So...what's up readers of this story,Headhunter032 here and I'm sorry to tell you that I'm discontinuing Doom:Endgame.
Well,why you may ask,its mainly because of lack of ideas and the lack of organization of this story,well,the story's idea is actually just a random thought from my head and I admit I never really planned this through,every chapter of this story is just a random thought in my mind that has something to do with Doom and The Avengers,well,up until the ending of the story where it actually starts making sense and not just a random cluster f of ideas that just happens to past through my mind.
First off,the plotholes,I've noticed that this story have a lot,and I mean A LOT of plotholes,like how did the Doom Slayer even get there on Earth?Where is VEGA after the explosion?Is Thanos and his army really dead or not?Those major plot points?I never really explained them that much,at that time,I just thought it was cool and tried to pack all those ideas into the story,without analysing does it really make sense in the first place.
Secondly,the organization of the story,especially the grammar and spacing mistakes,in about Chapter 2 of the story,I started to not pay too much attention to the grammar and the organization of the story itself,and it ended up being a complete mess of a story,and tbh,I never really do a recheck of the chapters I put out,I just get the most basic structures out of the way(I.e the plot,the characters etc)and never bothered with the other stuff,and now I thought back about it,I'm honestly surprised that some of you guys can make it through the story!And the organization of the story itself?It's a complete mess,I realized I just jammed all those things related to both of the franchises and without checking it even makes sense at all!That for me,is quite unacceptable to my regular standards.
Finally,I just wanted to say:Thank you to all of the readers that liked and left a comment on the reviews tab,and those that followed the story,as a newcomer to this scene,I was honestly surprised how much attention this story got!I keep thinking it would be buried in the website,never been seen.And some of the reviews made me realized how much I could have improved,and with every review,whether positive or slightly negative,had made me realized how much I could have improve the story,and I would certainly take them seriously and remember them next time I write a story.
Would I come back to this story?Maybe,but if I do,you can guarantee to see a much better version of this story.
Until then,
Signing out.