Any words that are in these "[boxs]" means they are in the mind. Basic off a Korrasami comic
In Padme's bedroom
Ashoka gazed up at the ceiling her mind wandering. Then she look at the sleeping woman next to her. "[Padme.]" Ashoka thought as she look at her lover wearing a nightgown. Her back was to Ashoka.
"[How can she love me?]" Ashoka look back up at the ceiling. "[I'm such a mess...]" Ashoka sat up. "[What if she just using me?]" the thought made Ashoka hit her forehead in anger. "[IDIOT! She would never! She not that kind of person.]"
Ashoka mind keep asking questions. "[But... But what do you think she's shallow?]" Ashoka puts her face in her fists. "[No, No, No! I mean- ARGH! I don't know what I mean.]" Ashoka pulled her hands away from her face. "[But... look at her.]" She look at the goddess sleeping next to her. "[She's smart, kind, beautiful. She's perfect. And what if...]" a sad look appeared on Ashoka face. "[What if she gets tired of me?]" Ashoka look down into her lap that was covered by the blanket.
"[She's going to get tired of me. After all, I practically ruin everything I touch: I am...]"
Ashoka was brought out of depressing thoughts by Padme. "MH, Ashoka?" Her voice was full of sleepiness. Ashoka look to see Padme head raised and her eyes gazing at the Torguta. Ashoka gave a small smile trying to rain in her inner conflict. "Hey, sorry, I didn't mean to wake you up."
"You didn't." Said Padme then she rolled over and wrap her arms around Ashoka's arm. "I felt like you weren't here and I got worried." Ashoka blink as she heard the words that were clearly true. "Padme?"
"MHM?" Asked Padme her eyes still closed but the small smile on her face remained. "I- I love you." Ashoka heart was beating very fast. "I love you too. So much."
After a long moment Ashoka look at the ceiling again and gave a great sigh. Then laid back down, pulling Padme into her arms. Padme head was now laying over Ashoka now calm heart. "[Okay.]" thought Ashoka as she gazed down into the sleeping face of her Padme. "[I might be an idiot.]" Ashoka closed her eyes a smile on her face. "[But I am the luckiest idiot in the galaxy.]"