-Pls RR. Constructive criticism is welcome. My first lemon. Tell me if you don't like it.
EPOV
"Shhh. It's okay baby. It's okay. You're fine. You're alright, baby. It's okay." She was crying. I must really be hurting her, but I did not want to pull out. I stayed there, on top of her and hugging her telling her it was all okay and the pain would fade in a moment. "Edward, it's alright now," she said after a few minutes of being still. "Are you sure?" I did not want her to rush into this and be in more pain. "Yes," she responded confidently. "Alright. But you must tell me if I hurt you or make you uncomfortable in any way,'' "I will." "Do you want to be on top? You will be in control and be able to stop when it gets to be too much." "Umm," she thought for a moment before answering, "sure," I flipped us over so that she was on top now. I noticed that she winced. "Whenever you are ready," I said calmly. She started sitting down more, one inch at a time. I knew she was getting used to my size, but this was killing me. After another minute I was all the way inside of her. It felt amazing. I could feel all of her muscles around me. She started moving up and down. First slowly and then faster and faster, building up momentum. She then leaned down to kiss me. Well, more make out with me. "Bella," I moaned I was on the edge, about to cum. "I'm almost there," she said, grinding her teeth together. I could not handle this any more. I flipped us over and started thrusting into her. "Fuck!," she screamed as she contracted around mu cock, sending me over the edge into my own orgasm. I squirted my seed inside of her in spurts, then collapsed in her. I knew what my goal was now, to get her to orgasm as many times as possible and to get her pregnant. (They already know that Bella is a vampire who can get pregnant) I wanted to have my child live inside of her and to have her bring he or she into the world with me standing beside her, holding her hand. I then opened my eyes and looked down, she was sleeping. I guess all of this was a lot for her today. I chuckled to myself and crawled in next to her and put the blanket over us. I would tell her about my thoughts in the morning after she had gotten to meet my family. I laid next to her for the majority of the night and thought about our future. When the sun started to rise, I got out of bed, put some pajamas on, and went downstairs to fix her some breakfast.
I know the lemon wasn't good, but I'm a teenager and still a virgin. Pls RR. Five reviews would be great. I know 12 people are reading this.