Hey ya'll Faletagoai here(F9 for short), just glad to see people already reading my story which means a lot :)
I'm here to give you the second chapter!
To be honest though chapter 1 was just a test to see if I should continue on but, one person can always have an impact.
That awesome person is darksquall03.
Warning: There will be some elements from Naruto which is the elemental training in all 5 elements and sub elements but the only difference is that it won't need hand signs to execute the techniques. The Avatar as well when it comes to bending the elements but Broly's will be 100x more powerful due to me making it all ki based.
HE'LL BE OP AND I MEAN IT! Now ill just stop talking and get on with the story lol.
CHAPTER 2
"FROM MORTAL TO TRUE DEITY"
(Previously)
"What can we do for you Grand Priest- sama"
(present)
"Well I've been sent here by Grand Zenos to investigate the powerful source of power that was able to be sensed by all 12 universes." Grand Priest stated with his casual smile.
To say Whis and Beerus were shocked would be an understatement, but that shock was outweighed with immense pride that their student has gotten so far with in 10 years, the deity and tenshi of universe 7 had the biggest smiles on their faces because they both know that Broly would never turn out to be an arrogant evil villain.
Whis just cheerfully boasted "Well that would be my most prized student Broly."
The Grand Priest was intrigued to know more about this Broly so he asked for his origins and his progress with his training. Whis happily obliged and told him all about his saiyan origins, the unwavering sheer will he imposes, the determination that burns through his eyes, and unlimited potential that he holds.
The Grand Priest was very shocked that a mortal had such potential and power that he was a little worried but his worries were put to rest when Was also informed him about Broly's infectious innocent nature.
'Yup just like her. Without a doubt I found the one.' I spoke inwardly
(Broly's POV)
When I woke up I was confused because the first thing that came to view was both my masters(who I secretly considered as older brothers) bowing considering Beerus' inflated ego which i inwardly laughed at 'I'll rub it in his face later' I looked at the new arrival with curiosity that resembles Whis, but was far stronger which shocked me then it clicked as I remember my lessons with Whis on the Hakaishins and Tenshis of other universes and the Grand Priest was explained to be the patriarch/father of the Tenshis which it made me really shy and nervous.
'I'm really shy when I meet new people but I can't really help it. Cheelai always had hearts in her eyes and smothers me with her hugs saying that I'm her giant adorable innocent plushy of a brother. I really miss her but I will live my life to the fullest for her'.
I then heard him say that Grand Zenos wishes to see me which piqued my interest and then I saw him turn to me with a smile
"Hi there Im Avalon(just roll with it) I'm here to take you see the Grand Zenos for they have taken an interest in you."
I looked at my masters, they nodded. I then turned to Avalon and nodded as well. He smiled and told me to hold onto him which the second I did we wounded up in front of the Grand Zenos.
(Few minutes earlier Zenos POV)
"Ne ne that power felt so pure"
"Yes so pure with no sign of malice"
"Ne ne Just like her"
"Yes our first friend" The Omni kings always want another friend besides Goku and themselves to play with them. Son Goku hasn't visited them due to being far away and having other things to do which saddens them, but with this new person that is so pure they hope this will be that one friend they both need and always play with them. Maybe this person can be a Hakaishin so he/she can play with them and be their friend forever. With that thought in mind of The omni duo can only hope and wish that person will fit that role.
Unknown to them their wish shall be granted as Avalon returned with the person and the atmosphere was filled with such pure and potent sensation.
(ZEN PALACE)
(BROLY POV)
The Zenos which I really found cute and even more adorable when they started speaking.
"Ne ne is this the one Avalon san?"
"yes is this the one?" The Zenos asked with excitement.
"Yes this is the one, let me introduce you to Broly a saiyan from universe 7 that is actually an apprentice of my son Whis and Lord Beerus training to take the mantle of Hakaishin." Avalon started with an amused smile.
I then saw stars in their eyes while they flew over to me circling around me with observant eyes. I started chuckling and smiled at them
" Well hello there." I started to pat their heads which the bodyguards didn't like and started to attack me which was put a stop when the Zenos glared at them. They turned back to me and smiled.
"Ne ne more patting please."
"yes more patting please." At which I happily obliged. The onlookers were surprised when the deity duo started to purr.
'Heh Cheelai always says I have the most magical hands which she blushed and looked away when she said it which left me clueless.'
When the duo were satisfied they smiled at me and started to fly back on their throne to discuss the matter at hand.
"Ne ne Broly-san are you really going to become the Hakiashin of universe 7?"
"Yes are you really?" They ask hoping I do. I smiled at them nodding. The duo were ecstatic.
"Yayyyy" I started chuckling.
(2 minutes of patting later)
I then saw Avalon walk up. "May I offer a proposition?" All attention were now on Avalon.
"Ne ne what is it Avalon?"
"Yes'' What is it?" The duo curiously asked
"I wish to take Broly-san as my first apprentice." Everyone was shocked, for good reason too, to be trained by one of the Top 5 Strongest fighters in the Multiverse that is also number 1 is a very big honor. I stood there with a shocked look as I hear The Zenos asking him why, which he stated his reasons.
"I have sensed his Unlimited potential, also is very Powerful indeed and while he may have control over is power, there is still more room for improvement."
He then continued, "I wish to take him in my training dimension where I control time where I will train him for 15 years on all I know when in real world time it'll be only 1 month. That way he'll be on time for the next meeting of all 12 universe's to announce his accession."
The Zenos looked really excited of the idea. "Ne ne Broly is going to be super super amazing!"
"Yes ultra amazing!" The omni duo acclaimed.
Avalon then turned to me "Well how bout it?" I bowed and humbly said with a smile,"It would be an honor sensei!
My new sensei told me to hold onto him.
I called over to the omni duo " Later Z-chan, P-chan!
The omni duo looked at me with big smiles and yelled "Later Onii-chan we'll be waiting for you!"
'O-onii chan heh why not, I guess this is how how big sister Cheelai felt when i first called(more like forced me to) her big sis.' Then Avalon and I vanished and arrived into Avalons Time dimensions.
(Time Dimension)
When we arrived I felt extremely heavy.
"Oh I forgot to warn you that the gravity here is 5000x more than on Lord Beerus' planet." (which is 15 times greater than earths) He stated with his usual smile not even affected at all.
He continued "So the first 3 years we will work on refining your power to that of a "True Deity". You may or may not know that there are 2 ways to ascend to godhood. One is by eating the divine fruit of the "The God Tree" which all the current Hakiashins have eaten but they are what we Tenshis call a minor god, they may be trained in the ways of destruction but their calibur is nothing compared to a True Deity. There are 5 requirements you need to ascend to be a True Deity and those are,
1. Must be in sync with the light and dark aspects of one's self
2. Body and Mind become one.
3. The Purest of Heart
4. The burning determination and sheer will like no other.
5. clear of malice.
"You see Broly you possess all these traits, all I need is to guide you through it. There was one True God or should I say Goddess that was before you." Avalon continued.
"Meridia,your predecessor, my dearest older sister who destroyed a great evil who is not with us anymore whose last words to me was "Don't worry or grieve for my spirit lives on to be inherited by one who will take on my mantle as true deity."
My eyes widen when it became clear to me and Avalon saw this.
"Yes you inherited Meridia's spirit." I stood there not knowing what to say all could do was bow and say
"I will not disappoint!" I then heard him laughing and saw his expression full nostalgia
"Hahaha you sound just like her!" I started laughing as well.
"I will go beyond your expectations this I vow with spirit that I inherited!" I yelled with determination, the one saw in his sister's eyes that Avalon coulda swore he saw Merida smiling next to me. Avalon smiled a sincere one and told me.
"That I have no doubt you will." I smiled and bowed again and waited for him to continue my training regime.
"Next 3 years I will be teaching you on using the 5 elements earth, water, fire, wind and lightning also the sub elements that will allow you to create and control ice, crystals, lava ext., While also controlling the elements in its purest form."
"The next 3 years after that will be working with weapons." (Ninja Gaiden Ryu Hayabusa's weapons and skills, and will train in every weapon he can and make.)
"After those 3 years we will work on mastering fighting styles"(Taijutsu forms from narutoverse. Mainly the Hyuga Gentle fist, Uchiha Interceptor Fist, Gai's Strong Fist also included a real world discipline such as Judo for I'm a master at.)
"The last 3 years will be brutal for I will have you abuse the usefulness of zenkai boost for that I will have you power down at a level of a normal human till you surpass me and quite possibly your predecessor." Avalon finished started with a serious look that meant "you don't gotta choice". I grinned with a challenging look and shot back.
"I'm no stranger to pain so bring it on I got a promise to keep and death will not take me!"
Avalon just smiled and shook his head " Well let's get started, shall we?"
'If there's one thing I inherited from my saiyan lineage, it's my hunger for improvement but the key difference is that I'm doing this so something that happened to Cheelai won't be repeated to someone that I may hold dear in the future. I WILL PROTECT ALL OF MY PRECIOUS PEOPLE AND DESTROY THOSE WHO DARE TRY TO TAKE FROM ME!!!!!'
(End of Broly's POV)
(15 years later in Time dimension)
A bright crimson light can be seen levitating in the sky if one to take a closer look they could see a figure within it. That figure was Broly the new "True Deity". His training was actually complete within just 9 years due to a new technique that he developed. "Doppelganger"
(Flashback)
Broly was having a difficult time trying to master different weapons while training consistently so he asked Avalon if he can take some time to create a technique. Avalon was curious so he just let Broly do his thing for he still has a lot of time.
(this technique will be based off the mechanics of shadow clones but better)
Broly spent a day creating this technique called Doppelganger or dopple for short.
A skill that allows the user to create one or more physical copies of the user and give mental feedback to the original as it dispels with no side effect of mental backlash while he also gained the physical aspect which means the users strength will be improved as well. The more Ki you have the more copies you can make.
Broly was smiling like Christmas came early when he mastered his technique. Broly then showed and explained the the skill to Avalon who had his mind blown by the ingenuity behind the skill and asked if he can learn it which Broly happily obliged. Avalon was ecstatic saying "Goodbye evil paperwork! " with a maniacal laugh which I sweat dropped for a few minutes. He also stated he could use this as well for his training saying he could make four Doppels to train me in the other remaining four aspects which was very convenient. After spamming dopples his training was complete a month later.
(End of flashback)
Broly's eye slowly opened and began to land on the ground. Broly started to let out his power which has come a very long way, when before his power was somewhat controlled. Now his power was refined to perfection.
This was due to his ascension as "True Deity" a month later after the completion of his training.
(Flashback)
We now see Broly and Avalon exchanging blows in a very heated sparring match to see if he was ready.
Avalon already knew Broly long since surpassed him by great margin but there was one final test that Broly needed. It was the battle of acceptance with one one's self. He must accept that he has destroyed many innocents while being under the command of his late bastard of a father.
"Accept who you are and what you have done. Nothing can change you only you can!" Avalon shouted as he delivered a six-hit combo sending Broly through a couple of mountains.
The image of Cheelai came into my head and the words she spoke about not wishing to be brought back to life for committing horrible acts towards other races while under his father's command and accepted death with a smile on her face.
I then shouted "I am Broly!" Within that moment a royal crimson aura started to shroud over the form of Broly and the ascension of the new True Deity has arrived.
When the aura begin to fade a new and majestic Broly was shown. He now retained his youth of a 21 year old young man. Where is his original height was at a 7ft 7' He now stood at a good 8'. His new apparel was similar to a Hakaishin but his was all white with glowing crimson runes on the neck piece and belt also with gold armbands. Where his build was once of that of a bulky Juggernaut, he now has a very lean frame that will put anybody else to shame with diamond like 12 pack abs, strong broad shoulders, ripped biceps, a very chiseled chest and now has a total of 12 angel crimson ethereal like wings that can be turn invisible if wanted too. His once onyx black hair is now turned into blood red. His hairstyle changed as well(Think Madara Uchia but smoother). His once onyx eyes is now a royal purple iris with the pupil being crimson. His skin was now fair snow white compared to his original tan.
His face was that of divinity and that was an understatement for he was like divinity itself and also had a devilish charming look which added quite well with his divinity charm. He is the epitome of divinity, a god amongst men literally and figuratively.
Broly started to flex his power and to his surprise it felt so much more tamed and he felt so much at peace. His base form is already in Legendary Ultrainstinct which he can add more power if he wanted too.
He then looked at Avalon who had the biggest smile on his face and bowed while Broly mirrored his smiled.
"All hail Lord Broly the True Deity."
(Flashback end)
His mastery of the elements were unmatched for when it comes to his earth affinity, he could crush planets and asteroids with a simple gesture of his hand. He could create white flames that its heat rivaled that of a blue hypergiant star. He could pull water from the air and could use water to cut anything and could control the water in one's body. He could create winds that can blast planets apart with ease. His Purple lightning affinity was his strongest element that can travel at speeds 100x faster than light, and that can penetrate through anything. Two of his favorite combinations of elements is creating wood that is 50x denser than steel from nothing with crystals and made a bunch of buildings and making blue crystal structures that are denser than the most dense material Kachi Katchin.
His mastery of weaponry made him the best weapon user of the multiverse.
Hand to hand combat is where he excels the most, mastered all the fighting styles Avalon taught him with record time and bested Avalon with ease.
The most harsh training is when he was almost killed countless times that his zenkais multiplier kept on climbing higher and higher due to his broken adaptability. He's been through this regime for two months straight till nothing can penetrate his skin.
Over the remaining 6 years he and Avalon had formed a bond of that of father and son. It was surprising because Tenshis' were indifferent but Avalon stated that most Tenshis' are. It's just Meridia beat the indifference out of him saying emotions are important, if you don't have any you're not living. Avalon also found out that Broly is very shy and one of the most honest, blunt but very innocent people that he's ever met that Broly didn't know what lying is and sweat dropped when Broly told the tale of when he called his sister beautiful and other females that he was introduced to, then their face will turn red which confused him. Avalon also found about Broly's empathy.
He has also been working on his culinary skills, which was his favorite hobby. The level of mastery he obtained when he spammed doppelganger was perfection that when he served a dish to his father(Avalon) he was in pure bliss that he kept asking for more which brought a huge smile to Broly's face.
One of his all time favorite skills that he obtained is that he can make his own dimensions with his only imagination as his limit. He created a pocket dimension that can store his belongings in suspended animation so his ingredients would not rott.
What skill Broly had obtained that brought a tear to his eye was the skill of divine healing, which surpasses all other forms of healing, for it can cure any illness no matter how severe it is. Could also regrow organs, limbs or anything that an individual needs to survive in seconds. It brought back the memory of his late sister Cheelai.
(Broly's POV)
I have come a long way in the 25 years when I first began my hakaishin training to true deity. I am extremely grateful to my masters I have become the number one fighter in the multiverse with no match.
What drove to continue striving was my promise to Cheelai and I wont stop till I fulfill it. I also began to do for myself as well, for Cheelai would want it that way. I looked behind and my father figure was smiling.
"Son are you ready to announce your ascension?" I smiled back
"Yes father I am ready." I put my hand on his shoulder and then we vanished.
(ZEN PALACE)
(few minutes earlier)
We find the Hakaishins and Tenshis of all 12 universes already done bringing forward their mortal level management and are waiting to be dismissed by the Grand Zenos. The Omni duo were in there little world "Ne ne onii-chan is coming today!
"Yay onni-chan!" the duo gleefully cheered.
"Ne ne I can't wait till onii-chan comes back with Avalon."
"Yes I can't wait."
Vados the Tenshi of universe 6 asked the question that has been on all other Tenshis' mind.
"Grand Zenos-sama Where is Grand Priest-sama and who is this "onii-chan"?
The duo said in unison with a big smile. "It's a surprise!" Then a sudden light engulfs the whole room.
(Now)
As the light died down there were two individuals that can be seen the shorter one was easily recognized by all but the other was a mystery to the deities except two.
(Broly'sPOV)
When I opened my eyes, I was surprised when the Hakaishins and Tenshis were staring at me which I kinda hid behind my father figure.
'No matter how powerful you become you will always be the same' Avalon inwardly spoke amusingly. But before I could I was tackled by the omni duo.
"Onii-chan!" The duo cheered.
Nothing but laughter could be heard in the room from Broly and The Zenos giggling adorably while the rest of the deities except one were left speechless of this outcome.
"Ne ne more patting!"
"Yes more patting please!" my two little brothers begged cutely to which I happily obliged.
"Haha I miss you both too. How are you two?" I asked with a smile on my face.
They answer in unison "Bored!" they pouted cutely. As this was happening, Vados went up to Avalon.
(Avalon's POV)
"Father who is he?" Vados asked with an atomic blush. I raised an eyebrow at the blush my daughter displayed which i can see was mirrored with every female in this room.
'what do you know? Vados the most calm and composed person I've ever known is reduced to a blushing mess' Inwardly snickering.
"That my dear daughter is my first ever apprentice and soon to be universe's 7 Hakaishin Broly. I actually have an announcement to make." I said while heading towards the front of the room. Leaving a frozen and shocked Vados.
(End of Avalon's POV)
(Broly's POV)
I was catching up with Whis and Beerus and just finished telling them about my training. "Wow you've come a long way haven't you?
"Yeah we're proud of you kid". Whis and Beerus said with a proud smile.
"Thanks guys. You know I've always seen you two as brothers" I started with a sincere smile. They said they thought the same as well. I then heard Avalon call out to get everyone's attention.
"Everyone I have an announcement to make. Y'all might be be curious to where I was and who I arrived with. Well I had taken my first apprentice for training that has surpassed me and soon to be the Hakiashin of universe 7. Also to introduce the new True Deity, Broly." The room is quiet as everyone frozen not knowing what to say except the omni duel for they were cheering how super super ultra amazing their onii-chan were. Champa the Hakaishin of universe six stuttered
"T-true D-deity? I thought that was a myth!"
"If you were paying attention to the lessons that I've been going over with you, you would've known" Vados spoke and shook her head.
"S-shut I wasn't asking you!" He was the frozen stiff when I glared at him
"Never ever raise your voice and be rude to the beautiful woman or women in general for I will straighten you up." leaking his power that brought him and the rest of the male Hakaishins to their knees making sure all will get his message and innocently smiled at Vados and the other women. 'Cheelai taught me to always respect women and treat them with kindness and care.'
While the male Hakaishins were on the ground, the female deities were a blushing mess. '
'He c-called m-me b-beautiful' Vados's heart skipped a few beats the rest were thinking along the same line. 'W-wow what a beautiful charming man. His voice so melodic.That smile is so innocent and his power is so warm so comforting.'
I then reeled my power back. I spoke with a strong voice. "I am Broly the new "True Deity" and I will take over as Hakaishin in Beerus' stead of universe 7." Everyone turned to Beerus with wide eyes.
"Yes I am retiring from this day forward as my successor shall take my place." Everyone I give you the new Hakaishin of universe 7 and the new True Deity." Everyone bowed.
Everyone was then dismissed as the females reluctantly left pouting wanting to get to know the new Deity.
Avalon came up to me. "Son congratulations on your promotion. Usually you are given an attendant but with the training received by me, I know you won't need it as I have complete faith in you to take responsibility as a Hakaishin seriously." My surrogate father said with a sincere smile.
"Ne ne you always will play with us right?"
"Yes play with us" the omni duo plead adorably.
I laughed a little. "I always will when my routine is done."
"Yayyy"
CHAPTER 2 DONE!
I WILL PUT THE WOMEN IN THE HAREM ON THE NEXT CHAPTER.
F9 OUT.