So, here we go. So my sister who is not knowledgeable of star wars, is becoming cultured in the classic memes. The high ground for instance.

He looked around at the faces of Resistance, the faces of hope. He looked up at the hologram of the huge Starkiller base.

The sound of lightsabers woke him, he looked up to see his Uncle and his brother.

"Go Toby!" his uncle shouted, he scrambled out of his bed and ran outside towards the temple. He ran inside and he heard a huge crash, he saw his brother coming towards the temple, eyes yellow and red, lightsaber blaring. He walked closer, now everyone was inside the temple. His brother made his way into the temple, his brother paused looking around before thrusting his lightsaber into the nearest student. Everyone around him ignited their lightsabers, a few brave ones lunged, he used the force choking them in the air, he swung letting the limp bodies fall to the floor. He tightened his grip, on his lightsaber as he brother killed student after student,

"Ben!" he shouted, his brother stopped looking at him with those cold eyes.

"Lightsabers, in a pile, in front of me. Then hands above your head and come with me, otherwise your fate will be the same as theirs." he growled, the remaining frightened students rolled their sabers to Ben and placed their hands on top of their head.

"Move," he said as he shoved them forwards. He loaded them onto a ship, and they flew off away from the island, the temple, and the Jedi left to burn.

"Ben!" he screamed until his voice was hoarse inside the cell.

"Toby," he snapped back to see his dad, "we gotta go."

"Right." he followed his dad and Finn out to the Millenium Falcon. They jumped in and flew into the sky, it was time to end this war. They flew through lightspeed,

"How are we getting in?" Finn asked,

"Their shields have a fractional refresh rate. Keeps anything traveling slower than lightspeed from getting through." his dad said,

"Wait! We're gonna make our landing at lightspeed?!" Finn yelled,

"Heck yeah we are!" Toby yelled jumping into a seat. Han looked at the panel,

"Now!" he yelled, Toby flipped the switch as they crashed through the shields and plummeted towards the snowy ground.

"Pull up, pull up, pull up!" Toby yelled,

"I'm pulling up!" his dad yelled, alarms blared around the ship.

"Get higher!" he screamed,

"I get any higher and they'll see us!" the ship dove back in the trees, they continued to crash through the trees until they crashed into the snow. They finally stopped, covered half in snow.

"Another happy landing." he said pulling his hair back into a sleek ponytail. The four climbed out of the ship, as they walked through the snow.

"The flooding tunnels are over that ridge. We'll get in that way."

"What was your job when you were based here?"

"Sanitation."

"Sanitation? Then how do you know how to shut down the shields?"

"I don't know, I'm just here to get Rey."

"People are counting on us! The galaxy is counting on us."

"Solo, we'll figure it out. We'll use the force." Toby jumped in,

"That's not how the force works!"

"I'm so cold."

"Oh really, your cold." his dad muttered, they followed Finn over the ridge for a snowy trek to the base. They walked through the halls,

"Report." Hux said,

"Weapon charged in fifteen minutes sir," they paused at the corner, Hux left and the blast doors opened,

"Hey!" the stormtrooper shouted, he fumbled with his blaster, but Chewie was faster. The trooper flew against the wall dead,

"The longer we're here, less luck we're going to have. The shields?"

"I have an idea about that, follow me." Finn said as they walked further down the sleek hallways. They see a stormtrooper with a sleek silver suit and a black cape. Chewie ran down the hall and grabbed her and made her face Finn and Toby,

"Remember me?"

"FN-2187."

"Not anymore, the name's Finn, and I'm in charge, I'm in charge Phasma, I'm in charge!" Finn whispered shouted more excitedly, Toby put a hand on his shoulder,

"Bring it down, bring it down."

"Follow me," Finn said smiling, Chewie pushed Phasma further down the hall, they finally made it to the control panel, Phasma reluctantly started working. Han, Chewie and Finn had guns aimed at her head and Toby had his hand close to his lightsaber.

"You want me to blast that bucket off your head? Lower the shields."

"Your making a big mistake." Finn tightened his grip on his gun,

"Do it." she looked back at Toby who patted his lightsaber, she turned back to the control panel and a few clicks later the shields were falling.

"Dad, if this works, we're not going to have a lot of time to find Rey."

"Don't worry kid, we won't leave without her."

"You can't be so stupid as to think this will be easy. My troops will storm this block and kill you all."

"Shut it." Toby growled grabbing his lightsaber in his hand, she stopped talking.

"I disagree, what do we do with her?"

"Is there a garbage chute, a trash compactor?"

She darted down the hall gripping the stormtroopers gun. She paused at a corner listening, she heard the sound of footsteps, four people, one really large person. She pressed her back against the wall and tightened her grip, she waited, waited, waited, until the footsteps were on top of her. She jumped out blaster aimed, it was Toby, Han, Chewie, and Finn.

"Are you alright?" Han asked,

"Yeah,"

"Good,"

"What happened? Did he hurt you?" Toby asked, ready to go beat up his brother if he had to.

"Toby! What are you doing here?"

"We came back for you."

"It was his idea." Chewie groaned,

"Thank you," she said looking at Toby,

"How did you get away?" Toby asked, still bewildered,

"I can't explain it. And you wouldn't believe it." she said,

"Try me,"

"Escape now. Hug later." his dad said as Finn started down the hall. The five of then ran down the hall and out the door back into the snow. They looked up at the sky to see the X-wings and TIE fighters screaming through the sky. It wasn't looking good for the Resistance, the TIE fighters outnumbered the X-wings by a lot.

"They're in trouble." his dad said staring at the sky, "My friend has a bag of explosives, let's use them." Han grabbed the bag from the ship and they ran back down towards the base. They ran back inside, and followed Finn to the main reactor core.

I based Kylo's eyes in the temple flashback off of Anakin's on Mustafar.