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Disclaimer: I do not own Kateikyoushi Hitman Reborn.
I-Pin and Lambo Bovino
The young boy, Fuuta, took her to the yard.
"That's Lambo-san's cookie!" The afro kid whined.
"No, it's I-Pin's!" The Chinese kid with the large forehead frowned in response.
This is going to end badly.
Lambo fell to the ground backwards, twitching. "Ga-ma-n..." Big tears gathered at the corner of his eyes. As he began to cry, he suddenly threw grenades from his hair down to the ground.
ARE THOSE REAL?! AIWEJFIEOAWGHAIOWEJAF!
Each grenade exploded simultaneously, creating an enormous energy that made her fly into the air.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
"WAN-CHAN!" Fuuta cried out, watching her disappear in the smoke.
Word Count: 98
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Gaman means to tolerate or to hold it in.
Wan-chan means puppy.
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