith says
"Yup it's me" I chuckled as Keith got up and hugged me, it took me by surprised me but then I accepted and hugged back, then Jack got up and hugged me.
"Sorry we're huggers" Keith said and they sat back down and I sat next to them.
"Damn you look good bro" Jack said and Keith nodded
"Hey thanks guys. You two as well" I said as I said that I saw Kate walk in and my heart skipped a beat when she looked at me and smiled. I smiled back and said
"I'll be right back guys" I said as I got up and walked over to her. As I was walking a pretty girl smiled and winked at me and I just smiled.. 'Thats new' I said to myself quietly.
"Hey Humphrey!" Kate said hugging me which took me by surprise, again, and I put my arms around her.
"Hey Kate. How's it going?" I said after the hug and she smiled while looking in my eyes
"Great" She said dreamy and I was caught in a daze looking into hers.
"Hey" I said breaking out transe
"Yeah?"
"Do you wanna mayb-" I was about to ask her out but then the FUCKING teacher just HAD to walk in
"OKAY CLASS, sorry I'm late. I'm Mr. Helfer and I'll be your math teacher this year now find your seats and put your bums in them" He said while closing the door and sitting down.
"Ugh, find me at lunch okay?" She said smiling
"Sure" I said smiling back
"Oh and- here's my number, in case you can't find me" she said while writing it on my arm 'I may never wash this arm again' I thought. I nodded and went back to my seat while smiling like a retard (hope that doesn't offend anyone.. Like actually). When I got to my seat I saw Jack and Keith looking at me in the same pose… Chin resting in their hand while there elbows were on the table and smiling like idiots.
"What?" I said covering my arm with my sleeve
"You sly dog" Jack said while Keith chuckled.
"I don't know what you're talking about" I said crossing my arms and looking up, as I did this Keith grabbed my arm and pulled the sleeve up nicely and said
"Knew it!" as I pulled away
"Bro I don't know what you have to hide the fact that the hottest girl in our grade gave you her number" Jack said with a cheesy smile on his face.
"We're not a thing just. friends. I'm helping her fix her car.. The differentials all fucked" I said looking at each of them as I spoke.
"Did SHE say you were just friends?" Jack said motioning to her with his head
"No.. I don't think so… What are you getting at?"
"You're on her radar dude!" Keith said excitedly
"Yeah!" Jack said as they high fived for some reason
"Well… I guess.. Wait.. Guys, she's waaaayyy out of my le-"
"Yeah yeah yeah… we've heard it all before but bro you're not.. That's just it.. You're a great guy who's smart, strong, and not bad looking. Trust me on that" Jack said with a smile and I smiled back.
"Thank's bro. That really means a lot. Hey how's it going with Larissa?" I asked
"Not the best" Jack stated looking away
"How so?" I asked
"She moved" Keith answered patting Jack's back.
"Awe I'm so sorry bro really" I said putting my hand on his shoulder
"Guys.. I'm fine I got over it.. It just sucks a load of dicks" Jack said
"YOU THREE… Quiet down please.. Now as I was saying…" Mr. Helfer said as he went on about who he is and shit like that.
* Lunch
I walked into the cafeteria which actually smelled pretty damn good. I went in line and grabbed a tray but some guys patted my back as I walked by and I just nodded not knowing what I did or… if I even knew them. I got my food and went to sit in my usual spot with the guys and they all came and sat down.
"Hey boys hows it goin?" I said as they sat down
"Shit" Shakey said
"Yeah fuck school" Salty said as he sat down and began to ate
"Who likes it?" Mooch said sitting down with TWO trays
"Jesus Christ Mooch" I said looking at the trays with wide eyes
"Yeah dude what the hell?" Shakey said eating
"What? I'm hungry" Mooch said eating
"What else is new?" Salty said rolling his eyes
"What you say?" Mooch said with food in his mouth
"Hey you guys" Jack says putting his hands on my shoulders
"Oh hey you two" I said patting one of Jack's hands and nodding to Keith and then sit down
"So who are you guys?" Shakey asked politely
"They were like my first friends hell even before Kate" I said eating my food
"Damn how come you guys don't talk no more?" Mooch said after swallowing
"Well I moved to another school in grade 5" Jack said
"And that's when I met Keith" I said putting my arm around Keith
"Yup! But then.. 2 years later I moved" He said putting his arm around me
"We came back in grade 10 and now we're good buddies" Jack said putting his arm around Keith
"The best!" Keith said putting his other arm around Jack
"Well isn't that nice" Salty said eating and I looked over to where Kate usually sits and saw she wasn't there and that's when I remembered
"Oh shit!" I said "I gotta go see Kate" I said getting up and fast walking away but I heard
"When are you gonna stop with this Kate thing!?" Salty shouted
"No.. dude we saw it… he got her number!" Keith said proudly
"Damn seriously?" Shakey said and Salty was in shock and that's all I saw until I left the cafeteria.
I looked around for Kate and remembered her number on my arm so I got my phone out and added her number into it and called her..
"Hello?" I heard her magical voice say.
"Hey Kate" I said all nonchalant
"Where you at?" she said sounding happy
"Looking for you!" I said sounding happy as well.. Probably because I am
"Well I'm in the courtyard, ya goof" she said giggling
"Oh okay on my way!" I said walking that way after hanging up
I walked to the courtyard and looked around and I didn't see her, I was just about to call her again when I felt someone jump on my back with their arms around my neck. I knew who it was because of the smell of her perfume. Kate. I put my arms under her legs like a piggy back ride and she giggled
"Hey Humphrey"
"Hey Kate" I said smiling and she smiled back
"So what did you wanna say?" she said getting down.
"Um.. What?" I said completely forgetting why were here
"In class you were going to ask me something?" she said and it all came back to me and I immediately got nervous.
"Well um… would you want to.. Hang out maybe go for a dinner and movie with me y'know like old times" I said nervously
And then..
Silence…
SORRY GUYS! I'm a dick I know gonna have to wait for next chapter XD