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Here is the fourth chapter, as always I hope you enjoy it.
"regular talk"
"thoughts"
"flashback"
Snape's potion class was, as usual, a nightmare. Even if he did favor Slytherins over the other houses, Danny would still fear him. "He is looking your way! He is looking your way!". Danny was in potion's class trying not to panic as his abilities are acting up, he has gone intangible and everything he is picking up is falling down. "calm down Danny or someone might see!". He was concentrating on lifting a jar full of doxy eggs when a shadow fell on him making him look up to stare at the menacing figure of his potions professor, Severus Snape. "what are you doing mister Fenton?". Snape drawled Menacingly. "oh, nothing Professor I'm just making the potion you assigned us". "I know that mister Fenton but what I mean is what are you doing making a mess in my potions class!". snape said looking about to explode, Danny gulped and with his nervousness dropped the jar he was holding right through his hands making Draco laugh beside him. "did they see did anyone see!". "Fenton! that's it twenty points from Slytherin and detention. my office. This evening!". The Gryffindors beside them looked shocked a Slytherin just got detention from Snape, the overgrown bat of the dungeons, Slytherins head of house! "yeah Tuck so much for the star pupil".
Danny was walking to his next class feeling miserable, when he was flanked from both sides by two tall redhead boys, twin boys, the Weasley twins. "hay you're that Fenton kid aren't you?". One of them said, with a mischevious smile. "who's asking?". "Oh, no one. but we heard some interesting news about you, some...unspeakable news to be precise." the other said looking just as devious as his twin. "Not to sound rude but what's it to you? and from where did you get that information?". "We have our resources". one said."Mainly our dad". the other said right after him. "and we were just intrigued it's not every day you meet a junior unspeakable_". "Okay, first he had no business telling you even if he was your dad and second it's not much to talk about I just went cause my parents wanted me to see their work and no I can't divulge any information I didn't tell my best friends why would I tell you. No offense but I don't even know you". "Sorry mate the name's George". the one on his right said. "and I'm Fred". the one on his left. "So, now that you know us would you tell us?" Fred Said. "No". Danny picked up his pace leaving them behind.
The twins stayed behind and looked at each other. "You know Fred he's not like the other Slytherins Is he?". "No, he isn't George. No, he isn't".
Evening has come and Danny reached Snape's office. He was about to knock when the door opened harshly revealing a grumbling Snape. "You're late Fenton, pick up a cauldron and start cleaning. No. Wands. Aloud". Snape was looking furious. Danny gulped in fear. "Alright Professor". An hour has passed, Snape was sitting at his desk he was watching Danny like a hawk. While Danny was about to finish cleaning the cauldrons. "I can't believe he confiscated my wand! the greasy git!". when suddenly out of nowhere a bird came flying at him. So, out of fright, he turned intangible letting the bird pass right through him unharmed, right in front of his Professor. Turning to see what Snape's reaction would be he saw him with his wand out hidden by his desk. "He was the one who conjured the bird!". "I knew it, my eyes weren't deceiving me". Snape said looking proud of himself.
Danny looked devastated. "I can't believe this, my life is over. I am over! I'm gonna be hunted down and killed!". "Professor Snape please don't tell anyone, please. It could jeopardize my life it could ruin my parents work please sir". "That's not up to me mister Fenton, that's up to the Headmaster_". "You're gonna tell Dumbledore!". "That's Headmaster Dumbledore to you, Fenton!". Snape snapped but continued calmly. "Dumbledore would know what to do with you".
Danny looked at his head of house feeling betrayed and terrified. "I'm dead".